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Posted: 10 years ago

Previous update on page 30

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A Night Out


Tara's one month leave was getting over the next day, so she thought to ask Dadaji and Mrityunjay about joining college again.


After dinner when Mrityunjay and Dadaji were sitting in the hall discussing some project.

She entered the hall and said, "I want to ask both of you a question if you are free?"
"Tell us Bahu, we are always free to listen to you."


"Tomorrow my college leave is ending. So I want to know can I rejoin my job? Only if you don't have a problem."
"I don't have any problem Bahu. Ask him if he has any."


Mrityunjay was pretending to be busy in studying a file but his full attention was on the conversation when Dadaji rolled the decision ball in his court. He replied, "As you wish Tara. I don't have any problem."
"Ok, then I am joining."
Dadaji clapped at her decision.

*****


Next morning, Tara was ready for college and was about to leave when Mrityunjay asked her, "How are you going?"

After thinking for a while, Tara replied, "I will take an auto."


"Come with me. Your college is on my way to the office. And in the afternoon Joseph will come and pick you."

"Ok," she replied.


The car stopped at the entrance of the college.
"Joseph, come after 2 pm."
Saying this, Tara got down from the car. She was closing the car door when Mrityunjay said, "All the best Tara."
She smiled and said, "Thank you."


At the college, Yug, Adi, Bunty, Vasu, Meethi and Nandu were happy to see their teacher back. Tara was happy too. In the afternoon, Joseph reached the college after 2 pm.



"Joseph, you are so punctual."
"Ma'am, actually sir was quite worried that I should reach on time. He reminded me nearly five times after reaching office."
She smiled and sat in the car.


After reaching home and going to her room, Tara switched on the radio and listened to the show "Dil se dil tak" while doing her college work. Evening time, as usual, she was at the stable practising horse riding and Mrityunjay was guiding her. At night, they dinned and slept.


*****



Every day Mrityunjay and Tara would leave home together. Tara used to come home by 3 pm and after coming home did her college work, evening time horse riding and at night after dinner sleep. This became their routine.


After Aradhana's death, Mrityunjay again started to do extra work on the weekends. Tara spent most of her time with Dadaji on the weekends. Dadaji, seeing Mrityunjay returning to his old routine, called him to his room.


"What happened Dadaji?"

"Nothing."

"Then why did you call me all of a sudden?"

"You know now you are married, and you have responsibilities to be fulfilled."

"I am not able to understand what you want to say Dadaji."

"You will never understand. I am saying you are a husband too. You need to take your wife out of this house, spend some time with her. On weekends also you don't have time for her."

Mrityunjay was quietly listening to him.

Dadaji continued, "I hope now you understand what I mean."
Mrityunjay nodded his head in yes.


Mrityunjay kept thinking where to take Tara. After coming home on Saturday evening and after much thinking, he asked Tara, "Are you free?"

"Yes," Tara replied in a confused tone.

"Can we go out tonight?"

"Yes," she replied chuckling.


After 7 pm they left home and Mrityunjay took her to a hotel.


At the hotel, Tara was not comfortable. She found every eye in the hotel was on her and it was obvious as everyone wanted to know who was the woman Mr. Mrityunjay Singh Shekhawat was with.
His marriage was a secret and only some of his close people knew about his marriage.
Seeing Tara uncomfortable, they left the hotel immediately after dinner.


They were returning when Tara suddenly asked Joseph to stop the car. She got down and asked Mrityunjay to get down as well. She took him to the beach and sat there.
Mrityunjay sat next to her on the beach.
The cool breeze of the ocean, the gushing sound of its tides was refreshing for her.
She was looking at the sea lovingly.
Mrityunjay was also finding this environment soothing.
They were quietly sitting, and watching the waves coming and going along with the twinkling of the stars.


Mrityunjay was secretly gazing at Tara from the corner of his eyes.


Tara saw a corn stall. She went there and bought two roasted corns for themselves. They enjoyed eating them. The corn stall's radio was playing a song.
~Bade achhe lagte hai
Kyaa ????
Yeh dharti, yeh nadiyaa, yeh raina aur ?
Aur tum

O o o Majhi re
Jaiyo piya ke desh

Hum tum kitne paas hai
Kitne door hain chand sitare
Sach poochho to maan ko jhoote lagte hain yeh saare

Magar sacche lagte hai
Yeh dharti yeh nadiyaa, yeh rainaa aur ?
Aur tum mm mmm~


They walked on the beach talking about the sea, the breeze and many other random things. After that night, on every weekend they came to the beach to spend their evening.


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Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago
kumari27 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update👏
U r truely a good writer.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow... Very nice update...
Quite romantic too...
The last part was so beautiful...
The beach scene and the background song were so perfectly mixed up with each other...
You are indeed a great writer...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just Beutiful M,,,! Loved it,!,,!,,
but why just sleep after dinner?.?.?.
Can go to roof top or pool side and have some romance!,,,
sorry just kidding,,,,
Loved the way the story is progressing,,,,
please update soon...Will be waiting for ur update...
and a very big tha5 for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
bahut badhiya update hai archu bahina😊 per next wale me gaddi thodi aage badhiyo,ee ma toh poora time kewal ghoommi karne me nikal gaya😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Superb update👏

U r truely a good writer.


Thanks for ur love 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Wow...<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Very nice update...</font>

<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Quite romantic too...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The last part was so beautiful...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The beach scene and the background song were so perfectly mixed up with each other...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">You are indeed a great writer...</font>
<font face="Geneva, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Update soon...</font>


Thanks for your flattering words 😳
I hope iss fiction ke future updates bhi tumhe pasand aaye 😊
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Just Beutiful M,,,! Loved it,!,,!,,

but why just sleep after dinner?.?.?.
Can go to roof top or pool side and have some romance!,,,
sorry just kidding,,,,
Loved the way the story is progressing,,,,
please update soon...Will be waiting for ur update...
and a very big tha5 for the pm...

hehehe 😆
U r right they can go any where but here writer is lazy to write such beautiful scene 😛 😉
Thanks for your love 😃
Updating soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_28

<font size="3">bahut badhiya update hai archu bahina😊 per next wale me gaddi thodi aage badhiyo,ee ma toh poora time kewal ghoommi karne me nikal gaya😉😆 </font>

hahaha 😆
Ajee thoda intezaar ka maza lijeye 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Previous update on page 32

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On A Smooth Way...




Life was going on a smooth road with Tara and Mrityunjay finding good friends in each other.



One day after returning home, as usual, Tara was listening to her now favourite radio show "Dil se dil tak" when a girl called the RJ.


The RJ said, "So Ma'am what do you want to listen to and why?"


The girl said, "I want to listen to ‘~Kaun mera tu mera kya tu lage~', and the reason is I met someone a few years ago. He is my best friend and I think I am falling for him. And this song describes my condition very well."


The RJ said, "Oh ho! Ok so let's listen to this song, and if you are falling in love you will find it describing your situation too."


~Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage

Kyun tu baandhe, mann se mann ke dhaage

Bas chale naa kyun mera tere aage

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage

Kyun tu baandhe, mann se mann ke dhaage~


Tara closed her eyes to feel the song. Slowly she started singing this song along with the radio.


Today Mrityunjay came home early. When he was just outside his room, he heard two voices coming from inside. He slowly opened the door and saw Tara singing. The way she was singing, she was one with that moment like a free bird who was not worried about what was happening around her. Mrityunjay leaned on a nearby wall and adored her. The way she moved her hand and the curves around her red lips were enchanting.


~Chhod kar na tu kahin bhi door ab jaana

Tujhko kasam hai

Saath rehna jo bhi hai tu

Jhooth ya sach hai, ya bharam hai

Apna banaane ka jatan kar hi chuke ab to

Baiyan pakad kar aaj chal

Main doon bata sabko

Kaun mera, mera kya tu laage~



After the song finished, Tara laughed at herself thinking how silly she was and turned. Her eyes opened wide, shocked at seeing Mrityunjay standing at the door smiling. She immediately turned away embarrassed.


Mrityunjay came to her and said, "Relax Tara. You sing pretty well."


"Thanks."


"Do you like singing?"


"No, I just like this show and listen to it every day and today..."


He smiled seeing her embarrassed.


Tara was surprised to see Mrityunjay home early.


"Is everything ok? You are home so early."


"Oh yes, I am fine. Just my head was paining and so I thought to take rest. Can you please give me that box?" He pointed to the medicine box kept in his closet.


Tara immediately grabbed it and came near him. Seeing so many medicines in that box, she was confused and asked, "Whose medicines are these?"


"Oh...they are mine," he said taking one.


Tara wanted to ask why he needed so many medicines but thought it better to ask about it some other day.


After taking the medicine Mrityunjay wanted to sleep.


Tara asked, "May I give you a head massage? It will give you instant relief."


Seeing this might help in relieving his headache, he agreed.


The radio was still on, and playing in low volume.


~Pal do pal ki hi kyun hai zindagi

Iss pyaar ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi

Toh khuda se maang loon mohalat main ek nayi

Rehna hai bas yahan ab door tujh se jaana nahi

Jo tu mera humdard hai jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhana har dard hai jo tu mera humdard hai ~


Tara put his head on her lap and started massaging it, and she was right. Her massage therapy was very effective, his headache reduced in just a few minutes. Her soft fingers were playing with his long hair.


He was imagining how Tara would be looking right now, with a smile on her red lips and a spark in her eyes.

~Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri mujhko inhi se umeed mili

Chahe kare koi sitam yeh jahaan in mein hi hai sada hifaazat meri

Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

Jo tu mera humdard hai jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhana har dard hai jo tu mera humdard hai ~


To see whether his imagination was right, he half opened his eyes slowly, and he was right in the way he had imagined Tara and she was acting exactly like it. Before Tara could catch him in the act, he closed his eyes again.


Tara's head massage and music worked wonders. Mrityunjay was asleep after five minutes.



After Mrityunjay fell asleep, Tara started to find out about those medicines and was shocked to see the usage of those.

"These are antidepressants! Mrityunjay takes them! I need to talk to Dadaji about this." She went to Dadaji.

"Dadaji, I want to know something."


On hearing a slightly scared and confused Tara, Dadaji indicated her to come and sit.


"What happened Bahu? You seem a little worried. Is everything alright?"


"Dadaji, Mrityunjay….” She was not sure how to ask about those medicines.


Hearing Tara's confused tone, he got worried.

"What happened? Is he all right?"


"He is fine. He was just having a headache and now he is sleeping."

Dadaji was relieved after hearing this.


"Why did you become restless Dadaji? Is there anything that I don't know?" she asked keeping the medicines in front of him.


"Yes, Tara. I think Dr. Fahim will be a better option to explain this." Saying this, he called Dr. Fahim.

"Bahu, he is out of town but will be here tomorrow. Wait till tomorrow and you will get answers to all your questions."


Tara was a little tensed seeing Dadaji's reaction.

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Edited by Archi21 - 5 years ago

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