ArHi FF: An Anatomy of Angst [Complete] Interlude #1 14/Aug - Page 2

Originally posted by: Vibranthues

As always, my interest has peaked.

Dysania and Insomnia

She picked up a string of bright orange flowers orphaned in a lonely mantap. Her eyes scanned the area in search of her expensive earring. Lord of chaos had reigned that day when the groom and his wedding party walked out on her sister wedding. Nightmare had become a reality.

The party was mythomane of Shyam's ego and Anjali's potentate on Arnav. The shadows welcomed Arnav deep into its womb and soothed his bubbling irritation in its quiet embrace. He took a lingering sip of whiskey and wondered if this shadow was slowly becoming an anthropomorphization of his dead mother.

Originally posted by: UV_Arshi

What an aptly named story!

You're really amazing. How can someone pack so much emotion and angst in mere hundred words...!

Another masterpiece in the making, I believe...

you truly have a way with words, gth... :)

Originally posted by: Raila1014

So few and yet so many big words. Yeah you sure know how to pack them in. What an interesting contrast of these 2 individuals sifting through the aftermath, trying to make sense or maybe even finding solace from the chaos and irritation. I love your perspectives on situations. You get in the heads of your characters.

Originally posted by: meera30

And the master of words and imagery is back! This one is on my list now. Powerful little bits these!

Originally posted by: viveka698

You seem a vocabulary nut. This chapter's emotions were indecipherable without dictionary help- frankly, a bit distracting! Would all narration be from 3^rd person perspective?

P.S.: Comment in precisely 25 words (minus the P.S., of course!) 😉