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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Talk about double entendres ..LOL. It was nicely done..

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: shilpita87
Talk about double entendres ..LOL. It was nicely done..

Thank you so much for reading and liking! 😃

Yeah, talk about like mindedness 😆

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Here too yo!

This one's just $$@@##$%&&&%$#

I mean dude!

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Here too yo!

This one's just $$@@##$%&&&%$#

I mean dude!

I know right!!!! ☺️

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 62

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

My mind hovered in a completely different direction and then you ended up saying 'Hair Salons' 😲

Errmmm.. 😳 GUILTY! 🤣

I had to re-read the Drabble, this time with the Hair Salon in mind! 😆

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
My mind hovered in a completely different direction and then you ended up saying 'Hair Salons' 😲

Errmmm.. 😳 GUILTY! 🤣

I had to re-read the Drabble, this time with the Hair Salon in mind! 😆

My mission here is complete! 😉

Haha! Glad you enjoyed reading! 😃 😳

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

nice drabble...hair saloon😲😆

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Hi Zanutix!

THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE LINK! 👍🏼

It was so short but?😒

And so awesome!!!! Like so different and mystifying. Actually, no it wasn't mysterious. We thought, I mean, you know, Asad and Zoya were making love. 😆

The descriptions were so apt! She removed the piece of fabric and all.

Then. The BOMB. She went to a hair salon!!!😆

Just WOW dude. I mean, you did not reveal anything and then threw the bomb. It was brilliant.

In fact, I remembered this essay that someone told me about. This girl, she narrated, kept saying about who a certain HE, was fixing her on the chair, she was scared, truamatic, frightened, he had some sharp object. He creeped her out and all.

So, we assume some dude, trying to kill or molest the girl.

Guess, what it was. A five year old girl at the dentist's chair. 😲😆

It so reminded me of that.

Lovely dear!

Do write more!

Love

Naj