NeiRa SS ||~~Naina Naina Laage ~~||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii!!!!!! This is a first attempt to write and SS on NeiRa...since I am a silent reader of this forum... Hope you like it...
In this story I'll be adding one more son of NeiRa... both's favourite.
Characters
Neil aka Nachiket Khanna
Ragini Patel
Agam Khanna
Suhani Khanna
Ranbir Khanna
Pam Khanna
Nivedita
Aarav Patel
Neeshi Patel
Nikhil Patel
Dr Aman Malhotra
Jignesh
Asha ben
Baa
And all else characters of IKNMP...!!

I've added Nikhil Patel... their first son... now studies in Canada... and is doing Cardiology and getting his Surgeon degree completing his internship .
He is their first and you might have guessed that he is in Ragini's custody... He is just like Nachiket!! smart...intelligent and Handsome... a great guy...he is nice and cool...the only person Pam loves in Ragini's famili as he is just Neil's exact 26 yrs old copy...He is very smart... he is very chalu!!! He loves his mom and dad...even Ranbir loves him.
He is football lover... he loves singing and plays guitar very nicely.



So hope you like it.




Chapter I Back in Life ... Ragini and Neil.

Life has been too different since Neil returned India for Neeshi's wedding. They were now at Karan's farmhouse... All had just entered the Farmhouse.
RK" Neil... chal aa jaa...bahar kyu khada hai?"

Neil" Just coming yaar... actually bas main Nivedita ka wait kar raha tha"

RK" Tu... well fine ... jaldi aa"

Aarav" Mom aap pehele bhi yahan aa chuke ho?"

Ragini" Haan"

RK" Bohot baar aaye the...and Nikhil ka second birthday yahhin celebrate kiya tha humne...Right Ragini"

Aarav" Matlab...yahan Nikhil bhai aa chuke hai?"

Nishi" Main bhi aa chuki hu"

RK" Neil aur Ragini ki shaadi bhi yahi hui thi"

Karan" Haan yaar...best memories toh yahin par hain"

Dimpy" Abhi aaye hain toh woh saari memories taaza ho jaaengi"

Neil" Ho bhi gaye toh what?"

Ragini " Khud ko yaar nahi karna hai toh mat karo atleast unhe yaad karne do...what does it matter to you if they remember?"

Neil" Nothing"

Agham" Mom Dad... aapki kitni saari pictures hai yahan"

RK" Yeh saari bohot purani pictures hai"

Nishi" Kaash Nikhil bhai bhi yahan hote!!! Kitna maza aata"

Aarav" Haan yaar... Mom hum teeno mein se unhe sabhse zyaada pyaar karti thi"

Nishi" Haan...and jab tu paida nahi hua tha tabh Dad bhi use zyaada favor karte the...cheater hai vo"

Pam" But voh abh hai kaha... dikhayi nahi diya"

Nishi" Bhai is now in Canada...doin cardiology"

Rk" Arey yaar...that means he'll not attend your wedding?"

Nishi" Haan... I'll not talk to him... mujhe na humesha se chidata tha ki jab Jignesh mera future husband banega than he'll do so much of masti in my wedding...and dekho abhi idiot Canada mein baithkar apni some stupid internship kar raha hai"

Neil" Haan...galat toh hai but agar complete nahi karega then he won't get his degree"

Pam"Neil...stop it...sister ki wedding se internship important nahi hai"

Nivedita"But agar complete nahi karega than all his hardwork waste jaaegi...so somewhere he is right"

Dimpy" Abh not lets debate ki nikhil sahi hai ya galat... RK sabhko rooms dedo"

RK" Haan...see top floor pe Ragini , Neil , Dimpy , Karan , Dr. Aman and mera room hoga... neeche... kids will share their rooms... and Agahm and Aarav, Ranbir , Pam and Nivedita , Shilpa and her mom. Ok... Neil tu apna favourite room pakad le... Ragini aur Aman saath mein just opposite room mein honge... Dimpy and Karan ... Neil ke right wale room mein rahenge... and main corner wale room mein Ok? ANd kuch bhi chahiye ho toh pls do tell me."

Ragini" Thanks RK...you know mujhe niche darr lagta hai...so thanks for giving me the first floor room"

RK" Actually yeh mujhe Neil ne bataya that you won't take room downstairs...and tumhe darr lagta hai so I gave you this room"

Pam" Haan toh Neil ke saamne wala room hi kyu?"

Rk" Problem kya hai... actually woh ek hi room hai jo us side pe hai... varna either Neil ke left wala room lena hoga ya right...tabh aur paas ho jaaega"

Aman" Par yeh corner wala room main...I mean Hum le lete hai hai"

Rk(confused why he said this)" Nahi thats my room... and vaise bhi tum dono konsa apne room ka door khula chone wale ho... Neil taank Jhaank nahi karega yaar...mera promise"

Neil" Main kisi aur ke kamre mein kyu dekhu? Rk... aise thoughts apne mind se nikalde... get it"

Rk" Main usse tasalli de raha that yaar"

Aman" Ok!!!"

Ragini" Toh main jaake thoda sa rest kar leti hun...really tired"

Rk" Don't worry... Neil gaya hai Coffee laane"

Aman" Main le aata hun Ragini ki coffee"
And Aman goes down.

Rk" This is sweet Ragini...caring hai D. Aman"

Ragini" Haan...well anyways.. tum kaise ho?"

Rk" You can see me... fit aur fine...kisi ke dil ke darwaaze kholne ka wait kar raha hu bas..."

Ragini smiles... and says" Nice... wait karo pata nahi kabh khul jaaye"

Pam" Well... tum aaram kar lo Nivedita you too must be tired"

Nivedita" Haan"

Ragini" Rk...tum bhi aaram karlo"

RK" Arey Ragini...tum aur Neil ek hi place mein 16 yrs baad aaye ho... and aaram kaise karu...I want this wedding to be your best moment too...kya pata kal kya ho...saath mil paaye ya nahi"
Ragini's smile is rubbed off her face.

Rk" Don't worry...hum humesha tumhare saath hain Ragini"

Ragini" Thank you" and hugs him as a friend.
At the same time Neil comes up and Aman follows him with coffee.
Neil sees Ragini hugging Rk. He feels' Mujhe abhi tak hug nahi kiya but RK deserves it?'And feels a bit different.
(Bg Music: Khaamoshiyaan)
Nishi"Mom... aap abhi tak khadi hai? Go and rest"

Rk gets a call and a sudden smile appears his face...and he goes down...and seem happy.
Pam" Yeh Rk ko kya hua suddenly itna hawa mein kyu ud raha hai as on heaven?"
Everyone looks at Pam and laugh.

Nivedita" Jao pucho...hogi some girlfriend"

Pam" SHut up... mujhe kyu farak pade kisi ka bhi call ho"

Neil" You sound harsh... Pam... you're ok na warna use batata hu that you are not comfortable with him talking to his girlfriend"

Pam" Neil...tum apne room mein jaao and rest karo"
All of them laughs at her.
And she leaves irked.
Neil looks at Ragini smiling so sweetly and Dimpy and Karan were seeing Neil staring at Ragini. Dimpy and Karan that look at each other and smile.
Dimpy" Neil... What are you thinking?"
Snapping out and realising that Dimpy and Karan are standing besides him " Nothing Dimpy...just thinking about where I kept those gifts...for Rk."
Karan" That might be down where you left you bags"

Neil"Right...I'll get them"
He goes down and finds Rk still on that call.
Rk" Haan... Its already 10 am here and it would be atleast 6 when you'll be at the airport and then here by 8 pm... no means faster than that time"

Neil" Rk... who's on the phone?"

Rk" I'll call you later...he's here...(to neil after cutting the call).. Ah some friend"

Neil"Friend or Girlfriend?"

Rk"Friend"

Neil"Upar...sabh girlfriend hi keh rahe hai...it looks the way you sprang up with happiness"

Rk"Haan"

Neil"Your girlfriend?"

RK"Neil!!!!! Nahi yaar just friend"

Neil"Fine...i think Pam too thinks you got a call from your girlfriend...I guess she'll keep an eye on ur phone"

Rk"Arey yaar...let it go"

Neil"Haan actually I brought gifts for you"

Rk"Iski zaroorat nahi thi... tu aaya yeh hi bada gift hai"

Neil "Le le... from me"

Rk"Acha jaldi rest lele and be down by 2 pm Ok...lunch kon banayega?"

Neil" Dekhte hai"

Rk" Haan...sabhko neeche bula le...lets see who is cooking?"

Neil "Guys...sabh neeche aao... " He tells them and everyone comes down one after another"

Rk"Yaar...yeh batao ki khana ko banega?"

Ragini"I'll do that"

Rk"Akele...pagal hai kya? Akele itne logo ke liye khana banate banate tujhe kuch nahi milega khane...Cose tere haath ka khana hota hi hai so wonderful!!!! Toh saath mein Dimpy , Karan honge anyone else?"

Neil" Dr. Aman bhi acha khana banate hai"

Rk"TOh tum dono bhi chale jaao"

Neil"WHat do you mean? Main and Dr. Aman?"

Rk"Nahi Dr. Aman aur tera bhoot...of course tu yaar"

Neil"No way"

Rk"Natak mat kar yaar jaa kuch kaam kar le...luft baad mein uthana theek hai...anyways hope you have fun cooking..."

Neil"Aage mat bol Ok!!! "

Rk"How do you know main kya bolne wala tha?"

Neil"Ages ke experience hai tere saath ka"
Everyone laughs.

Rk"Ok...so Dr. Aman aapko koi problem nahi hai na?"

Aman"No...Nahi...bilkul nahi hai"

Rk"Acha... Ragini Aarav aur Nishi kahan hai...ek kaam hai unse"

Neil"Unse kya kaam hai?"

Rk"Unse hai...tujhse nahi...jaa khana bana"

Neil" Kuch bhi phaltu harkate ki na then you see"

Rk"Kya dekhu? "
Neil runs after Rk and Rk is running ahead... everyone is laughing... Rk runs behind Ragini and stops behind her.

Rk"Ragini... bachale ... aaj meri zindagi ka sawal hai"

Neil" Cheat... bahar aa...tujhe toh main aaj chodunga nahi"

Rk" Not so innocent Neil jo tu kahe vo maan lu... Ragini pls saamne se hatna mat"

Neil" Ragini... side off"

Ragini" Tum dono mere piche kyu pade ho?"

Rk" The only safest place yaar Ragini...jahan Neil meri jaan nahi le sakta"
Neil " Bada aaya safest place... you cheat... tu wahan se nikal"

Rk" No way Yaar Ragini...aaj na Neil se bacha le... kyuki..."
He did not complete ... for a moment silence rang between the whole room.

After 10 mins.
Dimpy"Acha Ragini...aaj bana kya rahe hai?"

Ragini" Dimpy tum roti bana lo... If you can toh Karan sabzi kaat lo... Main sabzee cook karlungi... Sir aap roti paka lo...cose aapko wahi aata hai na"

Dimpy"Good Idea...jaldi ho jaaega"

Karan" And what is Neil doing?"

Dimpy " Taste kar lena"

Karan" Sabhse easy kaam and sabhse best kaam"

Ragini" Toh bana le?"

Dimpy" Sure"

Rk" Meri help chahiye kya?"

Ragini" Na...its ok Rk we'll manage"

Rk" Theek hai i'll manage kids...and mujhe Nishi and Aarav se baat karni thi"
Rk leaves.

Rk meets both of them. Suhani comes when they were talking and over heard their talking...so Rk involved Suhani too.
Listening to Rk... Nishi, Aarav and Suhani gets happy.
The settle the plan...and leave happily.

Pam... walks to talk to Rk when his phone rings again.
Rk" Kitne call...saara recharge khatam ho jaaega... kitne calls..."

Pam" Kiska call hai?"

Rk" Hai koi"

Pam" Koi who?"

Rk" SOmeone special...waise why do you want to know"And he leaves smiling.

Pam rushes to the Kitchen.
Pam" Ragini...shayad koi Girlfriend hai jo Rk ko baar baar call kar rahi hai"

Ragini" Pam chill maar...everything will be fine"

Pam" Nothing is fine Ragini"

Dimpy" Tujhe badi tension ho rahi hai?"

Pam leaves as soon as dimpy says this and eveyone laughs.


Khana is ready.

It 4 pm and everyone is sleeping their rooms.
Rk goes into Neil's room and finds him sleeping on a chair sitting.
Rk" Neil...uth... Chal .. uth na"

Neil" Yaar...Rk what is your problem?"

RK" Abey... its 4 hume disscussion karna hai...kids bhi uth gaye hai"

Neil" So?"

Rk"SO... tu bhi uthjaa"

Neil" Fine... muh dhoke aata hun"

RK" Good...jaldi aana"

Then he goes to Ragini's room and finds Ragini sleeping on the bed while Aman sleeping on the sofa.

Rk" Ragini... Dr. Aman... get up... jaldi utho...Its 4pm"

Ragini gets up and walks into the washroom and washed her face.












This is the first chapter. Will update soon...

Thanks for reading...pls do leave comments and likes!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww!!! You write so well👏..really really enjoyed reading this story😉
Especially when rk uses ragini to protect himself from neil..u framed dat part sooo well!! N ya definately i m waiting for the next part..update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ita awesomee!! Please update soon! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome please continue soon.
Can u pm when ever u update so that I don't miss out on such good updates written by u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2
Everyone comes down... Rk seems too happy.
Karan"Phir se teri Gf ka phone aaya kya Rk... tere chere pe garden garden sa feeling nazaar aa raha hai"

Rk"Nahi yaar... Bas jo baat hai vo bohot khushi ka hai"

Karan"Tu shaadi kar raha hai?"

Rk"Yaar...meri baat nahi hai good for all of us"

Karan"Really?"

Rk"Haan"

Dimpy"Itna khushi ki baat hai toh jaldi batao na Rk"

Rk"SOrry...par voh suprise hai"


Agham"Lets go out...surprise hai kabhi toh pata chalega...chalo bahar... hum na khel rahe hai"

Aarav"Haan...chalo hum na dart game khel rahe hai...aap sabh bhi khelo na"

Rk"Haan chalo guys"

Neil"Yaar Rk...hum nahi yaar...let them play"

RK"Neil yaar...zyaada bhav kyu khaa raha hai..chalna...ya bulau Nivedita ko tumhe patane"

Neil"Rk... SHut your mouth...kuch bakwaas mat kar"

Ragini"Sahi cheezen toh inhe bakwaas hi lagti hai"

Neil"Atleast kuch baatein toh honi chahiye Ragini"

Ragini"Sach toh kadwa hi lagta hai"

Neil"Actually...and sach yeh hai ki Nivedita ko har baat mein kheechne ki zaroorat nahi hai"

Ragini"Why...you feel bad ... the same way i too feel bad jab tum Dr. Aman ko har cheez ke liye blame karte ho"

Rk"Come on Neil Ragini...don't fight yaar...tum dono acche nahi lagte when you fight ... tumhari cute debates achhi lagti hai...but this time tum dono ladai par utar aaye ho"

Ragini" Pehele use bolo Rk ki har baar Sir ko ghusane ki zaroorat nahi hai"

Rk"Yaar...(gets a bit emotional).. You know...main jabhi kisi couple ko saath mein baithke baat karte dekhta hun...It makes me remember you both... tum dono ka pyaar sabhse cute tha"

Karan"Rulaega kya pagle... We all know!! We all miss Nachiket and Ragini... abhi shayad wo dono alag hai...pehele zyaada alag nahi the but abh toh totally repel with each other"
All them are quite.
FLASHBACK

Ragini"Nachiket... pls mujhe bahar jaana hai...see kitna cute weather hai...mujhe walk pe jana hai"

Rk"Haan..chalo yaar...Nachiket...bahar chal bohot ander baithkar baatein kar li"

Ragini(joking)"Waise bhi bahar walk pe jaana heart ke liye accha hota hai na Nachiket?"

Nachiket"Wow!!! You know!! mujhe mat padha ... mujhe pata hai." And starts tickling her and She falls on his lap and he continues to tickle her...

Ragini"Nachiket...Pls..stop tickling... Bas... Pls Pls... Chodo mujhe"
She freeds herself and is running around the kitchen and Nachiket is behind her...after few minutes of running He catches her by her waist and pins her to the wall.
Nachiket" Now bahar jaake dikha... go run... I'll not leave you"

Ragini"Nachiket look...sabh dekh rahe hai...leave me"

Nachiket"So what...I don't care... "

Ragini"Nachiket pls...mujhe bahar ghoomne jana hai"

Nachiket"Fine itna keh rahi hai toh chal"

Rk"Finally... Chal abh...both romance kar liya"
THey all start walking... Karan is saying something but he is looking at Ragini... getting no repy he looks aside and finds Nachiket gone and is with Ragini ahead... else all are tired.

Rk"Ragini... Nachiket...bas yaar am tired"

Karan"Koi fayda nahi hai... Ragini and Nachiket jab saath hote hai they don't know how faar they are going... lost in their own world"

Dimpy"Cute na? So sweet... anyways both are just one... dono saath hote hai toh they don't care about anyone else"

Rk"Haan acha hai but aage jaa hi rahe hai"

Karan" Nachiket!! Ragini!! CHalo vapas...we're going back"

Nachiket"Haan theek hai you go...hum thoda aur walk karke aate hai"

Finally they return after and hour...

Rk"Finally tum dono love birds ne kitne calories burn kiye?"

Ragini"Jitne burn kiye utne hi badha ke aaye na...so koi fark nahi padta"

Dimpy"Badha ke aaye matlab?"

Nachiket"Ice cream khake aa rahe hai... Ragini ko Ice cream dekhke control nahi hua"
FLASHBACK ENDS.

" Tum log kahan khoye ho?" They were snapped out of their memory by Agham's voice.

Rk"Oh Sorry...chalo guys!!!"
Everyone starts getting up... Karan and Rk are a bit emotional.
Ragini moves ahead with Dr. Aman... Dimpy also gets emotional... Neil is walking with Rk... She turns back and sees Neil and turns front and starts talking to Aman.
Rk"Neil...its ok... everything will be fine"

Neil"SHe's married...voh kabhi Dr. Aman ko betray nahi karegi"

Rk" I don't know but I still think Ragini ke dil mein tere liye feelings hai"

Neil" Nahi yaar... jabse mile hai theek se ek baar bhi baat nahi ki hai"

Rk" So you admit...tu aaj bhi Ragini se pyaar karne laga hai"

Neil" When did I stop loving her?"

Rk" Sabh theek ho jaaega"

They all sit and Sunny Tai keeps the dartboard and gives everyone three darts each.

First kids try...no one succeeds then Rk tries and hits third time. Karan also fails... Neil hits at the first attempt. Then Pam tries and fails...Nivedita comes up and aims at the center and it hits right at the center.
Pam"THis is awesome...Nivedita had no match"

Rk"But not better than our Ragini... Ragini can hit right at center from where she is sitting."

She sitting quite a little far from one has aim... say 6 feet and adding 3 feet distance between the board and the place one aims.

Ragini" Leave it Rk...anyways competetion nahi hai"

Rk"But mujhe prove karna hai ki no one is better than you"

Dimpy"Haan...show it ragini"

Rags"Fine"
She aims from where she was sitting and hits right on Nivedita's dart that mean perfect center. All cheer Ragini... and Pam and Nivedita are quite shocked. How did she do it?

Rk"Bola tha na...Ragini is best"
Neil looks at her and she was looking down after few minutes she too looks at Neil to see his expression.
Aman"Ragini!! Kahan khoyi hai? Kabhse tujhe bula raha hun"

Rk to Karan"Nothing has changed between Neil and Ragini's love... Ragini also loves Neil...even after all these years... Dono jab ek dusre ko dekhte hai...they are lost in their own world..."

Karan" Haan...but Ragini accept nahi karegi... bohot ziddi hai"

Rk"Haan...that is why we have to do something"

Dimpy"Guys tum dono kahin Ragini aur Neil ko milane ki koshish toh nahi kar rahe? remember...She is marries to Dr. Aman...toh Pls mat try karo...let it where it rather than tearing it more apart"

Rk"Nahi yaar...bas kuch beautiful moment banana chahate hai...Neil ke liye...Woh kabhi bhi Nivedita ko accept nahi karega"

Karan" Haan...he has already decided not to move ahead"

Nishi"Tum log apne mein hi khoye ho jabse yahan aaye ho"

Ragini"Nishi... Sun.. ek kaam kar kitchen mein second shelf mein snacks hone chahiye...wahin rahke hote hai...Rka and Nachiket ne jo laaye the wahi rakhe honge"

Rk"But tune kaisi guess kiya?"

Ragini"Tum log vahi chupate ho... kyuki hum tumhare liye chode bina hi kha lete the so...vahan tak sirf Nachiket ki hi height pahuchti hai"

Rk"Taaliyaan... great... vahin hai...main lata hun tu rukh"
Rk brings snacks for everyone. Its 6pm and is getting a little dark.
Neil is thinikng about Ragini... her beautiful smile when she laughs ... her beautiful eyes... twinkling beautifully... her beautiful lips when she speaks... (Bg Music: Tose Naina)... He remembers how she used to sit between his legs and touching his chest... his hands would be enclosing her. And would smile and look at him...and they would talk for hours...and hours..till Rk comes and interrupts them... and she would blush on hearing him teasing them.
Rk"Kya soch raha hai?"

Neil"Nothing special!! You know what I would be thinking about"

RK"You know... life is just twists and turns... tu US gaya thinking Ragini se dur rahega then you'll forget her...instead you started loving her even more...and abh Nishi ki shaadi mein ... pyaar badh raha hai"


Then a boy in like twenty enter the farmhouse.
Boy"Hey guys!!!...Am back!!" He pulls up nishi and goes out and he whispers something in her ears.She runs to Ragini and says something...She gets shocked then Nishi eyes her and she agrees... She then tells it to Rk he also smiles.

Boy"You might wonder ki maine Nishi se kya kaha? Toh maine kaha that main yahan sirf iski shaadi tak hi hun...and vapus laut jaaunga... internship thi but iski shaadi ho rahi thi and could not control myself"

Dimpy"God!! yeh Nikhil hai!! Mera hero!!"

Boy"Ofcourse Chachi...your hero Nikhil!!"

Karan"Tu phirse shuru ho gaya na...tu aur Neil dono milke Dimpy ko bigaadoge"

Nikhil"Kya karu... aapko toh baaki ladkiyon ko dekhna hota hai...so Chachi sees me...and Dad!!! WOw!! He's here too"
He removes his traveling backs and throws it on the ground and runs and hugs Ragini.

Neil" Nikhil!! SO good to see you... well tu apni internship chod ke aaya hai?"

Nikhil" Nahi...unhone exam conduct karliye pehele and said ki baaki ka semister baad mein complete kar sakta hun...so Nishi ki wedding attend karne aaya hun"

Nivedita"Hi!! I am Nivedita!!"

Nikhil"Nice to meet you!! Nikhil Patel ya Nikhil Khanna ... jo bhi sochna hai...your wish"

Nishi"Mom aap humesha uski side lete ho... isne apna bag bhi nai uthaya...and aapne daanta bhi nahi"

Nikhil"Oye Darling!! Main masti karne aaya hun...bag utha ke coolie banne nahi Ok!! Anyways tu utha le... baad mein mera saman uthana miss karegi...yeh golden oppourtunity chod mat... varna baad mein roegi... and jab milegi tujhe mera bag uthane ka man karenga...tabh I cannot let you na!!!"

Everyone laughs!! He is like Neil...just wants to utho maza!!
Nishi throws a pillow at him and both start fighting.
Ragini" Nikhil.. Nishi... ladna band karo! Why do you have to fight everytime? Stop fighting like stupids!! Are you crazy... Nikhil pick up your bag"

Nikhil" Mom...there is no way I'll do this... main toh enjoy karne aaya hun and aap mujhse kaam karva rahe ho? Unfair"

Ragini"Kyu ? You are special? jaao utho and keep it in your room"

Rk"Par voh rahega kahan?"

Nikhil"This I should ask you na Chachu?"

Rk" Arey haan"

Neil"Mere room mein ... anyways am alone"

Nihkil"Sure... Kisi ko koi objection hai toh abhi batao...kyuki main ek baar settle ho gaya na then mujhe shift karne ke liye bohot mehenat karni padegi"

Pam"No problem Nikhil"

Nishi"Nick!! Jaa and jaldi fresh hoke aa"

Nikhil"Tune bola aur main haazir ho jaaunga Jaan"

Nishi"Main tere liye tere bag se dress nikal deti hun"

Nikhil"Vaise sabhko plan bataya? Maine na tere In- Laws se baat kar liya hai...and vo humare saath wahin aayenge"

Nishi" LOve You sooo much bhai!! Aap sach mein Dad jaise ho"

Nikhil"Bataya?"

Nishi"Na...Mom aur Rk chachu ko bataya ... baaki sabhko aap batao"

Nikhil"Fine... main fresh hoke aata hun"

Nishi"Bhai...maine aapka shirt and jeans nikal di hai... naha ke aana"

Nikhil" Haan"
And she goes down...

Nishi" Abhi Nick aake kuch announcement karne wala hai"

Agham" Hum sabhko toh unse introduce bhi nahi karvaya"

Nishi"Karva denge tension matle"

Aarav"Announcement kya hai?"

Nishi"Aa raha hai Nick...vahi bataega"

Pam"I think tumhe Nikhil ko bhaiya bulana chahiye"

Nishi" Pyaar se nick bulate hai"

Nikhil"Na... wo actually...mujhe koi bhaiya bulaye toh accha nahi lagta and frnds bohot chidate hai so maine use insist kiya that she calls me Nick...and Aarav se bhi yahi kaha"

Pam"But aise nahi karna chahiye"

Nikhil"Let it go na bua"

Pam"Bua!! Pam...call me Pam"

Nikhil"See... Just the same mujhe bhi accha nahi lagta someone calling me bhai or Bhaiya"

Pam gets dumbstuck... Smart of Nick.

Nick"Ok!!! So hum sabh dayafter tomorrow morning leave for Goa... Nishi ka sangeet vahin hoga"

Nivedita"Wow!! Goa! Hum flight se jaa rahe hai?"

Nick"Na...by road...actually... we used to go by road only"

Nivedita"We...matlab...u and ur frnds"

Nick"Na... me, mom , dad, Karan Chachu, Dimpy Chachi, Rk Chachu and Pam... Nishi too"

Neil"Haan... it used to be fun"

Nick"Actually... hum pure raaste mein masti karte the... and dad guitar bajaate the"

Nishi"Pehele sabhse mil le"

Nick"Let me guess... this should be Agham and there Ranbir right?"
Both nod their heads.

Agahm"Dad guitar nahi bajaate"

Nick"Na...chod diya hoga... ghar pe dad guitar abhi hai...main bajata hun"

Agham"Dad... aapne kabhi nahi bataya"

Neil" Haan...maine chod diya tha"

Nick"But abh play karenge na... no worries!!!"

Ranbir" Wow!! SO nice... excited"
(Ranbir does not hate Ragini...his confusion is cleared and he also now loves Ragini...but Pam still hates her)

Nick"This is just a start...abhi dad ke baare mein bohot kuch jaana hai about dad"

Ranbir" So... this trip will makes us know more about Mom and Dad"

Nick"More than Just Mom and Dad"

Ranbir" Seems intresting"

Nick"Karan Chachu... maine aapse thode baal katane kaha tha...aapne bure baal nikalva liya?"

Karan" You shut up... Nick"

Nick" Fine" and laughs.

Karan"Tum dono mujhe chidate ho"

Nick"Ek se bhale do"

Karan"Oh very funny!!"

Nick"Ok!!!! Lets play Truth and Dare"

Agham" Haan.. Haan"

Neil" No yaar"

Nick" Dad... kyu itna nautanki kar rahe ho?"

Neil" No... I don't want to"

Nick" Dad I don't listen to a no"

Neil" Why don't you listen?"

Nick" Because I am you... you also don't listen"

Rk"Jab tak tu nahi maanega...he won't listen"

And they play all night...Its 9pm.
Nick"Guys!! Its 9... lets have dinner and go to bed...kal Nishi ki haldi hai"
And all of them have dinner.







Thanks for reading!! Hope you like and pls do comment... aur accha laga toh hit like
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful that was! Loved the flashback😳 I even liked that part when everyone talk about their cute love story in front of them😆..n Nachiket admitted his feelings! Very good😉
You really write so well. Pls continue👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww!!! 😳 this is just Superb! Superb! Neil and Nick Are just So So Cute! Too Cute!! Love their pairing, just completely love this ❤️ Please Update soon!! And can you Pm me if possible 😛 just Mindblowing 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Aisha, when are you gonna update the next part ?,😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was very sweet indeed! :)
Do continue soon...
Idea of Nick is wonderful..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3

Nick"Good Morning guys!! Its morning... Dad get up... or else you'll be late"

Neil" Haan... baaki uth gaye kya? "

Nick"Haan"

Neil" Ragini would be already up... she gets up early"

Nick"You remember?? "

Neil"Haan...I'll never forget her"

Nick"Toh you moved ahead with your GF?"

Neil" Kon GF ?? Nivedita? Na...usse toh main just Nishi ke marriage ke announcement ke ek din pehele mila tha... Pam meri shaadi karana chahati hai"

Nick" And aap us baat se dur hain right?"

Neil"Right"

Nick"Fine ready ho jaao...hume jaake tayari karni hai"

Neil goes and gets freshed up.

Nick is ready and comes out...he wears a beautiful yellow Kurta and red jeans...He puts his Shot absolute Perfume!!!

Everyone puts haldi on Jignesh and Neeshi's face... Nick fills her face with rubbing them on her face... He is naughty... Neeshi becomes emotional and remembers how they used to fight for the silliest stuff...

FLASHBACK

Nick is 14 ys old and Neeshi is 13 yrs...

Neeshi"Nick!!! that is my smiley ball not your football... don't kick it...you idiot"

Nick"Mere football ki hawa nikal gayi hai...so tere ball ke saath khel raha hun...ball toh ball hota hai"

Neeshi"Woh mera b'day gift hai pagal not football"

Nick"Fine main bahar jaa raha hun"

He goes out and plays with his frnds...

He returns back after 4 hrs...

He is totally drained with sweat and has much of mud on his dress and he goes into her room and puts his t shirt on her bed...and goes into the bathroom.

Neeshi"NICK!!! You idiot...tune apni gandi shirt mere bed pe rakhi...and my nice bedsheet ... kitni gandi hoo gayi hai...just because of you"

Nick"Haan toh dho lena ... vaise bhi daag acche hote hai"

Neeshi"Hell daag acche hote hai..my foot...abh tu dho ke de...and koi daag nahi hona chahiye...understand"

Nick"Lets see some other day...mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai"

before Neeshi can say anything he leaves.

FLASHBACK

Neeshi has tears in her eyes.

Ragini"Neeshi aise roote nahi hai...Nick tujhe thodi na chod ke chala jaaega... jaega toh ofcouse sabhse pehele tujhe bataaega..mujhe nahi... we are always for you Neeshi... jabhi man kare aa jana ghar thodi der ke liye"

Nick"Jaan...tension kyu le rahi hai...tu bolke toh dekh...bas tere pados mein hi ghar lelenge"

Everyone laughs and Neeshi hugs Ragini and Nikhil.

Neeshi"Nikhil...hum humesha aise hi rahenge na?"

Nick"Ofcouse Jaan...kyu nahi"

Neeshi"And baad mein tu change ho gaya toh"

Nick"Never... ever... Sabh kehete hai Main dad jaisa hun...itne saalon mein voh nahi badle toh main kaise badal jaaunga?"

Everyone is happy... Neeshi is a bit on the verge crying.

Pandit"Abh yeh haldi kisi vivaah ke yogya ladke aur ladki ko lagae... Ladke ko Jignesh lagaae aur ladki ko Neeshi"

Pam"Nivedita jaao"

Nick"Nivedita AUnty kyu?"

Nivedita"Aunty?? Main aunty nahi hu Ok...and don't call me aunty"

Pam"Kyuki...vahi shaadi karne ke taak mein hai"

Nick" But shayad yeh haldi aapko nahi laagni chahiye"

Rk"Correct!!"

Pam"Rk...main inrested nahi hu shaadi karne mein"

Nick"Fine ...jaaeye"

Nivedita"Ladko mein Ranbir ...chalo"

Neil" No... Ranbir nahi Nikhil ko jaana chahiye"

Nick"Oye Hero...kis janam ka badla nikaal rahe ho...Ranbir tu jaa...mujhe itni jaldi shaadi nahi karni hai"

Pam"Haan Haan...Nikhil hi jaaega"

Ragini"Koi fayda nahi hai...yeh sunne walo mein se nahi hai... aapko haldi lagva dega"

Pam"Ragini...maine already mana kar diya hai"

Nick"Thik hai but main Pam ke saath hi haldi lagvaunga"

Pam"Main kyu?"

Nick"Main aapse itna pyar karta hun na isiliye"

Pam"Main nahi jaaungi"

Nick"Toh main kaise jaau...maine bhi pratigya leli ki aapke saath hi haldi lagvaunga"

Neeshi"Bhai pls aaona"

Nick"Neeshi...you know meri type ki ladki abhi tak mili hi nahi"

Neeshi"Maa ko batao dhundh degi ... "

Nick"Pls...nikki(Neeshi lovingly called Nikki)"

Pam"Accha...let Ranbir go first"

Then Jignesh and Neeshi put haldi on Ranbir and Nivedita.

Everyone is happy...and now ...

RK"Acha suno... main dance ke liye pairs decide kar raha hun"

Nick"Ek idea hai...since we have sangeet and shaadi in Goa...lets have competition ... dekhte hai who wins...and not just dances but also many more games... Masti unlimited hai so Pls aana zaroor"

Rk"Good idea Nick...toh agree"

Everyone agrees for this.

Nick"Acha Nikki sun mere frnd bhi aa rahe hai...toh koi problem nahi hai na?"

Ragini"Kyu hogi...acha hua aa rahe hai"

Nick"Thanks Mom! I love You"

Ragini"Pata hai"

Jignesh's mom" Acha Ragini ben humne na tayaari kar rakhi hai vahan ki hotels ke liye...kyuki aapne yahan se vahaan tak jaane ke liye kharche uthaye hai hum hotel ka karcha utha lenge...humare bete ki shaadi hai"

Ragini"Par.."

Jignesh's mom"Par var kuch nahi Ragini ben...Neeshi humari bahu nahi Beti jaisi hai"

Ragini is very happy. Even Neeshi is happy.

Nick"Accha dekhiye... humna teen din baad nikal rahe hai toh aa jaiye ga... hum jaldi niklenge"

Daadi"Haan parson mehendi bhi hai... and vahan pahuchne mein teen din lagenge and sangeet ke liye 10 din hi hai...uske do din baad shaadi hai"

Jignesh's mom"Haan... toh parson milte hai Ragini ben"

Ragini"ji theek hai"

Jignesh's dad" Chalte hai Neil Bhaisaab"

Neil"Haan!!"

Haldi function is over.

Its evening... 4 pm.

Nick"Koi thaka hai kya?"

Ragini"Main... drained...and haan main dance wance nahi karungi"

Neeshi"Kyun?Mom Pls"

Ragini" Nahi... mere paas utni energy nahi hai"

Nick"Koi baat nahi humare saath champagne...peene ke jagah pe glucose pee lena ... energy aa jayegi...no worries"

Everyone is laughing hard...

Dimpy"Ragini...yeh tujhse dance karwa ke hi rahega"

RK"Ragini and Dr. Aman... Neil and Nivedita... Karan and Dimpy"

Nick" Pam and Rk... you too Rk chachu"

Pam"Main aur Rk...Pls no"

Nick"Mujhe na sunne ki aadat nahi hai Pam...you know that... Because ek baar jo main commitment karleta hun toh apneaap ki bhi nahi sunta"

Pam"Faltu filmi dialogue mat mar okay!"

Nick"I don't listen"

Nivedita" Haan"

Baa"Kyu Ragini aur nachiket saath mein dance karenge... aur vo nivedita aur driver saath mein dance karenge"

Neil"Baa...voh nahi ho sakta...aapko pata hai na main aapki har baat maanta hu but yeh nahi ho paaega"

Nick"Hoga aur nahi bhi"

Neil"Nick...I can't you know"

Nick"Let me complete... main aapki wish puri karunga Baa and dad ko bhi problem nahi hoga"

He whispers his plan in Rk's ears and Rk finds it an wonderful idea.

Neil" Don't try anything funny with me"

Nick"Na nothing funny












Hope you like...short tha but will continue soon...

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