ASYA FF - Battle of Memories *Complete* Notes on Pg 90 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awow awow asuper update
Looking forward to next update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
loved asya moments...asad was enjoying his wife's company...
but boom dilshad ...gave him a shocking surprise ...
waiting to see asya's reaction
update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

*****

Part 15

Episode 16

Asad, "Marriage? For me?"

Everyone turned to look at Zoya who can't stop laughing.

Dilshad, "Who is this?"

Asad, "This is Zoya, ammi. My...", falling short for words and realising that he was in the middle of big problem. Zoya wouldn't agree to be his wife and his ammi won't leave him until he has a wife. What was he going to do?

Zoya came foward, "Hello, ammi. I'm Asad's friend. I'm here for some business work."

Ammi, "Chaliya. We can go in and talk"

With Zoya in earshot distance, Ammi, "Ek minute Asad. This shirt that Zoya is wearing...isn't it the one I got you for your birthday?"

Both of them look at each-other realising that they might have to do a lot of explaining. Ammi, "Hai na?"

Asad, "Who...actually...nahi ammi. This is another color. Can't you see?"

Ammi shook her head before heading inside.

*****

Zoya peacefully sleeping in the guest room. The window wide open and the curtains fluttering with drizzles after the rain.

*Creak*

Asad slowly crept inside the room, locked the door and went near her bed. The moonlight fell on her making her face glow. He slowly walked from the foot of the bed towards the canopy.

There being no power in the house he failed to notice a night table that fell down making Zoya wake up with a start. Zoya turned startled towards the sound to see a shadow over her.

*Muffle*

He covered her mouth with his hands, "Sh. Sh. Sh. It's me. Asad." and slowly released his grip.

She calmed down and whispered, "What are you doing here?"

Asad, "How are you peacefully sleeping with no current?"

Zoya stood up and went near the window and spoke gazing at the sky, "Such beautiful breeze. How can one not sleep? In fact, in many years, today was the day I got a beautiful sleep only to be disturbed by you", she turned to accuse him but her heart stopped in repulse when she saw that he stood right behind her, "Oh my God, Asad! You scared me! Tell me, why are you here in this room?"

Asad, "We should get out of here. I can't stay and get married."

Zoya teasingly, "Aww. But I wanted to see your marriage. It will be fun."

Asad, "Acha. I will go straight to her and tell that we are married."

Zoya, being serious, "What? No!"

Asad just went closer to her with a playful smirk, she went backwards hitting against the window. He caged her in between his arms holding the window grills.

Zoya, "Asad...no..."

Asad, "See. If I get married now, it will be a fraud because I'm already married to you. Getting divorce would take one year. We can't file it because that will also account to fraud of getting citizenship. So you see, we kind of have to put up with each-other."

Zoya, "Are you telling me that you are not going to leave me?" That question struck him hard. Asad closed his eyes remembering their past.

"Promise me that you will never leave me Asad." kept echoing in his thoughts.

"Asad, leave me please." Zoya shook him to reality.

Asad held her cheeks. She looked into his teary eyes that sparkled. "Zoya!"

Unclear as to whether to push him away or draw him closer; she held her breath as her heart continued to beat faster. Her eyes widened as Asad leaned forward and...

(To be continued...)

Part 17

*****

A pretty short update, bear with me!

Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mine😉
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Well Gisel it was Freeking Awesome Update
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I love it❤️
but it was too short
anyway Please CONTINUE SOON&Little Long Update
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

In Sunheri's words "Aisa bhi koi karta hai kya?" To stop at and...

Yeah pretty short but we got AsYa scene; Dilshad asking about the shirt; Asad's wo actually when he is in a fix

All in all we got everything so good update

Thank you for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy...Gisel.. 😊
Thanx for the P.M...
Well a very good but short update...
Liked the part...
Continue soon... 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi nice update 👏 asad got in her room by window 😆 continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Poor Asad in a fix don't know what to do
Bigamy
Dilshad recognized the shirt zoya wears
But she said she is Asad friend
Did he go to introduce her as his wife he should have
But he knew she wouldn't have like it
Aww he came to her room he can't stay away
He is ready to run but zoya teases him she want to see his marriage
So he tells abt fraud if he marry someone else and fraud if he divorce her
So all in all she is stuck with him at least for a year
But she might want to keep him for longer
If he is leaning in to do what I think
So sad she is asking him to leave her and he is remembering her asking him never to leave her
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pretty short but I still love it
But why you hv to stop there
I m sure you make us think something n you will go somewhere else
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊
asad's marriage...
dislshad's doubts
zoya's confusion...
update soon

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