Ch-1 updated Romance + Thriller + Action an Sandhir SS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏Ok Guys the epi going on has forced me to think of this innovative and totally different OS this starts with scene when Randhir asks Sanyu for help in machine and after pleading a lot sanyu finally agreed...

Characters will be noted by:

Rana-"R"

Randhir-"RD"

Sanyukta-"S"

Vardhan-"V"

Rana's Guards-"g1" "g2" "g3" and so on

So If u want an OS With

1) Thriller

2) Action

3) Romance

4) Past

And super duper FUN


Guys i will be updating it everyday or twice or thrice in a DAy ENJOY

Part 1- Scroll Down

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Sarim.fatmi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey awesome idea dear.
make it TS or SS.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear vry interesting I am also luving the current track!!
Nd same here my 10th boards r also going on started today only...m tired of reading books wanna read some interesting stories in free time!!!
Plzzz update:)
Nd plz fill it wid loads nd loads of thrill nd action I jst luv thriller stories:)
Nd yeah bst of luck for u exams:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing concept
full on dhamaka
plzzz updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Wow stuff on current track


Super excited
Would love to read it


U r having exams so yr I would suggest u to write an os r ts

Ss will be tym consuming for u



Updte soon
Excited to read


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome idea...
do write it soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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S-"Thik hai karoongi " She said

They both were looking @each other

R-chalo kaam bohot hai

S-Hmmm

They both started working as they were not working there were they have been been caught ,hence it was dangerous for them to work as guards were searching for them all over.

They were working when they heard some footsteps and in asec they hid the machine and they themselves got into the cupboard which was lying on the ground as it was the store room in which they were working...

So literally Sanyu on top of Randhir... WOW

The guards entered and started searching in the coeners of the room and couldn't find them and here in the cupboard Sandhir were too close to each other and having an eyelock

G1-Arre yaar kahaan bhaag gaye yeh dono ?

G2 -Kya pata chalo dusri jagah dekhte hain

G3-Haan Haan Chalo.They went .

But here Sandhir were still having an eyelock and their lips were too close to each other ,And slowly Slowly moving towards each other and now were feeling it .The kiss was a passionate one,loving.pouring all the love noth were equallyresponding .They left when they were out of Breath,both were breathing heavily.They both got out without exchanging a word and soon got engrossed in their work.

R-No,humlogon ko yeh raw material is store room mein nahi milega ,hume lab mein hi yeh samaan mil sakta hai ,ek kaam karta hoonmain jaata hoon aur leke aatahoon ok?

S-Hmmm thik hai tab tak main iska baaki ka kaam poora karti hoon.

Seeing his Sanyukta working on a machine brought a smile on his face and he went.

And this time Sanyu heard some footstpes and again got into the cupboard .They were the guards and this time the other one .

They were finding her and G3 found her

G3 -ek kaam kar too jaa main isse sambhalta hoon aur dekh koi aa toh nahi raha

G4-OK

G3 was cmng towards her and she got up and started running but fell not the ground .and he tried or almost Raped her when

THADD

It was Rd who already had beaten up the guard out side and here within no time G3 was alos dead and Sanyu was lying unconcious

Rd panicked and started trying to wake her up

Rd-sanyukta utho... utho sanyukta

S- Ahh... ran..an...dh ir...

rd- Haan sanyukta (he was sobbing)

She got up and

S-randhir ,woh,machine,guards,cupboard ,rape,wohmujhe and started cryinh bitterlyhugging Rd

Rd-shhh sanyukta dekho kuch nahi hua sab thik ho jayega abhi yahaan se chalo yeh jagah safe nahi hai...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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rape ??? ...yaar am really nt liking dis 😕😒
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsme update
Loved it to the core


Sandhir hiding in cupboard having eye lock
Goons looking for them n they lost in each other eyes

They kissed


Omg poor sanyu the goon tried to rape her thank god rd saved her on time


She's so scared



Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is great ...
Loved it...

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