The Sinner (Dark & Mature) UPDATING CHAPTER 1 Teaser

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hello Beautiful ladies out
This is Shivam and here i am presenting My first piece of Writing , My First Fiction
It will be my pleasure If reader shows their precious comments and like
I will be waiting for each and everyone's Reaction
Constructive Criticism is appreciated


Overview
Is there any test or instrument to gauge the sucess of a relationship ?
Is it right to carry on in an unhealthy relationship with no conjugal bliss, or look for an alternative path ?
Sanyukta Aggarwal is an adventurous and a Free Spirited girl, Until She marries Randhir Singh Shekhawat , an brilliant rude eligible bachelor who comes from a wealthy family.
while they appear 'Happily Married " their strong personalities collide in every aspect
Randhir iss insensitive to Sanyukta's Physical and Emotional Needs
Caught between Emotions and society , Sanyukta has to decide whether to walk out of relationship or be the victim of society
can they work out their differences ? will Randhir be able to give what she desires , or push her to do something desperate and Scandalous ?

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INDEX

1. OVERVIEW ( SCROLL ABOVE)
2. PROLOGUE ( Page 9)
3. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4309052&TPN=14">THIS IS ALL MY FALUT (CHAPTER 1 TEASER)


NOTE:- BUDDY MY ACCOUNT FOR FURTHER PM's
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RESRRVED
UNRESERVED

Ah! It feels so great to be the first one to res and the last one to unres..
*pats her back*
I'm so uniquely awesome! *raises collar*

"Oh! So we have a new FF in the forum and wait! What? OMFG!! Did I just read that? Is a boy an author of this fiction??"
^^ If you expect such sort of a reaction from me then you are definitely wrong. The notion that boys can't write a fan-fiction of a Television show is absolutely absurd and I proudly claim that you've proved it wrong. Kudos to you!

Oh my effin' Lord!!
Yeh moi kya padhing buddhe? A dark fiction?!!
Woah! This is so gonna be interesting. Just the title of the story had shivers running down my spine... I can only imagine what the story is gonna do to me as it proceeds in due course of time.
The prologue is brilliantly penned down and the questions raised has that mind-jostling effect adding wonders to the already wonderful prologue.
Ohho! So we have that typical set-up in this fiction..
I'm already intrigued by the prologue and just can't wait to read further.
Update soonish and sate myalready curious mind.

Regards
Keya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey,
first of all toh i am really shocked after seeing k a boy is writting fiction
i think you are the first guy on if which is writting fiction 😆

Coming on story,i toh always loves to read dark stories

continue soon
&include me too in ur pm list
would love to read the story

&Also i am 2nd one to comment
but basically toh first hi hoon bcz 1st cmnt to res h,aur us according i am the first one to comment .. Yaahh
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice prologue ...
pls write first part soon.. waiting

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey shivam...great to know that boys too write a "ff's" xP
Prologue seems gripping, looks like something out of the box concept
N it's a mature n dark story it likes cherry on the top and moreover I'm dark ff lover ^_^

Do cont soon n pm me if possible :)
Keep writing! Stay blessed!

Regards
Rashi :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The concept is intriguing!! Will be waiting to read further !! ^_^
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Hey Shivam.
It's quite suprsing to see a boy in the forum 😆 but also good to see a boy is writing a ff.👏👏
The prologue is marvelouus and the concept of the story is strong.
Just a big fan of dark ff's.and this one is favourite.
Please do update soon and please pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omggg
Sees writer name

Gabroo writing a ff

Moi faints 🤢

Wakes up
Again checks whether I m dreaming r not
Hell no he's actually writing




Okay enough of my drama yr
Bt really I was shocked to see this


Tu toh bada talented nikala re
Writing b start kar di

I loved the proloug
Its really intrstng


Dark genre sounds intrstng

Bt we want frequent updates


Update soon


No pm moi hell angry 😡
I want pm next tym


Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am going to stalk your work from now on !

An interesting concept!

The smell of a different flavor...

I expect very much from you and this story

I am confident that neither you nor this story will

disappoint me..

waiting for the story to start...

jiya:)

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