Raesha; Waqt Ne Kia Kya Haseen Sitam

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Hello guys..

Hope you all are fine.

So i'm going to start a new story.

Okay, so let me clear this one is not going to be a dramatic twist turn one or to much rona dhona or stupidity, ummm 🤔🤔 a little bit rona dhona.. Please 😃 As love is not a easy task naah?? 😉

But i promise i try to keep it as simple as i can...

And this one is going to be.. A passionate one it's all about Platonic love

So hope you will going to like it but in this work i want to make everyone to love the idea of love 😉

I mean to love my work 😛

Yeah do suggest me a good name to 😃😃

And please don't gift me your jooti's and chappal or tamatar's if you unlike the CS, Prologue or Concept as i'm a very poor to define them

One thing i won't shy to tell that i have learnt how to really write beautifully by my beautiful and gorgeous friendies Armadillo, Rimmi Di, Eshu and Teddu. Thank you really much. 🤗

And no doubt you all write magnificently and passionately.

Also adding thanks for Forum 32 and Gorky Sir as well... 😃

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Prologue:
She was standing on the railings of the balcony, her dark hair fell just below her shoulders in soft natural curls, she was starring at the sun rise, and it was her favorite time, the cracking dawn. Every day she uses to stand on the railings and observe it. As the sun was raising slowly the hue of the sky was mesmerizing, twirling with the various shades of blue. I was looking at her, because she was my sunshine, my doll. I stepped slowly towards her.

I felt someone's presence behind me, observing the slowly walking shadow. I understood that he was none other than "Sam." My back brushed slightly with his chest, as I got scooped in his strong muscular arms. The low chuckles in his chest vibrated my shoulder.

I encircled my arms around her waist smoothly, and she smiled getting aware of my presence, I crocked my head and come close to her ear, her hair was hiding her ear, I tucked her soft strands around her ear and whispered "Happy Birthday Princess."

The way his lips curled romantically around his words fantasized me, I faintly smile by his words, he still remember my birthday. I turned around him and he hid my face in his palms, and my forehead was treated with a wet smooth kiss and passed his ever charming smile to me. I smiled back to him and mumbled a thank you.

He reached his pocket and took out a beautiful red rose, and gave it to me. I took it and smell; he has scented my favorite perfume in that rose. The aroma was magnificent. It was my 18th rose from him, on my birthday. It was special for me; as he always gave me rose on my birthday. And I use to amass them, a bunch of wither roses in my secret diary. His elegant dark eyebrows shot up and he studied me at a moment.

She looked at me, my gaze was fixed with her penetrating gaze, her chocolate eyes were purely innocent, and she bites the edge of her lip, and sighed. Looking at the dawn again. Her silence was beautiful too; she was trying to hide the blush, but her soft and moist cheeks were filled with crimson red embracement. She has become 18th today but still her innocence and skittish nature was still like that new-born baby Ayesha. Innocent and pure.

I clutched her palms in mine and take her along with me, we reached the dining table, where we found mom glaring at us, and she looked at our mingled hands and frowned. Ayesha abruptly avert her hands, she dazed. And hide the rose in her trouser's pocket. I greeted mom and we both silently sat on the table.

Ayesha was really happy as today I ordered our chef to make her favorite dishes only, and her magical smile was appeared looking at her favorite pasta. Her choice was simple though, she doesn't use to love fast foods, she just silently ate anything, but still I know her choice, she was a choosy person, but she never told her choices, she wasn't a moody person. She was a calm, loving, skittish and responsive girl, My Doll.

Mom was angry on this, she doesn't use to like my care and love for Ayesha, and she was always against it. But I can't neglect Ayesha, and now after 14 years it was completely impossible to even spend a second without her.

Mom was surprised for that but she didn't bother to ask nor she wished Ayesha, neither Ayesha expects wishes from anyone. I twirled the pasta in the fork and forward it towards Ayesha to make her eat, she was shut for a while, her eyes point towards mom who was glaring at us, but I ignored her morsels and make her ate forcefully, she gulped the pasta, I chuckled on that. She was just going to have the first bite of her food, when I held her hand and made myself eat by her, and poor she was damn scared.

Sam was being way to naughty, he knows that aunty don't like me and he's forcefully making ourselves fed by each other, I was shut when aunty deliberately coughed, and passed hard glares to me. And that Monkey Sam was laughing. I almost kicked him and he tried to swallow his laugher. Aunty frowned at both of us. And her gaze was stuck at me. I was trying to gulp down my breakfast.

Aunty broke the ice and silence and almost ordered Sam," Sam tumhe aaj U.S ke lie jana hoga, it's a very important deal to be handled, and Mr. Kerrington is also coming, with Angelina." She stretched the word Angelina just to make me hear.

We both were suddenly jerked with her name, but I continued to complete my breakfast, I sip the orange juice while Sam almost split it.

Sam was perturbed," Mom I'm not going anywhere, today is Ayesha's 18th birthday. And I'm not going to leave her alone especially today. I'm reserved for Ayesha today."

She snarled at me as I disobeyed," so what's new in that?? Birthday comes every year but this meeting is really important and you can't skip it."

My happiness was drained how could she?? I almost roar," Birthdays comes every year, But... Just once in a year. And it Ayesha's birthday and I'm not going anywhere." I left the table after saying this, taking her along with me. Or else mom will scold her.

Edited by Hayakhan_018 - 10 years ago
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Concept of the story:

Ayesha was an orphan but Sameer's father adopted her and she was living with them because of Sameer's Intractableness. Sameer and their family used to live in India, and sameer found her in a garden, he was a toddler and he wants a baby doll for him. As he was in notorious relation with his younger brother Vedant. Sameer was just 4 years old when he took Ayesha in his house. But his passion for Ayesha increased and her never want to let her go, and his father was also beloved to her so they adopted her. But her mom was always against her adoption, but he was Coercion because of Sam and her husband, and she has accepted her forcefully but she was in good terms with Ayesha.

When Ayesha was 14th their father died and due to business promotions and his mom's wish they shifted to London. And now Sam is the only one who loves Ayesha and really cares for her.

Edited by Hayakhan_018 - 10 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH:

Ayesha :

A sensitive yet sensible and skittish girl, she was choosy but not moody. She's appreciative and thankful girl and always being graceful to the Rathore's to give her a life, especially Sameer. She's in a really passionate, understanding and affecting relation with Sam but haven't realize her love yet.



Sameer Damsingh Rathore:

A charming, loving and caring guy. He has no-nonsense abilities or negative attitude, he always respect and give his best to every relation. Loves Ayesha but thus waiting for the right time to confess her, because he believes that there's always a right time for a right thing. He's a business tycoon in London and helps his Mother in business.



Apeksha Damsingh Rathore:

Sameer's mother, she's business women and a greedy person, for her respect, money and selfishness she can do anything. She's being a women of principles and she wants sameer and vedant to be like her, she seeks for the profits in her business and wants to be the Number. 1 and only business women in London.



Vedant Damsingh Rathore:

A jovial, fun loving and womanizer. He just believes in enjoying life and having fun with girls for his night reliefs. Currently he has completed his studies but still not showing interest in understanding his responsibilities or doing business.

Edited by Hayakhan_018 - 10 years ago
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INDEX

PART 1, PROLOGUE AND CS :ABOVE.
Edited by Hayakhan_018 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow haya superb. beginning just loved it
the portray of. words and emotion was damn amazing
some thhing diffrent to read and tremendous obe
like this ayesha little bit girly out from her dabang attitude nd sameer calm n loving but his mom future problem for sam n ayesha
contiue soon
thanks for pm
ps
want update of yeh hai mohabtein
again saying amazing story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suprb start
lovely concept
ayesha is so lucky to have a frnd
like sam...
sam is also lucky to have ayesha
by her side in each phase
superb their bonding nature
are so good
continue soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing prologue & CS
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey hayj awesome yaar
love the concept
aisha- a sweet n simple girl
sameer- a sensible, responsible n passionat guy
sameer's mother- a greedy and in-sensible women
hunh a women like her can never understand the meaning of love
vedant- *toung* for you mr womenize
proluge and cs was awesome
love it
thanks for pm
continue soon

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