||Rishbala Fic- The Demon's Kiss|| Completed Page 81 and82 - Page 46

Originally posted by: Ni33

First!!!🤣

Now I have low battery and have to study...😆

Idiotical keyboard... If it's not the browser, it's you that has to make my life a living hell...😡 I'll get my vengance some day... First on that browser... The D-day is nearing... Beware of an angered Ni...😡😈 Lets see if I remember everything now... Memory it's your time to shine...🤣Congrats Ni...you remembered everything🤣

Okay I so want that Murkha bala died right now... Those previous four chapters she got a pass. But this fifth chapter... She longs for him, can't distinguish her feelings for RK... Fine... But to later got engaged to Rohan... I so expected that RK would show up and cut his hand off (I would prefer Murkha bala's head...😆 OFF WITH HER HEAD!!! 🤣 Where is the Queen of Hearts when you need her to scream out that? 🤣 But since the heroji/villianji in the story is in love, or he has some feelings for silly bala, whether it's love or not... So the probability for that to happen is none... And knowing it's you Chotu who is writing the story, the chances are absolutely zero on that notion...😆)Im not the person to go to kill leads...that's your department🤣 The cake was a lie...all a lie🤣

Wow he was created a demon!😲 Was he created out of clay? 🤣 No, no I know... He got created by play doh...🤣 No wonder why that bala is head over heels for that demon...😆 He reminds her of her childhood days...🤣 She created a demon just like him...🤣 No... Murkha bala has special powers... Whatever she creates out of play doh it comes to Life... RK was created by bala...🤣 Whatever created out of play doh, must lack the human emotions one usually possesses... But it was still a success, he became more successful than Frakenstein...😆 He got his handsome looks, no bolts coming out from his throat/neck...🤣 He got his brains and mobility... No scaring off people with his stiff run...🤣 Wah, wah Madhu... I starting to think you are a witch... No I know... she are a doppelganger... The previous her witch made him... I now this story is called Demon's Kiss... But it should be The Witches Curse...🤣 The Witch got a curse on the night she created her demon... That if she ever fall in love with the demon she would die a horrible, crucifying death ...🤣 Unfortunately the witch doesn't possess her previous memories... Yeah unfortunate...🤣 Just saying this... Die Murkha bala DIE!!!🤣I remember playing with play doh when I was little...😆 It made a duck once..then I crushed it under my foot 🤣 Then I laughed at the ball of orange and yellow clay 🤣 Anyways...if Murkhabala was a witch then I would feel very sorry for her 🤣 Choke her with the play doh 🤣

Okay... Not sure whether or not I should comment on that part about RK seeing the future...😆 But will do that any how...😆 I loved it... But, yes there is a but... Don't get me wrong, it seems like it's misplaced or you weren't sure where to put that paragraph so just put it there... I mean what was the reason for RK to use his powers in exact that moment to look into the future... Why didn't he do that before? But I loved the part where you intentionally left out... No mentioning how, when or why Murkha bala would die...😆 Nor RK's final plan. But we will all know of it soon... As soon Murkha bala dies...🤣 Die Murkha bala! 🤣 Now I'll leave it there, cause I know what suggestions I gave and don't want to reveal anything to your loyal readers...😆yeah that thing...let's not talk about that 🤣 I'm an expert at cliffhangers 🤣

Haha... He is cold as ice...🤣 Like his heart...🤣 Ah Murkha bala I so am looking forward for your painful death...🤣 He doesn't seem human... I am surprised... Murkha bala does have some brains in that void space, that is known as her skull...🤣 Chotu can this demon read minds? This demon turns out to have a lot of powers than what it first appears... And still no Maleficent horns and wings...🤣 Also his brain must work nonstop... You know having more than 10 percent capacity... That surely has to make a toll on him...😆 How does he rewind... Bedrocking...🤣 No taking human lives...🤣 And that too without leaving a trace, unless they provoc him...🤣 Then all claws, horns and wings are out and ready to take those humans down...🤣no horns Ni...no horns...🤣 Can't stress this enough🤣He laughs at the puny humans🤣

Heroji/Villianji's eyes glew brighter seeing that necklace... Murkh bala villianji isn't interested in you, but in your necklace...🤣 He is a kleptomaniac...🤣 That's why he is constantly hover around you... He wants to steal your precious family jewels...🤣 Chotu now you figure out what jewels I'm talking about...🤣 That ruby on that necklace is now cursed... Cursed like Murkh bala and her destiny...🤣 That kiss of his made her sleepy... He's all toxic...🤣 Filled with inner desires to conquer her... And make her his...🤣 A slight kiss from him revealed that and Murkh bala coulnd't handle the pressure and expectations and made her sleepy...🤣He's a thief demon🤣 you have just revealed to me the true meaning of the title 🤣

Okay have to ask... His spirit will bind itself with her soul? Meaning he doesn't have a soul, or that he will remove or darken her soul? Making her have a spirit like him? And no once could separate them?😕 Hello when did they have the bedrocking?🤣 They would get united with that...🤣he could possess it😉Next chapter will shed some light on it...bed rocking is the Sudha route...wait till later 🤣

And reading about the engagement ceremony...🤣 Two little things happened... Me laughing and two wanting to end her...🤣 She plays along with her parents in order to make them happy but is playing herself with RK to make herself happy... Double standard and so much more comes to my mind...😆 There is where I wanted a piano to fall on her head, her head getting beheaded and well anything that would result in her death...🤣 You read the first or second paragraph...🤣I think her neck would break first...reminds me of how Chibiusa fell on Usagi in today's episode...her neck would give away🤣

Looking like an angel...🤣 Dear Queen... I think I know from whom Murkh bala inherited her stupidity...🤣 That angel of yours is not only deceiving you and the king... But also Rohan and RK...😡 I like this killing RK... Reminds me of Rohan... She's a player! 🤣

Wow the occultist senses something...🤣 I wonder what that could be...🤣 Some strange black aura that surrounds Murkh bala and it's coming from the ruby...🤣 Naa... Murkh bala stepped on something henceforth he senses something...🤣 Waiting for the next update... Which will be tomorrow...😆🤣 Yeah it was just a play doh duck on the stairs🤣

I am last to comment even tough I came first...🤣 I came first in this story, second on PWF and third on OL... Still last to comment...🤣 Congratz Ni for such an accomplishment...👏😆 But you know Chotu what all happened these two weeks and what I had...Its okay Ni...at least on the end you commented 🤗

Well thanks for the update and for the PM... Enjoy your tremendous long comment...🤣You're welcome Ni...I finally finished replying🤣

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

First!!!🤣

Now I have low battery and have to study...😆

Idiotical keyboard... If it's not the browser, it's you that has to make my life a living hell...😡 I'll get my vengance some day... First on that browser... The D-day is nearing... Beware of an angered Ni...😡😈 Lets see if I remember everything now... Memory it's your time to shine...🤣Congrats Ni...you remembered Everything🤣 It has to serve it's purpose... I told you SPRING CLEANING! 🤣

Okay I so want that Murkha bala died right now... Those previous four chapters she got a pass. But this fifth chapter... She longs for him, can't distinguish her feelings for RK... Fine... But to later got engaged to Rohan... I so expected that RK would show up and cut his hand off (I would prefer Murkha bala's head...😆 OFF WITH HER HEAD!!! 🤣 Where is the Queen of Hearts when you need her to scream out that? 🤣 But since the heroji/villianji in the story is in love, or he has some feelings for silly bala, whether it's love or not... So the probability for that to happen is none... And knowing it's you Chotu who is writing the story, the chances are absolutely zero on that notion...😆)Im not the person to go to kill leads...that's your department🤣 The cake was a lie...all a lie🤣 My department... But I am willing to share it with others...🤣

Wow he was created a demon!😲 Was he created out of clay? 🤣 No, no I know... He got created by play doh...🤣 No wonder why that bala is head over heels for that demon...😆 He reminds her of her childhood days...🤣 She created a demon just like him...🤣 No... Murkha bala has special powers... Whatever she creates out of play doh it comes to Life... RK was created by bala...🤣 Whatever created out of play doh, must lack the human emotions one usually possesses... But it was still a success, he became more successful than Frakenstein...😆 He got his handsome looks, no bolts coming out from his throat/neck...🤣 He got his brains and mobility... No scaring off people with his stiff run...🤣 Wah, wah Madhu... I starting to think you are a witch... No I know... she are a doppelganger... The previous her witch made him... I now this story is called Demon's Kiss... But it should be The Witches Curse...🤣 The Witch got a curse on the night she created her demon... That if she ever fall in love with the demon she would die a horrible, crucifying death ...🤣 Unfortunately the witch doesn't possess her previous memories... Yeah unfortunate...🤣 Just saying this... Die Murkha bala DIE!!!🤣I remember playing with play doh when I was little...😆 It made a duck once..then I crushed it under my foot 🤣 Then I laughed at the ball of orange and yellow clay 🤣 Anyways...if Murkhabala was a witch then I would feel very sorry for her 🤣 Choke her with the play doh 🤣 If Murkhabala ever did something with play doh, I know now that you would have destroyed it by stamping on it... Poor RK haven't met Chotu's foot yet have you?🤣

Okay... Not sure whether or not I should comment on that part about RK seeing the future...😆 But will do that any how...😆 I loved it... But, yes there is a but... Don't get me wrong, it seems like it's misplaced or you weren't sure where to put that paragraph so just put it there... I mean what was the reason for RK to use his powers in exact that moment to look into the future... Why didn't he do that before? But I loved the part where you intentionally left out... No mentioning how, when or why Murkha bala would die...😆 Nor RK's final plan. But we will all know of it soon... As soon Murkha bala dies...🤣 Die Murkha bala! 🤣 Now I'll leave it there, cause I know what suggestions I gave and don't want to reveal anything to your loyal readers...😆yeah that thing...let's not talk about that 🤣 I'm an expert at cliffhangers 🤣 No comments...🤣

Haha... He is cold as ice...🤣 Like his heart...🤣 Ah Murkha bala I so am looking forward for your painful death...🤣 He doesn't seem human... I am surprised... Murkha bala does have some brains in that void space, that is known as her skull...🤣 Chotu can this demon read minds? This demon turns out to have a lot of powers than what it first appears... And still no Maleficent horns and wings...🤣 Also his brain must work nonstop... You know having more than 10 percent capacity... That surely has to make a toll on him...😆 How does he rewind... Bedrocking...🤣 No taking human lives...🤣 And that too without leaving a trace, unless they provoc him...🤣 Then all claws, horns and wings are out and ready to take those humans down...🤣no horns Ni...no horns...🤣 Can't stress this enough🤣He laughs at the puny humans🤣 He laughs and kills them...🤣

Heroji/Villianji's eyes glew brighter seeing that necklace... Murkh bala villianji isn't interested in you, but in your necklace...🤣 He is a kleptomaniac...🤣 That's why he is constantly hover around you... He wants to steal your precious family jewels...🤣 Chotu now you figure out what jewels I'm talking about...🤣 That ruby on that necklace is now cursed... Cursed like Murkh bala and her destiny...🤣 That kiss of his made her sleepy... He's all toxic...🤣 Filled with inner desires to conquer her... And make her his...🤣 A slight kiss from him revealed that and Murkh bala coulnd't handle the pressure and expectations and made her sleepy...🤣He's a thief demon🤣 you have just revealed to me the true meaning of the title 🤣 Well somebody has to... He is so interested by those jewels... More than her...🤣

Okay have to ask... His spirit will bind itself with her soul? Meaning he doesn't have a soul, or that he will remove or darken her soul? Making her have a spirit like him? And no once could separate them?😕 Hello when did they have the bedrocking?🤣 They would get united with that...🤣he could possess it😉Next chapter will shed some light on it...bed rocking is the Sudha route...wait till later 🤣 Okay lets wait for the next chapter... We all know that...🤣

And reading about the engagement ceremony...🤣 Two little things happened... Me laughing and two wanting to end her...🤣 She plays along with her parents in order to make them happy but is playing herself with RK to make herself happy... Double standard and so much more comes to my mind...😆 There is where I wanted a piano to fall on her head, her head getting beheaded and well anything that would result in her death...🤣 You read the first or second paragraph...🤣I think her neck would break first...reminds me of how Chibiusa fell on Usagi in today's episode...her neck would give away🤣 Don't remind me...🤣 Laughed so hard on that... And Mamochan giving that comment that she had detention again...🤣

Looking like an angel...🤣 Dear Queen... I think I know from whom Murkh bala inherited her stupidity...🤣 That angel of yours is not only deceiving you and the king... But also Rohan and RK...😡 I like this killing RK... Reminds me of Rohan... She's a player! 🤣

Wow the occultist senses something...🤣 I wonder what that could be...🤣 Some strange black aura that surrounds Murkh bala and it's coming from the ruby...🤣 Naa... Murkh bala stepped on something henceforth he senses something...🤣 Waiting for the next update... Which will be tomorrow...😆🤣 Yeah it was just a play doh duck on the stairs🤣

I am last to comment even tough I came first...🤣 I came first in this story, second on PWF and third on OL... Still last to comment...🤣 Congratz Ni for such an accomplishment...👏😆 But you know Chotu what all happened these two weeks and what I had...Its okay Ni...at least on the end you commented 🤗 Yup, finally...😛

Well thanks for the update and for the PM... Enjoy your tremendous long comment...🤣You're welcome Ni...I finally finished replying🤣 I saw the minute you did it... But wanted to reply after waking up...😆

Originally posted by: k.atrina75

awesome awesome story..
I read it all in one go!

So.. RK is back from hell to have her..
but why was he imprisoned in hell? did he kill MD? wow that would be too beautiful.. 😆 another level of romance..

and that occultist.. I thnk he expected Madhu to stand against this engagement or what? hehe..

I was expecting RK to be here and stop the engagement.. (I am pregnant with her baby kind.. 🤣)
just kidding.. but when Rohan kissed Madhu's hand I felt dead sure that RK would come from somewhere in his shadow form and tell that wierdo what its like to kiss a girl without consent specially if she is a demon's girlfriend... 😆

awesome story... *claps* *claps*