Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread III Last Chap Pg 52 - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy...Noe 😳
Thanx for the P.M... 😊
Well this was again a excellent , fabulous and well written part...
Dilshaad noticing ASYA words exchanges and love 😃...i mean she was the one who took the photograph of ASYA when they were holding Mehak for the 1st time...and how can she forget that...Must be Ayaan's influence though...? 😕
Tanveer... 😡 well she really didn't digested the fact that who ever she was forced to like by Zoya ...that man turned out to be liking Zoya only...and in Asad's case even loving Zoya only... 😆 But actually she deserves this...for blindly trusting Zoya...
And Zoya... i think you did the right thing by making Zoya only to stop what all she started with Tanveer...and she has to face her...one day with this revelation why not now...
Zoya's character is the standout in this story...and you have potrayed her flawlessly ...a girl with many flaws ' Zoya ' ( if i remember at starting you also wanted to name this story as ZOYA only.. )... 👏 I mean she has various shades...at one time she didn't know about her feelings for Asad but now she can't stop saying ' I Love You ' to him and getting all cozy with him...and at one time she is guilty about Imran and again she also hesitates to take help from him...a very different and lovely characterisation...
This was really a brilliant update...and i love Fluff...And one more thing i thought you would add a scene at the terrace on Asad' house where...Their last meeting on this terrace was disscssed by them...after the party i guess which Asad hosted...and he also sang Chaaudavin ka chaand hoo...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Reserved!


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Unreserved!


A fluffy chapter, which had been a delightful read! Pure unadulterated loves' always so beautiful to read.

"...I need to go, Phuphi. Mujhe gajar ka halwa khana hain." She was looking past all the servers serving guests to a corner in the garden where Asad had taken a bowl of halwa.

"Zoya, use chain se khane bhi dogi? Jab bhi mauka mila uske haath se sweet le leti ho." Dilshaad said laughing.

"Phuphi, main uska khayal rakh rahi hoon. Agar main dhyan naa rakhoon to future main jaake diabetes ho jaayega." Zoya winked at Dilshaad and walked towards Asad."


I have an inclination for little significant detail and found this scene really heart-warming, "...I need to go, Phuphi. Mujhe gajar ka halwa khana hain." When she said this the deliriously engaging Zoe throwing Asad's clothes out the closet came to mind. Asad's transition into a man in love aware of his feelings has been so fuzzy and charming, eating out the same bowl and Zoe feeding him was so cute and feathery romantic.

"It will be just them again - Abbu, Phuphi, Dost, Shireen auntie, and Asad. Their life together was good. Why had she created unnecessary problems for herself?"

When you introspect over Zoe's journey, this thought actually feels surreal.

Tanveer's transformation has been relatively remarkable, I guess her anger was justified though her persistence was rather surprising.

"When will this girl learn to be patient? Nonsensical girl...,"

"Nonsensical girl" - Oh Mr. Knightley, oh sorry Mr.Khan! 😳

"Zoya nodded nestling closer to him. How easy it was to be with him! She was she. He was he. No pretences! No facades! They still argued, pulled each other's leg. She could throw tantrums and he knew how to handle them. He could be his reserved self and she could break through his reserves. Why hadn't she realized earlier what he meant to her? "I love you, Asad!" She whispered with a gentle sigh. He stiffened a little. She opened her eyes and looked up at him. "It's okay. You don't have to say. I know." She gave a sparkling smile. Asad looked sheepish. "Me, too. As you know...," he mumbled. Zoya giggled and when Asad glared, she hid her face in his chest."

This introspect or rather realization was lovely and almost poignant.

My Hindi comprehension leaves a lot to be desire but whenever I read or hear this word/sentence "...vahiyat plans banati ho." Asad/KSG voice rings in my head, I don't even know why I'm even stating this. 😉 😆

The transfer of the paneer from his to her plate and dessert on the terrace was aesthetic and relaxed, them just being together is just so effortlessly comfortable. Them eating out of each other' plate was endearing and makes you wish you find that kind of love.

I don't think I would want to change anything from the shows' AAK's basic characteristics and personality as this ones' exceptionally reserved and shy irrespective of his varying emotions yet so similar to the shows' one. Asad was highly expressive in essence of his emotions, state of mind and reactions contrary to Zoe's branding of him being "Emotional Challenged" [Well, she was justified to an extent, when he would play down the unresponsive and nonchalant facade, even I felt exasperated] despite this your Asad's just as charming and enthralling, which kind of draws you in as an innocent little child would.

P.S It is rather sad Dilshad isn't Asad's eye reading Ammi in this fiction. I coincidently happened to see this picture on another fiction thread the same night I read this chapter.




I really miss this amazing ensemble and golden phase, wish they work together again some time in the future.


P.S.S Aapi and Jiju are so cool, Jiju teasing Zoe was so imaginable, I kind of imagine the same guy that played Zoe's brother-in-law on the show.

P.S.S.S Can we expect Zoe telling Asad she "examined her head..." in the next chapter?

Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm falling in love with this fluffy AsYa! They give me such warm fuzzy feels! Hayee!
Poor Tanveer, not sure whether I dislike her in this story, she's so naive. :/
Is the last chapter going to be AsYa engagment? 😳 <33

Edited by SurbhikiPankhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is so...starry and romantic and beautiful and euphoric! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting update..good going..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesomee update
omg i lovee Asad😳
plz updte soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
noe its heary warming update
i love it so so much

pls update soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
FANTASTIC update 👏 finally Zoya tell about them to Tanveer hope everything will be fain soon continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
Love u 4 this asya filled update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
asya together moments are sweet
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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