OS: Shattered Souls (Complete)

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Pooja

@Divan.Pooja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Beautiful os you've portrayed their emotions beautifully

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_UnsaM_

@_UnsaM_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sita_rama
Nice update
i loved it

Thank you 😳

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@_UnsaM_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: RMGT
Beautiful yet so sad OS.
I had tears in my eyes.
Do write more

Yeah, I'll love to 😳😃

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@_UnsaM_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Akshatha19
Heart touching
so emotional OS...

Yeah, that was a true story, that's why 😭

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@_UnsaM_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: nividances
That was absolutely beautiful! The way you described both a mother's and father's pain...just poetic. Really hope you write some more things. Would love to read them.

Thanks for appreciating 😃
I've written 2 other OSs and a TS. Read them and express your views 😃😉

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_UnsaM_

@_UnsaM_

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: aishu_divan
Even though this is really painful, I believe its the truth that one has to face at some point of time in life..Losing a loved one is very hard thing to bear.. Must say it was written very beautifully..I had tears in my eyes..Great piece of writing..pls write more often..and welcome to forum😊

Yeah harsh reality 😭 Thanks dear. I have written three other OSs. Perhaps you would lije to read them.😳

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@_UnsaM_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: SanayaBarun
Beautiful os you've portrayed their emotions beautifully

Thanks Sanaya 😃😳

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Very well written👏😭 heartbreaking

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Such a heart breaking yet strikingly beautiful piece of writing this one is..You left me in tears..
It was just soo painful to read them go through that pain. Some of their words just sank my heart, painfu! 😭

" Atleast you have cradled her once.. " " And where do you think i had to take her.? " <== Those 2 lines broke my heart..😭
Yet, sadly this is the harsh reality of life..loosing loved ones!

You write beautifully. 👏⭐️ Thank you for the beautiful piece! :)

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