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Posted: 10 years ago
simply amazing update. so engroseed and waiting for maan to enter and you stopped. please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update luved how dadiji tauted sanjana i think she like geet waiting for maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part...loved daadi n her attitude towards geet n sunjana...

waiting to c how will b the interactions between geets mom n sis with maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
cool daadi allow geet to call daadi n sanjana ma'm

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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update dear!...so khuranas are here for dinner...dadi liked geet in first meeting aur sanjana ko kya taunt mara h ...hihi...oh...maan at the door ...but u stopped...dear...tum devil kyu banti ja rhi ho...😛..pta h kitna mja aa rha tha padne m...
now plz update soon next part..

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Posted: 10 years ago



Love u ada for making such a beautiful banner!!



Thank u thank u ...for all ur comments 😳!!


here u go with the update...😃


PART 4- KINGHT IN SHINNING ARMOUR


My heart was flipping...with my every movement.. I reached the door and turned the knob..

I lowered my heard..feeling mushy..

geeettt...I..m soo sorry for what happened..." Two hands came by my side..gripping my shoulders...

" Dev..." I gasped...loudly... in shock..

Dev was my frnd from college... I hardly had any frnds...but he was one of among them. He was very kind...down to earth guy...with a over friendly nature..

It was last week..before my holidays began... i spotted him..sniffing cocaine..in a lone some corner of library.. I was stunned looking him in that condition...I being stupidly crazy confronted him..to which he admitted he love for me.. The guy was so cheap...i knew he was saying that to cover up his actions... But what dumbfounded me..was his actions.. He was holding me tight.. I somehow..struggled...and shoved him away...

" geeet...please...please listen to me...once... i really love u ...dont do dis to me.." dev uttered in a quavering voice.. his facial expressions were uncanny..a creepy feeling stirred in my mind..

I knew..he was scared...and worried...as I was suppose to speak out the truth..in front of the faculty... They had found dev...lying in the library.. this wasn't less than a crime.. he needed me to alibi him out..

" devvv.." i hissed when his eyes turned shadowy...and his face...toughen ..

" geeettt...who is it is it maan..??" My mother screamed...

Dev smirked...pulling me closer...his one hand was brushing my curls.. I was cold...I hated to feel his touch on my face..

"no..no..mumma..its no one... he has lost his way and I m helping him out..." I responded back to her...wriggling under him..

Dev laughed...sniggering..as I pushed him...with all my force and pulled him..outside on the porch..

" dev..i m not saving u...they will just send u to the rehab...believe me u'll be okay..." Inspite of his habits...i somewhere knew dev was a good human...and wished to help him..

" i don't want to leave geet...no way...i like being here with u ..." he tucked my hair..and i lurched behind..in repulsion

This angered him... he clasped my shoulders..and drew me..close..his grasp was hurting me.. I wriggled...staring his eyes... but he dint let go...

He held my writs from his hand other hand..clucthing it tightly

" leave..her.." A croaky..rough voice cropped up

DeV stilled...narrowing his eyes...and turned to him..

There i saw...My hotty..i mean Savitri khurana's grandson.. MAAN SINGH KHURANA standing with a terrifying look on his face..

I gulped down..looking his eyes..which were red.. His muscles...were flexing...and hands already made up into fist..

" who are u ...?" Dev implied...arrogantly... I squirmed under him..

" leave her...i said..hands off her..." He repeated...and harshly..clasped..dev s collar..hauling him ..

" ah.." i yelped..as..I got rid of him... i held my writs...which was red..due to his hold..

Maan...stared at me... his gaze was soft...and then groaned.. tugging his back on the wall...

" ahhh..." dev moaned..in pain...as maan repetitively smacked his back on the wall...while knocking him..hard enough to bleed..

" maaan..." i screeched... He seemed...furious... the way he was pounding at dev... made me shit scared...

Maan glanced at me..once. with ..his red eyes...causing me..to shut up...

" leave before..i do something...leave.." He pushed dev...on the grass.. Dev stumbled...down..wiping his bleeding lips..He Somehow got up...and left...

I sighed..when i saw him leaving...

As soon as I turned...i was drawn..inside..with my back flat on the door...and my neighbour...staring down at me...fiercely ...

I shivered..with the intensity of his gaze ...he made me feel like a culprit...

who was he...?" he questioned...arrogantly ..

Don't answer geet..he isn't suppose to knw...everything related to ur life..

" d..dev.." I replied...ignoring my inner voice...

" who..dev.." this time..he leaned close to me...close enough..to count his lashes... Oh..he had beautiful...eyes...and M shaped..lips...

Again i was floored with his..fine and sharp features...

" who's dev geet..." he said huskily..blowing my eyes..causing me to drop them close..

" he..he is..my...Classmate..." i stammered..

" hmm..."

" u can open ur eyes..." he said..after a moment...

I snapped my eyes open.. in confusion and found him.. a little distance away from me..

His eyes intently staring..me...while his lips.. curving into a small smile... I blinked my lashes...scrunching my nose..

" are u still..scared??"

" i..i , not scared of u...okay " I retorted back... growling... How dare he think that?? I don't FEAR him...I DONT FEAR U HOTTY..ah..not again... I mentally strangled myself..

He chuckled..smiling widely.." i m not talking me... I meant ur classmate..."

I dipped my head...lower...as those images..reappeared in front of my eyes..making me frighten..

" well..good.. M glad i could be ur KNIGHT IN SHINNING ARMOUR..."

" what??" i looked up at him..

" yes...KNIGHT IN SHINNING ARMOR...m so proud of myself...and u r welcome..btw..."

Gosh he was so full of himself..typical..Guy

" i..dont need a knight in shinning armour..to protect me...and i definitely don't need u ..' I scoffed..pointing my finger at him..

He smiled..slyly..grasping my finger...caressing it... " But i guess...i defended u in front of ur classmate... so i m..ur knight...ur savior..." He winked at me..naughtily...

My jaw dropped... hearing his comment...before i could think of a comeback...

Dadji...spotted him...and said " there u are..maan..kaha the aap...' I immediately retreated back my finger forcefully glaring him..

We moved towards the dinner table.. ...and began our dinner.. Thankfully this time...i was sitting opposite to the khurana's and next to sanajana..whereas mom was besides Maan

I was never so panicky ...But today..I was sooo...edgy..that i had crossed all my limits.. Every time..maan took a bite..his eyes would scan mine... His lips...curving...as he nibbled quietly... I could feel my inside throbbing..

I twisted my lips tapering my eyes at him.. he chuckled devilishly..

" are..geet kya hua.. u haven't touched ur food .." dadi ji said...

" oh..woh..sorry..i..i...nothing..' i smiled...at her...uneasily and looked down at my plate...nibbling it.. This guy was a enigma.. first he gets so flirty ...with me..and then..pounds at dev... then all of a sudden his..infuriated..mood turns..light..Uff...

I could feel mom's burning gaze on me... Sanjana...was quiet as if she wasn't interested at all... But my mom..never gave up...she could always discover new topics..new ways to communicate with dadi Ji..and Maan..

" so Mrs.khuarana...dont mind me..but u have all the wealth money u r soo well off...But yet u r living in our neighbourhood..isnt it...very small compared to ur prosperity..."

Dadi ji smiled...tenderly

" this house is very special..to us.. My son bought this house...from his 1st income ...and we are very fond of this place..." I looked up...feeling dadi ji's voice turning emotional..

Dadi ji...slanted her neck to glimpse maan..." this is a perfect place to start fresh..."

Maan was turning impatient..his eyes was blazing..and expressions..twirled cloudy .. i couldn't understand..the pain..i saw in those eyes.. was there any pain ??or it was my imagination...

" oh..thats nice..."

Dadi ji..patted maan's hand.. to calm..him.. After this..our gaze never met..

I was so curious to meet his eyes.. But he never rose his head...

After a awkward dinner... Khurana's took decided to leave..

" mrs.khuarana hope u had a good time..." My mom uttered to dadi ji..

" yes..off course...Mrs.handa... It felt home..."

" geet..." she paused...and glanced at me...stepping close to me...She patted my cheek... do..come..to visit me..okay...humare ghar ko bhi apna ghar hi samjhe..."

I smiled..warmly in return... and nodded..slightly.. My eyes..on its own..stirred in his direction..and found him.. grinning...

" ji..Mrs.Khuarana...sure.." My mother replied her..faking another smile...

" And sanjana... I expect u to be present tom on time... i wont let go..next time..." she warned sanjana.. making her tremble...

" ji..she will be on time..." My mother said...before leading them..outside..

I breathed out in relief...as i heard the door shut...

" phew..." i thumped on the couch...chewing my lip...

I squeezed my eyes...as once again his words bloated my mind... " KNIGHT IN SHINNING ARMOUR..."



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Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
me first again 🥳 🥳me first again , yaar Sweety ek aur update dene ke liye bada wala thank u

now about update...

yeh dev, humesha villian hi rahega, socha friend hai accha hoga but nahi how can Devil be Dev, and especially him😡😡... waise Sweety tune mere dreams pe paani pher diya, I thought Maan aaya hoga but tune toh Dev ki entry kardi😭😭... Kamina dev kabhi bhji apne kaminepan se baas nahi ayega, Geet ki life me problem ki kami hai ki tumne Dev ko bhi enter kar diya, all r selfish, exemption r few, like her dad Maan and Dadi😳😳... I soo much wanted to come in scene nd beat the hell out of him but mera kaam Maan karne wala hai😉😉... haayee Geet again my hottie... Yaar sweety the way u described Maan anger na, I can really imagine him in my mind... baap re Maan ne toh mujhse zyada punishment dedi Devil ko, well he deserved it😡😡... ooo possessive Maan, I soo much love possessive Maan, but uss possessiveness me when he hurt Geet I don't like that... but yeh Maan Geet ko hurt nahi karega I know, haayee their close moment☺️☺️... haayee Maan knows how to bring real Geet out, well abhi poora success nahi huya hai but I know woh jaldi ho jayega😳😳... ahaannn now I know the meaning of Knight in Shining Armour of Geet... haayee seeing Maan so naughty and full of attitude I m smiling like a stupid😆😆... and Geet u definitely need Maan as ur knight and savior😉😉... yaar yeh kamini Riya kyu Maan ke saath baithi thi,... it should have been Geet na😛😆😉... Geet he is only flirty and sweet for u, samjha kar yaar😉😉... haayeee Geet tu Maan ki eyes bhi read karne lag gayi... haayee haayee Maan grinnig when dadi asked Geet to come home and think their house as her own, chalo accha isse bahane muskuraya toh sahi😊😊... yaar I love the way dadi always burst Sanjana bubble, and her mother pata nahi kya problem hai inn dono ki...


Waise Sweety kya tum Maan ka past bhi reveal karogi????????


Waiting for again more, well iss baar zyada jaldi nahi mangungi but iss ka matlab yeh nahi hai ki tum late update dogi, bcoz I just love to read it, and thank u again for updating it soo quickly, love u yaar, muahh ❤️❤️
Edited by -Adwika- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part. .. geet classmate dev was harrasing her.. but maan came on correct time.. loved the dinner part
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi sweta
love the update
maan saved geet from dev ..
hope dev didn't came back and hurt geet again ..
sanjana and her mom is too much
thank u for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Dev tried to misbehave with Geet but Maan saved her.
Waiting for the next.

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