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Sphinx.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: Shalini09
What happened to Bhanu???...😕 and Uruvi is such a cuteheart!...lovely update di! 😃

oh!! tanks shalu dear😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Reserved...amazing update Bhanu, Uruvi nd everyone expressed so brilliantly...I have manyy things to say...Reserved

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You echoed my thoughts on reading ur previous update I built the same guessing she was infatuated by Karna bt never loved him...there was always a fine line bet their friendship nd defination of Love jst like it was Krishus and Drau's😛
I thought Bhanu exactly the same after reading MJ like u penned😲 I loved this co- incidence😲

I just want to know what inspired u to write this complete story?? I completely get stuck reading ur updates❤️ u know yesterday my stomach really went cold... like PH of HCl in my stomach in my stomach neutralized😳 it was mindblowwing⭐️⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aarti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

👏 Just one word for your writting style :EXCELLENT..
Loving it.. Superb update Dhivi di..

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
pls unres soon😭

done😊

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#318

Wonderful update Dhivii 👏 😳 🤗

I expected that Uruvi's face will drain colour once she heard Bhanu's swayamvar revelation and that's what she did...u have penned well how Uruvi was restless and her mind and heart could not reason with the revealation she had so anticipated to bring & instead brought a sour taste in her life..😭

Poor Karn...he was all in mood to make love to his dear wifey and make up all for missing in action with her all this while...but uruvi's outburst of emotion made his confess how he felt on his act was expected from him...again beautiful description in this part too ⭐️

Dury cooking & Bhanu watching...God...when I read this part I said OMG did I read it right & re-read it & when Dury secretly steal kiss from Bhanu unknown that they were watched by Uruvi...my God I was 😆 😆...I found it very cute & funny😳

I love Bhanu...how she make Uruvi understand her remaining doubts 😊

I loved the Kuruvi moments in the kitchen 😳...cute as always 😆

Hhmmm...now whom did Dury love the most ...I know its his beloved mitr Karn

Continue soon Dhivii 😛

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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#319

@Artii !! Thank u so much dear

@ Sansi!! Love u Darling!! I have not read mj..but my perception is no one can skip karna in swayamvar..but I respect dury banu love ..and I wrote this banu's swayamvar part for a purpose ..I thought I can make my readers to understand it in the flow of story..if u did not understand it..then its my fault (tears) and what made inconvenience in ur stomach dear?? Can u elobrate.what inspired me to write this?? Nothing but a karnali..

@ hemu !! Thank u so much for ur lovely comments dear..yes I want u people to expect or predict my characterization and duty loves his mitr more..naaahhh!!! I have a problem in net connection..do I relied in one comment..sorry