SS: Aisi hai yeh mohabbatein...pt 29...pg 140 - Page 64

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GloryBeckons

wonderful , waiting for next part...Romance needed in emegency


Trying to infuse some...Hope you like that... Thanks for commenting...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written...👍🏼


Thank you...
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Raman entered Cousins room and saw one piece of paper in the centre of the bed. Raman took that and read it out...

Raman: "Raavan kumar ke liye Jhansi ki Rani ki taraf se ek chota gift...Arey arey... Darne ki zaroorat nahi... Kisi boring lecture ko decorate karke nahi dene wali hoon... (Raman smiled on reading that) Usse pehle ek important baat... Subah subah birthday ke din aapka mood kharab kiya... Sorry... Kaana jo banana tha... Pehle gift uss jagah mein rakha jo aap hamesha mere saath share karne se inkaar karte ho..."

Raman: Bas... Kya share karne se inkaar kar raha hoon main... Thank god...Foot note hain...

Raman: "PS:Yaad nahi aayi... Shaadi ke baad humare kamre mein kiye pehle jagda bhi yaad nahi..."

Raman: Kya yaar? Jagda toh roz hota hai... Kis baat ke liye pehli baar lada? Ofcourse...wardrobe...

Raman opened the wardrobe and saw one gift inside and another note...

Raman: Note pehle padoon ya gift? Gift...Nahi, lemme read this note. Sounds like there is more to follow...

Raman excitedly opened that piece of paper...

Raman: "Gift pehle kholo na... Itna impatient kyon ho rahe ho? "

Raman: Arey... Jhansi ki rani ya jadoogar... Itni achi tareeke se samajthi ho kya?

Raman opened the gift and saw one white colour T-shirt with a blue jeans pant... Raman took that T-shirt and saw that something was printed on that... He read it out...

Raman: "I Don't need Google...My wife knows everything"... What? Like really... One paper falls from that T-shirt...

Raman: Yeh kya? "One-liner ki baarish khatam ho gayi? Lekin, baat toh sach hai na CEO sahib... Printed t-shirt toh aapko pasand hai... Aaj ke din kam se kam khulkar jeeyo... I just hope words na toh sahi, kam se kam kapde aapko pasand ho..."

Raman: Words bhi toh sach hai... My wife knows everything... Lekin, yehi toh problem hai... Isliye dumb hona bhi acha hai...

Raman saw another paper in that gift box.

Raman: "Ab meri gift ki baari... Apne sagaayi mein koi time pe nahi aata... Dulhan chahe jaise bhi ho, time kisika wait nahi karta...Isliye time ka sense hona bahut jyada zaroori hai... Meri gift toh gift mein hi hai...Hall mein jaake dekho..."

Raman: Gift gift mein hai... Yeh time time ka lecture dekhkar lag raha hai time-piece hi hai mera gift... Hall mein gift mein gift... Watch... Yes, that antique time clock in hall...

Raman marched towards lobby and opened that antique time clock to find his gift...He opened it and saw one classy time piece...

Raman: Wow... Its really very nice... Yeh uss din show room mein dekha... Isliye uss din Ishita upset thi... Itne arzi se yeh sab chal raha tha aur main budoo banke reh gaya... Another note...

Raman: "So...time for the next surprise... Raman Kumar Bhalla apne gaadi se jitna pyaar karta hai woh toh mujhe already pata hai lekin, abhi abhi pata chala ki ek sautan hamesha uss gaadi aur Raman ke lovestory ko bhi khatre mein dal rahi hai... Isse pehle aap uss sautan se mile, aap yeh kapde aur watch pehankar bahaar aayenge toh sabko (Raman saw that mujhe was striked before the word sabko') acha lagega..."

Raman wore that dress and went out to see that sautan which was none other than Royal Enfield' bullet bike...

Raman: Wow...

Everyone: Surprise...

Raman: Thanks a lot everyone... I have no words...

Raman started searching for something again...

Krish: Kya dhoondh rahe ho aap jeeju?

Raman: Another note... Yeh toh end nahi ho saktha... Waise, iss surprise ko arrange karnewali kahan hai?

Siddu: Ishita? Iss surprise ko arrange karne wali khud aapka next surprise hai jeeju... Here we present, "Mrs.Ishita Bhalla"...

Raman was dumbfounded... Ishita looked 7-8 years younger her age... She looked like a college girl in that sleeveless kurti and jeans pant... Piece of shawl wrapped around her neck complemented her look very well...

Siddu: Kaisi lagi yeh aakhri surprise?

Raman: Sabse jyada khaas aur khoobsurat... Yeh bike...

Mihika: Itna attitude? Hume sab kuch dikh raha hai...Saaf saaf... Hum yahan kabab mein haddi nahi banna chahte... Hum jaa rahe hain... Enjoy well...

Saying so, everyone closed the door and went inside...

Raman: (Innocently) Toh plan kya hai?

Ishita: Aise jaayenge toh Maangadu, ek place... Wahan bhi ek...temple hai. List mein chut gayi na...

Raman: Very funny... Long drive mein jaane ke liye koi achi jagah hai?

Ishita: Aise clearly pehle hi pooch lete... Waise bhi main paagal madrasan hoon... ECR road...Direction mein bataungi... Actually, koi option bhi nahi hai aapke pass... Isme GPS bhi nahi hai...

Raman: Jaise ab tak bahut chal rahi hai meri... ECR mein chalke... Mahabali...Something...

Ishita: Mahabalipuram...Yes...Lekin, aapko yeh jagah...

Raman: Raghuram suggest kar raha tha...Weekend trip ke liye... Unke family aur humare family ke liye... Mushkil se escape hona pada... (Ishita smiled on listening to the same) Daant kya dikha rahi ho...Baito...

Raman wanted to ask Ishita to hold him because there wasn't another place for Ishita to hold but he didn't know if it would be appropriate to tell her the same. On the other hand, Ishita was suffering from the same dilemma. Finally, Raman opted to choose his old ways...

Raman: Suno... Kahi gir vir na jaana... Achi tarah pakadke rakho...

Ishita: Kahan? Yeh bhi bata do...

Raman: Oh...Koi provision hi nahi hai? Kaisi bike lekar aayi ho? Teek hai... Mere kandhe ko hi pakad lo... Adjust karoonga...

Ishita: Aaha...Itna bada sacrifice... No thanks...

Raman: Arey meri ma... Meri baat maan lo... Tumhare liye yeh joker jaisi t-shirt pehan rakha hai na, yeh baat maanne mein tera kya jaata... Ruhi ki Ishima ko kuch ho gayi toh woh mujhe nahi chodegi...

Ishita: Joker? Fine...

Finally, Raman kicked the engine into life and sped through the busy roads of Chennai... The distance between Ishita and Raman would have easily accommodated another person but as they proceeded, each and every speed breaker and ditches in that road made Ishita move closer to Raman which made her feel uncomfortable... She tried to go back to her original position...

Raman: Kya kar rahi ho? Gaadi hil rahi hai...

Ishita: Raman...slowly...

Raman: Cycle thodi chala raha hoon... Isse kam speed mein jaana iss gaadi ko bezzat karne ke samaan hoga... You just hold me... I'll take care of the rest... Darne ki zaroorat nahi hai...

Ishita: Darr? (In a low whisper) Budoo...

Raman: Kuch kaha tumne?

Ishita: Aage dekhe drive karo na...

Raman: Toh seedhe baite raho... Birthday ke din photo pe haar nahi chadaana...

After 10 minutes...

Raman: Ishita...

Ishita: Hmm...

Raman: Itna silent kyon ho?

Ishita: Baat karoon toh lecture chup rahoon toh problem.

Raman: Woh problem nahi hai... Check kar raha tha ki tum jage hue ho... So gayi toh mere jaan khatre mein aa jayega... Aur ek baat poochni hai?

Ishita: Kya?

Raman: Yeh long drive ka idea acha tha... Aadat hai aise jaane ki?

Ishita: I didn't get that...

Raman: Isse pehle long drive pe kabhi kisike saath...

Ishita tried to keep her face and tone normal since she felt that Raman was seeing her through the rear mirror.

Ishita: Haan... Yeh pehli baar thodi hai...

Raman: (Gritting his teeth) Subbu ke saath, right?

Ishita: Nahi... Subbu ko two-wheeler chalaana nahi aata...

Raman felt relieved.

Raman: Thank god... Uss superman kahi toh lag ho raha hai...

Ishita: Kya?

Raman: Toh appa ke saath ya Bala ke saath...

Ishita: Illa... Mani ke saath...

Raman: Ab yeh new entry koun hai?

Ishita: Mera dost...

Raman: Aur kitne log hai tere zindagi mein?

Ishita: Kya aapke zindagi mein girl friend hi nahi hai...

Raman: Girl friend... Matlab, voh Mani bhi tera boy friend hai...

Ishita: Yeh...Aisa nahi... Friend is a boy... Isliye boy friend...

Raman: Whatever... Woh bhi yehi hai...Chennai mein?

Ishita: Nahi...Woh ek business man hai... Turkey mein hai. Kaafi busy hai. I haven't talked with him for years now.

Raman: (In a low whisper) Toh uparvaale ne mera sun liya... Aur jalne ki taakat nahi hai... Subbu akele jeena haraam karke rakha hai mera...

Ishita: Zor se bolo...Sunayi nahi de raha hai...

Raman: Uss Mani ke saath long drive pe chalti thi kya?

Ishita: Sirf ek baar... College ke last day...

Raman couldn't imagine Ishita sitting with a stranger in the same position as they were that moment.

Ishita: Kya hua?

Raman: Kuch nahi...

Ishita: Pata hai... Aap mujhe akele lekar jaane ke liye itna bad bad karte ho lekin Mani...Divya ko bhi humare saath lekar gaya...

Raman: Divya...wow...

Ishita: Hmm...Choti thi na... Hamesha beech mein bait jaati thi...

Raman: (In a whisper) What a relief... Meri saali ek gift zaroor deserve karti hai...

Raman saw that Ishita was thoroughly enjoying the ride by letting the air brush her face with a smile in her face.

Raman: Tumhe bike pe jaana pasand hai?

Ishita: Bahut...

Raman: Toh bike chalati ho?

Ishita: Yeh walaa... Nahi... Moped chalati hoon... Lekin, chalaane se jyada peeche baitna pasand hai... No tension, nothing... Aaram se enjoy karna... Gaadi chalaate waqt itna relaxation nahi milti...

Raman: True...

Ishita: Acha hua Mihir ne bataya ki aapko bike chalaana pasand hai...Warna mujhe pata bhi nahi tha...

Raman: Shagun ke wajah se apne bike bhejkar car kareeda. Uske baad apne liye waqt nahi mila... Itne saalon baad aaj phir ek baar... Thank you Ishita... Thanks for this day...

Ishita: Raavan kumar thanks bola... Woh bhi do do baar... Sapna toh nahi hai na?

Raman: (Pinching her hand which is on his shoulders) Nahi...

Ishita: Aah... Haath chodkar gaadi chalaa rahe ho.

Raman: Do haath chodkar bhi chalaunga.

Ishita: Aisi gymnastics karne ki zaroorat nahi hai... Normally chalao wahi bahut hai...

Finally, they reached Mahabalipuram.

Raman: Bahut bhookh lag rahi hai yaar...

Ishita: There... Caf coffee day... Chalo.

Raman: Thatha ka phone... Hello... Ya, we reached just now. Acha... Oh...Ok thatha... As you say. Take care of Ruhi...

Ishita: Kya hua?

Raman: Thatha hume aaj raat yehi rukne ke liye keh rahe hain...

Ishita: Kyon?

Raman: Kyonki thatha nahi chahte ki hum raat ko gaadi chalaaye...

Ishita: Kaisi raat?

Raman: Its already 4 p.m.

Ishita: Toh unhe tasalli nahi diya ki aap manage kar sakthe ho ya budappe ke wajah se sach mein gaadi chalaana mushkil hai...

Raman: Oh dadima...Please... Main Buddha nahi hoon... Kisine mujhse kaha ki badon ki baat maanni chahiye...

Ishita: Acha? Toh aap aajkal sabki baat manne lage ho? Interesting... Wahan ek hotel hai... Chalo...

Raman: Rukho... Tere dimaag ghutnon mein hai kya? Dekho kaise kaise log wahan jaa rahe hain... We need a decent place to stay...

Ishita: Kaise log? Couples hai...bas. Aise log hi aate hai yahan... Dating and stuff...You see...

Raman: But, I want to enquire. I'll ask someone before taking a room. With a woman by my side, I don't want to take any risk...

Ishita: Family man... Teek hai. Let us have something... We can take a room later...

In the coffee shop, Raman and Ishita had a difficult time with romantic couples surrounding them everywhere.

Ishita: Kaisi jagah hai yeh?

Raman: Tumhi ne bataya... Kuch der pehle... Aise log aate hai yahan... Tumhe gudgudi kyon ho rahi hai?

Ishita: Uss din hotel mein itna naatak kiya lekin aaj ke din bade comfortable ho...

Raman: Mausam badal raha hai madam... Company bhi kamaal ki mil gayi...

Ishita: Aap mere saath...flirt kar rahe ho...

Raman: Biwi ke saath hi flirt kar raha hoon... Waise, ek serious baat karni hai...

Ishita: What?

Raman: Mihir ke baare mein... Mihir...

Ishita: Shagun ka bhai hai... Pata hai...

Raman: Kaise?

Ishita: Jasoosi nahi ki lekin sach khud mere saamne aa gayi. Kal jab Mihika se baat kar rahi thi, tab woh Mihir ka ek purana photo dikha rahi thi... Uss photo ke andar yeh photo mujhe dikhayi diya...The one that i saw in your mobile...Deevar pe... Uss cropped part ko bhi dekha... Shagun. I connected the dots. Shagun Arora... Mihir Arora... So... I understood.

Raman: Mujhse uske baare mein nahi poocha...

Ishita: That's because aap mujhe uski laayak tak nahi samajte ho...

Raman: You got me wrong Ishita... That's not like that...

Ishita: Leave it Raman... Aaj ke din nahi...


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Posted: 11 years ago
wow next update jaldi... thanks intezaar ab bhi nahi kar sakte
kyunki eim mauke pe break...hmmm😕 waiting eagerly for ur next update. hope raman opens up and conveys what he feel for ishita
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Posted: 11 years ago
Are yaar u ppl always stop at that point where we die of anxiety .actually I m a silent reader bt cudn't resist today update soon yaar n ha bring confession soon waiting for it lik anything
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely... what a great idea for Raman. So glad Ishu figured out about Shagun- hope Raman opens up soon. Can't wait for them to finally admit their feelings.

Looking forward to your next update!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
super duper updt kicha...
i enjoyed alot reading...

the bike journey was a surprise package...

long drive to mahabalipuram...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. so surprising and amazing update...
Raman searching for gifts and its description superb...
hey... Bide Ride so romantic and jolly wow... loved it...
JKR in jeans and sleeveless kurti liked it,
IshRa convo was so beautiful, his insecurities awesomely pictured ...
Thatha call at perfect timing...
ishita misunderstood Raman...
i wish Raman should propose ishita, coz of Romantic place, Romantic ride wish to see Romantic Bhalla too😉...

continue soon
eager to what happens next...


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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww yaar Nice. love all gifts special one Ishita bhalla. woww bike ride. ravan kumar jealous. waiting Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
fab update
lovely surprises it was so beautiful
awesome long drive...
thanx update soon

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