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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you to all of you who have not given up on this one yet!
her goes the next update




Paradise Lost??



Raman's Paradise was now turbulent.


Mihika's tale played out very differently from how she had intended and she found herself married to Ashok, leaving Adi and Shagun at Raman's doorstep. Shagun now decided to win Raman back. There were embarrassing scenes galore and Shagun made it her life's mission to run Ishita down and importantly drive a wedge between Raman and Ishita and eventually have her out of the family. Raman was of course carried away with the display of Adi's staged affection. But thankfully remembered the trickster that Shagun was, worked at staying strong with Ishita and Ruhi. Ruhi did her best to welcome her brother but he was just as obnoxious as ever.



Mihika's tragedy sent Adi back to where he was with his mother. He stood by her every lie and got back to conniving with her to isolate Ishita. All the good ground Raman and Ishita had gained with Adi now was lost and he moved back painfully out of Raman's guidance and into his mothers trap. Raman came back worried about the scheme of things that needed to be set right.



He heard peals of laughter as he opened the door one balmy evening. Adi was staring at someone with rapt attention, Shagun's eyes roaming all over someone or something while Ruhi, Shravu and another voice was squealing in delight. His mom watched the scene that was unfurling in front of her with a smug smile.


The 6 feet something smiling olive skinned man had draped an arm around a lady and swung her behind him like she was towel and held her squealing and the kids running behind him as he twirled with her. Raman Bhalla was fuming when he saw this stranger set his wife down as she straightened and gave him a bear hug.


Enna da eppo vande? ( you ...when did you get here?)

I have been here for hours now...followed your daughter from school he hi 5 ed Ruhi sitting down on the sofa.

Raman walked in unnoticed by everyone in the room except his mother .

He grabbed a bottle of water and slammed the fridge shut. Turned around to see Shagun gaping while Ishita sat next to the offender in question with her hand ruffling his shoulder length hair.


Yeh kaun hai ?? nya madrassi wo bhi itna lamba..the attention Ishita had for the man irritated him.


I live here too...butted in Raman.


Ishu leapt up grabbed his arm while the other guy uncoiled himself from the sofa getting ready to put his hand out.


Raman Ashwin Ashwin Raman..smiled Ishita.


That did not help Raman one bit...he surely did not care about the name ###


The man seemed immensely popular. The entire Iyer family was in his living room smothering the guy with hugs and Vandu hugged him tighter than Raman had ever seen her hug Bala. She tugged his hair and cried into his chest!!

Thank you Kanna for being here appa said gratefully.


Ishu akka ke time pe main nahi tha pur ab na mihiku ko kuch nahi hone doonga..Vandu cried some more into Ashwin's shirt.


Ashwin patted Vandu's tummy 10 days may be he smiled at her wiping her tears off.


Ishu Akka...Raman's smile was back and he removed his arm from his wife's waist thereafter.


The Iyer clan continued to chatter non-stop and thankfully heading out to their domain. Ishu followed him and Raman was surprised seeing Adi follow the man like he had known his all his life clasping his hand. He turned to look at Shagun for an inkling her but she was as clueless as always.


Ishita smiled and 'paanch minute' she gestured before walking out.


The following morning Ashwin met Mihika with Appa and Amma. There were more tears and hugs from the women.


Vandu reached Raman's door and shrieked for Simmi.


She seemed to be in pain and wanted to hand Sharvu over to Simmi before Bala got there to drive her.


Toshiji and Raman were the only adults at home to look after a bawling Shravu , Annanya and surprised Ruhi.


Vandu grabbed Raman's hand and asked him to go with her!


Raman nodded helped her get to the car and got ready to drive.


" Tum yahan mere saath baitho" she made Bala pick the keys.


Raman decided not to argue. It gave Bala something to do and no time to panic.


Vandu sat in the rear of the car clasping Raman's hands.


Through their 40 minute ride to the hospital she told a stunned Raman the following:


Mihika had married Ashok to save Mihir. Her sister was an idiot for not thinking through...Ishu ki influence zyada ho gayi hai ...she cursed.


Ashwin was there to help Mihika out of the mess and Raman should talk to him.


'Raman jab baccha hoga to shaayad Subbu ayega ..please Ishu ka kyal rakhna ab toh Shagun bhi hai tumhare yahan ..he can turn really acidic you know...Ishu ko apne appa se bachana' she cried now leaning on his chest and into his shirt.


Bala was now a worried man main "peache aaoon" he asked her.


" No need tumhare doosra baacha hua hai kya...nahi na Raman is more experienced" she buffed him illogically.


Theek hai Vandu thank you for letting me know I will take care of everything but yaar yeh aakhri speech kyuun?


Tum na... samjhoge nahi...aaj main mar gayi tho...she cried some more.


Hormones and women the smart Vandu was now unrecognisable chuckled Raman.


Life was beautiful he would set his own right Raman swore silently as he handed Vandu some Kleenex.

Edited by SWAN123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Today is my lucky day.
School went great...

In the midst of an awesome reading experience and the person who got me here is in the first place updates too..

Honey I hope you are good as new now.

Missed you and waiting for you to take this to the end ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally u updated...
the wait was worth...

loved raman's possesiveness...

nd vandu's speech...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...
Very nice,,,😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update dear
loved it
pls continue soon
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Please can you update soon.. Please please..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
raman's possessiveness
n vandu's speech
lol...
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The next one guys...
Twilight


"Comm'on Vandu Akka you put these unsuspecting gentlemen through the blender for no reason" Ashwin asked walking Vandu into the Iyer household after her falsies.


" Po da" she swatted him away.


"Ish couldn't you figure out...kya ho...you have become blunt lady" he winked at her.. " Shagun I'm sure if you were there you would have figured that out right? he continued staring at Adi


Raman was amused the guy ribbed Ishita and she moved closer to Raman on the sofa looking daggers at Ashwin who was looking only at Adi.


Ashwin did Raman a favour JKR now refused to leave Raman's left side. She looked positively cross at the tall man and importantly he seemed to keep Shagun busy. He was glad Shagun observed his hair, his mile long fingers and was right now trying to check for visible indicators to understand his all important financial health.


Amma passed around cups of steaming coffee while the Ashwin amused himself with Ruhi ,Shravu and wearing Ananya around like she was a scarf - around his neck, over his head and little Ananya laughing her guts off if she wasn't eating out of his hand.


Raman I know you have a lot of questions how about we meet this evening at 6 at the rooftop for a vodka?

Accha to tum peete bhi ho.. Amma ko pata hai kya ..

Of course ghar me nahi peeta hoon..mai Ish toda hee hoon...smell karte talli? he slammed her into his side.

'Don't bug my husband' Ishita said wriggling out of his grasp and grabbing Raman's waist.


I like you' smiled Raman at Ashwin tucking Ishita in.


Please Raman it's a boys night out isko saath leke mat aana' Ashwin watching Ishu walk towards amma.


Ishita scowled at Ashwin as she rounded up all the kids to get to them to finish their homework.


" And you mate finish up fast get back here let's continue our game" he pushed Adi towards the other kids. Raman was surprised to see Adi toe the line with smile!


He turned charming all of a sudden smiled at Shagun and said how come Ish has still not learnt how to dress up from you... we haven't been introduced..I'm Ashwin' Ishitha was ready to dig his eyes out now, while Raman was stunned watching Shagun introduce herself as Adi's mom... Shagun Arora .no reference to Raman or the Bhallas.


Amma was now mad at Ashwin for being nasty to her Ishu..Shaadhi kar lo aab she snarled at Ashwin.

Sure Amma! aapki mini skirt ready hai kya? I told you na amma last time I want a modern wedding aur ek divorcee bhi dhoond lena aap. I'll tell you all the other conditions for you to get me a bride soon ok?" he smiled innocently.


"Dog" she hit him on his head with the newspaper she was clearing from the side board.


Raman met Ashwin at 6.00 on the roof top.


Ashwin hugged him and thanked him for being there for Ishita.

You don't have to thank me she's mine..

'but she is the only reason I'm where I'm today.

I know Raman things are complicated right now in your life..Adi and Mihika are the only reason I'm butting in'.

How do you know Adi?

Oh from his boarding school..I spent 4 weeks there when I was posted there. I spent a lot of time with the kids there and Adi stayed in my mind because he reminded me of myself at that age..

I work in the Army ..he finished.

I met Abhi on a flight into Delhi...and he filled me in on Ish and Mihiku. I couldn't stay away after Mihiku.

I had promised Ish that I would meet her daughter first before I met her when Subbu deserted her. I went to meet Ruhi first at school where Abhi was heading to pick Nirvan and was surprised to see Adi there. I think I can be of help if you will let me.' Ashwin finished.


Thank you yaar' said remembering the interaction he had watched between Ashwin and Adi.


I know your sessions with the Psych is going well..Ish told me about it ..I'm not trained to do this but i think i might have the exposure and experience it needs. We must work together this and please Raman let's keep Ish out of this ro ro ke she'll drive me mad and I'm not a patient man I will end up hurting her.'


Why do you call her Ish


Because she hates it...he laughed.


'From what I can see the kid needs a firm hand to show him what is right and he also needs to do something that will make him feel good about himself. I realise Shagun is your ex-wife, it is so typical of Ish to share her home with her...but Ish and You are the cutest couple I have seen in recent times I'm so happy Subbu left her' he smiled




So cheers..we'll have this fixed I promise' the men clinked their Vodka while Ishu walked in on them.


Kya ho raha hai...she quipped.


Oh!! we were discussing sexy women...aur tum list me nahi thi...Ashwin told a fuming Ishita.


Come here" Raman pulled Ishita on to the chair he was on.


I love you! he kissed her and engulfed her in a soft hug that made her cry. The past few weeks were taking a toll on her. Seeing Ashwin reminded her of Subbu and the bitterness.

Ishita I'm so glad that bas***d left you...but i wish I could make you forget him said Raman softly. 'Shhh...kiss me now' said Ishita as Raman reached her shoulder and blocked the chill out, and sat cuddling watch the twilight.



Edited by SWAN123 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VENBA

Superb update...

Very nice,,,😊😊

Thanks Venba
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Originally posted by: blue5sky

Today is my lucky day.

School went great...

In the midst of an awesome reading experience and the person who got me here is in the first place updates too..

Honey I hope you are good as new now.

Missed you and waiting for you to take this to the end ...


Thank you sweet for not giving up and being there!

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