MG FF || MANGALYAM TANTUNANENA || CHAPTER 12 - PG 39- 02May2015 - Page 7

Character Casting & Replies

These are the characters played by which I have decided with the help of one of my friend. will add images to the respective characters as soon as possible. And also I request you people to get an images for young khurana's Handa's and kapoors.

I can't reply to everyone as to the IF standards and rules, It allows me only 10 posts per day. I will reply everybody in single post. Please read the note for your answers. Please help me to get baby and young kids pics. Thank you.

Below pic is baby geet & toddler Geet. massom shakal se matt javoo.

Other Characters

Replies

Originally posted by: fatema_007

lovely start ...

loved the bond u showed between the characters

Maan already possessive of little Geet

lets see if the possessiveness remains while he gets older..

would love to read more of this..plz do continue

Thank you. Maan is possessive of all the things and person he feels close to him. Here we are talking about geet , of course he is possessive towards her little or grown up. Aagye ka hoga jabb geet badi hogi. Lets see what happens J

Originally posted by: diyadecember

Yaar jhaavi im sure yur story s gng to be rocking

but too many characters in here

u start the story ill catch up with the characters

Awww thank you so much. Aapki moo main ghee-shakkar. I try my level best. Thank you for reading. He he he he don't worry i will make it easy for you guys.

Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS FOR YOUR FIRST STORY

SO MANY CHARACTERSLOL

Thanks J LOL dheemag ghumgai kya?

Originally posted by: snehapriya

Congratulations for writing for Maaneet and thank u.

Just randomly opened ur thread looking on the title. Lovely one.

Usually it will be only Maaneet or 2-3 character in addition.

This is quite huge but very nice to read. Loved the description of every character.

Thank u for giving a family tree at last.

Nice that u didn't leave servants too.

First part was extremely cute.

Khurannas whining for a daughter.

Dev following his elder brother Maan and crying being possessive.

Unknowingly Maan gave idea to keep the baby name Geet and wants to take her home.

While Geet's father is also ready if he brings bharath.

Further Maan's father is giving shagun.

Everything is going so well.

Would love to read it regularly. If u have a pm list pls add me i have sent u a buddy request.

I would try to follow it by bookmarking it too. But it would be very nice if u would pm.

Hi thank you. As it is a joint family story. I wanted to make it clear to understand others. I myself get confuse while writing update, so i thought if i make a family tree then nobody have to be confused. I update only on Sundays due to my work commitment. I get free Sunday afternoon and i have to type an update. So i am sorry I can't give daily updates. You can bookmark the link to catch up with the updates; I will send PM once in a month. Thank you for reading and liking it.

Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

Awesome start.. Maan is so cute wants to take baby Geet to his home and Jaswinder answer to that was superb.. Atlast princess born in Khurana's house..

Thank you. J

Originally posted by: love2_soma

dear i have a request...plz dont bring dat sameera ever b/w maan n geet...

awesome n interesting cs n starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Hehehe thank you for reading and liking the story, never say never. Asli maza tho tabb ayega jab story main twist ho. So wait and watch. I won't disappoint you.

Originally posted by: Alamelu

lovely start...me too love big families and the camaraderie they have among them...ofcourse you have some weird characters, but where do you not have them...in general all are cordial and care for each other

so our maan babu has already started calling geet has his geet and wants to take her home...wow maan you are just 21 years ahead of the game...

Lol I am one weird. Wait for the time when titans clashes. Thank you for reading and liking it.

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

Awesome start...huge families. ..with superb bonding

Aww maan said meri geet sfter seeing baby geet...& asjed her pspa..can he take her to his house

& got reply frin her father...baarat leke aana & geet ko leke jana...wow

Even geet babe got gold chain as shagun... rocking. .dev is so cute. .& so aliya..but I think vicky will be naughtiest boy among khurana's

add me in ur pm list. ..waiting for next update

Thnak you for reading. Yes Vicky is naughty and someone is ready to give takkar for him. Please book mart the link. I send PMs once in a month.

Originally posted by: neetr91

interesting concept and character sketch...nice start...loved the way maan called geet his...continue soon

Thank you. J

Originally posted by: pravalika9291

awesome concept

plz pm me when you update

add me to ur buddy list

cont.soon

Thank you. J

Originally posted by: flowing_river

interesting ..it hooked me..Big smile

joint family..wow...

and love ur writing style..doesn't seems like it's ur first story...great yaar

Thank you. J awww that's a big compliment, usually i don't write fictions but i have to write essay in school.

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

lovely part so everyone came to khurana for spending their vacation maan didnt like calling him sweety but dadi called him he got angry dev n vicky so cute dev was trying to wipe the ink with the cloth which was full of ink very funny both put the blame to aliya maan understood but didnt say anything poor boy was looking for geet but couldnt find her so got angry very nice part precap scary geets marriage hope will be with maan thnx 4 update

J J J J J

Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

Awesome part.. All came to Khurana's for holidays.. Vicky is so clever..alya par naam laga diya but Maan too know about his siblings.. ohhh Geet going to share bed with Maan..

Hehehe not with maan. She has acquired whole bed. Bechara maan have sleep in guest room with karan and rajveer dev

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

Awesome update

maan wants to c geet & when he heard from his papa abt her arrival he is happy..

he doesn't like when his dadi called him sweetie. .or cute

All bacchha party came to khurana's for vacation. .maan got angry not finding

geet on dining table. .. afterewords went to c her

precap is scary. ..geet married to whom? & y maan is angry?

Update soon waiting

Hehehe thank you J story main twist hain J enjoy karo

Originally posted by: annbell

update was lovely ...

dev n vicky's conversation .. that was really cute ... vicky is the naughty one ..

i'm loving this dev ... i can't help.. but say it again n again .. he is a very cute bacha ...

maan n his attitude .. seriously, he acts like a warden .. but loves his siblings ... n that dialogue .. 'tede hai par mere hain' ...

he already is very eager to see geet ... what would be his reaction when he comes to know about boarding school ...

waiting waiting ...

Thank you. Me too love dev so much. He is such a cuite.

Originally posted by: nishamna

It's really very nice ff. Although I couldn't able to remember all members name but gradually while reading story , I will be get used to of these names. Omg so everyone was teasing maan as all are awards about his love for his gudiya. Vicky is such a city pie. He did all the mess and put name on aliya. Although maan was awared about the truth but he didn't scold her as next.day will be his birthday. All guest are arrived at maan's place and having lot of fun. But maan is only thing about his gudia. Waiting for next dear

Lol all got scared seeing my CS. But don't worry. I have clearly categorized everyone and names in the CS. Please check it if you get lost again lol J thank u so much for reading and liking it, wait and watch his reaction when he confront his gudiya.

Originally posted by: love2_soma

abb tak toh sab sahi hai...magar precap k second point thoda darawna hai...

awesome n cute update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Hehehe kahani main twist sab ka beja at risk J

Originally posted by: krithi12

superb update ear.loved it a lot.so handa s n khurana s are family freinds.that nice maan likes geet secretly.as the story moves forward hope i will remember the CS

Hehehe all have the same problem. Fikar not ..i am here. Thank you for reading.

Originally posted by: akkub.92

nice ff liked both updates plz update soon want to read more ...can't wait to know geet is marries to whom...

Thank you. Lol sabb geet ki padi hain..bechara dev ka kohi suntan hi nahi, J

Originally posted by: sdlife19

NIce update..

Poor Maan yaar he wanted to see his gudiya and he could even have a glimpse of her..poor boy how will others understand it...

and precap.. wats this geet married.. is this a joke or some childhood play where the are playing it

J hahaha aisi waisi thodina main maan - geet ki confrontation karwadungi. Dhamake dar entry maaregi hamari geet aka gudiya. Abb main abhi se sabb batadiya tho surprise twist kaise rehega. Kahani main twist sabb ka beja at risk. J

Originally posted by: Gulshan.MG

geet getting married but with whom??

J err emm I don't know yet lol

Originally posted by: annirogc

nice part.. dev and vicky doing room a mess and maan they are fearing for him.. loved it..but precap geet is married .. how is happened

Kahani main twist ...hain surprise to banta hain na J

Originally posted by: diyadecember

Maan is behind whom!

I feel its not geet!

Geet married whom?

I am not saying anything ..me chup.. J

Originally posted by: susm

Nice update.

First thanks for update n waiting for Sunday for 2 updates.

So Sharma's went to Hawaii nice to remove them for some time. So geet fav is pineapple cake. Maan waiting for his Gudiya. Maan don't like calling him sweety. Vicky messed study table with ink n Dev helping to clean but got more mess. N both blamed aliya in front of Maan. But MSK knows it's Vicky. Maan irritated by Kiran n his siblings. So he went to geet he will come to know his Gudiya got fever.

Percape Maan will be angry of going to boarding school.

Geet will get married to Maan.

Hope so .

Thank you J I will make it 2 or maybe 3 J

Originally posted by: mauaa

superb update dear.. was a rollercoster ride.. precap is also damn interesting.. continue soon!!

Thank you for reading it. :)

Originally posted by: nakh5683

lovely cute update chotu maan is so adorable abhi se geet pe dil aagaya uska hai hayyee maan ke siblings r shooo cute maan is very good big bro who is waiting for his gudiya to come so that he can spend time with her everyone in his home calls her unki they know how blushy he will bw acha hai maan ko koi mehnat nahi karni padegi sabko pata hai geet maan ki dulhan banke hi aayegi ello ye to 4yr ke umar mein hi maan ke bed pe kabsa kar liya here maan is restless to see his gudia cant wait to see update soon dear

Hehehe thank you. Abhi ek jalak dekhaya hain maine geet ki. Wait and watch. You will feel sorry for maan or geet? Lol can't wait to know your reactions to the next update.

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 updating! wonderful update! superbly writen. Maan's brothers look up 2 him! Handas at Khuranas 4 holiday! Maan wants 2 see Geet! interesting precap! Geet married??? Oh no ? whom??? update soon! n do pm

Thank you J you have to wait for the next update to know the surprise twist J

thanks 4 da note regd characters! n reply 2 comment!

Loved 2nd part a lot.
Maan admires Geet and seems his mother and dadi knows.
Maan is like a warden.
Poor little boys shaking in front of their elder brother.
Oh Dev is so cute. Asking to open his pants.
Maan though knew abt his brother didn't scold him.
Dadi is so cute and sweet and naughty as well.
Nice that all are having get together often.
Oh no but Geet is not feeling well and Maan is missing her.
Missed Geet in this update. But precap tells much interesting moments are gonna come.


Coming to characters. Loved it. Hope sameera is not a negative one as i like JW and she looks full of positive.

Thanks for the reply to reply.
Once a month pm also ok.
Bcoz i might forget to follow some Sunday due to my work schedule.

With the character given can guess some future pair.

Wow loving the new ff so much. New concept. Indeed a big family. Actually 3-4 families getting together.

Aww I love ur story.Mann is fond of his gudyia aka geet so cute...
Dev example of best sibbling anyone one want but poor aliyah her bros put all blame on her...
Geet on maan bed well it's her destiny lol!!!
Next marriage of geet ' so fast!!!!!
Plz pm me n continue soon...

Awesome update. Maan is so much desperate to meet his Geet.😳

|| Chapter 3 ||

After lunch everyone retired to their respective bedrooms for afternoon cat nap. Maan excused himself from game saying he wants to sleep and tiptoed into his sibling's bedroom where his gudiya is sleeping.

Maan opened the door slowly not to make noise and then suddenly maan was pulled back by his hand stopping him from entering the room.

Rajveer " Maan tum yaha kya karrha hain. Mian kha kha nahi dunda tujhe. chall na cricket khelthe hain."

Maan " Mujhe abhi mood nahi raj. Tum karan se q nahi poochte." Maan was so irritated due to some reasons. Otherwise maan would never say no to his best friend ever when it comes to cricket. But raj wasn't the one to let go that easily.

Rajveer " maan please chalo na. tum nahi avoge tho karan aur dev bhi nahi ayenge" . Karan and dev too came running to them.

Karan " Maan arre yaar chalo na. tum yaha kya karraha hain?" karan asked curiously. Dev was waiting for his bro's answer.

Maan couldn't tell them the real reason why he was there " Main main main...ah mujhe apna cricket kit lena tha isiliye yaha aaya tha. Mera kit bedroom main hain"

Rajveer "per abhi abhi tho tum kehraha tha ki..." maan immediately covered his mouth and said " Chup..!" raj kept quite hearing maan's tone. Raj knew when maan doesn't want to talk something and want him to be silent.

Dev "Bhaaii kit tho papa ke study main hain" maan had no other choice but to go with them. He asked dev to get his cricket kit from study.

Maan " Chalo cricket khelte hain" he walked away looking at the closed doors. Hoping to get a glimpse of his gudiya tonight at dinner.

Later in the evening Harsh took all kids on long drive except gudiya and bani who are resting because of illness. After that maan took karan & raj to outhouse to show them his stamp-coins collections and also the newly constructed big swimming pool.

Couple of hours later Maan, karan and raj entered the mansion laughing at some joke thrown by raj. They abruptly stopped laughing when they saw crying dev's swollen red nose which is covered with cotton now. Amrutha held him in her lap consoling her crying son and holding his head upwards to stop the bleeding nose. And they saw vicky's hair, face covered with golden & pink coloured glitter. Maya was blowing dryer over his hair to remove the glitters. Pari came running down " mom.. mom dekho na usne meri frock fardi" Pari held her favourite pink frock in one hand and from another hand wiping at her tears. Gowri tried to console crying pari saying that she will fix it. All three moms and Daadi don't have an idea what's going on suddenly in the house. Then bani came running like hyena screaming her lungs out " Mummyyy wo meli cown(Barbie crown-tiara) leli" Daadi picked up bani wiping her tears.

Daadi "Hey sab achanak kya horaha hain ghar main?"

Amrutha asked dev what happened and how did he get bleeding nose. Dev was scared to say anything fearing about the treat he got after getting broken nose " Maa.. *hiccup* woh *hiccup* gu..gu..gu..*hiccup* "

Vicky jumped to complete dev's sentence not bothering much about the treat he got earlier "Gundli(Gundi) ne debayya ki naakh thoddhi(broke)"

All elders at a time "Gundi??" Daadi " beta koun gundi?"

Maan, karan and Raj stood beside daadi watching their siblings now some hurt and crying. They wondered what had happened suddenly and who this new gundi is. Rajveer somehow knew what has happened and he started to laugh out loudly looking at his mom gowri.

Rajveer" hey sirf usski khaam hosakthi hain." Gowri was embarrassed about the situation.

Maan & karan both asked "Kiski?" Rajveer replied between his laughs holding his stomach. "3G ki"

All at a time said "3G??" Rajveer " Gudiya the Gundi yaani Geet ki "

For whole 5 seconds the hall fell silent hearing raj. And all burst into a laugh.

Both maan and Karan are shocked to hear what raj said. Maan's eye popped out; shock that his gudiya can all do this. He wasn't worried about his siblings for the first time, but now he is worried about himself what might happen to him when he confront her.

Maan " Gudiya??" asked in disbelief looking at raj with his big big eyes.

Karan "What the h"" maya immediately said " Karan Language"

Karan "Sorry mom...But I don't believe it. How could a 4 year old is capable of doing this"

Rajveer " Oye tu such main mera dost hain kya? Kabhi dekha nahi mere hath per.. gaal per nakhoon ki nishaan? Aur hey dekho one week pehale kaatne ki nishaan" raj pulled up his t shirt to show his scars of nails & teeth marks on left arm.

Maan imagined big big nails and fangs; shrugged his head to clear the image. He was in total denial. How could his gudiya do this? No this can't be true; he could never imagine his gudiya will hurt someone intentionally.

Suddenly Maan said to rajveer " Zaroor tumne usko sataya hoga. You deserved it"

Everyone looked at him in confusion. Maan recovered from what he said. He cleared his voice again to correct himself " woh umm she is just a baby yet."

Karan & rajveer rolled their eyes. raj " Yeah right just a baby...wait till you be on the receiving end. Don't say that i didn't warned you"

Gowri sighed "Main kya karu. Unhone tho gudiya ko ittna beegadkey rakka hain .. Bahut ziddi hogai hian aaj kal. Kisiki sunti bhi nahi."

Daadi "Bacche aise hi hain gowri beta. Zaroor innlogon ne use tang ki hongey warna hamri gudiya aisa nahi karti." Maan moved close to daadi as if he is agreed whatever daadi said.

Amrutha " Sahi kaha aapne maaji." And then asked dev what he did to gudiya to deserve the bleeding nose.

Dev" Maa.. maine kuch nahi kiya. Main tho sirf maanbayya ki bed pe soya huwa tha"

Flashback Start

Vicky was bored of playing blocks with aliya so he asked his dev bayya" debayya talo(chalo) na outhouse thalthey(chalthey) hain"

Dev was doing his summer holiday's homework in his temporary bedroom and looked at vicky with horror " Nahi nahi..maanbayya gussa karengey. Main nahi aanewala"

Vicky pouted " tho thalo pali(pari) didi, bani aul guliya ke saath khelthey hain." Dev agreed " Ok chalo " and left to their bedroom.

When both entered their bedroom pari & bani were looking at their new cloths laid on the bed which was actually dev's bed. Dev saw maan's bed empty and laid on it enjoying the feel of soft spongy bouncing bed talking with pari and bani. Vicky was much interested in the new purple paper box on maan's study.

Pari saw vicky fidgeting with the box and shouted at him " Vicky ...usse choona matt. Woh box gudiya ki hain. Woh tumhey khaa jayegi agar usne tumhey box ko haath lagathey huwe dekli tho."

Vicky was more interested in box and the small bottles filled with glitters in them. He ignored her warning and kept playing with bottle caps.

Dev was happy and sighed that his bhai is not here and his bed is too good better big than any other bed in the room. He closed his eyes smiling ..facing at ceiling.

All four missed, a pair of honey coloured dovey almond shaped eyes staring at them standing at the bathroom door. Those eyes fell on dev now who was lying on HER bed fuming angrily. How dare he? meri bed hain...

Dev spread his legs and arms all over bed like a snow wings and started to wing.

Bani met those eyes and ran to dev shaking him " Dev bayya..utttooo...dev woh aagai" Bani and pari had already had the faced those pair of fire spitting eyes.

Pari "Abb dev tho gaya kaam se"

Gudiya walked to maan's bed which is now hers, hands on hips fuming "Oye Uttoo. Hey meri bed hain" gudiya shouted at dev with top of her lungs which sounded like a small yelp.

Dev looked at gudiya and replied calmly "hey tumhari nahi maanbayya ke bed hain. Aur main yahi sohunga."

Gudiya "hey meli bed hain utooo" she screamed fuming at him with her chubby fist closed.

Dev"nahi..hey maanbayya ki bed hain" replied adamantly.

Gudiya tried to push him off from the bed using all the strength but dev was big enough for her and he didn't move an inch. One Gudiya is cranky due to fever; two, she had an argument with her mom for drinking soup; three dev is not letting her to sleep on the bed.

This was her usual bed whenever she comes to stay at khurana mansion. Usually gudiya is very possessive over things or person. She never touches which is not hers and never let anyone touch which is hers.. Only hers..Such as this BED.

Gudiya ki temper meter kuch iss tarha high hogai ki. Gudiya didn't waste her breath on dev again at shouting. She picked up the alarm clock from beside lamp table and hit dev on his face making him to yelp in pain. Dev held his bleeding nose and ran out crying "Maaa...Bhaai"

Here vicky was busy with glitter box, smearing on geet's sandal which is actually gudiya's new sandal. When gudiya's eyes fell on the sandal "ka kiya tumle(tumne) Woh meli(meri) jooti(joothi) hain" gudiya jumped beside him grabbing her red sandal now silver glitter all over it from vicky's hand.

Vicky grinned at her mischievously "Guliya dekho na abhi hey twinkle twinkle kalegi(kargi)"

Gudiya just lost it. It's her new sandal, perfect match with her birthday dress. Vicky ruined her new sandal. He deserves some of her jooti.

Gudiya picked one bottle from the box opened the cap and poured golden color glitter on vicky head and face. She didn't stop to that; she gripped his hair tight in both hands to pulling it forcedly.

Vicky tried to free her hands from his hair screaming " ahhh maa. Papa...debayya..maanbayya ..bachooovv"

Gudiya tackled him on the ground and sat on his stomach pulling his hair more aggressively.. Pari tried to free vicky from gudiya's hand.

Finally Pari and bani both picked gudiya up from vicky. He didn't waste a second there, vicky ran out shouting " Maaa Guliya(gudiya) ...gundli(gundi) bangai hain"

Gudiya tried to free herself from pari and bani's hold swinging her arms and legs like chicken. Gudiya " Paliii diii tholooo muleee(Pari di chodo mujhe) tholooo" Pari let her go when gudiya scratched her hand.

Pari "Ahh tu such main gundi hain" said looking the hand. Gudiya got angrier hearing that gundi again. She tore pari's new frock lace.

Pari ran out shouting "mom.. mom" crying.

And then gudiya saw bani wearing Barbie crown, it was her 3^rd birthday present from maan.

Gudiya cried" woh meli hain... utalooo...meli clown(brabie) hain" she grabbed the crown from bani's head but bani didn't let go of it. In tug of war the crown was broken into two pieces. Gudiya's eyes filled up with tears when she held the other half of the crown in her hands.

Bani ran out crying "Main mom ko bolti hoonnn...gundiii gundiii gundiii"

Gudiya sat on the bed holding the half broken crown (tiara) and lay on. Tears couldn't be stopped. It was her most favourite tiara. She planned to wear it on her birthday tomorrow. Now what she will do? Her sandal is ruined; her tiara is broken into two pieces, and that stupid dev ...over that this fever. She silently cried hugging her rabbi-bunny closer to her heart and dosed off.

Flashback end

Daadi heard all their side of story and realised it's not entirely gudiya's fault .so Daadi tried to make them understand their mistakes subtlety. Daadi said to dev " Per dev aap janthe ho na gudiya hamesha usi bed pe sothi hain jab woh yaha rukthe hain. You shouldn't have teased her when she is suffering from fever. Woh galat hain na baccha. Aur gudiya ne bhi aapko maarna nahi chayihe tha. Per aap tho gudiya se bade hona. Aap tho hamare samajdaar baccha hain. Go ask her sorry kal usski birthday hian. Usse aur tang matt karo. " daadi caressed his hair kissing his forehead.

Then Daadi picked up vicky to her lap "Vicky you shouldn't have ruined her sandal. And called her gundi...Woh tho galta batt hain na? You also should ask sorry to gudiya."

Vicky " Olky(Ok) daadsy(Daadi)" vicky agreed and kissed on her cheeks.

Daadi told pari that she is elder to gudiya and should look after them when they are not well and not to pick on her when she is actually suffering from fever.

Then daadi pulled whimpering bani to her another lap "bani beta.. hum aapko naya tiara laakey dengey oky.?"

Maya remembered that she never packed any tiara for bani "Per maa baani ke paas kohi tiara nahi hain " Maya asked bani sternly "bani such such batavo tiara kiski thi?"

Bani got scared of her mother's threatening tone and she replied meekly "woh mummy..woh ..gudiya ki thi "

Daadi sighed "Okay now all of you go to gudiya and ask sorry"

Gowri "Maaji rehanedijiye na ...uski kohi zarurut nahi hain. Gudiya ne bhi tho galath kiya hain na. "

Maan was hearing all this silently till now. And frowned when he heard gowri say that gudiya did mistake by hitting them. To his opinion dev, vicky pari and bani deserved to be punished for picking on gudiya and making her cry. Now he was restless learning that gudiya is not feeling well.

Daadi " Nahi beta inlogon ne galthi ki hain tho maafi bhi innilogon ko mangna parega na. Aur hamey pata hain gudiya bi wapis maafi manglegi."

Vicky and dev both walked upstairs to apologize gudiya followed by pari and bani. Maan wanted to see her and say that it's alright nothing to worry. He has a plan and will make her smile again within 12 am before her birthday.

Later at midnight

Later at midnight still 10 minutes more to 12am.(Jan 10^th) maan slowly closed the guest bedroom door and walked to his bedroom. All are fast asleep coz of tomorrow will be a long day due to the surprise birthday party for vicky and gudiya.

Maan pushed the door slightly without making noise and peeked inside to see the room is fully dark. Pari is sleeping with daadi today and vicky is sleeping with dev in guest room. Only bani, gudiya and aliya were sleeping in the room with nanny in her bed.

Maan walked slowly towards gudiya's bed hiding something behind him. A faint moon light is coming from a window. Gudiya slept on her stomach snoring lightly, her arms and legs were spread all over the big bed like X. Maan sat on bed whispering her name "Gudiyaaa ..Gudiyaa Uttoo"

Maan looked over his shoulder behind him making sure no one is awake.

Gudiya turned her face towards the window were moon light straight away falling on her face. Maan came to other of the bed and besides her again calling her name bit loudly this time. Maan watched her face in moon light. Her duvet is on the floor now and pillows all around her. Her milky baby pink skin is glowing in the moon light more making her look cuter than ever. Maan touched her cheeks with his index finger "Gudiyaaa Utttooo naa"

Gudiya was oozy due to the fever and medicine and bit irritated coz of cough and cold. She heard someone whispering, calling her. She got scared and woke up suddenly screaming loudly jumping in bed. " ghusst(Ghost) ghusst mammaaa ghuussttt...paaapaaa...mammmaaa bayyyaaa ...ghuuussttt(ghost)"

Maan got scared hearing her scream fearing that she will wake up everyone in the house and how he will explain to everybody what's he doing in here at this time. Maan immediately pulled her on the bed pinning with his one and another hand covered her mouth shutting her from screaming.

Maan "Gudiyaaa... chup chillav matt" but gudiya is gudiya ever dramatic. Gudiya " ummhaa hmmmahuuuoostt mmhha " still screaming swinging her legs and hands hitting him wherever she can. She still couldn't recognize maan due to dark. Gudiya scraped his hands and pulled his hair mumbling the scream.

Maan "Ahhh gudiyaaa...chodo mera baal. Tum bilkul jangli billi hogai hain. Sahi kaha sab logn ne you are Gundi ...not gudiya anymore"

Gudiya got wilder hearing him call her jungle billi and gundi again. She bit his hand which has covered her mouth and kicked him on his shin making him yelp from pain. She jumped down from the bed and bent down to pick the cricket stamp stick from under the bed again hopping back on bed and sat on maan's stomach hitting him on head with stick.

Gudiya "hey lo..." hit him on head " aul bhi looo" again hit him on his shoulder. Gudiya is still unaware that she is hitting maan. "tulm(tum) mule(mujhe) junlee(jungle) bola...aul guldi(gundi) bhi..." maan grabbed the stick from her hand threw it down "Gudiya... I am sorry ..please don't hit me...duktha hain..." maan begged her to stop assaulting him.

Gudiya heard him begging to stop hitting him "tulm ghuusstt(ghost) nahi ho?" Maan "Naaahiii..." Gudiya stopped for a second "Tho thlum(tum) thooll ho?" Maan was about to answer her that he is maan. Before that gudiya started to scream "Thooolll(Chor) thoolll mammaaa...thooolll...papaaa tholll...thoolll" Maan closed her mouth again before she starts hitting him. He picked her up above him making her to sit on the bed and switching on the bed lamp.

Maan "Chup ...bilkul chup" he silenced her keeping his finger on her mouth. Gudiya realized who he was and his signature style to shut her up as always. Gudiya blinked twice staring at him with her mouth open " Bunny.?..tulm bunny ho?" she asked him disbelief. Suddenly gudiya jumped on him and hugged circling her small arms around him tightly making maan to chock. Gudiya " Mele Bunnnyyy" screaming with joy.

Maan sighed and rolled his eyes "Gudiya mera gala...chodo mujhe "gasped trying to breath. Gudiya kissed all over his face embarrassing maan. Maan "ahhh yuck gudiya...chodo ... i am not your lollypop."

Gudiya giggled at him clasping his both cheeks in her small chubby hands. She forgot her all the tiredness, her fever and her fights with dev vicky pari and bani. Hearing lolly pop gudiya "Bunnnyyy meli glift(gift) ka hain?" holding his both cheeks in her small hands. Maan grinned at her and brought the gift infront of her. Maan "Happy Birthday Geet! Aur hey rahi gudiya ki gift " at the same time clock made a ting sound indicating that its 12 am. Geet's smile widened looking at the purple colored gift wrap and asked maan " pulple(Purple) telly(Teddy) ka?" Maan nodes for an yes. Gudiya "Tanklu(thank u) bunnyyy" jumped on bed screaming loudly.

Maan heard someone behind them and turned to look over him. Vicky stood at the door in his spider man payjama rubbing his eyes from one hand and held small aeroplane in another hand grinning at maan. Vicky " Maanbayyyaaa.. meli giflt?"

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Authors Note:

Hello Everyone,

Thank you for all the lovely and amazing comments. I read it like 20x times. Hope you are all eager to read further. I promised min two updates today and max three. Here is the first update for today. And next updates will be giving in the evening or tonight. Please excuse spelling and grammar mistakes. Let me know how the story is coming through. And also suggestions are most welcome. Don't forget to like and comment. I kept my side of bargain now it's your turn.

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1. Leap

2. Maan Angry

3. Geet Married

4. Vicky said F word

5. Dev crying(When he doesn't ? lol