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I don't have any idea update was this much sad until saw your comment You were too mad at maan I guess in this update you will love him trust me and hate ...
GK yead it was not finished at just wait and watch
CuteTommy
Very soon revelation will be there I meant very soon thanks for lovely comment
...RIDDHIMA..
GK had many gray shades you know
The girl who don't have anyone who didn't get love thinking about others was impossible. If you forget she used to get night mares it was tough for her to believe anyone so forget about thinking others
Mark my word geet will make u amazed in upcoming
I haven't revealed who is mansee at you didn't even remember that 😵
idunno
the song you mentioned wow i love it
sanum23
I really hope you will love this update see i brought surprise
CutieTeju
😆 i havent revealed that one who is mansee guess guess she is in too much pain none can ack anything when they were in pain choco 😳
Rami92
hey you happy to see you commenting brifely rather than few words thanks for sticking with me re
dumas
Maan havent confessed and it was not his mistake u see if mansee was fine he would be doing it
yeah curse me not maan 😆
Part 52
Happy
Maaneet Marriage anniversary to all
It
was coincidence in my story maaneet confession happened like this I felt like
there marriage was done
Feeling
too much happy
"Aniee come on all already left long
back we need to reach there" Dev called them from half of steps. Aniee got mini
heart attack watching the steps ahead. "Now I believe all need to work hard
equally to reach god" Aniee commented. Steps were very long as the temple was
situated on hill area away from city noise and pollution.
"Geet come on bahut hua rona dhona now
we should get going" Rahul offering his hand to geet while checking time in his
watch. Geet not interested in going in but saying no means hurting all
specially Aniee and Rahul she was in fix. Giving up she is about to kept her
hand in his but instead of rahuls she felt his hand touching her. She can never
ever forget his warmth the slight contact was enough to give Goosebumps to her
whole body.
Aniee grinned looking at maan giving
mean looks to him "Acha bhai ab aapki work ka kayal kaun rakegi bolo muje" She
teased him openly as none were there around him. Maan glared at her but
couldn't hold back his stupid cute grin "Hayee maardala if any girl saw him na
forget it they will forget me inke peche padegi" Rahul said dreamily. Maan
laughed to see there never ending teasings,geet struggled to let go her hand
from his hold. He tightened his hold clearly mentioning he is not going leave
her. Geet glared at him but her innocent eyes clearly showed her hurt as well
as longingness. Maan dismissed her fake
anger but saw the deep dark circles around her eyes and the visible the
emptiness in her eyes. Rahul sensed the cold eye war between maaneet, he didn't
even asked anything or said to geet. His bro said he will tell him everything
he will wait until his bro came himself to him.
"Chalo aniee we are unwanted here time
to go" Rahul took aniee away as she clearly understood there is something cooking
in between maaneet was about to ask something.
Bhai what was that I want to talk with
bhai see her condition whats happening I didn't get forgod sake" Aniee was
madly worried for geet. Her pari nain hurted her she know she is not in her
senses, if not geet can never ever do that. She wants to confront maan now. "Listen
meri sherni I know you are worried for both but its love their personal matter
let them sort out" Rahul hugged her side ways to calm her. Aniee nodded knowing
no one had right to talk in between lovers. "Maan bhai bracing himself but I
knew how weak he is when it comes to emotions." She hoped today would be the
last for everyone worries. They went away leaving maaneet alone.
"I am glad you still remember my
existence" She taunted looking away giving her back to him. Maan smiled sadly
as she is talking to him not giving any silent treatment like every time. He
knew she missed him like he did, how??.. he simply don't know but he believed
his heart blindly. Geet was not in a mood to give up he need to give proper
explanation for walking away like that. She wouldn't be this much mad if he
walked away on any other day but he did on that special day.
Geet waited for him to say something
but he didn't it was annoying her. "I can't believe it we haven't met from so
many days kash if it was a dream but nope it was truth" She said wiping away
her tears. These days withouthim was painful she don't have clue how she even
survived. She glanced at him but was taken back to see his smiling face with
crossed arms standing casually. It knocked her senses she lost her lost bit of
patience. Is she looking like a joker or is he playing with her like she is
some doll.
Maan missed her too much his silent
tears within that smiling eyes were prooffor that, but she failed to notice
them. He just want to look at her it was giving soo much peace to his heart. His
soul actually breathing normally as her scent filled the air giving beautiful
feel he never felt until now.
Her silence all ways killed him but
when she is actually saying something he is unable to hear anything but can see
only her, The way her lips swings for every word she says, Her eyes which were
stealing glances at him like a thief. Her open hair splashing at his face like
some mansoon coolbreeze. He is too lost in admiring her a smile automatically
spread on his lips. Geet broke the eye lock looked away feeling unsure of what's
going on totally hurt for his behavior. She is feeling too much mad here she is
crying for him and he is smiling at her??.
"Mr.Khurana what makes you smile at
this sec may I know" She is back to her GK mood.
Maan thought to give her time to bottle
down all her frustration and angry. She is looking too cute and more beautiful with
her puffy nose her innocent eyes actually glaring and complaining to him. Geet
opened her mouth to say something but halted looking his heated gaugeat her
lips. Maan frowned as his full concentration on those petals only. Geet was
about to walk away she couldn't take it anymore but it swift moment felt her
lips being crushed by his.
Maan didn't acknowledged her walking
away nor her discomfort he just want to feel her it was needed like air to
breathe in. Geet was taken back with his sudden kiss, she struggled to get
away. Maan didn't let her broke apart he know if he do he can never ever hold
her back. Both suffered so much it should end today he was determined where she
was determined not to give up. The kiss speaks his love his craving for her, he
showed how much he missed her. She became breathless he broke the kiss giving
her time to adjust, she breathed in relief in hauling his scent deeply. It was
too exotic within no time she felt him kissing her again. This time she wasn't
shocked in fact she waited for this moment. She to missed him hell with her
angry she couldn't hold back more.
They broke apart when he felt she couldn't take more, yeah of course after his
heart content only. she rested her head
on his panting heavilyher mind fully occupied with present act of him.She
smiled with closed eyes feeling the moment true she is mad at him but her stupid
heart and body... she couldn't control them. "I missed you soo much cutie" He
kissed her lips again slightly. She came back to reality hearing loud sounds of
drums and temple bell indicating pooja was about to start.
What she did she again gave up for her
heart wish whenshe is supposed to be mad at him but how she can just give up. She
got angry on herself she needs to get away from him. The more she is with him
the more she will lose herself deeply, but he won't give any assurance to her ...never...
It was hurting like anything he even didn't find it was must to explain her for
walking away like that. Kiss he kissed her like nothing happened and she simply
gave up. She backed off keeping hand on her lips unable to believe what just
happened now. She ran away from him scared of herself scared of everything
thing happening around him without her consent.
He watched her running away from him silentlylike
all ways saying nothing. He was determined to get back her any cast, everything
looking baseless when both knew they need each other. Then why her silence her
fears her not opening up to him. Still he needs to confess those magical words
to her he realized how much importance those words holds. Those were not only
words but the love he holds for her. He wants to promise her he will be with
her until his last breathe, can never ever let her go
She was horrified when her body felt
like hanging in air closed her eyes shut not knowing what's happening. Her breathe
got stuck in her throat,breathed in relief when his warm arms surrounded her
lovingly. He tucked her close not giving slight gap for air to pass on in
between them. It tickled her senses badly this cold night not at all helping
her making her go crazy. Maan followed her to saw her going into temple with
trembling steps. She is continuously wiping away her tears he guessed the path
was not clear for her moisted eyes. Without any second thought he reached her
gathered her in his large arms giving warmness to her cold body.
"Why geet why can't you just listen to
me ones?" His voice was heavy she wondered when he even said anything.
Her silence not helping him but he hold
back his losing courage. He returned back to go back he couldn't let himself do
this his heart lost faith on god long back. He don't want to go in to temple he
came here just for her. She snuggled close to him opened her eyes to see he is
about to take her back. She was scared for her chutki reaction and Rahul, Both
did many things to bring her here. Going back at this moment means...hurting them
again she never wants to do it. She already hurted aniee and Rahul he never
ever mentioned butavoiding him without any reason he was. "I want to go inside"
She whisperedit was minutely audible. He stooped in his tracks, how he canforget
she might have faith in god if not he. He cursed his mind for forgetting her but
he don't want to go. Leaving her alone will cost soo much he was in fix
totally. He is not ready to pay anything this night should be the last one for
her fears ad worries.
. She too don't want to go inside and
see goddess it was meaning less as per her view believing rock stone blindly. God
snatched away her life she has nothing to do with him but it's for her loved
ones. If her presence will give happiness to them she can bear any pain.
"Everything for you" He kissed her
cheeks slightly she was thankful for him
He took heavy steps while carrying her
securely she is very vulnerable right now he don't want to let her take any
stress. The steps were soo long and the whole placed was decorated beautifully with
colorful lighting and flowers. He liked it having her in his arms enjoying the
view and the cool breeze making wonders. For a min he forgot he is going to
temple after years "Only for her".
Chanting of mantras started breaking
his trance he was used of all these after coming back to india. "Geet" He
called her lovingly rubbing her soft cheeks with his hard stubbed cheeks. "Hmmm"
She hummed in response enjoying the feel with closed eyes. "I can't live
without you geet" Her heart fluttered in joy with his words. She hurriedly
opened her eyes in fear of missing this moment. She wants to imprint every step
every moment of life with him in her heart. He smiled warmly looking at her
reaction. "I don't know what you feel for me but I can't imagine my life
without you" The chanting of mantras sound got louder filling the whole place
giving holy feel. Tears gathered in her eyes she knew he meant special to her. Listening
all these things from him when he is actually saying she is overwhelmed
totally.She hoped it was not simple dream it couldn't be she can feel his
uneven breathing, his heart beat, his warm hold. She begged her heart and mind
to believe it was not her dream.
"Geet it's not dream listen to me
carefully please" He is sure she would be thinking all this as dream he is
afraid for that. She was shocked how he can know every single thing about her,
nodded in confirmation looking in to his eyes indicating she is hearing him
today. Maan continued his journey ascended another step. "I want to live
with you geet lifelong" He paused "No no
for every birth we have" He finds it was stupid to believe in seven births or
rebirths. What if they had he don't want to take chances he want to be with her
forever.
She chuckled MSK talking about births
it was most funny thing but she loved it like anything. "I want to protect you
from everything from every hurdle from this world" He recalled the moment Vid
attacked her her night mares her pain. He wants to fight over everything to
make her smile, he knew he can do it with his love. His hold tightened indicating
he meant his every word she felt blessed to get him. "I tried allot not to love
you but I couldn't geet I couldn't" Only he knew how much he suffered in thought
of cheating his pari nain by loving geet.
She was curious why he stopped himself
both ignored the word "love" here. "I tried to know the hidden life hidden
secrets of yours I want to know but I couldn't. In this process I hurted you without
my knowledge" He is sorry for doing that. He looked down when her hands landed
on his cheeks.
She nodded for no he blinked his eyes but his tiny drops were
not ready to give up. She is not bothered to knew he wants to know about her.
She actually forgets where she belongs
to being with him, her baby her mansee, her night mares. His entry in her life
happened like magic she forgets everything but for him.None realized they were
reached only few steps were left to enter into temple.
"Trust me geet I couldn't stop myself
from doing this" "I want to have you for myself" "I know I am sounding crazy
but with you everything seems to be crazy I don't mind for that I never did" He
leaned closer kissed her fore head. "Be with me forever be mine I want nothing
just you" "Your smile which holds music your eyes which had nothing but bundle
of innocence. I love everything of yours "He confessed his heart openly. She
gapped at him saying noting she felt tongue tied, ohh noo she want to say many
things like him but her mind and heart stopped working. Her body parts felt
paralyzed for his confession with lots of happiness.
"I love you geet you are my everything
Meri zindagi adhoori hai tere bina. Will you be mine to complete me. Meri
Adhoori zindagi ko Poori karo geet" He stopped at last step with those magical,
which were dying to come out from his mouth. He guessed may be from sec he met
her he did at last in this beautiful atmosphere. Unknowingly they got goddess
blessings his every word got witnessed by the temple bell sound those holy
mantras.
Two souls who don't have faith in god
getting blessings and confessing in his presence, it was proof they were meant
to be together. Geet was dumb folded she blinked her lashes staring at him blankly.
She is too much happy damn her body was not helping to express it.
Aniee and gang saw maaneet they were
soo happy. "Arey yaar yetho mandir bhi nahi chodaa" Rahul commented giving mean
looks to maaneet. "Chup kar bhai cont you see the heavenly feel of love between
them" Aniee wacked his arm angrily. "Meri maa I am just joking" rahul cursed
aniee badly rubbing his arm.
"Chalo bandars aur bandariyas we have
to cover up them inko tho kisi cheez ki kayal hai nahi" Dev tried to broke all
dreamy looks of all but failed. "Dekhh dekh kuch seekho kise dono ekdusron ki ankhon
mai doob hogaya soo dreamyyy" Meera taunted dev. Dev saw how maaneet were too
lost in each other "Arey stupids let's move on we should be careful lets go
kaam pe lag jaa" Arjun took all away "Maaneet ki body gurdrs jo hai sab" All
grinned but they never mind after all it was for maan. He lost soo much in his
life when he is getting back his happiness in name of geet they will do
everything.
Geet looked away unable to bear his heated
gauge at her his eyes speaking many hidden secrets after his confession. She
wondered how she missed reading them until now. She saw holy fire kept in
dwajastumb it was looking so beautiful. The whole place, mandap was filled with deepas it was
illuminating the whole place with diff shades like her glowing face.
"I won't mind taking seven vows now
itself "He teased her looking at the amazement she holds in her eyes looking at
deepas. At one side she is not less than manse at other she is grown up women
his girl, herBlushing cheeks her not meeting his gauge her glowing happiness
was proof. He can die at this moment with this feel uff he is going crazy every
moment. He never believed in all these he lost faith in all these, but nothing
was big infront of her happiness.
He helped her to stand on her toys but she
stood silently looking at ground. "You blush too much cutie pie" He commented
to make her ease. She is still looking down he wondered what happened to her.
He raised her head by keeping his
finger under her chin. Too shocked to see tears in her eyes but it was
transformed into bundle of joy as her eyes were smiling within those tears. He
actually mentioned marrying her right this moment oh my she is too much happy. "Muje
samaj mai nahi aaraha hai kya bolu main" She said honestly. Getting this much happiness
she is not used of it. She is afraid to accept it what if everything vanishes
away like nothing happened.
"Practice talking from now itself to save
yourselfin these type of situations" His sarcastic comment hitted her badly. "What
I can do I am afraid I don't know how to express anything sachii mai" She
pinched her throat ever so cutely making him chuckle.
"See you are laughing at me now" She complained,
her mind and heart mocked at her saying it was his joke. He became serious
hearing her words she is still thinking it was not true??.. He hides away his
disappointment quickly mot wanting her to make her feel bad. "Geet look in to
my eyes" She was not sure but did what he said.
"I said earlier also I want you to
trust me geet I know you cont trust anyone easily but you can trust me" He was
straight he don't want to back off. "Per mere sath koi hai nahi jo muje itna
pyar karne wale na muje itni kayal rakhne wale. I am afraid to accept when I am
getting it now this much of love. Pehele tho mumma.." She closed her mouth with
her both hands as she is not supposed to talk about her maa openly. Maan
watched her every expression he knew she had seen soo much in her life but he
was clueless about which thing.
"Relax relax no need to say anything
right now just say you heard every word I said right" He asked hopefully. She
nodded with happy smile "Will you be with me forever?? You won't leave me
right?" She asked him gripping his both hands tightly. He was revealed she at
least acknowledged what he said. He is more than happy as she asking him
something rather than her silence or her fears. "Yes no matter what but I will
be with you trust me I love you for the way you are" He hugged her tight
assuring her tainted heart. They stood hugging each other opened there eyes to
see flowers rain on them.
"Mubarak ho Mubarak" Aniee and gand
congratulated them happily with flowers shower. "Now leave her to me by bro she
is mine remember" Rahul again started with fake tears. "I mean my
responsibility here you know" Rahul corrected his words looking at maan angry
glare. In fraction of seconds geet was taken away from him Rahul steeled her with
his magic.
"Arey maan beta aap agaye why you
didn't comeinside we did kalyanam it was holy murat the amazing one" Dadi maa
came from nowhere startling everyone. "Dadi aapnetho humko dara diya for god
sake" Arjun said with horrified face.
"Tu chup karo hum sab patha hai" Dadi
dismissed him Arjun was dumb folded none had any issue with maaneet being
together. He is happy to know this new thing he glanced at Aniee meaningfully. Aniee was too lost to check on geet hugging her
tight expressing her happiness. Maan guessed it long back he is revealed his dadi dont have any issue with geet.
Maan looked away avoiding Dadi maa while
geet stood with straight face making her worried.
"Dadi lets go and get blessings of god
we should get back home also" Aniee covered up as geet was looking lost. She
knew geet was too happy but expressing herself was not in her books, she don't
know it simply. Dadi moved ahead expected maan to come as he already came to
god steps, she thought he accepted..geet did the magic. She is wrong too much
wrong he walked away all were sad to see this. "How long he will do this I am
afraid will I ever able to get him back or not" Dadi maa painful words hitted geet
ears. She was shocked to see this he came for her she understood his depth of
love for her.
"Dadi for lady like you all these
dialogues wont suit u know and rahi bath maan ki he came here dadi and because
of her trust me she will give back your maan" Rahul assured her heart lovingly.
Dadi muffled geet hair with affectionhoped for best. All left for darsan got
back to home as it was getting late. Geet was happy as things were making sense
to her, she is his love now. The though itself making her go crazy.
"Hey love missing me?" She blushed
like new bride looking at his message. Nodded for yes pouted as he didn't waited
forher at temple, ummm she actually though he will wait for her. "Sorry cutie
pie I got some urgent work so left without meeting you again"She nodded for yes
sadly. "Muje aapse milna hai" She demanded very cutely. His heart skipped many
beats kash if he can kiss her breathless right this moment. "I too wants to but
I am stuck but my promise will meet you soon" Maan covered mansee with warm
comfort.
Two days passed by Maan became more
cautious toward her. She never minded if he didn't called her even she saw his
over loaded work. It became habitual to talk before going to sleep daily more
over geet also became too busy in her own works.
One evening at Kapoors palace
"I don't know whats going on I never
ever wants to know do you get it" Sk slammed her phone down feeling mad at Vid.
Here she is annoyed as she is unable to get any news whats going between
maaneet. That bloody Vid making her go mad she wants to cut off his head. "Mam
lets go we should leave now" Sk assistant motioned her as she need to attend
some official party. "Geet I know you will come there why not he is the chief
guest right" Sk thoughtfrustratingly. She again kept strict rules for geet
tightened the security making sure geet never met mansee. Mansee was last
trigger she wants to use.
At party Venue
"Aap hai kaha?" she asked looking for
him here and there in party lawn. "See by your side" He kissed her nape
sensually making her turn like red tomato. "Missing me haa" she nodded looking
down. He tucked her close by her waist she is looking so beautiful like angel. He
is unable to tear his gauge. "Let's go we are getting late" He is conscious of
eyes staring at them.
His phone rang it was from Ritzy he attended
it with thumping heart. "How is pari is everything ok?" Ritzy chuckled hearing
his voice. "Sir you left just few min earlier she is all right don't worry" She
assured him. "Sir I want geet to know what happened with mansee in what
condition she was" Ritzy know it was too late they should inform her. "One sec
ritzy" Geet got alert hearing her name. She called ritzy on the same day when
she met but she said everything was ok. She wondered why she came so many times
as per Nakuls information day back. Sk never let her go she was stuck wants to
meet mansee badly.
Maan went far away from geet "Ritzy I
know geet and mansee were attached with each other. That's why I don't want her
to know about it right now. Geet is not strong Ritzy I cont risk anything she
will broke off and I don't want to see that happening. Never ever" Maan was
scared. He still remember what fuss geet creates when mansee got single scar
even. They shared beautiful bond he saw that with his eyes looking at mansee
condition will definitely broke her heart.
Ritzy signed heavily as this is the
same thing he is saying when he came to know her failed attempts of meeting
geet. She is tongue tied but maan was 100% right. She is ashamed for not
thinking of geets condition initially her concern was on mansee at that time. "Sir
we will not tell her anything but at least we can make
each other meet please don't say no.." Ritzy compelled him.
Maan didn't get why Ritzy insisting this
much about this matter. She is right somewhere so he agreed for that. Maan
turned back to see geet standing right in front of him. Her expressions were
not giving any clue did she heard anything, He is worried totally.
The
most awaited maaneet confession hope all like it
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