ff:may be.........part10/pg-22

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-1

I dont know what am i doing?I am going to meet that person to whom before five years i loved alot,but today we only have one thing in common i.e.,hatred and anger,I dont know how will he react after seeing me,oh god!!!!!!give me strength and courage after all i am standing infront of his house

i rang the bell,my palm was sweating as anytime he'll come and open the door,but i dont have any other option than to meet him

the knob turned and as i hoped the person standing before me has a shocked expression,he said

person(confused):gauri??????

gauri:hmm...........

person:what the hell are you doing here.........

he was going to shut the door,when gauri said....

gauri:shiv listein to me .........

now we see the person is none other than shiv kapoor.

comment on it so i'll continue it

love

nihita

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Posted: 18 years ago
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when u said nw we have 1 thing in common.... i thought u was going to say a kid or something

nw shiv should shut the door on her face
cos im sure she is there to give 1 of her bahashan πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh u started another one!!!so kewl!!!pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash9

when u said nw we have 1 thing in common.... i thought u was going to say a kid or something

nw shiv should shut the door on her face
cos im sure she is there to give 1 of her bahashan πŸ˜†

dont worry she wont give her bahashan

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nihita

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Catwoman

nice teaser! πŸ‘ πŸ˜›

thanx kat where r u going????????

love

nihita

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihita

thanx kat where r u going????????

love

nihita

going i wish yaar!! 😭😭...its kaam kaam and more kaaam😭...

work Gabbar ,,,,,,, home pati dev!! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 start. im curious already. cont soon plz πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-2

SHIV:is there anything to listein

gauri:plz shiv just once.....

Shiv left the door open and went inside,gauri was really nervous,then after gathering some courage she said:

Gauri:you have to come with me

shiv:you know i wont come anywhere alongwith you.....

Gauri:its urgent,i need to tell you something

Shiv:as if you can see i am really not interested in talking or listeining to you,but as you are saying its very URGENT you can tell me it here......or else door is still open...

Gauri knew this was suppose to happen,but she knew only he can help her,she was on the verge of tears,but said......

Gauri:i need you,only you help me......

Shiv:ohhhhh thats why what took you at my door,ms.gauri needs me or should i say MRS.GAURI SHIV KAPOOR

gauri closed her eyes at shiv's taunt,a lone tear rolled down her cheeks,when shiv noticed that he said

shiv:why??? you dont like to share my name,but gauri you have shared alot with me,should i take you to our...oops to my bedroom to revive your memory.........remember...

at this moment she opened her eyes only to find shiv smirking,she gave him a you-are-disgusting look

gauri:i am not here to remember those painful memories,i am serious........

shiv:as far as i remember there was a time you use to loved my touch,my embrace,my kisses and many more,should i name them???????huh.....

gauri:plz shiv dont do this,i really need your help,you need to come with me

shiv:where????

gauri:my place........

shiv(smirked):why,oh again you want me in your bed, not bad......huh.......even my bedroom is big enough for it..

gauri:i beg shiv,plz for god's sake i need you to come with me,may be for the last time,plz........

shiv:fine....i'll get my keys

gauri:no need,i have car........

shiv(arrogantly):fine with me..(murmuring):jeese women!!!!!!

after locking the house,shiv and gauri made their way to gauri's place.........

gauri opened the door with a master key and invited shiv there,shiv suddenly said

shiv:now plz do the honours of telling me what the hell do you want...

gauri:come with me,i have to show you something

gauri took shiv upstairs and stood infront of a door,after a min.pause she turned the knob and went inside,followed by shiv

shiv was shocked at the sight before him,a girl around four was sleeping between teddy's,she looked familiar,he feltsome affection towards her,shiv asked:

shiv:who is she???????

gauri held shiv's hand and leaded him downstairs after making sure the door is closed

in the living room

shiv:who was that girl????

gauri:um....she is my...i mean ou..ou.. our daughter........

shiv was shocked till death for a moment his world stopped,then he forcefully grabbed gauri's arm and with anger in his eyes said

shiv:stop it i am not in mood of joking.......

gauri(politely):i am not,let me finish it,when we both decided our ways,i went to pune,after around three weeks i found out i was pregnant,i was actually happy,i named her dia,she was my world my everything,then suddenly she became ill doctors said she needs a bone-marrow for her survival,my bone-marrow doesn't matches with her,since you are her father may be your bone-marrow could match with her,so we came to mumbai

gauri was crying on her knees,she begged:

gauri:shiv plz save my daughter

shiv who regained his conscious now was very furious at gauri,he grabbed her arm this time with double force and said:

shiv:what the hell you never told me i have a daughter,i knew you were cold-hearted but one thing i never knew that you are heart-less,you kept my child away from me,i wont forgive you,i regret everything loving you,marrying you,making love everything.......in simple worlds TODAY I HATE YOU THE MOST..........

with those words he left her home

now the screen is divided into two halfs shiv drinking on beach and gauri sitting on floor crying her eyes out...

shiv(thinking):how could she hide this from me,our reflection of love was there and i was not knowing????????how could she,he looked at the sky and said aloud:I HATE YOU GAURI.........I REALLY DO SO

gauri(thinking):he hates me,now he wont help me,oh god what did my daughter do,why are you punishing her.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww, so much has hapened already. i wonder y they split n y is he so arrogant (but i like him this way) πŸ˜‰
i hope the kid survives
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Posted: 18 years ago
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whn will u disclose the secret behind their separation...?
nice start... gear it up... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

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