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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: flora212
Mannn esha this is so brilliant! Fantastic! I could feel Ahil's pain 😭 between can CVs give such scene as an entry of Ahil in season 3😳 it would be so good! On the other hand they can also show Sanam waking up with jerk as Ahil calls Sanaaam in his room 😳😆 keep writing more!

Aww thanks Nafs 🤗 I hope we get an entry scene of Aahil 😆 How awesome would that be They should start with an emotional scene and then show him as Jallad Jinn or vice versa... That he may seem angry and detached on the outside but his on the inside, he screams and cries for her all the time 😭 Anyway thanks again 😳 Lets see... I am trying to come up with another piece lol

Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan
This was so heartfelt and so sad. Poor Aahil and his suffering. Muje deka Nahin jayega. Especially when he realises that Sanam can't even remember him and thinks of some other guy as her husband? Imagine how Aahil will feel at that moment! Even thinking about it breaks my heart! Great piece!

Thanks! We all feel for Aahil! Its going to be devastating when he realizes she has forgotten him and their love! It will break him once more! Esp when she calls someone else her husband! KV will make us cry again. Its going to be heartbreaking!! But no worries, she will fall in love with him once again and he will remind her of their love! Their parting words and Sanam's last words before falling into the water holds a lot of significance! Aahil will remind his Begum Jaan of their junoon and we are going to enjoy watching that so much! Anyway thanks again! Glad u liked it!!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Poor Ahil
Nicely written
Great job
Thanks

Thanks! We all feel for him! Glad u liked it!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
ESHA!! 😭😭
Why oh why?! Why do you love to make me cry man! This is not fair! (though I love, but still 😆😆)

I read it in the morning before going to the college, and I couldn't control my tears after that man! I almost choked when I read the part where he whispered "Sanam" waiting to hear her "hmm" but he couldn't...😭😭 Oh god! The way he sat up with his head leaning on his knees and cried 😭
THIS IS SO MUCH MORE DEVASTATING TO READ!

I was almost happy while reading the first para,(fpr obvious reasons 😛😆) and then as the realisation stuck, my eyes started welling up. THIS IS PURE HEARTBREAK. BUT A GORGEOUS HEARTBREAK! :'))
And I couldn't comment after that!

You are such a gorgeous writer Esha, its amazing how you make your readers cry man! Anyone can make you smile and laugh with their stories, but those who make you cry with them? HEAVENLY! :'))

Thank you for this! I can so imagine him like this man! Oh my poor baby! 😭

Aww you know I love you 🤗 And I also know how we both love to cry with and for him 😭😆 I was tearing up while writing too! Whether its reading, writing or watching the episode, his pain gets me each time! It feels so real 😭 But thanks for all these lovely words ❤️ This was just a short piece but I am glad it managed to touch you the way it did 😳 These compliments mean so much 😳 I can imagine this scene too! I wish we get something similar on the show My baby is so lost and hurt without her! 😭 Him imagining her or feeling her presence is just so painful to see! Idk why but that hurts me the most! To read or write something like that! I hope they give us a few solo scenes of Aahil! These scenes just makes his loss seem so huge! It makes you feel his pain even more! I want them to meet soon! Thats going to be yet another heartbreak for him but atleast his Begum Jaan will be near him, safe and he can fight the battle to win her back! To make her see their love and junoon! Make her remember the most important man in her life! Her Aahil! Anyway thanks again Pragya 🤗 Your comments always make me extra happy!

Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: riaa234
aahil!!!!!!!!
so sad for him
hope he and sanam get united soon in the show

Aww we all do! Thanks for commenting! I also hope they meet soon!

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sahil333
😭 🥺 😭

So beautiful Esha, yet so heartbreaking... 😭 👏

I will never ever forget the scene that gave me goosebumps right away and that sad feeling...

"come back...Sanam...come back...please!!! 😭

Makes me teared up everytime...sigh!

Oh Aahil my baby...let me hug you 🤗

Thanks Rie 🤗Yes the way he said those words 😭 Made us all cry! Aahil truly deserves a hug! My heart breaks for him each time! Hope he finds his Begum Jaan soon!!

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