Asad-Zoya FF: Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread III Last Chap Pg 52 - Page 30

Originally posted by: manognasai

Loved the update a lot...
Asad's new side is really adorable!:)
AsYa are very cute...
Really Tanveer is the Nikhat of this story:P
waiting for next update!

Originally posted by: Noe123

Aww...girl...this song...this beautiful song...do you know I had no idea of its existence before you mentioned it here? Yes, I can be astoundingly ignorant at times. Wonderful song! Sukoon mila...Asad ko khas...I listened to it the night you commented almost non-stop.

🤗

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

The song is as overwhelmingly beautiful as was your last three updates have been. From the time we learnt of Asad's side of the story.

Now you have a knack in writing stories that touches your hear and goes deep into the root and shakes all our senses awake. All those unknown chords in keep talking about to you.

One can only aspire to write like you and read stories the way you have spoilt us to read!

Such a treat this story is. Every chapter is regarded greatly for the excellent quality of writing and storyline it carries in itself.

Oh Noe! You bring out the reader in me!

Mwahhh!

Loveee!

;)

If fluff was like this, then all spring mornings should be spent reading this sort of fluff. Such a lovely update and such an adorable couple. AsYa are completely, disarmingly charming in this one. It was a pleasure to read about them being together. The belonging is so entirely beguiling, specially the newness and oldness of them all coming in one big circle. 😳 Absolutely loved how Zoe was full of joy and how Dilshad instinctively knew that something was afoot. And how it unfolded to her was so perfect, the fleeting, elusive thought of them together from once upon time suddenly took form and shape right in front of her. And then it all clicked together, all the pieces. ⭐️ And she knew that Anwar would be the one to check with first. She is truly attuned to all her loved ones so completely just as mothers do. I really like how this part was written Noe, a pleasure to read it. 👏 The best part is Zeenat saying that she needs to go change Mahek's diaper, nonchalantly without missing a beat Dilshad says in the upper bedroom, in midst of her finding out about AsYa. 😆 This is what makes it so readable. The relatability of it all. ⭐️

Finally Zoe has to confront Tanveer, and with the whole truth, not the half unsaid ones. Tanveer is tenacious in holding on, and that can be a good thing many times, and yet the same tenacity can be draining too. Zoe has found out the hard way, and all her matchmaking enterprises have come back to leave a bite of distaste in the new truth that has come out. This was tough. She went through it and is now past it, like Asad said, let's look forward and think of what next. I like it how he teams up with her in subtle ways, right from Ghar to photography. The little things. And that last part of haan main bhi.😉 Them sharing their dinner, Anwar giving his best shot at annoying Zoe before everyone finds out, the terrace, just some of the things that makes us want to read this again.

They will find a way to make it, they have always done it, and they will do this again. Looking forward to next chapter, it is getting closer to the end. 😒

And yes there is something about Dilshad as a mother and her relation with her children in QH, it begs to be returned to again and again. This part is truly cherished in many ways in your stories, even if she is not Asad's mother in this one, she still is in so many ways. 😳