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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Romantic Precap😳

KST so eager for the SR😆😳

Looking forward to the next update😳


Thanks dear ... coming soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2


Krishna looked around , to see pratigya climb the steps of the mandir , shyly n yet her face glowing in joy... Their eyes met , sharing their happiness n she bowed her head in shyness as his eyes turned naughty ... Sajjan, chandu , pratap, shiv , iqbal , Shankar, rakesh , sumitra,renuka n ma sahib surrounded them , all smiling ... some guards manned the mandir n the road below ... pandit announced that the bride n groom should jointly tie a dhaaga around the tree n all smiled in happiness , except ma sahib , who was tensed n angry at the happenings ... Krishna n pratigya took the dhaaga n walked towards the tree, memories bombarding their hearts ... their hands moved in prayer as they tied the dhaaga around the tree , their eyes locked in love ... their hearts thundered , relishing the understanding that they have each other ...forever ... n beyond... their palms clasped together , unknowingly, as they just stood in silent prayer before the tree ... they walked back to the hall of the mandir, hand in hand , looking forward to the most beautiful moment in their life... Krishna could see tears of happiness in his bauji's eyes as he smiled at him n sat down for the pooja... pratigya gazed up at renuka , her heart brimming... renuka n sumitra held each other , both afraid if they would faint in happiness , their old n frail faces bright n radiant in years ... chandu kept dabbing his eyes , grinning from ear to ear ...



Krishna sighed , marveling at the fortunes in his life ... there was a time when he thought he would never be happy again , he had almost believed it didn't exist ...he gazed at her ...its her! She is his happiness ... N he is going to enjoy her all his life !... never to be sad or lost again... Always being loved ! being taken care of... ... n he would do anything for her ...! anything for the kind of joy she was filling in him! ... He would be loving her to the world's end n beyond! ... He won't give or tolerate any reason which would cause her even a slightest of discomfort ... He won't let any sad tear to even take shape from her beautiful eyes! ... ...


pratigya gazed down at his name in her palm, her heart thundering in joy... marriage was a nightmare till a few weeks ago... n men were the filthiest of creatures ... n he had came n completely destroyed her world as she knew it ... giving her a new, beautiful , wonderful world instead ... which she didn't even dare to dream was possible ... him! ...her life! Her everything ... In his world she was secure, loved...in his eyes she was the most beautiful girl in the world... in his arms lay her salvation ... she would do anything for him! Any silly thing he wants ! ...be anything for him! Anything he wants ! ...n she would love him to the end of the world ...n beyond!...



they stood up, their souls eager as the pandit asked them to stand up for the ceremony... they garlanded each other , their eyes locked in love ... Her eyes closed in prayer as she saw him taking the mangalsutra from the thaal ... she could feel as though her heart has stopped beating , the happiness chocking it... She can't breath... ... she heard him murmur her name in love n she opened her eyes to meet his ... her heart waited for the command of his eyes to beat ...for him! ...he smiled at her n her heart spiked to life once again , hammering in joy against her ribs as though fighting to reach its owner ... their eyes locked fiercely as he leaned in to tie the mangalsutra around her neck, his fingers brushing her nape in love... Krishna gazed at her , his chest almost puffing in happiness n pride as he took in her , the mangalsutra lying around n along her chest ... Yes! Mine...! ...



pratigya gazed up at him, feeling all the happiness in the world fill her heart impossibly ... She involuntarily tilted her face up , feeling a strong urge to be kissed by him, then n there, her lips parting slightly , desperately ... Krishna saw in her eyes what she wanted , which was exactly what he was feeling like , but he was prevented from doing it by a sniffing renuka n sumitra , who thrust the thaal of sindoor infront of Krishna... their eyes never left each other n they continued to gaze even as they sat down for the sindoor ... Tears of joy sprung from her eyes as he put sindoor on her n she blinked , gazing up into his loving eyes...



sumitra held the ends of his sherwani shawl n her dupatta n tied them securely while the pandit instructed them to walk around the fire for the pheras ... blushing crimson, pratigya gazed at the sacred fire as she walked behind him for the pheras n then when she was to walk in front , Krishna deliberately brushed his fingers over her lower left arm... she concentrated on not tripping , her heat rate spiking exponentially ...



All prayed for a few minutes before climbing down the steps of the mandir to the awaiting cars ... Krishna held opened the door of his rover n she climbed in shyly ... Krishna hurried to the driver seat, dismissing the guards n ordering them to follow the rest ... don't be late...' shouted a teasing chandu from his benz as Krishna deliberately slowed down his rover , letting the other cars dash past him... Krishna made a face at him n pratigya couldn't help but giggle ...



he gazed around at her, his eyebrow raised n her breath hitched , suddenly her body feeling weak as the realization of what's next hit her... She clasped n unclasped her palms over her thighs which she closed tightly , an involuntary but delicious shudder shooting up her spine... The butterflies were back , in full force... Don't panic... Don't make urself a fool! ... What will he think? Don't be silly!... she kept saying to her heart which seemed to be on an overdrive suddenly ... she could feel his eyes on her n felt her body respond , her every pore erupting in goosebumps ... breathing normally was a long lost ability... krishna was gazing at her in utter fascination n undiluted desire ... the more she was coy n shrank like a touch-me-not plant , the more she looked inviting n ravenous ... how is she doing that? ... n right from the start she has managed to instill in him lusts n desires of the most primal kind , which even surprised him ... now that his mind was free of all things which forced to keep himself from ravishing her , he could feel his body screaming for her , having reached its breaking point ...he is going to have a never ending n exponential dosage of her in his life... forever!... ... He smiled slyly at her , watching her shiver as she felt his smile...



they looked up simultaneously as the sky rumbled in thunder n it began to rain... oh! She gulped down chunks of air , soft pants escaping her mouth... Krishna slowed down his rover , smirking in delight... he parked the rover near to a tree n killed the engine ... she could hear the sound of rain hitting the glass as 100 times over as she started , hearing his chuckle...'looks like even the heavens r happy for our marriage...' ...she nodded shyly , feeling his casual tone soothing her nerves ... her nerves went on overdrive as he caressed the back of her right palm which she was clasping over her thigh, his fingers burning her... she gasped , suddenly the rover seemed too suffocating n she threw her wait against the door , blasting it open , jumped outside n closed it shut n sagged against the door n panted, the rain drenching her now suddenly weak body ... Oh! Where did all her courage go? Don't be ridiculous pratigya! ... she could hear her mind scream at her , but her virgin heart thundered away ...



krishna , his eyes turning a shade darker , got out of the rover , gently closing the door shut n walked around the bonnet towards her , his eyes raking her wet , shivering form... she was panting , sagged against the door , her bosom heaving in half panic n half anticipation, her eyes closed , her lips parted as she fought to get air to her system ...the rain drops teasingly rolled down her face n his eyes took in the sensual sight as he neared her , gazing greedily at the way tantalizing drops of water seemed to dwell a split sec more over her lower lip , before falling down to her bosom... Her hands were plastered against the sides of the rover n she shuddered visibly as he neared her , his face inches from hers ...



'so...so...beautiful..' he breathed , running the back of his palm along her lower right arm... she gasped softly n took a shy step sideways , plastering herself more against the rover , pulling her dupatta down to cover her blushing face...what r u doing? U stupid girl? Stop behaving as if he is going to kiss u the very first time...! ... Krishna groaned , walking forward swiftly n trapping her , his arms on both sides of her along n over the rover, his voice husky n his face inches from hers ...'don't heighten my need for u pratigya ...not here ... I honestly don't want to make love to u for the first time in the middle of the road...' ... She shuddered , panting... Krishna gazed up at her face , now covered in a transparent dupatta as the rain had drenched in completely n he could clearly see her wet face underneath it... She looked out of the world... Pratigya could feel her body getting heated up, even in the cold rain... Uh! She trembled as he slowly pulled off the dupatta covering her face , presenting her panting n parted lips directly beneath his greedy ones... Don't give in Krishna! U know u won't be able to stop once u begin! ... Its going to be a frenzy! Making love to her! U can't stop! U don't want to stop!... ...this is not the place!...u might end up embarrassing her!...krishna fought his primal urges to ravish her but he couldn't help from caressing her lower lip with his lips n she sighed ...



all she could hear was her heart thundering like anything n a clawing feeling along her throat , as if ...as if she would die , if he won't kiss her now... He was tormenting her with not really kissing her n yet brushing his manly lips against hers... She felt that desperate need arise in her again ,to just be kissed by him ... She tilted her face more up , the tiniest of the space between their lips seemed to be crackling with electricity... Krishna took a deep breath n pulled away n almost cursed himself as he saw her eyes open in confusion ... he pulled her to his arms , his one hand coiling in her wet hair bun n pulling her head back sensually so that her eyes were directly beneath his n his lips directly over his , their bodies fused together...' traditionally , the venue of our suhaagraat is our haveli n i don't think the bride of our haveli would want to change that'... he smirked , piercing her soul ... she blushed crimson , her eyes twinkling in coyness even as she managed to nod once...' get in!' he croaked , releasing her n she fumbled with the handle , nervous , n somehow managed to open the door n get in even as Krishna threw himself behind the wheel... he put his foot down . his knuckles over the wheel almost turning white as he fought his every fiber to concentrate on the road ahead ... pratigya bit her lower lip , darting shy glances at him every now n then , clearly understanding what's going in his mind from his set jaw n fierce eyes ...




Krishna clicked his tongue in frustration as he almost crashed his rover before the porch ... His family was waiting at the top of the stairs, to usher the bride in ... no more stupid rasams! He cursed under his breath even as he felt a bit embarrassed when he got out of the rover , all wet from the rain ...'what? did it rain in the middle of the road? How come we didn't get wet?' chandu laughed n sumitra shot him a' don't tease my son' look... Krishna struggled to arrange his face in to the usual cool n casual one even as he gritted his teeth , walking to open the door for pratigya ... he is going to kill chandu, first thing in the morning! ... no! he would be making love to her -again- first thing in the morning! All mornings! Nights! In fact all the time! ... now! Don't think about it ! ... he sighed as he opened the door n held his arm out to a thoroughly shy n embarrassed pratigya , who was wishing she would just vanish rather than appear for her gharpravesh rasam all wet ... sajjan n pratap n chandu hid their smiles as renuka n sumitra exchanged embarrassed smiles while gayatri mashed her teeth in anger n hatred... Sumitra n renuka did the aarti , tears of happiness in their eyes... ma sahib put the tilak on kriya , all the time wishing for their deaths...sajjan bear hugged Krishna n chandu thumped him over the shoulder which Krishna returned in full measure making chandu go 'ouch' n then laugh... pratigya took blessing from all , her heart filled with prayers , while Krishna watched impatiently ... 'yeah yeah...get over with it' his face read exactly that n chandu kept giggling as renuka n sumitra lead pratigya towards the shiva idol...



Krishna rolled his eyes n clicked his tongue in irritation as ma sahib suggested that he could change n come for the further rasams , meanwhile the maids could help pratigya change too in her mother's room... 'no need ... We r alright! Just get over with the stup... I mean rasams' he snapped , his eyes turning slightly red due to the tersely coiled desire thrashing to break free... everybody kept their faces straight even as pratigya shivered in coyness , for his tone betrayed his impatience ...'oh! So impatient , KST... nobody is going to keep ur ...wife...away from u' ma sahib giggled horribly ... Krishna grimaced, irritated ... sumitra hurriedly took the thall of sweats n offered one to Krishna who ate it half n watched in fascination as pratigya ate the rest , her eyes drooped ... Sajjan chuckled fatherly at krishna , his eyes teasing...' I think we should show some mercy n leave the bride n the groom alone now' ... All giggled while Krishna gritted his teeth n pratigya turned scarlet ... he waited for 2 secs more n still found that all were continuing to giggle n were not showing any intention to leave them alone ... alright! ...



he gazed up at all surrounding him n his pratigya ...'I hope u all heard what bauji said ... Why don't u go to ur rooms n sleep?' he said , trying to keep it as polite as he thought he could... those weren't the words n tone he actually meant to use ... why don't u just f**k off n leave us alone' was the exact words he had in mind... 'OK , understood what u actually wanted to say!' chandu whistled , staring at the ceiling n walking away as if he was suddenly interested in the beauty of the chandelier... all followed suit , suddenly busying themselves in gazing at anything other than kriya ... Krishna watched them go away , his eyes impatient , while pratigya squirmed in shyness over the couch , her face down... how could she ever look at anybody's face now , she thought, feeling embarrassed in coyness... she felt his gaze on her n coyly looked up ... His eyes made her shiver , n gasp softly ... she wrenched her eyes away from him in shyness n gasped out as he abruptly stood up n scooped her up in his arms, bridal style... Her arms wound around his neck , their eyes meeting again , even as he started walking towards the stairs... tonight is the time to satisfy their souls , hearts n bodies ...never to end but only to begin again ... forever......



Hope u liked it 😳


Edited by dhakarn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Wow a fabulous romantic update a nice early V-Day treat.👏⭐️😳

Kriya are both anticipating their SR. KST at his naughtiness but still held back so that it would be special for P😳

Their Family Members teasing them😆

Looking forward to the next update and their SR😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Very nice update di..finally Kriya marriage is happened 😳 and our impatient KST will be out of control now . 😆 and want V day treat as Kriya SR next update 😉 update soon di
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: rekrn

Wow a fabulous romantic update a nice early V-Day treat.

Kriya are both anticipating their SR. KST at his naughtiness but still held back so that it would be special for P😳

Their Family Members teasing them😆

Looking forward to the next update and their SR😳



Thanks dear 😃

A very detailed n naughty SR coming soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Renu111

Very nice update di..finally Kriya marriage is happened 😳 and our impatient KST will be out of control now . 😆 and want V day treat as Kriya SR next update 😉 update soon di


Thanks dear ... coming soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
wonderful update👏👏👏 i finally have caught up yay!

I especially found that little boy and Pratigya scene sweet, her thinking of her future kids with him

Finally they are married, that was so beautifully written the whole marriage ceremony. ⭐️

Now sr coming to show expression of their love in a hubby & wife way.

thanks for the pms, i look forward to the next update 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Khushi96

wonderful update👏👏👏 i finally have caught up yay!

I especially found that little boy and Pratigya scene sweet, her thinking of her future kids with him

Finally they are married, that was so beautifully written the whole marriage ceremony. ⭐️

Now sr coming to show expression of their love in a hubby & wife way.

thanks for the pms, i look forward to the next update 😳


Thanks dear 😃 so glad u r liking it 😳

coming soon ... hope to meet the expectations 😳

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