MG STORY *TAINTED ANGEL* updated part 8@102 18.4.15 - Page 35

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Posted: 10 years ago


thank u sweety!!
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BANNER CREDITS GOES TO GUNJAR AND PRIYA..!!!


Heyyyaa guys m here goes the next update!!!


PART 4

Maan picked up geet in his arms and ran to his jeep..He settled her on the passenger side...and jumped on the driver's side..

He patted her cheek...for the last time and drove off..

" Dam..Me i should have taken her to the docs..maybe its the drug.." He cursed himself..

He tucked her hair neatly..glancing her...intently.." u will be alright geet I promise.."

He drove frantically towards the hospital...

Geet listlessly blinked her lashes..She stirred a bit..sitting straight On the seat...Trying to figure out her surroundings

Maan saw her movement..and sighed in relief.." geet..are u okay...geet..." He brushed her hair in worry...He halted the jeep..

Geet shoved his hand..recognizing his voice..Maan took back his hands and reached out for the bottle of water..

He passed it to her..

She whimpered slightly..and grasped the bottle..she was dehydrated..

Maan shook his head gently..at her attitude..Geet deliberately took enough time..To drink water..while running her eyes all over the jeep ..It was a good time for escape!!

She muddled over her thoughts..and decided to give it a try..She is GEET HANDA she wont give in so easily..

She wiped her lips..from the back of her hand..and surpassed the bottle to maan..

" U r okay ??" he asked her tenderly..

His voice irked..her further..His presence..was torturing her..But nevertheless she decided to use it..

" I..I want some more water." She muttered without glancing him..

" uhmm...geet u ll have to wait..we r miles away from the next city..Ill drive as fast as i can.." Maan responded..thoughtfully

She clenched her jaws now staring him in anger..

" i want now..just get me water...please.." She said quivering..a bit

" okay i guess i have some..let me..check." He whispered calmly..

She nodded..swallowing thickly..rubbing her hands..

Maan bend down..to find other bottle of water..in the compartments..when a all of a sudden he was barrelled with something sharp..and pointed..

"ahh.." he hissed..gripping his head...and raised a little to find geet smirking..

" tch tch tch..Sorry mr.kidnapper cum psycho...U really underestimated me.." she stroked the hem of the wooden object circular in shape that was place behind their seats..

Maan squeezed his eyes...As she hit him another shot on his head..causing more blood to dribble down..

Maan clasped her hand in his hand..shaking his head for no... Geet moved violently pushing him off the seat...

" go to hell.." she muttered...as hopped on to the driver's seat driving off..!!

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" Dont worry I will find that s**t...i will hand her over to u Sir..She is urs..belive me trust me..Dev joh bolta hai woh karta hai..U have my word.."

" Ah..." Dev smashed his cell on the ground in rage..

" I m not going to leave u geet..kaha tak bhago gi..tum.." He whispered deviously...tightening his jaws..Brushing his hair backwards..

His men entered..

" Sir..uska baap bhi ghar mai..hi behosh..hai..par saman gayab shayd..sahayad..." His voice trailed off..Finding his boss red in fury..

" bolo..." Dev grabbed his collar lifting him..to his level..

" woh..shayad..bhag..gayi.." the guy spat..frightfully

" Nahiii.." Dev threw the guy..

" woh nahi bhag sakti...she cant run away from me..." dev fisted his hands...controlling his anger

" agar tum ne bhag ne ki koshsih ki hai..Toh no one can save u from me geet handa.." Dev proclaimed...

" jao..dhundo use..Find that s**t...Go.." he ordered..

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Geet drove the jeep recklessly ...clutching the wheels with her trembling hands..

She kept spinning her head ..backwards..unsure of Maan..

She reached a mile...ahead when the jeep broke down..

" what the hell.." she climbed down the jeep...And paced in front to break open the of the jeep...

She gulped down heavily biting her lip..she explored her surroundings..and found herself In the middle of dark, dense forest..

Sweat rolled down her forehead..

" are madam..hum help kar dete hai..."

Geet frowned and turned around...to find a car full of mens..They were total 5 and all drunken..

She gripped her fist...shaking her head..

"I will manage.." She managed to speak out boldly ...

She turned around and concentrated back...on the jeep..

In next moment..a guy hovered her placing his hands a centimetre away from her..

" what u doing...just move away.." she stepped behind gluing her herself to the frontside of the jeep..

The men smiled slyly..tossing the empty bottle of alchol...the others cheered..

" oye drama mat kar..Hume pata hai tu geetika hai...BAR DANCER.." He roared inching close to her..

" dekho,,just move..or else.." She raised her hand to slap him..but the guy clasped it...2 other gusy came on either sides..holding her..

They held her hands...tightly as she cried out for help..

They all laughed at her powerlessness..

The guy who had hovered her before ran his finger from her forehead...to her chin..sensuously ..

Geet clichd her eyes..in abhorrence..she loathed herself..

" aaj toh bada mazza ayega...tu clients nahi leti na..." he spoke roughly holding her chin.. She shook her face..repelling his touch..

He gripped it tighter.." aaj tujhe batauna..clients lena bhi chayie toh humare jaise...geetikaa.." and leaned closer..

She closed her eyes in anticipation..But his revulsion touch did not ensued..

Oddly she heard faint noises and a strong pull..which released her hands out their hold..

She snapped open her eyes...and stood rooted to the spot..

It was Maan...All drenched in his blood kicking the guy who touched her..One of them was already knocked down on the ground...

The rest tackled him from various sides...but maan was merciless breaking bones of the first guy..

She shuddered...with the intensity of his punches..

She was witnessing a crazy wild person..causing her to jump out of her skin..

he himself was injured but still was beating the shit of the that guy..mumbling something which she barely heard...For her it all seemed such a maze !!

" ahhh..." One last punch and the guy stumbled in unconsciousness..

Maan panted heavily wiping the blood from his lower lip...and spun his head in geet's direction..

She juddered..in response...and fell on ground..with a cry..

In spilt second he was besides groping her foot...

" where is it paining...??" he questioned her examining her foot gently..by running his hands..

Geet blinked..back her tears..Unaware of the emotions she felt..She hated this guy who had turned her life upside down..

But yet she did not fail to notice the concern in his eyes.. those eyes which were blazing in anger had melted down..and altered into anxiety..

" i..I m..okay.." she bit it out ..ignoring the pain she was suffering..

Maan paused his actions and upcasting his eyes.. to glimpse her...

He just kept looking in her eyes..searching for something..and then looked away nodding..

Maan raised himself..dusting clutching his head..faintly moaning..

Geet bit her lip...hearing his moan..

She glanced downwards cursing her guts..the guy wasn't that terrible . Though she wasn't convinced about him..yet he deserved a thanks..for saving her..What a IRONY she was running away from him...any here he saves her yet again!!

" lets go.."

Geet lifted up her lashes...staring his extended hand..

She placed her hand in his...and maan helped her to stand..

Maan held her from shoulders guiding her to jeep..

She wordlessly progressed with him.. Maan placed her on the seat..and this time..to her surprise She tied her hands with the rope and pinned it..to the dashborad

" what ..ah what's dis." she blurted ..

Maan chose not to answer and swiftly came in front of the jeep repairing it..

Geet struggled Once again..." heyyy u ..whats hsiu name...ya...maaan..m talking to u .."

She rolled her eyes in annoyance..pissed off with his attitude..

After maan was done..he dusted his hands..and came to driver's seat..

Geet banged her hand on the dashboard infuriated with maan's behaviour..

Maan ignited the engine..without glancing her..

" u seem fine..we will head to our next destination...and this time.."

He turned side ways...looking her intently

" try controlling ur urges...it will save ur and my time.." he replied tightly..making her scrunch her brows in sheer anger..

" I..i..whoaaa..." she screamed...startled..as he started the jeep.. hastily..blurring her voice..

Geet twisted her lips..closing her eyes...her mind wasn't in his favour but her heart told her to believe and trust this stranger...

Deceived by her own thoughts..she preferred to be mum... and voice out her questions...choosing a proper perfect time..depending on the mood of her captor !!!


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Edited by crazy_sweta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part baby
maan was panickd 2 c geet like dat nd decided 2 take geet 2 doc👍🏼
geet woke up nd maan gave her water when she got her full conscious she had a plan 2 escape
she hit maan on head nd drove away😲
nd here dev is planng smthing else 4 geet nd dis stupid geet still trusts him😡
jeep broke down nd when geet was checkng it sm guys came nd startd 2 misbehave wit her
when one of dem abt 2 touch her maan arrivd nd savd geet👏
instead of wrryng abt him maan was concrnd abt geet 🤗
dis time maan tied her hands nd startd twrds their destination nd smwhere geet felt safe around him👍🏼
waitng 4 d nxt part baby update soon
Edited by mishtypie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome.
Dev is such a jerk.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update sweta...
maan is so worried abt geet being unconsies..
geet gained her counsies and asked for more water..
OMG 😲 geet hurt maan badly on his head...
and here this dev he is such a jerk..😡
he is stooping so low..
oh god geet again in trouble with those boys..
thank god maan came on time an dsaved her..
he is so concered abt geet that he forgot his pain..😊
wow he tied her hands to dashboard..😆😆
just so nice update...👏👏
waiting to read more and more sweta...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesme update
geet hit him n ran away...
Maan saved her from those mens was awesme...
Lovd d update
cant w8 for next
Edited by _CookieMonster_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
geet trying to escape
she beat maan n ran away
but she got introuble
the rogues tried to misbehave
but maan again came as saviour
he tied her up ..lolz..for his own safety,,
geet somewhere trusted him
so she kept quiet..
dev angry..
what will he do..

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update. . but maan geet ko kaise janta h
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
hope geet listen maan

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