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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monalisa123

Bravo
Awesome
Can't wait for the next one


hey thanks so much..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it... Raman knew just how to comfort his Ishu and loved his response to Bala's mom. Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haha so now we know why Ishu was so jumpy and out of her usual character.

She wore an outfit he picked for her reached out for him i
When it hurt.

Love the way you handled the medical report about her chances for motherhood.

And Ramans sensible and practical approach is heartwarming. Anyone will love and respect a man like that.

Ishu and Raman have truly moved on.

Really looking forward to the next part... Now we still don't know where Subbu is with all this!

Awesome touch and looking forward to the next part!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love and thank this show for a reason...
Ishita and Raman and the FF's they seem to have insipired.

I follow some would love to read everything ..but then reality gets demanding.

I read this update...so many times.

Almost every time I teared up for a different reason.

Love the bond you have potrayed between ishita and Raman and the way he seems to understand her unexpressed fears.

The way Ishita here draws strength from her husband and grows braver in confronting her fears...she does not stop with lecturing she actually implements all that she expects off Raman.

Her real love for Ruhi and and affection for Adi.

But what set me thinking and crying was her attempts to come to terms with her flawed femininity.( in the eyes of the world). Her attempts to reach out to her husband - wanting to lunch with him, dressing herself in what he picked for her.. lovely touches. SOYOU!!SO SUBTLE.👏
Not all men are jerks. Raman is lovable 😳
ANd loved the ROMI _ ANANYA interlude.
A woman scorned by the man who could not stand by her in her hour of need watches her being accepted by so many in a family that is so different form her!⭐️

MY dear I really hopey our silent readers respond to your work so that it stays where it can be seen.

But ...please remember ...there's this creature who reads and re-reads your work thanks dear for writing this!!❤️

Edited by blue5sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Swan yaar, where is the next part? weren't you going to update it the next day?
hope everything is ok with you.
Update soon please

As I said earlier, I love this story. it is very close to my heart and more realistic. I wish the show was somewhere along this line.
I have re-read this one so many times and still every time I read it, I get goosebumps. it seems like I am reading it for the first time.
I am so glad you have approached Ishita's infertility issue in a sensible way. it is curable and she can conceive is what raman wants her to know. and that is such a sweet and enduring gesture from him.
I personally have similar issues and the amount of support I get from my husband is commendable. he is there to gather me up every time I fall apart. 😭
So I have a my Raman in my life. this story feels like it is my story.
Update soon yaar
Thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago
The Next updates friends! Sorry had trouble with my laptop...here it is sorry about the delay!

Part 2

The tall man was shameless. He was really hugging the girl or was he kissing the baby's head! Either way there was so much pda. The man dwarfed the girl...and why did she feel so familiar he wondered.


Subbu quaked seeing the girl turn. ISHU he said through his dry mouth. She was married and had a little girl?


Why was she dressed like that...she never dressed like that.

Was that her daughter?

The guy was a divorcee his daughter then?

They stood close but it did not feel like there was anything intimate Subbu concluded.

She still could let no man close! Subbu reasoned.

The man was now raising his head from her shoulder, from where he stood he did not see the folded arms...he was happy to see the man leave with the baby and Ishu did she just blow a kiss?

Her slim waist, beautiful curves and those large eyes they would haunt him Subbu forever. She at this moment looked like her own younger sister! Luscious and lovely!

Subbu waited for the nurse to finish drawing his blood and tape the blood leak on his arm. He would then go and meet her.

Did he detect distance with the tall man...may be the rumours he heard was indeed true.She was not his wife just the daughter's mother most likely???


Subbu got up thinking of all that he would say to her. He did not want to get it wrong this time.May be now if he managed it right, if he was kind and understanding of her plight she could use the shoulder he could provide? He would do anything just about anything to be beside her. Anu his wife..well he would think about picking one of them after he had Ishu in the fray! He gloated.


He pushed the glass door open. There was another man next to Ishu. Her eyes fell on Subbu and the next instant she was gathered by the man next to her because her hand reached his!! That of course was Raman Bhalla he knew him he had seen him any number of times in the business magazines and columns in newspapers. A doctor did not need to know who he was and Subbu always shook the paper and turned the page whenever he saw Raman featured or quoted.


He could not do that now. The man was there in flesh and blood, he could not shake him or push him over. Raman's eyes were growling at his mother while the words that came out Raman's mouth were smooth and betrayed none of the anger that was there in his eyes. It took a lot to make his mother meow like a frightened cat and he was just that. The man tucking Ishita into his had just let out HUGE SILENT ROAR, with a steady voice only for his mother hear and back down!


Subbu insides burnt to ashes. Ishu stood up to his mom that was fine...his mother did deserve it! But the pack she handed him from her purse for his son and her husbands soft smile made him wish he had never seen her. Never LIKE THIS!


She cringed he knew because she must have seen the lust in Subbu's eyes. He was not proud. The timing could not have been worse. She saw him when she was still smiling at her husband mentioning what she meant for him


"Ishita I am very possessive of you , I hate it when people point fingers at you...as for wanting a child we are not childless we can have more if you want to experience mother hood..

Ishita get this straight I'm immensely happy for Ruhi and Adi, my life with you would have still been the same without them. I would have eventually found you, chased you and kidnapped you if did not agree and that has nothing to do with your breasts and uterus" like Ashwin says. It's about you...and the person you are..the woman who drives me mad and keeps me sane. The woman who taught me what loving somebody is, the mad madrassan who eats all the time and wets my shirt crying..."


Those words haunted him hours later now as he sat sipping his coffee reading his email at his mothers house.

The cheery,happy and pretty woman he abandoned selfishly without thinking was shadow of herself when he saw her last. The woman he saw today was confident, strong and prettier. His Ishita was all that too, the woman he saw today was Raman's wife and she was blissfully happy. And that left him silently shattered because her happiness made him feel small. Her husband's apathy to him made him numb. He truly was at crossroads...his false sense of security and family lay in tatters around him.


He knew Ishita would now probably be in her husbands arms chatting away through the night!


And that was how they were...Raman had his usual grin on his face, was picking up the skirt he had flung across the room and the white top he had rolled over her shoulders to reach her chest and ready to sleep on her after they had explored each other. "Did I tell you? you looked breathtaking yesterday brave and beautiful" he asked the following morning nuzzling her neck. Ahhh..in more ways than one" Did tell you you were every woman's dream yesterday..my Raavan Kumar" she giggled.

" no you didn't" he teased..' how about showing game now' he smiled guiding her hand past his abdomen. " Raman I have to get up"...Ruhi ko school..." Shhh" he silenced her leaning and softly pecking her lips.




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monalisa123

Swan yaar, where is the next part? weren't you going to update it the next day?

hope everything is ok with you.
Update soon please

As I said earlier, I love this story. it is very close to my heart and more realistic. I wish the show was somewhere along this line.
I have re-read this one so many times and still every time I read it, I get goosebumps. it seems like I am reading it for the first time.
I am so glad you have approached Ishita's infertility issue in a sensible way. it is curable and she can conceive is what raman wants her to know. and that is such a sweet and enduring gesture from him.
I personally have similar issues and the amount of support I get from my husband is commendable. he is there to gather me up every time I fall apart. 😭
So I have a my Raman in my life. this story feels like it is my story.
Update soon yaar
Thanks

Thank you so much for sharing your story...touched that it made an impact on you!
Thank you for letting me know what you thought of what was written. I am sure staying positive with loved ones is what life is all about.
Good luck!

Do let me know what you think of this..short but i did not want to take the focus off Ishu!!❤️
Edited by SWAN123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: blue5sky

I love and thank this show for a reason...

Ishita and Raman and the FF's they seem to have insipired.

I follow some would love to read everything ..but then reality gets demanding.

I read this update...so many times.

Almost every time I teared up for a different reason.

Love the bond you have potrayed between ishita and Raman and the way he seems to understand her unexpressed fears.

The way Ishita here draws strength from her husband and grows braver in confronting her fears...she does not stop with lecturing she actually implements all that she expects off Raman.

Her real love for Ruhi and and affection for Adi.

But what set me thinking and crying was her attempts to come to terms with her flawed femininity.( in the eyes of the world). Her attempts to reach out to her husband - wanting to lunch with him, dressing herself in what he picked for her.. lovely touches. SOYOU!!SO SUBTLE.👏
Not all men are jerks. Raman is lovable 😳
ANd loved the ROMI _ ANANYA interlude.
A woman scorned by the man who could not stand by her in her hour of need watches her being accepted by so many in a family that is so different form her!⭐️

MY dear I really hopey our silent readers respond to your work so that it stays where it can be seen.

But ...please remember ...there's this creature who reads and re-reads your work thanks dear for writing this!!❤️



Thank you for being so gracious..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for updating.
Loved it as always
Subbu disgusted me, being honest here
Raman made me Love him even more. Like ishu said he is man of every woman's dream
Ishita made me so proud, she is brave and confident, funny how true love makes you all this you have never thought you could be
I would love to see him approach this ishita with his dirty idea of "comforting her" and get slapped by her, followed by being beaten up by raman
Love
NM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely..
We get to know what Subbu is thinking.., ishitas happiness is bothering him ??
Nice .. Liked it...

Is he grey or negative that Subbu 😡
Edited by blue5sky - 11 years ago

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