Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 97

I'm not going to say much about anybody but Payal. God, I love her so. She's so kickass and sassy. I love the 'do what you want, I'm fabulous.'

Hi yesterday I was going through fan fiction I found your story, name of your story got my attention I decided to give it a look on prologue. And now I am here after reading till now, just left to do my daily work. I must say I am seechless and crying after reading. It touched my heart, don't know from where I should start and say you are marvellous and this story of yours had every thing in it, emotions, drama.

I can't wait for Aman to come back... He has to run into Khushi, at least once, for old time's sake... N thank God for friends like Akash n Preeto in Ks life.. Otherwise, she would have given up entirely.. Poor Arnav, he was a shallow, confused and judgmental kid back in school n that happens when you are surrounded by people like Poonam Raizada... But it is going to take a lot of coffee-dates for both of them to find a middle ground ... N lets not forget Payals dads agenda ... K needs a break n more aggressive friend on her side, this time around!!!!

There is this underlying melancholy surrounding Khushi in almost all your updates, and this one was no exception. I can visualise Khushi in all the situations you describe so beautifully.

Finally the mystery behind Khushi leaving college and how Arnav's mom was responsible for it, and the mystery of Garima and Tewari and Sons is revealed.

Another beautiful update ... there is so much depth to this story, I love it. Even characters like Payal, who seemed superficial to start with, are revealing layers ... as for Khushi and Arnav, love them both. Khushi is so much more mature and poised, she has been through multiple trials of fire, and has come through each one stronger ... in comparison Arnav struggles when he is around her, although he is equally poised and in control when he is with everyone else.

Wow nice,i really feel sorry for khusi as she is unintentioally stuck with these brutel rich people,hopefully this time arnav helps her n sortout whatever is wrong in her life n make her fell inlove with him as he is in love but clearly doesnt know.

Such a fantastic story. It was recommended to me by many readers - Lolwa, Kavi, Saiyu.. So thanks to them I'm finally here.
I love the present, past and future intermingling. 😛 I must say I quite liked the characters from New-Ons. But I still don't understand why Khushi had so much problem with Aman. I mean surely nobody would like to be referred as Dhanno but I found him quite funny. At least this name 'Dhanno' wasn't based on her status or looks like Behenji or Mataji. So I really liked Aman.
Payal is one bindaas girl. She has her own rules, own opinion and I like her for that.
I don't understand Lavanya completely. She isn't a bad person but isn't very clear to me.
I like Akash. He is good, nice and a wonderful friend to Khushi. He looks out for her and I like it. But is she seriously attracted to Khushi? I'm not very sure. I'm waiting for Aman to flirt with Khushi 😉😆 (I'm having a Lavanya-Preeto combined brain wavelength here😆)
Oh and that brings me to another couple i.e Arnav and Payal. They seem more like a couple of convenience than actually considering lifelong commitment. They both are nice but I guess separate from each other. Unse zyada fun toh I can feel between NK & Payal. I mean NK & Payal's fights are at least entertaining. Between Arnav & Payal there is neither any spark nor romance. Are they sure they want to get married?
I like Anjali and Joon - Hatke couple. Anjali is nice but slightly weird. 😛
For the first time I've come across a story where HP is more loyal to anyone other than Arnav or Laxmi 😛 And that brings me to the other person - Poonam Raizada. What is her problem? Why she created such a ruckus for Khushi? And why didn't Mr. Raizada stopped her wife from spoiling life of a girl who only helped him? I don't like this Raizada couple.
Khushi knows that Arnav was her birthday santa all these years? 😲
And this reminds me I like Baig sir also. He is sweet.
Oh btw why did Gupta couple leave Delhi - because of the loss in business or because of what happened with Khushi? 😕
Kostin is if Khushi will once again go near the guy who spelled trouble for her - Arnav? Anyways trouble is going to knock her door soon in form of Samir Singh/Anandrams. I feel sorry and respect for her. Sorry because she has to go through so much; her problems don't seem near any end soon. Respect because irrespective of everything she hasn't turned bitter and has done quite well for herself.
Looking for another update soon. Now that I've caught with the story I want you to update as soon as possible 😆

I love this character of khushi..despite dreams being shattered and being on the brink of bankruptcy, she is not bitter..
such a refreshing personality... I like what you said about her in one of the chapters. That she is such an intriguing combination of vulnerability and strength, that no one can resist being drawn to her.

waiting for her travails to end soon...

Radhika,

awesome update.
loved it.
superb.
liked the way their conversion happened.

Loved the update. The story is so beautifully poignant, an absolute delight to read. Great work 👏