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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi
it was such a haawwwttt update!!! dats all i can say!!! continue soon!!!

Thanks a lot, Paro!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: bluesky10
Amazing Dear
Love this song very much
Thanks for your pm

Thanks a lot, dear!!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: sankadevimaha
Diii ds update reminded f arshi di... the diwali scene-one f my fav scene f arshi!!! Passionate update di... I loved t..

The Diwali Scene, the first intimate scene of ArShi!! How can I forget that!! But I somehow felt there was a lacking in it when i saw!! I guess the acceptance from Khushi's side!! Thanks a lot dear!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
Yagya!!
🤗.*muah*
🤗 *muah*

My all time favorite song and what an occasion to use it again!!!
The song fit the mood and description perfectly.. Yeh pal hai apna ,toh iss pal ko jee le.. 👏
The words and the accompanying actions..really superb
And the line "Dekhatee hai jis tarah se teree najare mujhe, mai khud ko chupau kaha" ...gives me goosebumps!
A simply fabulous update!!

Thanks a lot, Mamta!! This was for you!! That Chupau kaha line is indeed so spine tickling, yaaar!! I normally don't blush but when I choreographed for that lyrics, i started blushing out of nowhere!! Thanks, again!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
It's too romantic !! I'm blushing over here !! Aap bhi na ! (Sorry kal raat ko Mummy dekh rahi thi, so I didn't open this after a single glance !)

Naughty Gal, mummy se chup kar padhi!! Waise hamne bhi aise hi iski rachna kii!! Thanks a lot, dear!!

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Part 49
The rays of the sun dawned on their faces, the memories of their sensuous night which haunted them in their dreams of the peaceful night, love and painful solace that they found in each other's arms, and the peace that they got had to be broken now.
Timeless Romance, that marked itself as the inspiration to all, that stole everyone's breath and heart, the Painful Distances and the Intimacies of the Bluemoon, which were long forgotten was their reality now. But in this course they had forgotten one truth Mahadev had told to his love,
" We were one, are one and will be one, and that remains to be the Supreme Truth"
When distances were cursed and Proximity equally doomed, the wise way was to be each other's solace. But Yagya had forgotten this truth. The first sight that she saw, a sight which she always longed to be her first, pleasured her, but the very next moment, to destroy the subtly miraculous feeling, the reality struck her. The surroundings unknown, the place unknown but the arms and the touch vaguely familiar.
Yagya woke up with a jerk, waking up the conqueror of sleep from his peaceful slumber. Arjun for a second, didn't know what to give as an answer if she questioned him but decided he will be the one who will break this silence now.
" Yagya, we didn't cross any limits, yesterday!" scarcely whispered, Arjun.( God, I was almost about to type Arnav..Okay back to the story!)
" I can very well see that, Mr.Kuru! Any explanations on the ground?" asked Yagya, sarcastically which made Arjun feel the rock bottom of his heart.
" You were drunk, Yagya and you made me drunk too by asking me and I couldn't deny you! And since none of us could drive, I took you to this room and somehow intoxication got on my senses and I lost the control! But nothing happened since I got my control back, ontime!" said Arjun, in one breath.
" So that's your answer?" asked Yagya.
" Yes!"
"This was your stupid plan, Arjun! If you couldn't get me the straight way, you thought you will get me the crooked way! How low of you!" said Yagya while moving out of the bed, unknown to the fact that her words have touched the wrong nerves of Arjun.
Arjun twirled her to make her fall on her back on the bed and pinned her down on the bed with his body and said,
" I needn't get you, Yagya! Because you are ALREADY MINE! And if I make a move, you will not resist it, and we both know it well!" said Arjun, in a dangerously low whisper.
" Enough Arjun! I was of nobody! I am not a property to claim a right! I am a woman! A woman who lost her love, her dignity, her name and most of all innocence in the war of Dharm and Adharm! And saying this again, nor do you, nor does anyone has a right to misbehave with me!" said Yagya, while pushing him by his chest, showing her fiery self to him.
The past was yet again reminded. The celebrated past and cursed lives, which became a boon to the present to learn a lesson. Mahabharat was a story of a fiery woman, whose name still hasn't been used for any daughter, who lost her everything, including her first love for the sake of the world and the story of a brave warrior, who had everything but not which he wanted the most, his first love.
" So you say, you don't belong to me, Yagya?" said Arjun in a husky voice.
" Nor do you have any right on me, Arjun" said Yagya while picking her sari up and proceeding towards the restroom.
" You will accept the right I have, Yagya! You will come running into my arms one day!" said Arjun confidently.
" It will never happen out of love, Arjun! Hugging can also be part of dance or it can be a friendly one! So don't bet on it!" said Yagya, stopping in the mid-path very well knowing, he would do something out of the world to prove this.
" It will, dear!"
Only onething echoed in their minds,
" Why is my love unaware of my pain and tears?"
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TBC
Hope you liked it!! You know what guys, That's why I don't give passionate updates, I get so less likes and comments that my painful updates that I feel disheartened to give a passionate one!!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 11 years ago

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Sethu parvathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Thank you yagyaa!!! 😃

Dude I didn't get the pm!!! Last tym too!!!

Anyways...the update was awesome!!!👍🏼

Yesss...yagya will surely run into his arms with all her love for him!!!

Continue sonn dear!!! Me waiting here!!!

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Res😳
Mujhe PM kyu nahi mila😡 devranijee😭 wait I will read now😛 bt I m angryyy😡
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unres
Yeh kya hai when will u both accept ur love...Devranijee aapko dikhayi nahi deta mere Devarjee ka prem abb wo kya kare ki aapko proof mil jaye unke Pyar ka😉
Bt still I love ur haughtyness😳 Love u for it🤗
Bt mein krodhit hoon😡 I m roothing chalo manaofying me😡😳

Edited by .Sanskruti - 11 years ago

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Why didn't I get PM!😡 Now I am disheartened.😵

Anyways, keeping aside my anger ( I am still angry though! 😡) -

The update was really good. I actually remembered a scene from my favourite British drama "Housemaiden"! Your picturization of the scene was pretty good.👏 First thing is first, I loved every bit of lines you used to descried their characters at the last.❤️ It was deep and consoling, to my heart, which had the pretty much description. It is like we share a common brain.😆 Then, the little stance Yagya took for herself, aah... Very well said... "The fiery one!"

Great gorgeously affectioned my words update. Want a next one WITH THE PM, very soon.😃

Oh... By the way I am still angry.😡

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 11 years ago