PARCHHAIYAN - ateet ki Updated EPILOGUE on 20-1-2015 /P 142 - Page 70

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update. geet by seeing unconditional love in maan felt happy and decided to give him what he is craving for and she whole heartedly accepted maan in her life by taking their relation to next level.
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing...

did they consumate thr marriage o it just dream i still cant believe...

hoping for best...

waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb
finally geet take 1 step in their relation to return his love back
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
geet started trusting maan and gave herself to maan!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely emotional touchy update ..te way geet ki frown seeing my maan is so much interested in tv rather than her and want to gain his attention was lovely cute..te way geet cuddling to my maan was lovely..te way geet shock to see ,my maan ki height of love for her , pics in his lappy, she too want to open once but she fears was lovely emotional..but atlast my maan ki love over took her fear and she initiating was lovely touchy..te way my maan claiming his geet and my maaneet became one , touch they soul was lovely emotional touchy..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update😊
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet amused maan create her bd date pw and folder full her pics
she boldly move kiss him
finally
maaneet became one
lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update! superbly written! Geet trying to trust Maan! the get closer! Geet surprised tht his pwd is her bday! she looks into his lappy! she sees her pics! n is shocked! Maan reveals his love 4 her! Gee overwhelmed! she decides 2 give them a chance! Geet makes the first move! They become one! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it Richa geet still not sure about Her feeling for Mann but she changed her self after look at those picture and gave her to Mann how beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 14


BEAUTIFUL morning after a long night of their dreams. Geet waked up and her eyes paniced not seeing him besides her. 'Maan...' she screamed and he quickly come inside the room from gallery.

He sat near her and snuggled her. She too encircled him quickly. Maan palmed her face and kissed on her forehead. 'relax relax i am with you. Just calm down.' Maan got that again she saw some nightmare which frightened her. Vibration of her body told him how much she scared. 'firr se koi sapna dekha?' he asked and she hide herself in him. 'its ok its ok. It was just a dream.' he pampered her till her uneven breaths turn stable.


It was their last day in switzerland. Maids packed their belongings and both check out from the hotel. After having a hetic long journey both reached to KM. Both Asha and Sakshi were happy to see their childern back. They welcomed and shower their love on both.

'Geet bete waha b aap log kaam hi to nahi karte rahe?' Sakhsi asked teasing both.


Geet being a naive start telling her stories and all start laughing. She scared again as she did some mistake. 'did i said something wrong?' Geet asked to confirm.


'sakshi smiled wide and kissed on her forehead. She hold her chin and tilted up. 'you are so innocent beta. Chaliye ab ye sab bate to hoti rahengi aap dono rest keejiye.' She send both to rest in their room.


After coming from their honeymoon both indulge in their office work. Life running smoothly. Geet trying her level best to settled with him. She resiprocate him whenever they made love. Everything seemed working on right terms till she concieved.

Geet having a 5weeks pregnancy. She again pushed back to her past. This was time period when Yash turn off from her and switched to her sister Sameera. Her dark fears enclosed her and she start staying gloomed all the day. She wont even taking her meals properly. All the time bad thought were tormenting her dreadfully. All noticed and try to confront but she escape all the time. She feared and wasn't sure for anything so how would she told and share.


Maan tried his level best to cheer up but not worked. He took her on a dinner but Geet only physically present her mind was absent. One more week passed and she maintain distance with him. Maan thought of her to confess but she dont.


One bussiness party came and both attend it,where one young and beautiful woman approch Maan for dance. She was their client so he wont denied. Maan went with her without realising what impact it leave on her. Her nightmare taking shapes in front of her eyes. Geet felt suffocated. She felt as someone chocking her throat. As much she get skimpy with him Geet loosing her patience and her fears clutched her all thoughts. She left hurridely need fresh air to breath. Maan scanned hall and found her missing. He instantly excused her and left in Geet's search. He found her in parking standing alone. He faced her and saw her teary eyes. 'Geet you ok?' He asked but only got her tears and indifferent behaviour. He asked but she was silent so he moved with her from there.


Both reached to KM and Geet ran towards her room followed by Maan. Sakshi saw the view and got something bad had happened between both. But question is what?


How many time he approched Geet,she flinched off him and finally his patience give up and he burst on her. Maan fists her arms and pulled towards him. 'Whats wrong with you? Kab se pucch raha hu but you avoiding me deliberately. Pichhle kai dino se dekh raha hu par tum to kuchh btana hi nahi chahti. Aisi b kya galti kar di hai maine? Kab tak Geet kab tak tum apne past ko pakad k rakhogi. I was thought after 5 months you atleast trying but no. You still think all men are same. But all are not same. Dont you able to see this? No matters how much i tried to make our relation better. You runied everything. Tum chahti hi nahi ho apne ateet se bahar aana. Why Geet why?' Maan burst on her which scared her alot. His fire smitting eyes just runing everything between both.


Geet scared so much and faints on the very moment. Maan hold her strongly before she met to floor. He laid her on bed and called his mother. Sakshi was aware that some disaster is waiting and same happened. Sakshi and Aasha trying to awake her meantime he called the doc.


Maan sat near her head and rubbed her hand. He was regretting on his behaviour with her. 'Geet please wake up. I am sorry,i dont had an intention of scaring you.' Maan apolozised but its too late now. She was hell scared and not coming to senses. Now they only wait for doc to bring back her concious. She came soon and examined her.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago

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