Asya OS: Love You Forever Till Entity

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Love You Forever Till Entity

Surbhi Jyoti and Karan Singh Grover

Note:This is story asad is belong to middle class family. zoya belongs rich family.

Asad Ahemad Khan was sitting in cabin and thinking about his zoya and their first meeting. It was one rainy day asad was coming from his office by walking and he saw zoya who was fully wet by rain and dancing ,it was love at first time for asad and he get all details her .he began to go daily to see zoya in her collage at his lunch break.

Zoya was also love with him at first sight and she was also coming out of her class to see Asad. She was sad that he did not came tell her that he love her.

Asad did not have confidence to tell zoya that he love her. At last asad made mind to tell her that is love with her but, in zoya house her mom and dad already making mind to marry her with friend son, hearing this zoya became dull and sad. Zoya told her mom that she is love with asad and also they approved it for her daughter happiness.

One day, Asad went to zoya told that he was love with from many days and want make her life partner but, zoya denied by saying she did not love him and their status and value did not match at any mean.

Asad told that he know it and he will work hard to keep her happy and fulfill all her need. but zoya did not agreed at all and asad challenged zoya that he will make himself capable to her status. it was the last time zoya and asad met.

Asad flashback ends by knock on door.

Asad : come in

Prasad : sir it all ready 7.30 pm

Asad : ok , adi you go home and I am leaving in 10 minutes.

Prasad : ok sir good night.

After, 10 minutes maan drawn car to is mansion , It was rainy day.

He saw an elder couple under umbrella walking and thoughts went back to Zoya and his first meet and do not to forget to remember them that they were zoya's parents.

He slowly drove car beside them to tell them that now he had his own company, car, mansion but, stopped seeing them going inside graveyard and maan was shocked why there going and he followed them inside and he shocked to see that his love zoya smiling photo there and name and date was written on that tomb and indicated that she died 5 months after their last meet and there was his painted picture beside her tomb drawn by Zoya.

Zoya's parent saw him. He asked them what happened .they explained him that zoya also loved him so much and that she has lied that their status do not match and all that because, did not him suffer due to her. so she as chosen him to leave , she do not want to become his obstacle. Because,

Someone does not love you the way you want them to, it does not means they do not love you. she wanted her parent's to keep his painting beside her tomb, if some day come when density bring him to her again.

Asad cried his heart out it difficult way to miss someone is to be sitting right besides her knowing you can not see her, talk to her,love her and be with her ever again.

END

When you loved, you always love that remain forever in your heart.

Maine jo socha wo kabhi paya nahi,

Chahkar bhi main usko bhul paya nahi,

Chahta to tha main usko apnana,

Per maine usko kabhi ye batya nahi...

Sorry if their any mistake. it my first os Please like and do comment

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Devakshilover thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz clear me one thing what happened to zoya exactly was she suffering from some disease or she committed suicide if yes then why
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Helloo...😊
Soo...a first O.S...from you...it was a very good part dear...
But it was sad...that Zoya died at the end...
You wrote it...well...
Write some more O.S...and stories on ASYA ...and more Happy ones... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Helloo...😊
Soo...a first O.S...from you...it was a very good part dear...
But it was sad...that Zoya died at the end...
You wrote it...well...
Write some more O.S...and stories on ASYA ...and more Happy ones... 😉

thank so much it means a lot
I will try to write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankiecool

plz clear me one thing what happened to zoya exactly was she suffering from some disease or she committed suicide if yes then why

zoya had some disease so died
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunirani


</div>thank so much it means a lot
<div>I will try to write more


Heyy...Again..
Well if you don't mind is it ETERNITY OR REALL Y ENTITY... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan


Heyy...Again..
Well if you don't mind is it ETERNITY OR REALL Y ENTITY... 😳

it is entity dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome OS
u made me cry!
miss my AsYa alot!
do write more OS's!
and do pm me when u do!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nicely written!
It was sad 😭
Zoya died at the end

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