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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
awesome update 
loved it
finally
viren proposed jeevika 
they broke their silence 
loved the whole update 
totally
amazing
superb
fantastic
amazing
continue soon 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Awesomw updates
Loved them
Finally virika together😳
Continue soon n do send me a PM!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
wowww!!
cute update!!
loved itt!!
finally they are together!! <3 <3
plzzz pm me!!
its a req!
im not active as much so pm is a way to read updates!
thnxx!
tc!
cont soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: sumayyah1

wowww!!
cute update!!
loved itt!!
finally they are together!! <3 <3
plzzz pm me!!
its a req!
im not active as much so pm is a way to read updates!
thnxx!
tc!
cont soon!

thanks for the comment will PM if possible because I am having some problem while sending the message sorry. but will try.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Sp43588

thanks for the comment will PM if possible because I am having some problem while sending the message sorry. but will try.


your welcome!
ill give u a better idea just scrap me wen uve updated!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
CHAPTER 14
 
In the morning at nearly 8:30 viren's sleep got disturbed he turned around to hug his love but found no one besides him. he got up and walked down to see where his heart was. he found her working in the kitchen. she was so busy that she didn't even realize when viren entered the kitchen and hugged her from back.
V - good morning love!!!!
J - good morning sweetheart!!! (kissing his cheeks)
V - what are you doing here early morning? why so much work?
J - I knew you must have forgot that today our stupid friends are coming.
V - ohh ya, so may I help you with something ma'am(smirking)
J - you have to (laughing) but first go have your breakfast and get ready...wait...
V - what? why did you stop?
J - you don't have your clothes here. I just forgot that we different house. you won't be staying with me day and night.(sad)😭
V - it's okay I have a solution for both the problems.
J - and what is that(walking to the dinning table)
V - after having my breakfast I will go to my house and get ready and you text me the things you want from store. okay
J - that's great but what about other one?
V - that i'll tell you later, maybe tonight.
J - okay I will wait. but you better be here soon and don't forget my stuff.
V - okay baba!!!I love you. (hugging her)
J - I know (laughing)
Viren just smiled and left to his house after having breakfast.
 
11:00 am
Door bell rang.
Jeevika quickly got down the stairs and opened the door and saw viren struggling with the bags. she started laughing aloud.
V - (fake anger) why are laughing can't you just help your boyfriend???
J - okay I am sorry give the bags(controlling her laughter)
V - thanks (smirking)
 
After arranging all the stuff they sat on the in the living room. hugging each other.
V - so what time they are coming?
J - at 3 (snuggling into him)
V - you are tired (kissing her forehead)
J - of course I am (biting on his arm)
V - ouch... jeevs... it hurts.
J - oh really...( getting naughty)
V - ya it does(giving a love bite on her neck)
J - viren... (moans in pleasure)
V - it hurts right???(smirking)
J - I just hate you... idiot(hugging him)
V - I know (smiling)
 
Soon they prepared everything and changed their outfits. As  jeevika was getting down wearing a short pink dress with a small earrings and open hair, viren couldn't take off his eyes from her. he quickly clicked few pictures of her in his phone which was unnoticed by jeevika.
As the door bell rang he quickly ran to the door and opened it
N&K - hey viren
V - hey guys (hugging them)
Z&S - hey viren how are you
V - all good (smiling)
J - hiii guys(she ran and hugged everyone)
 
 
will update soon
so please hit like and comment.
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Whoohooo first one to comment!!!
This story really drew me right in and that update was too cute!
Love the virika romance, they're so sweet <3
Ur a fab writer!
Do continue soon!!!!!! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Cute update
viren & jeevika 's romance...Haayeee <3
Superb
Waiting for next chapter...!!!
Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Awww"!! What a cute update 
Loved every line of it
Virika giving love bites to each other πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
Loved it so much
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting and please do pm me when you update!πŸ˜ƒ