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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Luv u loads Maddy. So good to c u here again
Both the parts r well written.
I like the fact that though there is heartache involved, they seem very mature in their relation to handle it. Ur writing style has changed a bit. It's even more direct now. It's different, I like it :)

Edited by basicquestion1 - 10 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

hi welcome back! thanks 4 da pm n superb emotional update! wonderfully written

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janvi

@janu_2006

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

gr8 part,,

cont,soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Hi maddy.. Welcome back 😊
Thanks for the PM 😃
Both the Updts were too gud ! She, making french toast for He 😉
He came all wet n full of mystery, then He dropped the shell on Her 😲
Now She needs time !
He loves her 😉
She went to her work got a text msg that's cute 😆
Update Soon !!
Btw I imagined my favs so well here 😳 😆

Edited by BDayGal-11Jan - 10 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

THAT WAS HEART BREAKING GOING ON WITH HIS EX AND SHE KISSED HIM KNOWING HE WAS MARRIED AND HE KISSED HER BACK WOULD THEY HAVE GONE FURTHER IF HE DID NOT FALL ASLEEP THAT WAS SO SAD TRUST AND FAITHFULNESS IS WHAT KEEPS A MARRIAGE LOVE CAN GROW BUT TRUST RESPECT ONCE LOST IS HARD TO GET BACK HEARTBREAKING UPDATE THANKS FOR THE PM THE EMOTIONS WERE PERFECTLY WRITTEN THE REACTIONS WERE ON PARE AMAZING THANKS FOR THE PM.

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
Luv u loads Maddy. So good to c u here again
Both the parts r well written.
I like the fact that though there is heartache involved, they seem very mature in their relation to handle it. Ur writing style has changed a bit. It's even more direct now. It's different, I like it :)

Yes, I guess with time, I am also maturing that's why my style is changing.

Thank you so much!

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

ohh maddy... i finally caught up.
sorry for procrastinating..was held up with colg
and this is the most beautifully written ss of urs.
i read the two chapters and the first thing that came into my mind was- wow!
there are no dialogs... noconversations clearly written but i fell in love with it. even the way u described the rain..wow
and this little mistake of maan has hurt her so deep...
he regerts saying its unintentional... but obviously she is hurt.
her making french toast..waiting for him were so beautifully written.
the best thing i liked about maan here was he didn't hide the truth. he trusts her and loves her enough to tell her what has he gone and done.
am so eager to read the next uprt.
thank u sooo much for pming me da second time.
love u loads.
pls continue asap

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Maddy

@iMadz

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
ohh maddy... i finally caught up.
sorry for procrastinating..was held up with colg
and this is the most beautifully written ss of urs.
i read the two chapters and the first thing that came into my mind was- wow!
there are no dialogs... noconversations clearly written but i fell in love with it. even the way u described the rain..wow
and this little mistake of maan has hurt her so deep...
he regerts saying its unintentional... but obviously she is hurt.
her making french toast..waiting for him were so beautifully written.
the best thing i liked about maan here was he didn't hide the truth. he trusts her and loves her enough to tell her what has he gone and done.
am so eager to read the next uprt.
thank u sooo much for pming me da second time.
love u loads.
pls continue asap

Hello.

Thank you so much! This is me writing after long time...BTW, are you imagining Maan and Geet in this one? Coz when I wrote this I particularly imagined no special person...a mix of my favorite and I created this Characters. That's why I have not given any names.