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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

hemu ! this one is lovely..sorry for late reply..i thought of reading it leisurely..wow!! karnalicous..karna in the middle of mango groves carrying vrushu..wow..the eye lock..the first touch..hmmm king of anga and his childhood beautiful friend..u r making me to fall again and again❤️..too bad this swarna...don't she knoe her buddy is too shy ..she almost pierced him with questions..what a spoiler..come on update soon dear..

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
hemu ! this one is lovely..sorry for late reply..i thought of reading it leisurely..wow!! karnalicous..karna in the middle of mango groves carrying vrushu..wow..the eye lock..the first touch..hmmm king of anga and his childhood beautiful friend..u r making me to fall again and again❤️..too bad this swarna...don't she knoe her buddy is too shy ..she almost pierced him with questions..what a spoiler..come on update soon dear..

Aww thank u Dhivii 🤗
Karn & Vrushu's mangolicious cutie romance😆 😆
And how can Swarna leave the opportunity to pull Karn's legs again 😆 😆...she's the one who found Vrushu's anklet hanging from Karn's dhoti 😆 😆

Spoiler...hehehe... I am writing it now & going ☺️...will post it within 2 days 😃

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Sphinx.

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

hemu forgot to mention it..the moment when radheya saw vrushu just unimaginable situation..the moment when he lost his golden heart..I just remembered a song..tamil of course..I wish u to hear it..imagining our characters..it is from the movie" jeeva" song:: ovvondrai thiruduhirai" just have a chk for me

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@JyotsnaSharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Sorry for super late reply

I like it swarnali application of physics

Karn vrushali=❤️

Love the romance b/w kv

Hume Mango dene mein to kum tym

And vrushali ko. .my lovely buddy

loved the way she teased Karn

Thank u for enlightenment of time travelling how did she travel by worm wholes

Will they soon find swarnali by utilising theory of relativity

Excited for the 18 + super romantic night

I hope you will be expected as e.l. james

Make sure that he is the lover boy...

UPDATE YOUR BOTH Stories soon

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
hemu forgot to mention it..the moment when radheya saw vrushu just unimaginable situation..the moment when he lost his golden heart..I just remembered a song..tamil of course..I wish u to hear it..imagining our characters..it is from the movie" jeeva" song:: ovvondrai thiruduhirai" just have a chk for me

Dhivii dear😳...I checked the video ...although I could not understand the words...I felt it was about innocent love...I tried to find the english translation of the song...but did not get any. Can u provide me the english translation 😊

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: angrani
Sorry for super late reply
I like it swarnali application of physics
Thank u J 😊
Karn vrushali=❤️
Love the romance b/w kv
☺️ 🤗

Hume Mango dene mein to kum tym
And vrushali ko. .my lovely buddy
loved the way she teased Karn
Hehe...Swarnali ne sahi pakra apne buddy ko...mango dene ke bahane, vru ke saath zyaada time spend kar rahe the...Angaraj 😆

Thank u for enlightenment of time travelling how did she travel by worm wholes
Thank u J. How Swarnali travelled by worm holes...will be explained as sub-plots in the upcoming chapters 😊

Will they soon find swarnali by utilising theory of relativity
Well the experts in kalyug will definitely mull over that theory & lot more

Excited for the 18 + super romantic night
Gulp...18+ super romantic night...god...mein toh blush karte karte likh hi nahin paungi 😳 ☺️ 😆

I hope you will be expected as e.l. james
😆

Make sure that he is the lover boy...
Hehe...shy lover boy toh woh ban hi chuka hai...ab passionate banna baki hai 😳 😆...Will try for it

UPDATE YOUR BOTH Stories soon
I will update both of them soon 😊

Thanks for u sweet comments J 😳

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: 8520NK
RES!!!😃

Unres soon Navu 😊

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

~ I know many of you did not expect Vrushali's character to be introduced in this FF. But I envisioned this FF keeping her character from the very start. You will gradually know in the upcoming chapters why I included Vrushali in my FF. ~
~ Thank you for liking my previous chapter and for your sweet comments~