asya sahil sehan game of love pt9-pg1, Pt10-pg2 updated

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i am a silent reader. however i couldn't stop this idea in my mind and wrote it. this is the first time i am writing anything so do not know how it goes.

Part 1-8- Page 1

Part 9- Scroll down

Part 10- page 2

Part 11- page 5

I have already posted this on the forum with another account but i forgot my password so i am posting it here. I have not copied it but it was all my own.

*its after sahil go to meet sulaiman chacha

*Asya are alive. but they'll after 2-3 parts.

*rehaan is not going to dubai.

*seher's a bit intelligent

Part 1:

Aahil and sanam consult sulaiman chacha. He tells Aahil the truth. Aahil is not able to believe that is true. He starts breaking down. Sanam holds him and makes him sit. She caresses his cheek smoothly and takes a deep breath.

S- mai janthithi Aahil ki begum sahiba hi aapki abbu hi kathil thi.

Aahil is in a shock. But he keeps quiet and waits for her to tell.

S-mai ye bat aapko isliye nahi bathana chahati ti kyuki aap mujpar yankeen nahi karenge. He tries to interrupt but she stops him and continues- Aahil mein jo bolungi app puri baat pehle suniye. Just listen. He just nods. She just gives him a peck on his forehead. She then tells him everything including his mother's vision. She also tells how sanam2 helped them and again changed. His eyes express pure shock and anger but more of it is his guilt and hurt. He just stands up. His legs were not giving him any support. Sanam just holds him and makes him sit.

Aahil tells that he didn't know what happened that night with sanam2 and tells that as soon as he drank the juice he felt a bit odd and the next thing he remembers is waking up in the bed with sanam2. Sanam assures him that we will find out about it.

A-Sanam, I am sorry

Tears start falling down from the two pair of eyes. Words were not needed. The eyes did all the work. Aahil pulled sanam into a bone crushing hug. He keeps on saying sorry. He pulls out from the hug.

A- sanam I am sorry tum mere liye intzaar karhi ti or mein yaha kisi aur ko tum samjke jeer aha ta.

S- Aahil you need not be sorry aapko mere upar itna pyaar tha jiske wajse aap sach ko nehi dekh paye. Par Aahil I'll not say that I am hurt. I am not hurt because of you not identifying me but not trusting me enough to listen to me.

Aahil- I am really sorry sanam

Sanam- its ok Aahil ab hum ek nayi zindagi shuru karenge humare zindagi se burai ko nikal kar. Saying this she wipes his tears.

***

In Ibrahim mansion:

Kitchen

Seher thought to take a step against the new sanam.

Se- yeh nayi sanam bohot ajeeb hai. Pata nahi kya ghoor ghoor ke dekhti rehti he aisa lagtha hai aake phood dho iski. Kuch tho karna hoga. She remembers the toe incident. Kuch to zaroor pak raha hai iski dimag me.

She then sees sanam2 coming and taking some lemons and other stuff and going. Seher decides to follow her.

Sanam2 goes to the store room and starts doing all those stuff.

Seher sees this and gets amused.

Seher(thoughts): mujhe pata karna hoga k ye kaun he. Kitni ajeeb hai.

She thinks and goes to sahil's room and locks the door. (She knows they have gone out). She opens sanam2's trunk and starts seeing through it to find anything. She sees a photo album. She closes the trunk immediately. Before going she sees the name on it as Sanam Abdullah on the trunk written in small letters. She sees this and moves out. While going sanam2 in the same room seen before doing something and understands it as black magic. She gets shocked knowing it. She was about to go when she heard sanam2 speaking.

S2- ab dekhna sanam mein tumhe aahilji ki zindagi mein hamesha keliye bahar nikaldongi. Tumhe khud bi nehi pata hogi kyu tumne aisa bole. Aahilji ki dimaag tum apne aap apne baato se tumhare leyi nafrat paida karoge. Tumhe bi nehi pata hoga ki tumhare mooh se who baat kese nikli. aur phir aahilji aur paise dono mere honge.

Saying this she moves out. Seher quickly hides. She immediately calls sanam.

***

Sahil took sulaiman chacha's blessing and were to go home when sanam got seher's call.

S- seher ye kyu is waqt call kar rahi he. She lifts the call.

Se- Kya huwa vaha

S- seher meine Aahil ko saari sachai pata chalgye hai. Jab sulaiman chachane unke abbu ki maut ki sachai batyi meine unhe baaki sachai bi batadi. Ab hum nikl rahe he. Jaldhi vaha pochenge. Seher intreupts her.

Se- tu mat nikal. Vahi ruk. Mein hi vaha ar ruhi.

Sa-kyu kya huwa

Se- mein ab tumhe kuch nehi batasakti bas vaha ruk.

Saying this she cut the call. Sanam tells Aahil what she told. They wait there. Meanwhile Seher comes there with rehaan and tells them about sanam2's black magic. So she says it's not safe to go there right now as even tanveer might be planning something as the truth is out so it will be safe to go somewhere else as this time they have to be careful and be a step forward than them.

A- hum humare farmhouse jayenge phir vahase uska pata lagayenge or phir mujhe ye bi pata karna hoga ki ammi yaha kyu ayi. He struggle saying the word ammi. They observe it but be quiet for meanwhile.

S- vo budiya she sees rehaan and sanam widening there eyes and says nahi begum sahiba aayiti yaha.

Sanam tells seher the matter.

Aahil now feels how different this woman is different from sanam. She can never become sanam. No one can be like sanam. His Sanam.

They leave to aahil's farmhouse.

***

Part 2:

Everyone sat in the hall. Sanam being sanam goes to kitchen to prepare lunch. Rehaan goes to his room for freshup. Aahil for sometime goes to the garden and sits on the bench replaying everything once sanam came into his life. Seher goes after Aahil to speak to ask for sorry. She goes and sits on the bench and calls jiju.

He turns towards her but doesn't speak anything.

Se- Jiju, meine aapko aise bulane ka hak khodiya. Kehte sab rishto me se jiju-saali ka rishta bohoti anoki hoti hai par meine use khodiya apne hi haato se. A lone tear escaped her eyes but she hid it as she wanted to speak and remove that burden of her heart. meine jo galtiya uski mafi nahi he. Shayad agar sanam meri behen na hoti to mein wo galti karchuki houngi. Aur tab use mujhe teek karneka mouka nahi hota. Mere vajhase mere swarthse do neik insaan ki zindagi barbaad hojati already hochuki hi aur mein use kitni bhi teek karnachahu jo huwa use mein badal nahi sakti. Shayad agar mein is duniya mein nahi hoti to meri behen ki zindagi teek-taak hoti. Aahil wanted to stop her but he let her say. She continued after taking a deep breath. She was going to tell her dark past. He would be the first person to know about her past other than rehaan. She didn't even tell it to sanam no one except rehaan knew it. But she could tell it to him. Even to rehaan she could not tell it so clearly. Such was jiju-saali's relationship. Mein do saal ki thi jab mere aur sanam ke abbu aur ammi chale gaye. Us durghatna mein me aur sanam alag hogaye. Uske baad mere pas koi nehi tha. I was a orphan. Mujhe bhook laga par khana nahi tha. Mujhe ghar jaana tha par ghar nahi tha. Kuch nahi tha. I started crying thinking someone will come but no came in vain. I started having garbage. Then one day some orphanage people came and took me. Life played a cruel joke with me. She let out a sarcastic laugh. I didn't even know who I was. I started calling myself as Sunehri. Then one day two thieves came and adopted me. They told me life was cruel and I need to fight but being with them I took a evil path to fight to live and the evil path was conning. Yes, I was a con woman. I conned people for my living. I believed life is all about money. Living in the streets made me believe so. To be frank I was no less than your mother. The only difference is I didn't murder anyone. Thats the only remaining thing to do. But I never played with people's emotions but soon that day came when I myself started to spoil my sister's life because I felt that was my fate, I was selfish, selfish because I didn't get any love. That's why I made the decision when razia came to me in the temple. For the first time in my life I loved someone with all my heart but then again it all came to an end. Yes I loved seher ahmed khan loved and is still loving someone for the first and last time in her life. I met a man, I came all set to con him but fell in love with him. Then he confessed his love to me and I was to confess the truth to him. It was all going beautifully but when I was to tell him my truth the truth came before him harshly and we broke up. That day I met razia and all this started. On the day of nikaah I came to know about sanam and also that the person whom I love is giving me another chance. Then we came back and you were married. We patched up later and I told him the truth and the rest is history. Still I can't make up for the mistakes I did. All I can do is apologize to you.

"Jiju I am sorry". She waited for him to say anything but when he didn't she took a deep breath and got up to walk away when he said

"You know what Seher your story is somewhat similar to mine." He got up and crossed his arms and then said You grew up as an orphan and did these mistakes while having everything with me but not love grew up into a monster. I was monster until sanam came to me and showed me who I am. I was a womanizer and a complete jerk. Well you'll hear my stories from your sister. I burned down her only source of living, her dhaba because she said insulted me because I was wrong. I hurt her so much but then she changed me and made me a neik insaan you say I am. The same goes for you the person whom you love change you but then something happened and you did it all only because you were hurt otherwise you wouldn't. Maybe it was a way to make you two sisters meet. It was the game of destiny."

Se: you'll forgive me? She asked teary eyed.

A: Of course Saali Sahiba and took her in jiju-saali hug.

***

Sorry, it was long. Give me your feedback

Part 3A:

A- so whos ur boyfriend ha?

Se- can't tell u so quick, it's a challenge find out. Saying this she runs away.

A- Unbelievable! He goes inside to freshenup.

Seher bumps into rehan while running. Their eyes lock for a minute and it is disturbed by rehan's cell ringing. He answers the call but not before giving seher a kiss on her cheek.

After that they all have their lunch and settle down to discuss the matter.

Se- Pehli baat agar us tanveer ne tum dono ko dekne bad chup rahi to uske dimag me kuch to chal raha he.

Sa-Par kya

Se-Agar Jiju ko sach pata chalgya to vune mentally nehi handle karsakte so physically kuch karegi. Par vo usi vaqt Aahil ko sach pata chalne se roksakti thi. Isqa matlab uske gandi dimaag me kuch aur pareshaani he. Iska bare me pata lagani chahiye taki hum is uske against use karsaqte.

Re- par une kya parshanni hogi

Se- mujhe itna zarror pata hai ki une emotionally kuch parshanni kyuki humne use kal rote hue dekhe. Matlab billi royi. Rehaan rolls his eyes. Whatever. Begum sahiba to unke family related hosakta hai. So jiju app unki sare family conections ke bare me pata karenge. Pehle latif ko phone kijiye ki wo kya ghar me hai.

Aahil calls and S2 lifts the call.

A-kya ammi ghar me hai

S2-nahi aahilji. App ko kuch chahiye

Aahil- tumse matlab agar ammi puche to kehna shyam tak aajounga.

Se-ab salim chachu se kehiye ki agar begum sahiba puche to kehna ki meine kuch nahi bola.

Aahil does it. Meanwhile Tanveer calls Aahil and asks if he told anything, he lies and tells that chacha couldn't remember and tells he is going to come after a while with sanam as they have gone to dargah.

Se-so ab Aahil ko kuch nahi karegi. Next coming to Sanam2. She removes the photo album to find anything about her. They see the name as Sanam Abdullah and as they open they see the picture of S2 with a woman in many photos. They do not find anything more while closing the book they see a lost photo of Sanam2 with the jailor. Sanam and aahil immediately tell that this was the woman tanveer was speaking to. Aahil tells we'll go and see her. They went there and saw her. She asks for food. They immediately get it. Then she sees S2 in the picture and says:

J-ye tanveer ki beti hai. This was a shock. Par use ye nahi pata. Ise jaismila legyeti. Iskeliye vo subah aayti.

S-par ye to ghar me hai.

J-oh! Par use yeh nahi pata ki uski beti kaun hai. Aaj subah meine use addres di taki vo use dund paye.

They leave her but take that address again.

S-agar voh tanveer ki beti hai to ye nikaah nahi hosakata. Kyuki vo uski aadi behen hai.

Se-right hume yaha sekilke jaismilah ke paas jaake ye pata lagne hoga ki use yeh pata he ki nahi.

They go there and see house locked when asked the neighbor she is not here from 3 months.

Se-this proves that use kuch nahi pata. To simple lets go and cancel the nikaah and send tanveer out.

But when they go they find tanveer is not there.(Shes gone to block all evidences). So for now they send S2 and cancel nikaah.

Night:(Ibrahim mansion)

All were sitting in hall when tanveer came inside. She went to shoot seher but latif pushed her and the bullet reached rehaan. The first person to react you all know it.

Se- Rehaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aahil called the ambulance immediately.

All the way to hsptl seher was saying rehaan nothing will happen. Get up. Utiye rehaan.

She breaksdown. Sahil don't understand seher's reaction. But just console her.

tanveer sits in the house shocked that she shot her own son. she comes to know S2 her own daughter. She felt she can't go to jail again and put blame on S2. S2 accepted because she thought my life is waste.(remember when she frst came in show bholi bhali)

Part 3b:

Part 3 is dived into 3 parts.

In the airport:

Two people are seen and yes they are none other thn our asya.

Z-Mr. khan aapko yaad hai apne mujhe yaha propose kiytha or mein to ab bhi shock mein hu ki Mr.Jerk became Mr.Superromantic

A- yaad hain mein hamesha romantic tha par thodi aged hona dikhna mushkil hai.

Z- oh really mr khan! Aged mein hu ya aap? Main abhi bhi cool and young hu. Rahul ko phone karu.

(rahul was their neighbour in London who used to praise her always. They moved to lndn after the incident. They were saved. They tried to search others but in vain so went to London.asya were here bcuse of Aahil. Aahil tell the reason. They came here bcause whn Aahil came to know he mde a business deal with them by nt telling them to surprise. As u ARI gets what he wants after d deal he made asad come and asad ke bina zoya wo bhi agayi but not without their tamatar.)

A- miss farooqi!

Z-mrs.khan itna saal hoga phir bi yaad nahi ata. Ye batata hai budhe kaun.

A - zoyaa

Zoya n najma start sing main kya karo ram mujhe budhe milgya.

He avoids thm and goes front. They laugh and move front.

They r happy for this is Bhopal- whr they found their love but sad because they lost their family. Asad's feeling- if not for Mr.ARI What to do ARI does what he wants. Ahh but Mr.ARI first impression from ur Sasurji.

***

In hsptl:

Aahil understands seher loves rehaan remembering the convo with rehaan on the nikah night. He tells to sanam. They console her. The doctor comes out and says it serious they can't say anything till tomorrow and he may also die or go into coma. Seher slumps down on the wall.not even a single tear falls down. She closes her eyes remembers every moment with rehaan and her past. In these thoughts she stays awake whole night. She gave no response to sahil.

***

faiz not in the story. rahat haya together. dilshad is with them after telling truth to sanam and seher.

Part 3c:

Next morning:

Soon it is said that rehaan is ok but needs to be taken care of. Seher's really happy. They discharge him and they go to Ibrahim house.

***

Continuing from where I left so here it is still night.

Asya and najma soon got settled in a hotel.

They all called it a night and went to sleep. But sleep was the last thing on asya's mind.

Asad stood near the balcony taking in the fresh air in his thoughts. Zoya changed her dress and came. She knew what asad was thinking. There was not a day they didn't think about dilshad, sanam, seher, and haya. But today being in Bhopal made things worse. She turned him and hugged him and they let a lone tear out of their eyes. They didn't speak anything because words were not required for them. They lied on the bed. Zoya hugging Asad from one side and asad's arms on Zoya and they slept like that supporting each other through the pain. Such was their relationship. Their love was unique. They didn't need words for their love. Silence and smile- this was their love. And the night passed away.

***

Sahil and sehaan went to rehaan's room and left him there to take rest. Sahil went from there giving privacy to rehaan and seher.

Seher sat on the bed while rehaan was lying. She caressed his cheek with a hand. Their eyes expressing a lot- love, care, concern, pain and the fear of losing each other. They stayed like that for hours. Seher then gave him a hug. A hug expressing all her fears which held on and started crying holding his shirt. She kept murmuring Please don't go away. He let her cry because she needed it. He just hugged her back. After what they felt like eternity they pulled away. Rehaan wiped away her tears while a tear escaped from his eyes seeing her in pain and she wiped it away. Then he gave her a kiss on her forehead which removed all her insecurities and gave her assurance. She got up from there and made him lie down, gave a peck on his forehead and left from there for him to rest. As soon as she came out she first went orphanage. Visiting there gave her some peace and strength to decide. Yes she decided. She decided to end this game forever and remove tanveer out of their lives. She who had promised herself to not step in that path again decided to step in it but this time for the good. She decided to fight fire with fire because it was needed for her not to enter again and destroy their peace. With these thoughts she drove back to home.

In the past one day many things happened. Some gave pain while some happiness. Aahil and sanam soon freshened up. Sanam went to make breakfast. They came to know from Latif that Seher had gone to orphanage. Soon Seher came back, freshened up, took breakfast for rehaan, made him have and then everyone expect rehaan came for breakfast. The breakfast went in silence. Then Seher broke the silence.

Se-Don't get Tanveer arrested.

S- ye tu kya bol rahi he seher. Before seher could reply Aahil said

A- she didn't get arrested. S2 got arrested and took blame on her. And I am sure tanveer is gona ask for forgiveness and to come back in this house.

Se- forgive her and let her in this house. Before sanam say anything she said I want to end the game forever. If she's out she is to harm us. No we can't let her do that. Let her in and let her start her game. I'll end it.

S-But Seher what will we do? Its risk

Se- without risk we can't win sanam. I know what to do. Just let her in. That's it.

Saying this she got up to go while tanveer entered and pleaded for forgiveness. Aahil first went stubborn and then allowed her to stay here for few days till she finds a house.

Till evening everything fell in place. He was afraid of Seher. But knew she was right and decided to talk.

He went near her and asked what she is gona do. She told him her plan. Jiju-Saali teamed up and decided to put a fullstop to it.

Aahil went outside in the evening and did first part of the plan. Tanveer thought to implement her plan tomorrow.

***

Part 3d:

After executing the plan Aahil went to his office. Asad was waiting there.

As-badtmeez ladka. Pehle mujhe London se yaha ponchai fir itna wait karwata hai. Asad Ahmed Khan ko pehli bar takar deraha. Par kam acha. Agar hum ye deal pehle nahi sign karte to mein kabhi yaha nahi aata.

Then ARI made his entry to his office. They discussed about the deal when Asad was to leave.

Aa- sir one second

Wait Wait he called me sir. Me and sir. Where did mr.khan go? Whatever. I didn't like him at all. But Zoya liked him. When I said zoya about him. She did a check on the net about him and said he was nice. After all the guy has built an empire for him when his father's buissness was in complete loss. Maybe he might be sweet at heart she said. He was atleast not a jerk like I used to be. Well even he was but your daughter changed him. He just called them to Bhopal.

Aa- sir I would like you to come to my house for dinner with your family.

As(thoughts)- ab aya na ladka line par. Ab dekhata hu is Asad Ahmed Khan kaun hai.

As-I don't want to mix personal life with professional life.(thoughts)- now let him beg me. But alas he was ARI

A- Exactly. I do want anything professional in it. It's completely a personal request. Actually I myself wanted to come with my family but my brother got injured so please I want you to come over with your family.

He had a way of requesting. He requested without requesting. Well they didn't have any plans so he said yes. Usually with the type of guy he is he would have said no but something made him say yes.

A- thanks sir. Today at 9:00 we'll see you sir. He gave the address and went.

***

Aahil called rahat, haya and told to take and come dilshad with dem.

***

Precap: Family reunion, seher's plan

Sorry guys to make you wait. I wanted to make it actually in 3c itself but then I couldn't even in 3d in couldn't. but in next part pucca.

Hi guys, so here's part 4- family reunion

Part 4:

Sahil room:

A-Sanam comes quickly. There are gona be here any time. Before he tells anything she comes out in this:

Aahil stares her wide-eyed. Sanam blushes under his gaze. Junnon starts

S-aahil app aise kya dekhyrahe hee. Chaliyena

Aahil moves forward. Sanam moves backward till she hits the wall. There's only little distance between them. She can feel his hot breath. He removes a tiny strand of hair falling on her blocking his view.

A- jab meri begum jaan itni khubsoorat ho to me kya karo. Mere ankheein nahi sunti. Sirf tumhe dekhna ka mann karta hai. He says in his husky voice. She blushes at his comment. Their eyes lock which is disturbed by his phone ringing. It was Asad. He replies to it and says sanam who log are rahe he chale. She just nods her head. They move out.

***

Meanwhile, a person is shown going to all the news offices and finding out if there is any news about Aahil Raza Ibrahim.

***

Soon the khans reach Ibrahim mansion.

In the car.

A-ek waqt tha jab ye ghar hamara tha. Pata nai kyu allah hume humara ateet ke pass lejara hai. Pehle Bhopal mein aana phir yaha. Humare kitni yaadein thi yahan

N-kuch nahi hoga bhaijhan.

Z-Allah jo karega na wo hamesha acche ke liye karta hai to aise kuch nahi he chale.

***

Meanwhile, the same person is found bribing the news about Aahil raza Ibrahim which he finally got and is shown calling a person. He says done and cuts the call.

***

The Khans ring the bell of Ibrahim mansion. Aahil opens it and calls sanam, seher, badi ammi and haya. They get emotional after hearing those names.

A- please come inside.

After getting inside they get the most pleasant shock of their lives. They see 2 people looking same like Zoya. Here sanam, seher, haya and dilshad get their shoc. All turns towards Aahil for confirmation. He nods his head. Asad and zoya take sanam and seher in a hug, haya goes and hugs najma, najma understands she is her daughter. After that the trio- asad,zoya and tamatar hug dilshad and take her blessings.

S- Aahil yeh sab kaise

A- 2 weeks back meine inhe ek article me dekha. Phir business nam se yaha bulaya.

Dilshad-tum log kaha they

Asad says them what happened. They introduce rahat as haya's husband, Aahil and rehaan as seher's lover, aahil's brother and tanveer's son. They get a bit uncomfortable hearing about tanveer's son but they say that he is not at all like that and is ver good. Najma takes rehaan in a motherly hug as he is imraan's son. Even haya is shocked hearing it but feels happy as he is her brother.

Se-yehi kadi rahogey or chalogey bhi. Sanam ne khana banaya he. World ki best cook. Mujhe to bhook lagrahi hey.

Saying this they were going to dinning hall when tanveer came out saying jammy tum zinda ho. Asad's blood boils seeing her.

As-Ammi yeh

sa-abbu hum yeh sab kuch bad me bateyenge dinner ke baad.

He nods his head.

Even haya rahat dilshad don't what happened yesterday properly except the other parts except that truth is out. But they didn't know why tanveer is here.

Seher goes to tanveer.

Se- dekho budiya mein tumse abhi bohot sari baate karni aur use sune tome bohot energy jo tumhare pass nahi he. Ab mujhe baat karne mood nahi he acchi mood me hu. Chup chap andar chali ja warna mere galliyan sunte marjayegi. Billi kahiki.

Listening this tanveer gets frustrated and was about to speak something when sehere says- chup meine bola na bappa kab ise akal doga aake to dediye dimag bi dedana andhi to tum tehi hi meine socha ab aake agayi chalo kuch dekhyi dedga samaj me aayege par nahi tum to abhi andhi ho. Andhi budiya. Chal

Tanveer frustatedly goes in her room and starts throwing things.

As- what was that language seher

Sa-seher get a hold. Aise kaise bat karti hai. Itni galliyan deti hai

Se-bappa ye inhe galliyan lagti he bappa kasam tune abhi tak mere galliyan nahi suni he agar sunege na tu kya kahega

As-ek zoya kam thi kya doosri milgyi. Kitna bolti hai seher

Zoy-mai zyaada bolti hun mr. khan. Ab tak chup thi aur mein galliyan nehi deti par seher kya suniya use billi kahiki uski to chera ud gya. Saying they hi-fi each other.

As- ab galliyan kisne diya. She tries to interrupt but he says ha ha kabhi kabhi aajata hai aur zoya saying mein zyaada nahi bolti hu is like zoya hates pizza.

Z-ab kya kare mr. khan sabhko apki tarah OCD nahi hota na

As-Ms. Farooki

Z-mrs. Khan itne saal hogaya phir bhi

Se-ab kya kare mom aap abhi itna young jo hai

As-allah ab in do do zoya ko kaise sambhalu. Shukar karo ki sanam aise nehi he.

Sa- aap inhe chodiye aur chale.

They go to dinning hall.

***

Precap: Asya moments with seher and sanam, seher's plan

Hey guys sorry but its too long. Please give ur comments. It helps me a lot. Sorry for not replying. Can't make more than 10 posts in 24 hrs.

Hii.. here are some family moments. This part is full of love and family.

Part 5:

As- Sanam the food is awesome kuch seekiye aapki beti se mrs. Khan.

Z- Mr. khan isme meri kya galti hai agar aapki beti world ki famous cook. Waise sanam khana bohut tasty tha and see aap kya kehrte Aahil ki bare me and see what he is aapko itna accha surpise diya seriously your too judgemental.

As- are mujhe kya patata kyu ye sab ho rahata

A-waise sorry mr.khan for the trouble

As-aahil. I am sorry it was no trouble actually I was just angry because u called us to Bhopal n we became u know too emotional but it was the best thing ever thank u so much

S-aahil seed-seeda nahi keh sekte te kyu bularahe aapka jallad jin roop dekhne ke beggar

A- mein jallad jin are kisise pucho mein kitna sweet hu mere smile dekhe na log fida hote kyu darling he winks to zoya

Z-ofcourse handsome

S-Aahil this is d limit

As- ur flirting with my wife

A- kya karu sir aapki wife itni young and beautiful ki I don't to flirt just state the facts right gorgeus

Z-right my darling kya todhi jal ne ki buarhi ha

Se-Jiju ur gone

S- Aahil agar aapko doosre log beautiful lagte hain to mere peeche kyun hain main chali jati hu then u can flirt oh sorry state the facts

She starts eating the food silently.

As- dekiye ms.farooqi aapke wajese kaise jagad rahe

Z- mere wajse ya aapke wajse agar aap mujhe food ke bare me taane nehi marte to yeh nahi hota and they start fighting.

Aa- Sanam. She doesn't respond. He keeps a hand under her chin and turns her slowly. She looks into his eyes. He looks into her eyes and says Sanam I am sorry.meri biwi itni khubsoorat ki mein bata bhi nahi sakta. Uski khubsoorati ki tariff kabhi katam hi nahi hoti aur is rehte huwa mein kisi aur ke bare mein soch sakta. Ye baat saaf saaf mere ankhon mein likhi hain. She blushes. Aur pata hai wo sharmate huwa aur khubsoorat hajati hai. Aur jalte huwa aur khubsurat. Isliye meine aise kaha. Aur gusse mein bhi acchi lagti hai par haste huwa aise lagta ki is muskhurahat ko dekhte hi mein apni puri zindagi bitaskata hu to keep this smiling face ever. I love you saying this he kisses on her forehead and takes into a hug and asya are still fighting.

Se- mom jagda karne wale to romance kare hai aur aap jagd rahe he. Listing this sahil straigten themselves and asya stop fighting.

Z- dekhe mr.khan jagda shuru karne wale pehle aap hote ho

As-ms.farooqi

Everyone start laughing. They finish the dinner and settle in a room. They till everything till yesterday and seher's plan(they don't reveal she is gona do but say she is planning something) escaping the swap part and seher's childhood. They decide sahil and sehaan nikaah next month.

Z-seher what u'll do

Se-wait n watch

As-be careful beta

Se-be careful use hona chahiye muje nehi

Saying this everyone retire to their rooms.

Asya take their old room.

As- I am so happy zoya

Zo- kitna accha hain na ab

As-except vo tanveer

Zo-don't worry. Remember humne yaha kitna pal bitye te.

As- hmm. Saying this he brings zoya closer and leans for a kiss. A perfect kiss.

Sahil:

A- jaan to nikaah keliye tayar

S-hamesha

Aahil pulls her closer and leans for a kiss. A perfect kiss.

Sehaan:

Re- be careful what u want do ammi kisi bi had tak ja sakte uss had jaha vo apne hi bte ko marskti he

Se-aapke hote huwa mujhe kuch nahi hoga

She tells her plan. He says ur genius. She says I know.

Rehaan pulls her closer and leans for a kiss. A perfect kiss.

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Love is in the air.

Precap: Seher vs billi

Hey guys next part mainly focuses on seher and tanveer. Till now the couples have solved all their programs. It was all love. Perfect love. But next we will focus on war. Keep reading and give me feedback.

PART 6A:

Hii guys heres part 6- my fav part of seher. couldn't post in another post bcuse i am a newbie

Seher goes to her room after some time and opens her mobile and sends a quick message to someone as:

tomorrow morning

After sending it she goes to billi's room and opens the door seeing billi lying on the bed but not sleeping. Seher's tune plays. She leans on the door.

T- kya chahiye tume

S- jot um nehi chahti ki ho wo

T- humare sir dard ho raha he jao yaha se

She immediately goes near and asks- teek ho kya? Tablet lee haina?

Tanveer gets frustrated. Seher lets out a laugh.

Se-abi khel shuru huwa ki nai sir dard ho raha hai. I mean deal nhi ki hai hum dono nai aur sir dard ho raha. Waise prepare ho jao tumhara sir phootega agle 2-3 din mein fir sochega ki meine kyu isse panga ki phir tumhe lagega ki tum mar kyu nahi jati.

T-ye hum kabhi nahi hone denge. Hume pata he ki shatir agar us din hum apni beti ko milne nahi jate to ye nahi hota. Ab war jo khul hogaya aur tum janti ho ki hum yaha kyu aaye he to ye bi pata lagalo ki tumara bas aur nehi chalega

Se-hogaya abhi bi tumhe akal nahi ayi tum yaha ane diye mene Aahil ko meine ye baat bola ki aap ko yaha rehnde.

Tanveer tries to reply but seher says:

Se- ruko abhi mujhe bolna hai aur rahi baat tumhari beti ko jaane diya isliye yeh sab bakwaas band karo. Agar mein chahu to tum pehle hi din yaha se bahar nikal sakti ti par mein chup thi. Meine socha ki phirse uss raste mein nehi au raise mujhe rehaan ki vajse aaya. Mein unki vaajase se badly. Vo mere sabkuch hai. Unki vajse mujhe sahi aur galat ke bare mein farak pata chale. Par jab tumne usi vajah ko chot pahunchai tabhi meine faisla karliye ki tere band baja ke rahungi. Isliye tu yaha he. Aaj tak tune seher ka khel dekha he par ab Sunehri ki khel dekhege aur tujhe koyi nahi baccha sakta. Bappa kasam aise khelungi na khud sucicide karlegi. Purani Sunehri ke pass khel rahi he ye yaad rakna. Jake records dekhe le mere.

Tanveer laughs.

T- tumhume yeh sab bol rahi. Yeh sab kuch 1 galti se huwa aur tum acchi tarah janti ho hum kya hai.ye khel jot um baat kar rahi barso saal pehle hi humne shuru kiya pehle tumhare nana, nani gye fir tumhare abbu, ammi bachgye par kitne saal tumse door rahe, par koyi baat nahi iss baar unke betiyon ke

T- tumhume yeh sab bol rahi. Yeh sab kuch 1 galti se huwa aur tum acchi tarah janti ho hum kya hai.ye khel jot um baat kar rahi barso saal pehle hi humne shuru kiya pehle tumhare nana, nani gye fir tumhare abbu, ammi bachgye par kitne saal tumse door rahe, par koyi baat nahi iss baar unke betiyon ke saat jayenge upar. Kyu?

Se-tum sahi keh rahi tumne yeh khel 20 saal pehle shuru kiya par 20 saal aise khel har roj khelti aayi hu. Par jab mein chup hogayi tu mere saat ek khel hi ho. Ab aur nahi is khel ko hamesha keliye katam karungi aur tujhe bi.yaad rakhna agar tune koyi bhi chalaki ki to imagine karle. Par bappa kasam tujhe narak se bhi zyada pareshaan karungi. Waise agar khel shuru ki hi li to pacca karle.

She gives her hand for a hand shake and says.

Se- teri ginti shuru hogayi he. Be ready.

She then twists her hand during handshake and says billi kahiki and goes but then stops and says:

Kal shyam ko ek party rakha hai meine yahi par rehaan recovery, ammi abbu ki vapas ane keliye or is kel ki start keliye, attend karna.

Saying she goes.

Tomorrow starts the war.

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can't pm as i am a newbie

Precap: new entry and revealing of tanveer's plan, her failure and seher's first step, party's fun

Sorry guys couldn't make up for the plan revealing but 6b is for that. I just wanted to give seher and billi's convo. So this part is for it. Gona update next part. Keep reading and give me feedback.

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PART 6B:

Hi guys, here's 6b, this will show new entry.

Next morning:

Ibrahim mansion:

A person in a black Armani enters Ibrahim mansion.

Latif: aap kone hai

Man: main kone hu tumhe pata chalega jaake begum sahiba ko bulao

Latif: to aap uss budiya keliye aaye is ke liye mujhe kitch se yaha na pada hai allah agar mein aise kaam karungi to kya hoga mera. Mein to hui chui mui.

Man: a pointing his finger mind ur language and I am not interested in ur hui chui nonsense. You get that. Now go call begum sahiba down.

By this time everyone come to the hall.

Se-who r u?

Man- u'll come to know soon

Tanveer comes down and asks who he is.

Man emotionally says- ammi aap mujhe nahi janti kya. Meine aapko kitna dhoonda

Ta-aap kya bol rahe he mujhe kuch samaj nahi araha hai.

Man- ammi mein ammi yeh dekhiye aap inhe jante ho na. He shows a photo of jaismillah.

Ta- ye to jaismillah haina tumhe kaise pata

Man- ammi us din jail mein apne ek nahi do bache ko janam diya ek mein or ek sanam.

Ta- tum sach kehre sach kehro na bolo. She starts crying.

Man- ha yeh sach he. Saying this he calls to jaismillah. She says the same.

She touches him like a mother and says: tumhara naam kya hai beta?

Man: Salim. Salim Abdullah. They hug each other.

Sal: ammi yeh log kaun hain.

Ta- hum tum batayenge tumhare saat kamre me chalo.

Ta- Aahil kya yeh yaha reh sakta hai.

Aahil thinks for a while and nods his head.

Tanveer takes him the room, locks d door and tells him everything and now what she is planning.

Sal:unki itni himmat. Mein us seher ko chodunga nahi. Aap chinta mat kejiye ammi.

Ta:(thoughts):atleast ye bte to kaam aye.

Ta-teek he beta. Humne aaj kuch reporters ko Aahil ki unki adhi behen(s2) ke saath nikah ke bare mein leak kiya. Yeh humare first step hoga. Teek hai.

Sal: teek hai ammi. Hume pehle seher ko kuch karna hoga. Aaj party mein kuch plan karung. Aap aaram kejiye.

Part 6c

Seher gets a message from a person Akram as: done.

Flashback:

Seher is speaking to a man in a park and he is revealed as Salim. He is actually Akram and is sent by Seher to act as Tanveer's son to know her plans.After telling him what to do he was going when she said him another work.

Se-tum jaake dekho ki kal kya koyi aahil ke bare me news hai. Zaroor wo billi aise kuch karegi aur agar news mile to use tum khareedd lene.

Ak(Sal)-teek hai

Se-thanks

Ak- its ok. Why are friends for?

Flashback ends

Tanveer throws her phone listening that her plan failed.

Seher goes to rehaan's room next and sees him coming out from bath without a shirt. She checks him out while

rehaan asks kya?

Se-kuch nahi. Waise tabiyat kaise hai showing concern

Re- meri tabiyat ab tak teek thi par ab tum agai na sar dard ho raha he.

She gets angry on listening this and was about to go out when he pulled her back and she hits his chest

Re- mein to ye bole sochkar ki tum mere liye care karogi. Par tum ja rahi ho. Mein itne muskil se jhoot bolta hu tum jaarahi ho.

Se- ha pata hai ki aap kitne bade budu ho. Mein yaha aapse todha romance karna par aap sab chopat karne mein lage ho.

He widens his listening this.

R-accha romance karna hai mein dikhata hu romance kya hai. He pulls her closer. Then kisses her forehead, eyes, cheeks, nose. She giggles and he leans in to lock her lips with his when zoya opens the door. They don't notice her and were about to continue when she starts laughing. They straighten themselves.

She says them to come for breakfast and was going when she stops and says door tho close karlo'.

Se- breakfast keliye aajana and was going when rehaan says her to stop. She asks what.

Re- aaj kahi bhar jaane ka plan he so after breakfast we'll go.

They were having their breakfast when rehaan's phone rings.

R-shenaz bi

Listening this Seher jumps. She was seher's caretaker and rehaan was a sponserer for their orphanage as he stayed their before adopted by aahil. But seher and rehaan didn't know that they stayed their before.

Se-tum kis shenaz bi se baat kareho

Re-vo orphanage hai na bhopal ki outskirts uski cartaker

Se- what?

She leaves her breakfast and goes to take the phone as she didn't speak to her for a longtime.

She takes the phone and starts speaking.

Se-kaise he shenazbi. Sorry meine aapse baat karne nahi aaye. Bacche kaise he. I missed u all so much. Sorry. Aaj pakka aungi. Vaise aap rehaan ko kaise janti he?

Sh-are saaz to leh sunehri. She tells about rehan but asks how do you know him

She tells that he is her sister's devar to tease him.

Sh-oh! Vaise tumhe us din ek ladke ne tumhe chitti di thi jab tum ro rahiti vaha bench pe. Voh rehaan tha.

Se-really!vo rehaan tha ek minute main aapko fir phone karti hu.

She rushes to her room and opens a letter she saved for years. It was written:

Hey don't worry there is surely someone who is waiting for you. Smile for that person.

She was crying because she didn't have anyone. She never smiled before after that fateful day. She was 10 yrs then. But she first time smiled and started speaking to others, laughing and became the real seher. But when she was 12 two people came and adopted her and rest is history.

She ran to rehan.

Re-are bate to sahi kya hua aur tum shenaz bi ko kaise janti ho.

Even others waited for an explanation but alls he did was keeping that letter in his hands. He saw it and was shocked. He asked whether she was that girl. She nods her head and hugs him with all her might and starts saying

Se-thank u so much rehan. I love u so much. That was the first day I smiled. I love u. I love u she kept saying and started crying.

Re- he pulled her away and said Re- I love u too and starts wiping her tears. And today I was taking u to orphanage only he says.

Zoya-koyi batayege kya hora hai

Se- actually I used to go to the orphanage here and I started crying because I got remembered of u and dad mom, then he gave me this chit and I didn't it was him.

Zoy-how old were u

Se-um 10 I guess. We had come here for some work from punjab so I visited the orphange and then it happened.

Zo-oh how sweet childhood love story. So nice. I always wanted such a childhood love story and she kept on saying.

Soon they finished their breakfast and sehaan went to orphanage.

Part 6d:

Sehaan go to the orphange. The kids see them together and are very happy. They spend some time there and go from there. Next rehaan takes her to the kohinoor hotel where they spent some wonderful moments.

Se-hum yaha kyu hai

Re-just wait

He gives her the dress which she wore on the day he proposed her but then the police came and all. He says her to wear the dress and come in the office. He also wears the same dress and closes her eyes the sam way he did before. He removes hands from her eyes after entering. It was the same way he decorated it before.

Se-rehaan its beautiful

Re-shh wait I have to say something. Last time it didn't end properly but this time it will. He goes on his knees and proposes her.

Re- Seher tumhari naam ki tarah tumne bi mere zindagii me roshinni layi. Thanks for coming in my life and making it beautiful. Will you be with me forever and make my life beautiful.

She has tears in her eyes. She just nods and he slids the ring in her finger.

They later go to bappa's temple and go back.

In the evening: (party)

It was on full swing. The repoters ask many questions as the great Asad Ahmed Khan is back.

Later Seher goes to the stage and announces asya's dance.

Zo-yeh kya

As-come lets go

The song Raabta plays

He twirls her around and they sway to the music.

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

He goes far from her and again comes closer.

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Tu humsafar hai
Phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai
Marna issi ke liye

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
har kisi ke liye...

He holds her waist while she keeps her hand on his sholder.

hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujhpe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tera nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila

Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sohbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye

He bends her down and turns her around.

Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi hai
Marna issi ke liye

Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye...

He lifts her up, looks in her eyes and sings, then bring her down on the feet, twirls her around and brings her to his chest, keeps his hand on her stomach and the song ends.

Eveyone applaud them while calls for a sahil dance. The song plays zehanseeb.

He holds her hand and takes her to dance floor and turns her around so that she falls on his chest.

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He turns her around and keeps his hand on her stomach.

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

They sway to the music.

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He turns her around and bends her.

Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

He removes a hair strand falling on her face and tucks it behind. He comes far and then close and then she locks her hands with his.

Hona Likha Tha Yoon Hi Jo Hua
Ya Hote Hote Abhi Anjaane Mein Ho Gaya..
Jo Bhi Hua, Hua Ajeeb..
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha Zehnasib..
Zehanaseeb Zehnaseeb
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha Zahnaseeb..

He takes her hand and they sway to the music.

Hua Ameer, Dil Gareeb
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha Zahnasib..

Zehnasib Zahanaseeb
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha
Tujhe Chahoon Betahasha
Zehanseeb..

They keep their hands in each others in between and end the song.

And then Saahil go on stage and announce welcome the lover birds sehaan for a dance. The song dhoka dhadi plays.

Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
La la la la... (x4)

He keeps a hand on her waist and she keeps a hand on his shoulder and start dancing.

Teri aankhon se hui yaariyan chalte chalte yunhi
Meri aankhon ne teri aankhon se aap-beeti kahi
Teri aankhon k piche piche hum pagle se chal pade
Meri aankhen ab dil ke chakar me kuch bhi na sunti hain

She locks her hands with his and he brings it near their eyes and they sway to the music.

Dil yeh dhokha dhadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Itni yeh gadbadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Aisi mushkil khadi kar dega, Socha na tha

Ud gaye tote, tere to ud gaye tote re
La la la la...
Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re


He swirls her and takes her in his arms and sway to the music.

Hote dil farebi hain
Aur hum sirphire bhi hain
Pyaar-vyaar hum nahi jaante
Seedhe-saade lagte ho
Phir kyun aise thugte ho
Lagte hain kya nadaan se

She turns around and starts dancing in his arms.

Hmm, isey jo maaf kije wallah
Yeh dil zara sa hai nitthalla
Iraade hain beimaan se

Dil ye dhokha dhadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Itni ye gadbadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Aise mushkil khadi kar dega, Socha na tha..

Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
O la la la..
Udd gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
La la la la..

They sway to the music.

Mere kaano mein kahin
Roshandaano se kahin
Chhanti teri aawaz hai
Zyaada na hai ye kahe
Chup bhi na hai yeh rahe
Aankhon ka ye andaaz hai

He touches her ear with his ear.

Chalo miyaan ho gaya milna
Neendon mein bhi khona phisalna
Khwaabon pe tum chalna dhyaan se

Dil ye dhoka-dhadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Itni yeh gadbadi kar dega, Socha na tha
Aise mushkil khadi kar dega, Socha na tha...

Ud gaye tote re, tere to ud gaye tote re
La ra la la... (x3)

They sway to the music and end the dance.

They all call for a dance of the three couples. The song Radha plays. All of them start dancing the girls teasing and the boys praising them.

All the guests go. When all were about to go seher implements her plan and calls tanveer for a dance. The song aazma luck plays. Seher while twists tanveer's both the hands so that she can't use them for 2 days and pushes her(like in the kohinoor party) and stamps her legs. Tanveer now is bedridden for 2 days. Sanam tries to stop seher but seher ko kaun roksta hai.

Part 7:

After the party all retire to their rooms. Before Zoya enters the room Asad holds her hand.

Zo- kya ai asad

Asad just blindfolds her with his hands and takes her inside and asks her to open her eyes. She is shocked seeing the room. It was beautifully decorated with petals scattered here and there and some candles and dinner set in the between. There was also a small projector put to the wall. She is overwhelmed by seeing all this.

Zo- asad yeh sab

Before she tells anything e goes on his knees and takes her hand and kisses it.

As- Zoya tumhe yaad hain humne yaha kitne sare pal bitaye the. Mein unhe kabhi nahi bulasakte. Yaha humne acche pal aur bure pal bhi bitaye hai par saath mein bitye hain. Aaj se phir hum yaha he. Meine tumhe yaha bahut sare dukh di he. Aur jab sabkuch teek hogaya phir se hume dukh mile. Allah ne hume humare bacche se unki janam din par hi dur kardiya. Par shayad sabkuch keliye ek wajah hoti. Isilye hum aaj phirse une 20 saal bad mile. But this time when we are back here I promise I'll never give you pain.

Listening to this zoya has tears in her eyes.

As- Dance

She just nods her head. He gets up and they sway to the music to a slow number. After sometime he makes her sit to have dinner and switches on the projector. She was confused why the projector was here but when she sees what is playing a tear rolls down her cheek. She links her arm with his and leans on his shoulder.

The video plays:

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x16ro0z_a-z-funny-vm_music

And the night passes away beautifully.

The next day everyone gets up and comes to the dining table except seher. She is having her beauty sleep.

Sa- yeh seher bina kitna soti hai. She goes to wake her up but

Re- its ok sanam mein use lekar ata hu

Zo- rehan directly bolo na ki taras rahe ho use dekhna hai

Re- aise kuch nahi he

Saying so he gets up and goes to wake her up. As soon as he sees her a smile appears on his face. He goes towards her and caresses her. At first she gets disturbed but afterwards smiles and then says,

Se- Rehan sone dona

Re- vo kya haina madam sab aapke liye niche intzar kar rahe he. To challenge kya subhe ke 9 baje hai. Sara din soyengi kya.

He kisses her forehead. She gets up.

Se-if only I could sleep. Accha mein 5 minute mein aati hu. She goes to freshen up.

He goes down. Sanam was working in the kitchen.

Zo- hey guys kal sanam aur seher ka birthday he so whats the plan

Both rehan and aahil were happy. They all planned for a surprise party. Soon they left for work. Both aahil and rehan planning their own special surprise.

Meanwhile tanveer in room.

Ta- 20 saal pehle humne tum dono ko kal apne abbu aur ammi se door kiyete but don't worry is bar saath me sab ko upar bejenge but itni jaldi nahi kal hamara sirf pehla kadam hoga. Seher be ready.

And the day passes away.

Precap: seher sanam birthday

Hi guysss. Was busy with note completion and my other ff. Unfortunately, I forgot my password and thanks my account got deleted. So I am writing with a new account. Hope you like it. Its full of Sehan. Next one will be full of Sahil. And the other one will be Asya moments with SaSe. And then my favourite one- be ready to see the Jallad Jin.

Part 8:

It was nearing to 12:00 o' clock. And as the clock struck 12:00.

Seher was having her beauty sleep and was dreaming about( you know who I am speaking about). She didn't know when her birthday was. Soon she woke up when she felt a soft touch on her cheek and she could identify that touch even in her sleep. She gave her dollar smile but pretended to be asleep.

He smiled at her cute antics and left out a small laugh which made her heart warm. How nice the laughter sounded. He pecked her forehead.

R- Stop your cute antics and wake up my darling.

She woke up and her heartbeat increased hearing his husky voice. It happened everytime he was near her no even when she heard his nam. Rehan. How nice it was. She loved to say this.

Se- rehan

How beautiful his name sounded from her mouth?

Re- seher

Saying this he caresses her face. There were butterflies in her stomach as she heard her name from his husky voice. How flawlessly he said it? They had an eyelock. Not leaving his eyes from hers he said.

Re- Happy birthday Seher.

Tears made their way to her cheek. She just hugged him. She started crying. Today was her birthday. She never knew it. For her there was never a birthday. No one ever celebrated her birthday. Hearing this she became emotional. How she cried to know who she was. She started crying on to his shirt.

Re- Shh. Seher.

Se- Rehan thank you so much. Those words mean a lot to me.

Re- And you mean everything to me. She just hugged him and he hugged her back.

Re- Waise don't you want to see your gift.

And her child like innocence came back.

Se- Ha

He gave her a rectangular shaped gift which was wrapped in a gift wrapping paper. She opened it and seeing the gift again there were tears in her eyes. He wiped them. It was her birth certificate.

Re- don't become too emotional. There are others two. He gifted her a album of her childhood photos with her parents.

Re- Now come down. I have some other gifts. I have brought you a dress. I want you to wear it.

She took the dress and she changed into it.

The dress:

He took her down. And there was standing her favourite car. It was a pink cool car just like her.(Sorry, I don't know much about cars. So you can imagine on your own).

She squealed seeing it and hugged him so tight.

Re- Liked it?

Se- I loved it Rehan. My fav car.

Re- wanna go for a ride?

Se- Yes. And I am going to ride it.

Re- Fine. But slow. Ok

Se- Yeah sure.

As soon as he removed the keys from his pocket. She grabbed it and sat and asked him to sit.

He sat in.

Re- Don't drive too fast ok.

She drove the car a bit fast but didn't cross the limits and Rehan kept cautioning her.

Finally she came to a halt.

He took the driver seat now. He drove to the restaurant where he met her first. She got down.

Re- close your eyes.

Outside the restaurant:

When she opened her eyes it was beautiful. There up in the sky was written with crackers.

Happy birthday Seher'.

Se- Its beautiful Rehan.

He then said- Seher this was the first time I met you. Though I thought you as Sanam I am the most happiest for this meeting. It changed my life. Thanks for coming in my life. He hugged her.

Re- Now come there's another surprise.

Se- Another surprise.

Re- Hmm come with me.

He took her to the orphanage. Their the kids where catching trays with candles. In each tray a letter was formed. Thus- Happy birthday Sunheri was formed. He closed her eyes and they went in. After seeing the kids. She just went and hugged them. She took blessings from Shenaz bi. All the children and Shenaz bi, Sehan celebrated her birthday. They cut the cake and made her have.

She played with the kids a lot. She had a connection with the orphanage a lot. When she was a orphan or thought so they made her feel they were there for her. And she loved spending time with them. And they wishing her meant a lot to her.

It was nearing 4'o' clock. He took her to Bappa's temple. They took his blessings and came out. They were standing near the car.

Last but not the least he gave her a paper.

When she saw it word failed her. There was her admission letter for a fashion designing course.

Re- mein tumhe office mein dekhata kapde design karte huve and I heard you speaking to Bappa the other day in the room how you wanted to become a fashion designer. So I thought.

Re- mein Bappa ko tumhe apne life meiin bejne ke liye jitna bi shukriyada karu seher kam padjayenge. Just don't go away from me.

Se- Thanks Rehan Thanks for everything. Thanks for loving me. Thanks for coming in my life and giving a meaning to it. And they hugged. Rain started. He caressed he face and then cupped it and they kissed each other there in the rain. It was a slow yet passionate kiss showing all the love they have for each other and thanking each other for coming in their lives.

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Here I end the update. Next update will be Aahil celebrating Sanam's birthday. Please give your comments. It encourages me to write.

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Here comes the next Part. It is full of Sahil.

Part 9:

Sanam knew it was her birthday tomorrow. She saw the clock striking 12:00 and was really excited how Aahil will wish her and was pretending to be asleep. Here Aahil could also sense her excitement but was pretending to be asleep and as the clock struck 12:00. He cupped her cheek and said Happy Birthday Sanam'. She just smiled.

He got up and brought a dress and gave it to Sanam.

Aa- Wear this

The dress:

She wears it and come. He stares at her intently and goes near to her and caresses her face and kisses her forehead.

Aa- Now Come. If I am here for another minute I don't know what I'll end up doing.

She blushes at his statement.

Sa- Par Kaha?

Aa- Itne sawaal kyu puchti ho? Just come.

And they go down. He opens the door for her like a gentleman. She sits in. The long drive went in silence as both kept taking glances at each other. Finally the car came to a halt.

She just followed him. They were near a lake. He blindfolded her and took her in. When she opened her eyes she could see a lake and a house infront of her, and she could guess it. It was their dreamhouse. It was built exactly the way they imagined it. She hugged him tight. She pulled apart.

Sa- Thank you Aahil.

He just smiled and caressesd her face. He took her inside. The room was full of ballons- red ballons. And as she opened the door all the balloons went outside through a window. The room still had some balloons which were tied to the wall. He took her in the between of the hall where a vanilla cake was kept. It was her favourite. She saw a red knife kept beside it. And both of them started to cut. It was perfect- white cooured cake- white being his favourite and red knife- red being her favourite. After cutting the cake Aahil started to apply some cake on Sanam's face. He smeared it on her face. She was looking cute. And then she too started to apply the cake. And the fight over who will apply began. Soon they were running all over the house. They entered a room. Aahil was running behind Sanam and he soon caught her hand and both of them slipped with Sanam on top of Aahil. Junnon started to play and Sanam felt her heart thumping loudly and her breaths got uneven. Don't know what got into her she bent down and removed the cake smeared on Aahil's lips with hers. A balloon under aahil's leg bursted which brought them out of their trance.

Both of them got up and straightened themselves. Aahil started to show the house to her and they spent sometime in the balcony.

Aa- Sanam meine tumhe bohut dukh de hai ab tak par tumne kabhi mera saath nahi chodha. I am sorry. Sanam tries to interrupt but aahil asks her to wait.

Aa- sanam from the first time I met you all I gave you was pain. But see the irony I kept saying that you gave me pain and accused you of something you never did. I was I so blind in my Ammi's fake love that I stopped trusting you. I believed her everytime and accused you everytime. I am so sorry. But from today I'll never let that happen Sanam. Please forgive me. Let's start a new life.

Sa- Aahil I Love you so much for loving me so much

Soon it was about 4: 15. And they went out.

Suddenly it started to rain. She turned around to feel the rain. She loved the rains. She left her arms free and started to enjoy the rain.

And Aahil took his mobile out and played the song- Mohabbat Barsa Dena Tu.

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

And suddenly she felt two arms tangle their arms in hers. And she took in the manly scent of his as he so softly moved her hair exposing her bare back and started to nuzzle her neck.

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai


He turned her and hugged her and caressed her back and they swayed to the music.

Kyun ek pal ki bhi judaai sahi jaaye na
Kyun har subah tu meri sanson me samaye na
Aaja na tu mere paas, dunga itna pyar main
Kitni raat guzaari hai, tere intezar mein

Kaise bataaun jazbaat ye mere
Maine khud se bhi zyada tujhe chaaha hai
Sab kuch chhod ke aana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

As she turned around and took two steps forward he pulled her back as she felt to his chest, he turned around and bent her down and kissed her waist and then pulled her back.

Bheege bheege tere lab,
mujhko kuch kehte hain
Dil hai khush mera ki khayal ek jaise hain :)
Roko na ab khudko yun sun lo dil ki baat ko
Dhal jaane do shaam aur aa jaane do raat ko
Kitna haseen ye lamha hai
Kismat se maine churaaya hai

Aaj ki raat na jaana tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar main tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

He traces the outline of her lips with his hands which sends shivers down her spine and then they kiss each other with with full of passion. He explored her mouth while she took the pleasure. And then soon she took the lead. He again took the lead and let his tongue in her mouth as she again took the lead to taste his lips. It was their first kiss in rain and they couldn't stop fighting teven there. They headback to home.

Precap: Asya- sase moments and tanveer-sanam confrontation.

How was the part guys? And please give me your comments.

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Awesome Awesome Awesome updates..
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SeHan SaHil n asya are tooo sweet n cute
Love trio couples
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So guys here's part 10. And Jallad Jin is back in the part.

Part 10:

They all reached the house but sahil came a bit before so they didn't see Sehan coming. Seher asks Rehan to stay for some more time. He stays. She changes her dress and comes. Seher sits on Rehan's lap and rests her head on his chest.

Se- Rehan tumhe pata he for the first time in my life someone's celebrating my birthday. I had cried everyday for someone to come to me, for someone to make me feel loved, cared for. No one came. I cried for food. Nothing came to me. I slept in the streets, in the rains. I started to eat food from garbage. Soon orphanage people came and took me. But still I cried for parents until you gave me that letter. You made me smile again. But then those two adopted my studies stopped. I became a conwoman. I lived for money because no person loved me. But then you came and everything fell in place. For the first time in my life I felt loved, for the first time I fell in love, I meet my family, my parents, I again dreamt of becoming something. Thank you so much for coming into my life. You completed me. A lone tear escapes her eyes.

Re- Par yeh sab kuch bi meri ammi se hi hua na. Agar vo nahi hoti to tumhe in mushkile kabhi nahi jhelne padithi and a tear also escapes his eyes as he says this.

She turned around and cupped his face and wiped his tears.

Se- rehan I know it is difficult for you, but you were never her son for me. You were never tanveer's son but you were my rehan, seher's rehan. Never forget that.

Rehan wiped her tears. She lied on him. And they didn't know when they drifted into sleep.

Sanam changes her dress and comes.

Aa- Thanks Sanam for coming into my life. You made it all perfect. You brought me out of my guilt, made me feel emotions to which I was alien to, showed me the right path, and made me into something which I never was.

Sa- Aahil you were always good. The only thing is you didn't show it. You just pretended to me. And you know I should thank you for loving me. Loving me like no one could ever. Giving me happiness no one could ever give me. I met my sister, parents only because of you. Thank you for coming into my life aahil.

And they drifted into a peaceful sleep in each others arms.

The next morning:

Asya and others wished Sahil and they went to Seher's room to wish her as she didn't come down. They both were sleeping peacefully in each other's arms. Then others entered their room.

Zoya cleared her throat and Rehan woke up by the sound and Seher was still sleeping. He started to get up.

Seher closing her eyes said Kya hai rehan sone dono. Kal raat ko to tekhe se neend bi nahi aayi. Tumhara surprise jo tha aur ab sone nahi dete ho.

Re- Seher tumhare ammi abbu sanam aur aahil bhai he was saying but was interrupted by her.

Se- Kya hua? Ab un sab ke naam kyu bata rahe ho aur ha unhe pata hai mein late uthi hu to no problem aur tumhare bare mein ek roj late jauge to kuch nahi hoga. Ab chup chap sone do. Saying this she cuddles onto him.

Finally Zoya couldn't control and started laughing.

Zo- Kya hai? Koyi teek se sone bhi nahi deta. She says as she frustatedly opens her eyes and then reality dawns upon her but Seher being seher doesn't wake up and gets down from rehan's lap but pretends to sleep on the bed and leaves Rehan for explanation.

Re- woh woh

Aahil now starts laughing seeing rehan's situation and soon everyone starts laughing. After sometime Asya go to Seher and wish her.

As- Sorry beta itne saal mein kabhi hum tum dono ke saath nahi the.

Se- abbu it's ok now don't think about think about it. Soon everyone go down as Rehan and Seher freshen up and come down.

Sanam gets a phone call and she excuses herself. She doesn't see the number and picks it up.

Sa- hello kaun hai?

Person- are zara sabar rako

Sa- Tanveer kyu phone kiya mujhko?

T- Yeh batane keliye key eh tumhara aur tumhari vo behen ki aakri janamdin hoga. Listening to this Sanam faints.

Aahil goes to check her and sees her fainting. He holds her on his lap and tries to wake her up. Listening to his creams everyone come. He sprinkles some water on her and she wakes up.

Aa- Sanam kya hu tumhe?

Sa- Aahil mein teek hu. Chaliye

Aa- What? Teek hu. Come take some rest.

Sa- Its nothing Aahil Come.

But who can listen to the ARI. He takes her in to rest and the others leave.

Aa- By the way why did you faint?

Sa- Kuch nahi Aahil todha sir dardh horaha tha isliye.

He again asks her she says nothing. Though he feels something he leaves it.

Later in the afternoon when everyone her having lunch even Sanam is sitting there and having.

Aahil goes to get his phonw which he left in the kitchen and sees her phone fallen on the floor in kitchen.(while fainting she had dropped it) He picks it up and goes to give it to her when he sees the logs list. And Aahil is back on the Jallad Jin mode.

He goes in the hall calling Sanam loudly.

Aa- Sanam Sanam

Sa- Kya hua Aahil? She gets up and sees her phone in his hand and gets nervous.

He goes to her and holds her by her arms and shakes her.

Aa- Sanam why didn't you tell me? He shows the phone to her.

Sa- Aahil wo

Aa- What wo wo kar rahi ho? Speak up.

As- Aahil what happened?

Aa- I guess the question will be better answered by Sanam. Kyu Sanam?

Sa- Aahil I thought you would be tensed so I jus. She fumbles with words.

Aa- So you thought you can just solve everything. You don't solve problems instead invite them. You know what you never tell things to me and go to solve them on your own and get stuck up. Ever do you tell anything to me? You think I am useless or you don't trust me?

And this got Sanam angry.

Sa- Bas Aahil. Had hai. Ha meine nahi kaha but pata hai kya aapse baat karna hai waste hai and uparse you don't trust me. You know very well I trust you right. But kya kare Jallad Jin ko kuch nahi dikhyi deti. Am I right Mr. Jallad Jin?

Aahil pulls her towards him holding her waist.

Aa- Unbelievable. I don't trust you? You ask me this. Its useless to even speak with you Miss. Dhabevali.

He leaves her and turns around. In frustration he pushes the glass of water beside him. He moves to his room without having the food.

Sanam stares at him in shock. She goes to clean the glass pieces fallen on the floor. Later, even she moves without having food but goes to take food for her Jallad Jin. And that's when everyone ask her what happened and she explains to them.

In the room:

Sa- Aahil I am sorry. Khana kaye.

Aahil- No Sanam I am sorry I shouldn't have overreacted. Khan pakdke sorry. He hold his ears and says cutely sorry to her.

While she follows the same and is about to feed him when,

Aa- tumne kaya

She doesn't say anything, he understands and feeds her. Later both of them feed each other.

In the dining room:

Zo- Seriously, I never thought Aahil could be this angry. He looks so cool na.

Re- Yeh to kuch bi nahi hai. Agar apne Aahil bhai aur Sanam ke first encounters dekha hoga to you wouldn't believe these two are the same Aahil and Sanam. ( In the flashback they don't stress their encounters they just say they didn't like each other.)

As- Really?

Se- Ya dad. Sanam ne to Aahil ko pehle pehle baar hi thapad diti.

Zo- What? And Aahil was quiet?

Re- Well, that cannot happen. Aahil bhai ne Sanam ka dhaba jhala diya aur badle mein Sanam ne aahil bhai ke gadi ko jaladiya

Then lateef popped up.

La- Then Sanam ne naukri dhundthi yaha aagayi kyuki use nahi pata tha ki yeh Aahil baba ka ghar tha. Aur hamesha use use chup chup ke jathi thi phir Aahil baba ne ek din sanam ko dekhliya aur phirse unka jagda hogaya.Allah kasam Aahil baba ko pehli baar kisne uthna sunaya.

And they explain everything, how they got married, Aahil's jealousy and how they finally fell in love.

As- Sanam had to face so much.

Zo- Oh! Mr. Overprotective Khan stop it. He loves Sanam so much.

As- Ha par aisa barthav.

Zo- Allah Miyan, what's wrong with you Mr. Khan? And I guess you were no less Mr. Rude and Arrogant Khan.

As- What I was Rude?

Zo- It's like Zoya hates pizza. And their banter continued.

Meanwhile Seher's mind was on work. Later, when everyone went to rest Rehan went to work. And the next thing Seher did was take a knife and go to her. Tanu was sleeping. Seher went and placed the knife on her neck and that made Tanveer consicus and as she opened her eyes she saw a knife on her neck and was hell scared.

Se- Kisiko marna tujhe bohut aasan kam heina tujhe ab tu maregi. Tanveer tried to interrupt but Seher pressed the knife close to her neck.

Se- Chup Bilkul Chup. Agar tumhare gale se itna bi awaaz nikla to phir tujhe ye gala nahi bacha hoga aur waise bi kuch der mein tum upar jane wali ho. So don't worry. Abhi kuch nahi karungi. She removes the knife and as tanveer tries to relax she again places it on her.

Se- 24 ghante. 24 ghante mein tum is duniya ko humesha keliye chodke chali jaogi aur kisiko yeh tak nahi pata hoga ki meine yeh kiya hai. Sab tumhare jaane ke khushi mein honge. Meine kaha tha koyi bhi chaal chalne se pehle 1000 bar sochlo par tumne nahi kiya to get ready cause your countdown starts. 1, 2, 3, 4 she says. Ginti shuru karlena.

She leaves where as Tanveer is horrified. She knew Seher will do anything and started to become conscious.

While Zoya saw all these she was tensed about seher. She went to seher later in her room to speak.

Zo- Seher yeh kyat ha tanveer ke sath. Kya 24 ghante? Mujhe ghabraht horahi hai.

Se- Ammi aap chinta mat lene. Us billi ki to aaj vaat lag jayegi. She explains the plan to Zoya and both hi-fi each other.

***

Precap- Billi's end, Seher's past out

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