TaaRey OS In The City Of Love

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hii guys after a long time I am writing a os
i got this idea when i was watching pheneas and ferb
do tell me if u guys lie it or not
happy reading

TaaRey OS In The City Of Love

"taani,taani...baby wake up..."said rey waking up taani who was peacefully sleeping in his arms

In reply she just hugged him tightly and whishpered in his chest"nope,i want to sleep like this whole day..with your arms around me...so that when i wake up you dont go away like daily..."

"baby..do you remember today is your flight to paris???"asked rey stroking her hairs

"hmm..."said taani but after a second she open her eyes with a jerk to found a pillow intead of rey's chest

"oh ghosh not again...phirse rey ke dream mai kho gai...(looking at the clock)oh no its 8,9 baje to meri flight hai paris ki...oh god please aaj meri flight na miss hojaye..plz plz..thodi deer tak flight ko pakad kar rakhna"said taani praying to god and immediately ran to get ready and leave for airport

"just some more time and i will be there with you,I hope you like my surprise,but i am scared if i tell you about my feelings will you break our friendship??i hope not,i wish not,but i cant force you for anything,its your life,your choice,but today i am going to tell you today how much i love you,how much you affect me,what is your place in my life...i just cant believe i have fall in love with you,with whom i have never meet,whom i have just video chat,who is just my online friend"thought taani but her thought process was broken by the announcement made by the airhostess of landing,ya she caught her flight and now she was about to land in paris to meet his online bestfriend or say lover

As taani landed in paris the city of love she switched off the flight mode of her mobile and her mobile immediately started ringing with message tunes,this all messages read"Good morning sunshine""why is your phone switched off??""are you fine??"is there any problem??""should i come there??"etc etc by the love of her life rey

she smiled reading those messages and immediately called him,with in the first ring he pick up the call and showered taani with lots of questions"where are you??why was your phone switched off??why are you not picking my calls on landline??is there any problem??why are you not saying anything at least say something i am scared"

"breathe first of all and relax,tum mujhe bolne doge to mai bolugi na..."said taani with a giggle

"oh ya..sorry...but mai daar gaya tha..mujhe tension ho rahi thi thats y"said rey with an opologzing tone

"its ok..mai thik hu its just that aaj jogging jaldi chali gayi thi,and mere mobile ki battery dead ho gai thi..thats y...nothing else"said taani closing her eyes in a fear he might not caught her lie

"oh thank god you are fine"said rey breathing a sigh of relief

"so...tum kya kar rahe ho"asked taani

"i have just come at theatre for drama rehersals"said rey

"ohk then u enjoy i will talk to you later,bye"said taani with a smile

"bye"said rey and again joined his friends in rehersals

Soon taani reached the theatre where rey was,taani knows it because one time he told her the exact address where they were rehersing,she started searching rey here and there as there were lots of people,she was searching him when she felt a strong pull from her back she felt rey was there,she turn around and saw rey there,he was laughing with his friends,as she saw him she just wanted to go and hug him she had planned so much when they meet how she will react,what will she say,but it was all waste as right now she was going weak on her kness,she was just standing at a distance from rey,he didnt saw her,but she can see him clearly she was admiring him when a girl came and hugged him and moreover that to tightly and also rey was responding back with the same passion,taani saw this scene and she was burning with anger when to put the salt on it the girl kissed him,seeing this she just turn around,her eyes started breaming with tears,she stopped herself to cry in public and ran out from the theatre

taani was walking through the streets of the paris like a life less soul,from when she herself didnt know as it was morning she saw him and now it was dark,she was feeling hurted that he leaved her,but one second they are not togther then how can he leave her but he lied to her that he doesnt have a girlfriend,why he did that??she came to gave him a surprise but instead of it she got a surprise or say a shock,in the city of love she came to meet her love but she lost him,taani was thinking all and this and crying continuosly while walking,suddenly at a point she felt her view getting black and she started feeling dizzy,she was about to fell down when someone caught her

taani slowly opened her eyes with her hand on head and saw rey sitting there on the opposite side of the bed looking at her with anger,she looked at him and got shocked

"tum mere ghar mai kya kar rahe ho??"asked taani sitting on the bed

"oh hello,mai nai..tum mere ghar par ho"said rey which was a matter of fact

"what the...to mai yaha kese ayi??"asked taani getting confused

"u were about to fell on the road when i caught you and take you with me at my home..."said rey solving her confusion

"kyu lekar aye mujhe...acha hota vaha par hi padi rehti.."said taani with anger

"yeh kya bol rahi ho taani??ek to tum yaha par agai n mujhe bataya bhi nahi...upar se mere calls n messages ka reply bhi nahi kar rahi ho subah ke baad"said rey feeling disappointed

"to mai aur kyu karu??mai ek jhuthe ke messages and call ka reply kyu karu???"said taani giving him a disgusted look

"kaun jhutha???mai jhutha...ek second maine tumse kya jhuth bola??"asked rey being confused

"yahi that you dont have a girlfriend"said taani getting up from the bed

"ya i dont have a girlfriend"said rey also getting up from the bed

"rey please dont lie maine sab kuch dekh liya hai"said taani and turn around and found her purse and cell on the table and immediately she took it and started towards the door

rey immediately stopped her by coming in her way but still she was not ready to stop so atlast he took her hand and turn it on her back"kya dekh liya tha??"asked rey looking in her eyes

"you kissing that girl...in the theatre"said taani looking in his eyes with anger

hearing that rey got shocked,he didnt expected taani to not trust him,his grip started loosening on her but again he got a strong grip on her and managed to ask"so this is what you think about me right??itna hi tha tumhara trust mujh par,humare is dosti se jyada vale relation par??"

"rey maine tum par humesha trust kiya...but when i saw that girl kissing you...i felt betrayed by you...i felt my heart broking in to pieces...you broke my heart rey"said taani with tears in her eyes looking at him,hearing that he loosen his grip on her hand and cupped her face

"i broke your heart????like really i broke your heart...for once taani ask your heart whom i have broken can i lie to you???can i broke your trust???look in to my eyes can you see anyone else,mai janta hu taani we both never said each other about our true feelings but we both know how much we feel for each other and its definately not friendship but its more than that"asked rey with tears in his eyes still cupping her face

It was then taani realised how wrong she was...how wrong she was to doubt on him..to doubt on them...he can never do this,immediately her hands hold rey's hand which were cupping her face and she said"I am sorry rey...for that momment i thought i lost you...when you held that girl close to you...i felt...i felt its only my right to be like that with you...i felt...i..."

"shush...you dont need to explain i know you...yo dont need to"said rey with a smile

taani also smiled hearing him and immediately hugged him with all the love she has,he responded to the hug with the same passion,both were not ready to leave each other but atlast rey broke the hug and kissed her on forhead"I love you taani"taani just gave him a tooth to tooth smile and said"i know"

"tabhi shak kiya..."said rey but in reply he got a light slap on his chest by taani

"ouch...itna jhagda karne ke baad bhi shanti nai mili jo mara..."said rey with his hands on her waist

"Mr. tum isike layak ho"said taani putting her hands around his neck

"elaborate please"demanded rey

"are jo bhi ho but that girl kissed you"said taani looking at him with anger

"are...fir vahi baat,taani remembered i told i am doing a lovestory act in my college drama as hero of the play...so isnt that obvious i have to kiss the heroine...n also for your kind information it was not a kiss,it was just an act...i didnt kiss that girl at all"said rey with irritation

"jobhi ho fake to fake...but kiss to thi na"said taani getting out from his grip and turning around

"are...vo kiss nai thi"said rey in a unbelievable tone

"vo fake to fake but kiss thi..n you cant kiss anyother girl than me..."said taani looking at him with pout

"ohh..esa kya..but that girl intiated the kiss and mai tumhe kese kiss karu tum to itna durr khadi ho"said rey but the truth was the distance between them was less then a feet

"tum bhi to pass aa sakte ho na"Said taani creating some more distance

"acha"said rey lessing the distance

rey was coming a step forward and taani was moving a step backwards,after 4-5 steps taani fell on the bed,and rey purposely fell on her taani indicated a no with her head and rey indicated a yes,and soon he put his hard lips on her soft one intiating the kiss,which was carried away by taani,immediately her hands went towards his hair and she pulled them,increasing his passion,he started kissing her more,rey moved his tongue on her lips indicating her to give him acess in his mouth,but she was taani instead of giving him entry she started testing his paitence,but he was also rey he put his one hand in her t-shirt and due to shock taani opened her mouth and he gained entry,both were still kissing,no one wanted to break it but atlast they broke it due to lack of breathe,his hands were still in her t-shirt and her hands were now on his back rubbing it,rey put his forhead on hers painting hard and said"i love you taani""i love you too rey"said taani catching her breathe with a smile

come back guys from the dream world
sorry to break your trance but os is over
now jaldi jaldi type your BIG comments
i just cant wait to read them
If possible can any 1 pls send PM as i dont have much taarey fans in my list
For further PMs of my work add Mansi_PMs
Love
Mansi

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skfirdous thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
wow soo cute os
loved it
SaNa_sTaR thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Awesome OS!
Really nicely written
Taani going to meet Rey and her misunderstanding
And the she ended up waking up in his house
Hayye...loved their confession <3
And the kiss 😳
Superb!
Keep writing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Amazing os...
Beautifully written...
Keep writing like this...
Jasmine_ash thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Oh chocopie it was cute one :)
yup read both version.
Its really amazing.
It may be Dream, caring, misunderstanding and confession all are lovely :)
thanks for beautiful TaaRey version :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Amazing nd lovely os
Loved it
Taarey confession was adorable
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
beautiful and never ending OS
loved it
meenu_taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
lovely lovely lovely
os too good
very well written
amazing
keep writing
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
So cute and lovely os
Love it sooo much
putti_taarey thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Superb...
Love taani
Starting was too funny...
Ending was too good..
Taarey was hot..
Again misunderstanding bought them closer...
Lovely os

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