Life Circle........(story)part 2 on page 3

anna_77 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Hello friends...i am silent reader on this form..
but a idea came into my mind...and i thought to write a story on it...
hope u all like it...

here goes the story...

Index:
Part 1: The day to reap what had been sowed...:page 2...
Part 2: Past future and present...page 3

******************************************
The cold was not going down nor was the wind...
In the chilly land Manali ...
A girl was sitting near the window and was just looking at the sky which was clear...
But her life ..."what a big story"...
it was also clear ...but...
but once it was just messed up like anything...
and she was unable to solve the mess...
but now it was a clear ...because she left her past...
her messed up past behind... far behind her new, happy, and peaceful present...
her thought was broken by a knock on the door. and a familiar voice called her across
the door...
"Mahi...Mahi..."
"yes coming" replied the girl...

In Mumbai...

The house was decorated with expensive decoration ...
and was filled with guest...
guest include the rich hood of Mumbai...
they were there to witness the wedding of the rockstar ...
and his long time girlfriend tanu...
all were happy...and the most happy was tanu...
she was getting ready in the room ...with dozen of jewellery and make up...
She was happy because...
as from now she will have all the fame...and money...which abhi is having...
but...
unaware of the strom which was about to come in her life...

percap: Aliya "tanu i don't know where is bhai...and..."
tanu "and what...aliya...its our wedding today and he is missing... where the hell is he"
Aliya "tanu..."with tension rising on her face "he left this letter"
tanu was all shocked reading the letter ...and so was aliya...
and the phase " so shall you sow so shall you reap" was coming true...
*****************************************
guys how is it...????
and be free to give your review...

Edited by anna_77 - 10 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

14

Views

8k

Users

9

Likes

54

Frequent Posters

-Nimmy- thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2
love it
where is abhi???
suspense suspense suspense
wonderful start
please update soon
-mina- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
wow very interesting start! want to know more for sure. hope you can post soon :)
1012277 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Nice start... Continue soon.. 😊
rosal_awesome thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Oooh the suspense!! 😉 please continue soon!
anna_77 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Thanks guys for your comments...
her goes the first part...
******************************************
Part 1: The day to reap what had been sowed...

Mumbai...
Mhera house...

All was merry and happy...Aliya entered tanu's room...
where tanu was sitting there wearing a red and green drees with may expensive jewellery.
Aliya"so u r happy as never before...????"said with a smile...
tanu"yes...after all i am going to be Mrs.Mhera"replied with excitement ...
Aliya"ok i will go and meet bhai"
tanu"ok..."

Aliya entered abhi's room..called out"bhai..."
but there was no one in the room...
Ailya"i think bhai is in bathroom" thought aliya...
she was about to turn to the bathrom when she saw a envelope on the bed...
aliya ..."not bad bhai ...love letter ..."thought aliya...
smiling she started reading it...
and as she read it ...her smile faded away...
and tension started rising her face...
she went out and searched every where and asked every one ...
but no one knew where was abhi...
and not waiting for a second ...she ran to tanu's room...

aliya just bang in tanu's room ...
tanu saw aliya and asked in a confused tone...showing two lipstick...
"which one will look nice...this red ..." but stopped in mid way seeing aliya all
scared...
tanu"what happened aliya...??"
aliya" tanu bhai is missing..." said in one breath...
tanu" stop this prank ..." said in a fake anger...thinking its a joke...
but felt scared seeing aliya in a horror mode...
Aliya "tanu i don't know where is bhai...and..."
tanu "and what...aliya...its our wedding today and he is missing...
where the hell is he"
Aliya "tanu..."with tension rising on her face "he left this letter"
it was a letter wrote by some unkown persone ...telling all truth of aliya and tanu...
how they tried to stop bulbul and purab weeding and many more...
and there was a micro card showing some video proof...
tanu was all shocked reading the letter...and so was aliya...
and the phase " so shall you sow so shall you reap" was coming true...

as aliya and tanu was in a deep shock there was a knock on the door...
mitali"aliya ...tanu open the door ...abhi is waiting down..."said in a loud voice
aliya" bhai ..." said in a confuse look...
tanu" i don't want to go down" said all scared and in tears...
aliya" stop tanu...what if he had not believed this letter...we can't just sit here..."
said to clam tanu...

after some time tanu and aliya came down...
they saw abhi standing at the alter...
tanu was about to step on the alter(mandap) when abhi stopped her...
abhi" u have no right to step in this alter..."said with full anger...
all were confuse...
tanu's mom" what r u saying abhi??"said with worried tone...
abhi" yes ...i will tell u why..."
abhi disclosed all the truth of aliya and tanu...with all the proof...

all were shocked...abhi"get out tanu...and aliya ...now u r not my sister any more... "
abhi was a broken ...he did not told many words but the less were the word the more was the pain...

after some time all the guest went away...
abhi was sitting in his room and was all broken...and his eyes were filled with tears...
the pain were all seen on his face ...
dadi saw him from the open door...she was feeling sad for her grand son...but..
then she was reminded of what he and aliya did to her dear daughter in law pargya...

1 and half year back...
pargya was perparing for bulbul engagement...
she was all happy and was planning to disclosed his feeling to abhi...
she was preparing the pooja plate... when she saw bulbul going some towards the store room...
pargya" bulbul where r u going...??"
bulbul" di nothing dadi is searching for some flower pot...which r in the store room.."
pargya" ok u go i will bring it..."
bulbul " no di i will get it..."
pargya" its ok na ...i will get it..."
saying it pargya headed towards the storeroom...
and bulbul went back to dadi's room...

it was 20 to 25 min and pargya was not back with the pot so bulbul went to look for pargya...
when bulbul went into the store room she was hell shock...
pargya was on the floor with blood all around...

bulbul went runing out and called every one...
at once the doctor was called ...
after some time the doctor arrived and started the treatment...

all were worried...abhi was standing near the door ...
dadi and sarla was sitting on the sofa ...and purab was consoling bulbul...
abhi phone was ringing after little time...
but abhi cuts the call every time it rang...

after some time doctor came out ...
abhi " how is she doctor ..."
doctor " she is good ...let her rest the whole night..."

Present...
Shimala...

a man was sitting in a warm room with many file on a sofa ...
when a girl came there with a newspaper having headline "The broken marriage of a rockstar"
girl" veer did u read the headline..."
boy" yes ...i dont know who broke out the truth to abhi...how sad"showing a fake sad face...
girl" i know who did it veer..."
boy" so detective mahi...who did it..."

percap: 1 and half year back...
abhi" tanu ...now suddenly how can i declare our wedding"
tanu" u have two choice...me or pargya..."
*****************************************

Asma- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
I'm really curious to know what will happen next
It was perfect
-mina- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
very dramatic!! really enjoyed it. more soon please!
--simmi-- thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Wow! So much happened! Do update soon! This is fantastic! <3
sam78 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Nice story and great update. Please con't soon.

Related Topics

Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: SecretShame

2 months ago

How did Prachi and Ranbeer's story end?

I recently started watching KKB again after Pranali's entry and was wondering what happened to Prachi and Ranbeer's love story? Did it get a...

Expand ▼
Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: Viswasruti

1 months ago

Kumkum Bhagya's Krishna Kaul to be part of Rajshri Productions show

This new venture offers viewers the chance to see Krishna Kaul in a fresh avatar, while also signalling a promising revival of classic-style...

Expand ▼
Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: pfalcon1949

3 months ago

Purvi's Story regarding her beimg behind the bars?

What did Purvi actually do to get in the jail? Also why she didn't make it to Prathana's marriage? I can now see the Shivansh Prathana's story...

Expand ▼
Kumkum Bhagya Thumbnail

Posted by: myviewprem

6 months ago

RV could have been inspiration in real life

If you think RV character was unique he had false molestation charges on him by GF to avoid marriage and sent to jail Such a story has never...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".