The Potter's Wheel- MaNan Drabble

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As usual this didnt come out like I wanted it to. But it should do for now.

She sat at the potter's wheel cross-legged, trying to shape the pliant mass of clay with her hands as the potter's wheel spun slowly and gently. His hands came up from behind her, trailing a slow path down her arms, pausing gently at the crevices of her elbows and then proceeding languorously down to her wrists. He paused. She waited. His fingers traced out a slow circle around her wrists, a small slow seductive circle, a gentle teasing, his thumb teased out a response from the beating pulse of her wrist. They met again at the palms, his enveloping hers, hers finding a safe haven in his. He crooked his head into her shoulders. Lingering touches. Warm breath. The erratic pulse at her neck was the only thing that betrayed her nervousness as he helped her mould the clay, feeling the earthiness of the wet clay. The rain battered against the glass panes. The smell of the fresh grass and the wet clay drifted into the room, wispy evening scents. Lush and green, Heavy and earthy.

Just like them.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hands.Clay.The humming of their hearts.Synchronization of touch. Love.So them.

@Cat paints the most beautiful dreams. Pen it more, Lazy Ass.
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Originally posted by: charminggenie

Hands.Clay.The humming of their hearts.Synchronization of touch. Love.So them.

@Cat paints the most beautiful dreams. Pen it more, Lazy Ass.


My mind takes breaks in between writing
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Originally posted by: AnomanderRake


My mind takes breaks in between writing


Thats because you get distracted. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Umm. Res??🤔
I want to reply but I feel sleepy.
But this scene. Gah. When. :')))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully put..the synchronization...it's so fluid, so musical


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Originally posted by: rubys07

Umm. Res??🤔

I want to reply but I feel sleepy.
But this scene. Gah. When. :')))


Go sleep.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You have an awfully short attention span then. :D

Adhi, this was so pure, so fluid, so beautiful...I HOPE you continue this. :))

Is the inspiration behind this what I think it is? ;)

Just cause🤗

Edited by Ribelle_IshRa - 10 years ago
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adhi this is sooo beautiful...are u going to continue this??? pleasecontinue this...this makes me feel like reading more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Short,crisp , to the point and beautiful
loved it to the core ❤️
Though it reminded me of another couple entire
hint: clay , pottery , bof ...enough said!!ps its been ages since I wrote /read fanfiction
but this piece somehow inspires me to write something soon...
love
Rads 😃
Edited by ..Enamour.. - 10 years ago

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