MG STORY *TAINTED ANGEL* updated part 8@102 18.4.15 - Page 40

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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE GEET TRIED RUNNING AWAY NOT KNOWING A BIGGER MONSTER WAS OUT TO GET HER LOVED THE UPDATE GLAD MAAN REACHED IN TIME TO SAVE HER THANKS FOR THE PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Waiting for Dev's true color to reveal infornt of Geet soon...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the PM. nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyy so finally finally finally ive completed reading dis again nw
Hawww yeh geet is tooo much aur kitna bhagegi though can't blame her much abt dis kon apne kidnapper se bhagna nahi chahta
Geet aankhen khol k dekho dis kiddnapper iss damn sweet cutd hot xyz😆 i hope she realises soon dat he is her well wisher
But i must say smarty geet kya plan kiya bhagne ka faida utaya maan k humbleness ka really smart move
Sad sad maan ko itna zor se maara n phurrr gayab gaadi leke
Im actually surprised to c many people easily recognising her strange
Actually its a sick thought to c just becausw she is a bar dancer doesnt mean that she is free for everybody to use her😡
Good dey deserved dat frm maan kitna bhi kyu na bhage aakhir geet ko maan k pass hi aana hota hai
Dat dev toh i run out of words to give him some nice gaali's🤬 he ll get one day wat he deserves bohot jald woh zor ka jhatka milne wala hai i ll b waiting for dat make sure his punishment is really gonna b severe
Aacha kaam kiya maan ne haath bandh k 😆 cant trust geet nw kahin kood gayi toh lolzzz
Grt part yaaa ab nw im excited abt d next partss
N a biggg walaaa sorrry for beingg dis much late
U r a sweetheart love u
Bada wala🤗 superb keep rockinggg
I ll Try to read all others n comment b4 u update again especially ishqiya soo sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part Geet ran bt Maan saved her from those men
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Posted: 10 years ago





BANNER CREDITS GOES TO GUNJAR AND PRIYA...RESPECTIVELY!!!

Heyyaa all ..how r u guys..


First of all i apologize for not replying ur comments..and i haven't even liked ..them. I m really really sorry guys..things were going a bit too fast with me..and m not able to catch up. I don't have stable net connection..due to which updates are irregular..i update my stories when i m at my work place..lol...Thats y I post two updates at a time..!!whenever I m free with my students I bug my frnd to help me..in posting!! But i assure u that i have read all ur comments and u guys always make me smile...always!!!

Thus cant send u guys pms...Once again sorry for this !! But i m active on facebook..as i can use it through my cell..so please add me up to revive updates on facebook..!! I definitely will reply all ur comments there...


I will send u all pms...once i have a steady net connection..until them i m helpless..!!
Thats all i had to say..go ahead read the update and enjoy!!


PART 5



" we have long journey to chase ...here have something.." Maan uttered. He kept the packet on her lap...and leaned closer to untie her hands...but she pulled it away..


" I wont eat anything..until u here me out..and answer my questions.."
she stated stubbornly.
They had halted before a dabba.. Its been 2 hours since Maan was driving..


Her obstinate attitude was insinuating her veins...This was way to much for her. She had made up her mind ..unless he discloses the whole story.. she wont let herself trust him..even if her heart told her too..


Maan flared his nose.. His patience was slipping..


" Look geet..i already mentioned earlier i m not here to harm u..."
He began sorting out the rope..without glancing her straining his eyes on performing his task...


Geet pressed her lips tightly..and wriggled..
." i need to knw..y u cant harm me..u saved me..i agree that but what if its for ur own selfish reasons...and then ull let me perish..."

" geeet..." Maan yelled flabbergast..holding her shoulders..staring her with blazing eyes..
She swallowed a lump..allowing her tear to flow..


" i need to knw..i have someone..who was waiting for me...the day u kidnapped me..maan..i..i was on the verge to start my new life with him...please tell me..whats this..i cant it anymore.."
she was broke..all her emotions..came crashing down..

Maan recoiled his hands...looking away.


" i knw..with dev..U cant trust me..geet i wonder what makes u trust him??"
He now looked her in the eye..

She sniffed frowning.." what do u mean.."

" i mean what i just said..how can u blindly trust dev?? What makes u think he wont despise u like everyone??" he said in a rasp voice

Geet pushed him exasperated

" how dare u say that..." she growled

Maan grasped her elbow drawing her close..she squirmed under him..

" Believe me geet..he too desired just ur body..In fact his intentions were beyond that.."

" Why should i believe ur words??who are u to mee??just because u saved me from those rat asses...i don't owe u my life...U r not even ready to divulge the truth..." She retorted furiously shoving his hands


Maan closed his eyes...sighing heavily..Once letting his guard down..

" I m forbidden to speak the entire truth geet..please trust me once..i wont let it regret it..."

Geet stared him briefly before saying

" take me to dev..once..maan show me his real face and i promise i wont say a word..ill follow u everywhere...thats my word to u ..."

Maan clasped the steering wheel tightly..

" prove me..that he is not what i think..."

Maan shook his head...and grabbed her hands and tied them again..

Geet appeared appalled with his move..

u wont stop it na...stop it...dont waste ur vigour on this..ull have to try very very hard to prove me..." he replied settling on the driver's seat and igniting the engine ..

" i m just demanding an answer..for this...If u don't answer me..i won't stop either..." she uttered firmly

" for u it might me nothing ...but it means a lot to me...prove him culprit and urself innocent .." she spoke tearfully..

Maan spun his head to gaze her.. And after a moment they were on their way to dev's paradise.


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Dirty songs were playing...adding the uncouthness in favour of the men who lustfully pan their eyes on every young girl..

" Sir here is ur s**t for the day...enjoy.." He winked..smiling slyly..

The man..returned the same..and led the girl inside the room. Dev strides downstairs...walking with pride...

" after an hour visit the room again and ask to pay extra for another hour..m sure the bas***d wont deny.." he whispered to of his men..while pouring himself a drink..

They nodded and dispersed..

" heyyy...darling..." A girl clad in bikini top...and shorts...almost appearing nude..hugged him running her hand on his chest..

Dev smirked...and rolled..clasping her waist pulling her..

" hey bitch..." he bit her earlobe while she hissed throwing her arms around his neck..

" where are u these days..umm.." he spoke in midst of her neck..nipping it..

" umm...u added my customers...hence m travelling more in Mumbai these days..." she moaned..

" u are in demand...s**t...thats good..." he stuck his tongue in her cleavage...

The place did not even had curtains... Men f**ked s**ts openly..some respected and high class were escorted upstairs in decent rooms..which added extra money..

IT was DEV'S PARADISE a bar come brothel situated in delhi. Dev was running this place..along with his men. He was one of the most powerful tyrant in this field..hence rich men approached him.

She stood rooted..numb on the spot. Her tears did not need her permission to flow...and wet her cheeks.. " dev..." she gasped inaudibly..trembling..

Maan squeezed his eyes..in twinge. He knew this would hurt her..so he avoided her confronting this reality... But her words made him realize.. how deeply she was dwelled with this guy..and screeching her away wont change her feelings..

Maan clasped her shoulders..slightly pulling her closer..

They were watching dev..bluntly making out.. Both were dressed in pants and shirts..followed by huge hat..concealing their identity.. Maan preferably chose a lone corner where they could observe dev..

" umm...let me go..its time for my customer..." the girl whispered..biting dev's lips

" hmm..u s**t go..ill bang u tom night..." and left her ..before giving her a long smooch..

The girl smiled wickedly adjusting her short dress..or two piece..and walked out...

She strolled towards another corner..and then after a moment arrived at their corner ..

" thanks neelam..thanks a lot.." Maan thanked her with a small smile on his face..

arey nahi u don't need to say thanks...i should be grateful to u ..for helping me out of this hell..thanks maan ji.."

Neelam's words..pricked geet's ears.. she turned towards them

" aisa nahi hai..i m glad i could help u ...and sorry mere wajah se...tumhe..dev k sath ek baar..phir..." he trailed off casting his eyes down tightening his fist..

re" nai...aapne mujhe hna ki jagah ti..ek achi naukri di..uske liye yeh kuch bhi nahi hai...aur hume yeh sab..dev k khilaf sabot jama karne mai hel karenge..mai aur meri sari behne..in kamo mai lag gayi hai..hum bohot jald ADI sir k pass proofs leke paunch jayenge..."

" good...but make sure u guys are careful okay..." Maan implied

" ji...." she nodded and smiled warmly before leaving..

Geet did not hear a word she said...her whole concentration was on the girl..who seemed smiliar to some one..

It was then that it dawned upon her...she was chameli..the girl who was and escort at her previous bar. In fact she had seen her with dev...when he pulled a act of asking such girls to give up...this and earn a respectable bread and butter..

All her instances with dev flashed in front of her eyes..pooling them with more tears.. she collapsed on the ground...making her hat to fell down..and loosening her bun..She found herself in the pit of darkness once again..From her father to dev everyone ..wished to sell her body ..taint her..She smiled with tears..tainted..wasn't she already...tainted..For once in her life she..raised herself to follow the lighten path..But..once again she was despised...


geett..." maan slumped besides her holding her shoulders..

She was numb and blank...Maan cocooned her securely in his arms. He scanned the hall...cautiously and made her stand..

lets leave geet..." he uttered softly tucking her hair...and wiping her tear..

Maan somehow managed dragging her outside.. making her sit properly...he drove for a while and then ...parked..the jeep..

" geeet,..are u okay..." He worriedly asked her..

She blinked her lashes..wiping the trail of tears...on her cheek..and nodded.." i m..fine.." she replied hoarsely

" okay..." he muttered still staring her while she was glancing straight..

" Maan can u get me some water..please..." she slanted her neck..gaping him side ways.. she looked like so strained..yet her eyes had a dangerous glint..

" umm..uh okay..ill get it...Its not in the jeep...will u stay here...so that i can go and buy a bottle of water.."

" hmm..i wont leave maan..i have no place to go...' she mumbled smiling painfully..yet her eyes were stark

It churned his heart..he so much wished to kill dev with his won hands..but he couldn't. He deserved much more worst than that... somewhere her eyes spoke a different story contradicting her face..

he grabbed the jeep keys..and stuffed them in his pockets.. After giving a last look at geet he ran...ahead in search of a shop..to get a bottle of water..

After nearly 15 mins he came back...with a bottle of water and some other stuffs...

" geet...?" he widen his eyes...in horror finding no geet..

" oh my god..geet. shit shit,,," Maan threw the bottle..and kicked tyres.

His kick caused the shutters of the case to open..

Maan's eyes fell on the empty case.." shit where is my pistol ..." he frantically searched his pistol...everywhere..but couldn't find it

" Did..geet take my gun..and...shit...she would have seen the pistol.." He immediately sprang inside on the driver's seat... HE recalled her bleak eyes..shutting his own ...in pain...and drove towards DEV'S PARADISE..

Hey..m here again..to remind u all...

I m done updating ISHQIYA and completed FIRST KISS STORY...

Please visit those thread too...

next ill be updating ON THE DANCE FLOOR

DONT FORGET TO LIKE AND COMMENT!!

Love
sweta



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Posted: 10 years ago
oh god dev itna kameena aur maan ke paas aur koi rasta nahi tha so he showed true colours of dev. poor geet poori tarah se tut gayi hai yeh sab dekhne ke baad.oh god yeh kya hogaya geet missing , kahi wo dev ko maarne tho nahi gayi andhar😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
Suprb update...totlly loved it...
So glad tht geet knw abt dev true color...maan did rgt thng ...i think he is police or sumthn
N end was my fav...wat a twst dear...loved it...
Waitin fr nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Update

Now I'm glad that Geet has seen Dev's true face
but why she ran away maybe she is going to shoot Dev

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Posted: 10 years ago
feeling bad for geet whom she trusted to spend her life is such a b*******
hope she wont get into another mess..where she has gone with the pistol
hope maan reached on time before she do any thing wrong

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