i read ur this ff in one go...i liked its concept...u did really good...but if u can welcome negative feedback too...then i would like to say something...please i dont have any intention to hurt u...i am really sorry if i do...i dont like ur this ff as i was not convinced about the way ur story progressed...after arnav hurt khushi...when he returned home after that accident...khushi asked "is he even alive??" and acted so cool that nothing has happened...do u think any woman who loved her husband so much and get betrayal in return can ask such question when accident has happened to her husband??...nooo ...its answer is clearly no!!!!!!!...and if any woman asks such question in such situations then its a clear sign that there was no true love...whatever happened with khushi in this ff is clearly not acceptable to me...i am not supporting arnav here... what i want to say is khushi cant react like that if she has truly loved her husband...everyone does mistakes dear...u have clearly mentioned in the starting that sex was just an addiction to arnav...maybe his love for khushi was not that strong so he could come out of such mental illness...but the truth is that he loved khushi...he always feared the consequences of what if his truth get revealed to khushi...he did try to change himself...the destruction he went after losing khushi,s love is a clear sign of his love for her...only true love can bring such destruction...i also didnt like the ways khushi reacted after knowing arnav's truth..his repentance,his suffering..it was not only khushi,s pain but also of her husband,s...
u know it is said that realisation of mistakes or sins which caused destruction of ur loved ones, is the biggest punishment in life...i dont want to give philosophical lecture about true and unconditional love here...but i think u failed to show "love" in this story...good people makes mistakes by their bad choices but it doesnt mean that they are bad...its just mean they are human ...if khushi lost her child then arnav lost it too ..even he lost his wife ...and losing child was entirely khushi,s fault...no pregnant woman can throw herself in such self invited accident...if u would have shown that khushi lost her child due to miscarriage due to mental or emotional stress from such sudden shocks... i would have accepted that...but such stupid accident ?? which pregnant woman runs like this..in her 8th month???...i know betrayal from ur loved ones comes as a shock ...but still i couldnt digest the fact of her running ...last thing...love is not that weak as u have shown here...khushi's suicide attempts ...i can understand her situation...her reasons of hating her husband are also acceptable and understandable...but i am not convinced about khushi's cold behaviour towards her husband...the way she asked for divorce and the way she left him...and after that when she got pregnant again..and when she got ready to marry ranveer...when she refused to marry ranveer ...when she was not ready to trust arnav again...when she refused to give arnav his fatherly rights ...i didnt like all those things...i firmly supports women empowerment , their independance as i am a girl too...but it doesnt mean i will accept women becoming stone hearted like men in the name of becoming strong...look...women are delicate ,fragile but not weak...their delicacy ,fragility, sensitivity,softness is their strength ..and i dont support women suffering and torturing themselves in the name of being emotional...but dear ...dont forget men have heart too...though it can be less powerful in men...but they have it...everyone deserves second chances...and love is all about accepting the person as he or she is...with his/her past,sins,faults...in love u r ready to go with ur loved ones even in hell too...and last thing love that can turn into hate cant be the love...yes ...in love ...lovers can hate each other's deeds but cant hate each other...the love they shared cant become suffocating !!!!!fights,pain,suffering happens when two indivisuals live together...but it can help them to go deeper in love... i dont support arnav cheating khushi or taking her casually...but i think u were too harsh on arnav's character here..dont show him like ASR as he is always shown...but atleast some value to his character would have been welcomed by readers...even in the end khushi talked to arnav's doctor first and then she started a new life with him...after getting confirmations...!! how ironic?
life is all about insecurities...facing challanges...no on knows what will happen to next moment? so whatever happened with arnav,his repentace ,his suffering and pain in all those years meant nothing to khushi or u???
does u need a doctor to give scientific proof to show that man is repenting..??lovers are courageous dear, they dont run away from insecurities...because love is strong enough to face all this.. though love is the basic founadation of any relationship ..it is still not enough to carry on..because if it was the case..then in our world there would have been no break ups or divorces...trust,understanding ,respect,forgiveness are all needed in a matured relationship...and here the two leads who have seen cruelty of the world as they were ophan cant understand such simple fact is not digestable to me...sorry...love which cant forgive is not love..it cant be the love at all...i dont think love is that weak which cant overcome such hurdles...if not for arnav then for khushi atleast u should have shown the true love...her forgiveness to him..to the man she loved the most ...thats the beauty and strength of her character...i strongly supports women standing up for their rights,their identity but i cant accept women becoming carbon copies of men in the name of becoming modern or strong or whatever...there is a difference in love of a woman and a man ..but i think thats what make them beautiful..that is the way man and woman compliment each other...i never loved stubborn khushi ..not in ipkknd serial and not in any arshi ff too...because i think if arnav and khushi are like opposits attract each other then khushi cant be a stubborn ...she has to be a matured one,a soft person...not like childish khushi which is shown in many ff's or even in serial sometimes ..praising her to be innocent...look...childlike is acceptable to me but not childish...because being childish shows ur immaturity ...there is nothing wrong in growing up and becoming matured...what matters is u remain childlike even after facing world's harsh reality...thats the beauty of life and growing up...i believe in firmness ..standing up for what u believe in..but i cant support stubbornness ...no ...its a form of male ego...dont think forgiving is an sign of weak person..no its not...only strong people can forgive...and my khushi is a strong woman..she believes in forgiving...i just cant digest the things khushi did with arnav in the name of her own grief or pain...i am saying all this because in my life too i have gone from this...i have faced it...and trust me reality is always different than fantacies...i would have been happy to see khushi and arnav's relationships changing...in affirmative ways...and not in the ways u showed...when we love...its not about only lovers..but in general...when we love ..we cant go away from the person who is suffering because of his /her own mistakes which have hurt us so much...i am not asking here to show khushi accepting a cheating husband and helping him get out of his addiction...i just want u to say that u could have shown a wife accepting a loving & caring husband who cheated her for momentary pleasures...she helping him to understand what love is...and i think everyone deserves second chances and only lovers can give each other second chances...u also give arnav in the last but i didnt like it...because in the end they are not equal...arnav will always be some undeserving husband to a wife who deserves someone far better than him...and i think lovers are on equal level to each other...in the last if khushi cant bring her husband out of his guilt and make him realise that everyone deserves happiness in life no matter what life gives u..then i think its the defeat of khushi's love ...how can u see a person whom u loved or still love is suffering in his own guilt,pain???? u will help them to live a happy life...thats what love is all about...sorry if i hurt u...it was not my intention...i hope u understood what i want to say... keep it up
all the best for next ..!!!
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