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Posted: 10 years ago

Right

Sach kaha dost aapne

Itni poetry matt likh, tujhe anny lagein gey sapne...😆

Sapne to thik hai, par kya wo honge daraavne??

Jesa bhayank hum likhein ge ssapne bhi waisy ayen ge daraawne..

Saiyyuji aur Lazyji ko bohot miss kiya hai humne😭

Mere hi dil ki baat keh di tum ne😳

To chalo, dono chalte hai dono behenon ko dhoondne😛

dhoondne lagain lekin hum toh baba lagg jayen ge ghoomne...

Raat bohot hai ho gayi abhi

Mein late ho gae, warna mein reply krti tabhi...

It's ok...reply to aa hi gayaa na der se hi sahi😉

Woh toh ana hi tha, kal nahi toh aj sahi...

Shanti se so jao, update aayega kabhi na kabhi😉

Per mujhe toh update chaheye abhi ke abhi...

Chinta na karo, desperate hai yahaan sabhi😭

Phir tu ne kyun kaha update ayega kabhi na kabhi..

desperate hain sab toh update chaheye abhi k abhi..

Dono behenein hai bohot samajhdaar...

Or tu kya kam hai hoshiyaar...

Thanks for the compliment yaar😳

Tu hai es ki pori haqdaar..

Dono karte hai hum sabse bohot pyaar😊😳.

Lolwa tum kahan ho, Sayari tum ho jao khabardaar..😉

Sachhi...mera waala hai innocent aur behenon waala pyaar😊

Mera toh ishara us taraf nahi tha yaar😛

Lolwa-ji ko bulaana hoga bilkul bekaar😆

🤗Lolwa k bina sab kuch hai bekaar...

Isi liye jab hoga right time, khatam woh karenge humara intezaar

Akhir kab khatam ho ga yeh na khatam hone wala intezaar...

Kabhi na kabhi to hoga na mere yaar??😃

dua hai Jald hi khatam ho ab ki baar...

But tab tak, we all fans and readers are bebas and lachaar...😛😆

Readers ke pas or kya option hai akhir kaar...

Are bhaai, itni jaldi mat maano haar!👍🏼

Pehli baat toh mein bhai nahi...😆

haar nahi, humein bas intezaar se hai khaar..😊

Ps: Es poetry ki jugalbandi ki sari tum ho zimedaar...

PPS: Haww!! Iss bholi bhaali ladki pe saara dosh daal diya??!!😡 And see, I ended poetry in the last line😉


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..


Sach kaha dost aapne

Itni poetry matt likh, tujhe anny lagein gey sapne...😆

Sapne to thik hai, par kya wo honge daraavne??

Jesa bhayank hum likhein ge ssapne bhi waisy ayen ge daraawne..

Saiyyuji aur Lazyji ko bohot miss kiya hai humne😭

Mere hi dil ki baat keh di tum ne😳

To chalo, dono chalte hai dono behenon ko dhoondne😛

dhoondne lagain lekin hum toh baba lagg jayen ge ghoomne...

Raat bohot hai ho gayi abhi

Mein late ho gae, warna mein reply krti tabhi...

It's ok...reply to aa hi gayaa na der se hi sahi😉

Woh toh ana hi tha, kal nahi toh aj sahi...

Shanti se so jao, update aayega kabhi na kabhi😉

Per mujhe toh update chaheye abhi ke abhi...

Chinta na karo, desperate hai yahaan sabhi😭

Phir tu ne kyun kaha update ayega kabhi na kabhi..

desperate hain sab toh update chaheye abhi k abhi..

Dono behenein hai bohot samajhdaar...

Or tu kya kam hai hoshiyaar...

Thanks for the compliment yaar😳

Tu hai es ki pori haqdaar..

Dono karte hai hum sabse bohot pyaar😊😳.

Lolwa tum kahan ho, Sayari tum ho jao khabardaar..😉

Sachhi...mera waala hai innocent aur behenon waala pyaar😊

Mera toh ishara us taraf nahi tha yaar😛

Lolwa-ji ko bulaana hoga bilkul bekaar😆

🤗Lolwa k bina sab kuch hai bekaar...

Isi liye jab hoga right time, khatam woh karenge humara intezaar

Akhir kab khatam ho ga yeh na khatam hone wala intezaar...

Kabhi na kabhi to hoga na mere yaar??😃

dua hai Jald hi khatam ho ab ki baar...

But tab tak, we all fans and readers are bebas and lachaar...😛😆

Readers ke pas or kya option hai akhir kaar...

Are bhaai, itni jaldi mat maano haar!👍🏼

Pehli baat toh mein bhai nahi...😆

haar nahi, humein bas intezaar se hai khaar..😊

Ps: Es poetry ki jugalbandi ki sari tum ho zimedaar...

PPS: Haww!! Iss bholi bhaali ladki pe saara dosh daal diya??!!😡 And see, I ended poetry in the last line😉




Syeda, breakfast ke liye itni shayari kaafi thi...thank you🤣
Mera naam "Sayari"(meaning ocean) hai, "Shayari" nahi😆 Bachhi ki jaan loge kya?😳 Baad mein reply karne ki koshish karungi...koshish being the keyword😛

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Edited by sayari.majumder - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awwwieee!! I am adoring this story!! its amazing and so cute!! I love the lightness specially due to the family dynamics being different with Arnav-Khushi being the youngest in the families and thus allowing them to just be irresponsible if they want and responsible only if they feel like it, which they don't feel all that often to be lol...

anyway looking forward to reading the next part! :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

The note in the signature kinda stays true even now.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

The note in the signature kinda stays true even now.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sincere apologies for the late un-res. My comment updated on Page 7 here
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Posted: 10 years ago

Dr.AALUSLOLWA and Pakpearl (The bit in bold with italics is for both of you): Lolwa: Res kiya to comment on the chapter?nai .. reserve kya to itch you 😛😆 joke 😛 Lolwa common sense use kar.kaisy krty hain? 😳😛 Anyone would consider that they have more rights over their potas and potis than nawasas and nawasis. So of course, Mami will have more say in PayAsh's kids' lives than Anjali's kids. Khandaan alag ho jaatey hai re. And anyways, Mami considers Anjali and Arnav as her kids only; 1st chapter mai bataya tha.ye mujhy yaad tha 😛 .. comment krty hue bhi i had this in mind .. khair .. And she isn't a woman who would consider herself secondary to anyone, not even Arnav's dadi, her rights and her concerns over Khushi.hum sy mami ji ko smjhny mai ghalti ho gai .. sorry mami ji 😳 Come on yaar! Guys have the right to cry. They too have a heart, they too hurt; including Arnav 😭 .. I dont remember k yaha baat kya ho ri thi 😆 Made in Pakistan 😆 Lolwa you made me notice, I hadn't that chap 10 was about birthdays.😳 But Arnav is young and Aakash is older. Arnav's relationship with Khushi is hidden whereas Aakash is out in the open. Aakash ka haqq hai. wohi tou i cant digest 😳 .. In one chapter I had shown that when Khushi sits on the lunch table with the Raizadas, Arnav stays by Khushi's side and gives her more than appropriate attention. That had brought everybody's attention on them, including Nani and Mama. So they weren't surprised though they haven't reached any conclusions yet. Their thoughts are in a limbo more occupied by the issue at hand. ok .. thnx This is the answer to your question.


to be continued😭


Edited by Dr.AALUSLOLWA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res!

Aah the feel of Resing!

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poor poor Arnav .. itna plan kiya date and ye sab...! hmph...I really like the reasons of Arnav's sudden love towards. jab koi cheez humare paas hoti hai hum kadr nahi karte and when some one else start taking interest in that, we suddenly realise, arrey! ye to meri hai. same goes with Arnav.
I loved his honesty, but but 17??? S.E.V.E.N.T.E.E.N!!!!! Isn't that too young?? 😲

Boatwala 😆

yes I do expect Dinner on a date!!!! not that I have been to any ever! (saiyu di, aapne bohot saare Armaan jaga diye is story k through)😳
how can you be so stupid Arnie??

and that desperate plea for kissing. ...aww...😊

And jab finally he was kissing and going to confess. sab aa gye. ...kyunnn???😡

Adangi! kaise samjaun... jab hum apni leg to kisi aur ki leg mein phasa k usse girane ki koshish karte hain. usse Adangi kehte hai. samja???

I loved the update. but it's ending already. I am sad 😔

thanks for that blue font reply. I so want that 😃 see the smile.

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he doesn't call her 'hot' or 'sexy' because if he does than he will not be able to control himself, right?

thanks for explaining payal matter. 😊

you get them married so fast. itni jaldi kyun hai story khatam karne ki *pouts*
Edited by BlackHole - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg omg what was that
I agree with arnav the date is total disaster completely.
My poor arshi I am sorry for them.
About ur note
I am amazed that u make notes of our comments dear this shows ur dedication my friend
My respect for u and I have come to admire u now
Thank u for the effort u take
But in return I can give u my sincere good wishes
Be blessed and be happy
Thank u
Edited by just4this - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update😛 Arshi's date is a disaster Arnav is such a buddhooo...I mean date in the night includes dinner, right????😲😲😲 Also it's better for their relation if khushi gets her doubts clarified before itself😊 So I am not worried about it, infact I am looking forward to a perfect date in the future😛 And now the biggest disaster of the date would be the ending of the update😆😆 I am very eager to know Manorama's reaction😉😉 Eagerly waiting for the last update😃 Thanku soo much for the pm😃


P.S: Thanku sooo much dear for taking some time 2 clarify my doubts. I tend to forget things easily and that's what happened when I asked you about Payal knowing Arshi's relation.
Sorry for that😛

Edited by divya_divs - 10 years ago

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