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Guyz this is my first attempt at any fanfic, i'm posting the first pasrt tell me if you like it...

i'm keeping all the characters samefor no confusion, so all the characters are the same as kzk

The story starts in Gurukul, it's the first day of school after the summer break.

The scene shifts to History class, the teacher is taking roll call,

Teacher: Piya

Present ma'am,

Saniya

Present ma'am

Prerna

And the camera shifts to a really pretty girl

P2: ma'am its p2, present

Teacher: ok'moving on Saksham

No answer

Saksham'Saksham Garewal

(A guy comes running inside the room)

Present ma'am

And the camera shifts to his awfully handsome face and of course its our saksham.

Teacher: May I ask why you are late Saksham.

Saksham: Yes ma'am maine aapko poochne se mana to nahi kiya' poochiye

Teacher: How Dare you'?

Saksham: who kya haina ma'am aapka first year hai is skool mein'so I thought beautiful flowers for a beautiful lady (he's trying to charm her)

The teacher blushes: Take a seat

He sits next to p2 and winks at a girl sitting by her.

P2 under her breath: what a flirt'

Saksham: aapne kuch kaha?

P2: none of your business

Saksham: oohhh attitude'ya phir jealousy

P2: oh please who are u anyways? mein kyun jealous hon

Saksham: cuz youre not my type

P2: excuse me what the'.

And the bell rings and the class is over

Saksham winks at her and she walks out angry

P2: irritating

So what do you guyz think'itz my first aatempt, stay tuned for the next epi

tc

tish😉

hey Tish.. itz a gr88 start.. plzz continue soon

really gud...doesnt seem like ur first attempt...gr8..cont soon.... 😳

hey tish gr8 👏 👏
1st day n that also fighting ..sweet 😃
loved it plz continue soon ok 😳

Originally posted by: yulZ

hey tish gr8 👏 👏
1st day n that also fighting ..sweet 😃
loved it plz continue soon ok 😳

thnx sid....han takraar keh baad pyaar

ok now aage...

P2 cums fuming inside the cafeteria and joins dhara and tara on the table. She slams he books down on the table and takes a seat.

Tara: Di whats wrong, itna gussa…ab kissi na kya kiya.

P2: Batameez, pata nain apne aap ko kya samajhta hai,

Tara: Kaun di? Kisspe itna gussa kar rahi hain aap? Aap kahen to usko do chaar punches aur flying kicks deti hon aapko tang nahi karega.

P2: Who ladka…Saksham, Hez such a flirt…Nahin Tara hes not worth it,

The scene shifts to the garden where saksham is walking with his group of friends and a guy comes running towards saksham

The guy: aey Saksham, zara 2000 rupaye dena, pocket money milte hi lauta donga

Saksham: Kyun

The Guy: yaar mujhe apni girlfriend keliye ek gift khareedna hai…who 20 din baad valentines day haina

Saksham laughs: Valentines day….u mean tu usse pyaar karta hai…..and the rest of the group starts laughing

The scene shifts to cafeteria where p2 is sitting.

P2: Ae dhara yeh tu kya padh rahi hai

Dhara: Love story, di itni romantic book hai na

P2: uff dhara tu aur tere yeh romantic novels get a life

Dhara: Di pyaar se badh ke is dunya mein kuch nahi hota…

P2 angrily: Pyaar

The scene shifts again to saksham

Saksham: Pyaar is dunya ka sabse falto emotion hai

Thn again to p2

P2: It's a total waste of feelings

Thn again saksham

Saksham: I cant believe log saari zindagi ek hi insaan keh saath kaise guzaar dete hain

P2: pyaar to shaadi keh baad hota hai

Saksham: pyaar jaisi cheez exist hi nahi karti

P2: Dhara accha hoga tu is tarha ki faaltu cheezon mein believe karna band kar de

Saksham: Yaar mein tujhe yeh paise de to donga lekin…huh….get over it

The school is over and P2 and her sisters are walking out towards their bicycles, whn p2 bumps into saksham and all her books faal down

P2: oh my God… dekh keh nahi chal sakte….tum….

Saksham: nahin mera judwa bhai….kyun

P2:uugghhh tum….mein tumhe chodon gi nahin

Saksham: My pleasure…lekin pakda kahan hain

P2: uh puhleez…

And she storms out towards her bike, her sisetrs join her

Jwala: Di whose the hottie

P2: Jwala…he is the most irritating guy of this school

Dhara: but di kahin aapko usse…I mean romantic novels mein aisa hi hota hai

P2: Shut up, and they all go home.

The whole night p2 cant stop thinking about how rude saksham is and she doesn't knw why she even cares.

Next day in History class again, Saksham is sitting nxt to p2, He gives p2 a note to give to a girl who is sitting next to her.

Saksham whispering: Hey girl zara yeh note us ladki ko dena

P2 whisper: my name is p2, and yeh note tum usse khud hi do

Saksham laughing: p2…wht kinda name is tht

P2: you…

Suddenly the teacher looks back and saksham throws the note to p2 and the teacher looks back.

Teacher: P2 Saksham, may I ask keh yeh kya ho raha hai

P2 stands up: Ma'am nothing

Teacher: Whats in the note?

P2: Ma'am yeh mera note nahin hai

Teacher: I saw saksham give it to you…Read it out loud, padho isme kya likha hai

Now whtz in the note yeh jaane keh liye wait 4 tomorrow

tc

tish😉

aray tish wow wat a nice part 👏
cant wait to hear wat waz written in it 😆
continue soon..

Originally posted by: yulZ

aray tish wow wat a nice part 👏
cant wait to hear wat waz written in it 😆
continue soon..

thnx sid well keep guessing whtz in the letter....

cant wait 😭 lol 😆
gr8 update
continue soon

det was very intrestin yaar 👏 😳 ....atlist faar better den kekta maiya's kasauti 😆 😛 ...lol...i jst cant wait....plz continue soon... 😉