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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Poor riya again remember her bitter past bcoz of Arjun
In past riya was shy soft spoken caring loving
But now she bcome cold heart it's all bcoz of ajun
In their wedding night Arjun broke riya's heart badly
Now her cold behavior toward Arjun its justfy
Awe riya couldn't call Arjun name
She call suniyeji or arjunji hahaha
Still riya have problem to say Arjun name
Loll Arjun got angry on sameer for shouting on riya
Oh god shred almost going to tell riya ant Arjun & roshni
What will happen when riya will get know ant it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow didu...



It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, blockbuster, rocking outstanding, freaking, breathtaking and mind blowing update...



Just loved it...



Awesome...



The whole chapter is superb..



Beautiful...


Lovely...

Fb was so painful...

Suniye and arjunji part was so fabulous...

Arjun had hurt riya in past...

Do continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
suniye,ayiye,Arjun ji 😉 😃
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
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Part 5:-

arjun(mutter near her ear,with smile):muze pata nahi tha..ke aaj bhi mera naam lene se tum itna sharmati ho..

but his smile faded away when he hear her answer..

riya:ham aapka naam kyo le..??aapka aur hamara rista hi kya he sir..??aap hamare sirf senior he..aur jaha tak hame manners pata he..apne seniers ko respect se hi bulate he..ham bhi wahi kar rahe he..

saying this she immigiately leave from there..

arjun's face colour changed..n he become sad..

riya come back to conference room..

she give the file to rathod..rathod take the file n leave to his cabin..

abhijeet also gone to his cabin..

riya sit on her usual chair..

she realize aayesha is somewhat upset..

riya:kya baat he aayesha..?aap upset lag rahi he..?

aayesha:ha yaar..actually meri cousin sister ka phone tha..usaki nayi nayi shadi hui he..

riya:toh..?

aayesha:woh software engineer he..ek company me bahot acche payment scale pe kaam karti he..par ab usake husband aur sasural wale keh rahe he ke woh ab job chod de..she was sad..usaki baate sunke muze bhi bada sad feel ho raha he usake liye..pata he usane muze kya kaha..usane kaha ke mein bahot lucky hu ke muze aise sasural wale aur aisa husband mile he jo mere carrer ko support kar rahe he..

liza:ha yarr..kabhi kabhi mein bhi sochti hu ke sachme mein bahot lucky hu ke muze aise parents mile he jo muze aur mere carrer ko support karte he..

roshni:ya u r right liza..ham log sach me lucky he..par kuch ladiya nahi hoti..kayi ladkiyo ki toh padai puri hone se pehale hi shadi karwa dete he..

hearing this riya started remembering her past..

flashback:-

(after 2-3 days of previous flashback..)

Arjun n riya silently taking their dinner..

Arjun:umm..riya..muze tumse kuch baat karni he..

Riya:ji..?

Arjun:I think ke tumhe apnea age ki padai aur carrer ke bare me sochna chahiye..

Riya(somewhat shocked):kya..?

Arjun:hmm..tumhe apni studies complete karni chahiye..six months baad jab hamara divorce ho jayega..tab tum kya karogi..?mein nahi chahta ke iss bakwas shadi ke wajah se tum apna ek saal ghar pe rehkar barbaad karo..

Riya feel bad n get teary hearing about divorce..

Arjun:riya...mein tumse kuch baat kar raha hu..

Riya(composing herself):par..arjun ji..hamne iss bare me nahi socha..hamara matlab he ke..

(she had not take her carrer seriously before this..)

Arjun:toh ab socho..agar ab tumne iss bare me nahi socha toh sahi time nikal jayega..aur fir zindagi bhar kabhi apni studies complete nahi kar sakhogi..

Riya just nodded like obedient student..

Arjun:hamare ghar ke 20 minute ki duri pe hi college he mein waha enquiry karke dekhta hu..tumhare certificates aur marksheet ki photocopy muze de dena..

Riya:par hamare sare certificate toh kolkatta me he..ghar pe..

Arjun:kya..??

Riya:hmm..hame laga ke ab woh kisi kaam nahi aayege..

Arjun shook his head in disbelief..

Arjun:apne papa ko bolke sare certificates yaha bejane ko bolo..

Riya nodded..

Arjun:waise tum..kya pad rahi thi..??n specialization..?

Riya:first year bsc paas ki he hamne..

Arjun(with wide eyes):what the hell..?tum sirf first year pass out ho..?

Riya:toh..?

Arjun:dam..muze laga tumhari atleast graduation complete hui hogi..aur ab tum post graduate karogi toh accha rahega..par..(suddenly)tumhari age kya he..?

Riya:woh..last month hi hamara 8th birthday hua..

Arjun(more shocked):what the hell..sirf 18..??

Riya(puzzled):ji..?

Arjun:uhh..ye aai baba ne toh kamal kar di..tum sirf 18 years old ki ho..itne kam age ke ladki se meri shadi karwa di..(he frustatedly move his hand through hair)dam..aur tumne kyo shadi ki..itne kam age me..??

Riya:ma baba ne hi faisala kiya..aur ham unke faisale ke khilaf kaise ja sakte the..par aap aise kyo keh rahe he..?

Arjun:dam..meine toh shadi isaliye ki kyo ki baba ko heart attack hui thi aur mein inkar karta toh unki tabiyat aur kharab ho jati..par..meine socha nahi tha 18 years ki ladki se karege meri shadi..meine toh tumhari photo bhi nahi dekhi thi..tumhara naam bhi muze hamara marriage card dekhne ke baad pata chala..damm..

He frustradely band his hand..n after some minutes compose himself..

Arjun:ok..but ab tum apni study complete karogi..mein jaldi hi admission ki procedure suru karta hu..

Riya(worrily):par ham college kaise jayege..? aur fir ghar ka kaam..?

Arjun:ghar me aisa kya kaam hota he..?ham maid rakhge..?aur college jyada dur nahi he..tum walk karke ya fir auto se bhi ja sakti ho..

Riya(upset tone):par..yaha hamare koi dost bhi nahi he..aur naya college..hame toh abhi se tension ho rahi he..

Arjun:isame tensed hone ki kya zarurat he..dheere dheere tumhe naya college accha lagane lagega..aur fir dosto ka kya he woh toh yahape bhi ban jayege..

Riya nodded upsetly..

Arjun saw her reaction..

Arjun:riya..dekho..ye sab mein tumhare acche future ke liye kar raha hu..meri wajah se tumhare aaj me bahot hi problem ho rahe he..lekin mein nahi chahata ke tumhare future me bhi ho..aur muze pura yakin he ke tum muze disappoint nahi karogi..

Riya nodded n smile..

Riya(in mind):kitne acche he arjunji..unhone bhale hi hamse shadi mazburi me ki..lekin fir bhi hamare future ke bare me soch rahe he..hamare acche ke liye soch rahe he..aap sach me bahot acche he arjunji..ham sach me bahot lucky he ke hame aap mile..

Flashback end..

Riya come back to present..

Riya(in mind):ham bhi kabhi aisa hi sochte the ke ham bahot lucky he ke hame aap mile..par ab lagta he ke hamara aapse milna hamara good luck nahi..balki bad luck tha..jisne hamri sari zindagi tehes nehes kar di..

Roshni:hey riya..tum kis soch me dub gayi..

Riya:kuch nahi..woh bas aise hi..

At the same time shree n chotu enter in conference room..

Shree:hey girls..kya chal raha he..?

Liza:kuch nahi specky sen..just some girly talk..waise bhi I don't think tumhe hamari bato me intrest hoga..

Roshni:are..isaki gf se isse furasat milegi toh hamse baate karega na..

Liza n roshni give hi5 to each other..aayesha smile n shook her head in disbelief..

Riya:shree...aapki girlfriend bhi he..??

Before shree could speak anything..liza speak up..

Liza:are riya tuze specky ki gf ke bare me kuch nahi pata..??ha isaki gf he..aur muze toh lagata he specky sen usse jaldi shadi bhi kar lega..

Shree angrily glare liza..all other except riya try to control their laugh..

Liza:speaky hamesha usaki gf ko sath me leke gumta he..

She open his bag n show riya shree's lappy..

Liza:ye he specky ki gf..

All could not control..n started laughing including riya..

At the same time arjun come to conference room..n saw all laughing..he was about to bark at them as usaual..but when he saw riya too laughing...smile spread on his face..

Arjun(in mind):char saal ho gaye riya..tumhari ye smile dekhne ke liye mein taras gaya tha..

(they all are in full masti mood..so no one realize that arjun is there..)

After the laughter session everyone stop..but still they have smile on their faces..

Riya:shree..??aapko bura toh nahi laga na..ham sab aapko has rahe he toh..??hamara irada aapko hurt karne ka nahi tha..hame toh bas liza ki baate sunke hasi aayi..

All look to riya as if she is alien..

Riya:kya hua..aap sab hame aise kyo dekh rahe he..??

All just think that riya is so cute n innocent..

Aayesha:riya..tum dusaro ke bare me kitna sochti ho..

Roshni:u r lovely..

Shree:sach me riya..inn sab ke bich na sirf tum hi ho..jisne ye socha ke muze bhi bura laga ho shayad..

All make face looking shree..

Shree:I mean..aap sab ko aise hi meri tang khich rahe he I know..but riya...u r so cute..

Arjun(in mind):ha..meri riya..sach me aise hi he..halato ke wajah se woh thodi badal gayi he..par usaka dil abhi bhi wahi he..abhi bhi woh utani hi sweet he jaise pehale thi..

Shree:u r too sweet..(he hug riya..)

Riya somewhat shocked by his sudden hug..but she knows shree consider her as friend..she too lightly hug back him..

But arjun didn't like this..

Arjun(angrily yell):shreee...??

Shree hurrily n fearly get away from riya..all other started doing their work..

Shree(with trumbling voice):s..ssir...sir..

Arjun(angrily yell):ye office he..behatar he tum office hi banaye rakho isse..warna aise jagah transfer karwauga na tumhari ke tumhare mobile ko bhi range nahi milegi..

Shree shook his head in horror..(ab bechare gazetfreak ke liye isse badi saza kya hogi ke usake mobile ko range na mile..lolll)

Shree:sorry..sorry..

Arjun(angrily):u better to be..

Suddenly arjun's gaze fall on riya..she is looking to him feared..scaredly..looking his anger..she had never seen his anger..

(though in ariya's past arjun was somewhat serious n less talkative person,but he was not this much angry..after ariya's separation arjun become like this..so riya had not seen his this type of anger before..)

All started doing their work..

Riya:excuse me..

Saying this she left from conference room..

Arjun too goes behind her..

Riya come to corridor..then she feel tug to her hand..

Arjun:riyaa..kya hua..?tum dar gayi..

Riya:aap ye kya kar rahe he..?chodiye hamara hath..

Arjun leave her hand..

Arjun:tum tensed mat ho.meine tumhe nahi data..mein to shree ko data..woh tumhe kaise hug kar raha tha..i don't like that..how could i..??

Riya look to him with strange eyes..

Arjun:sorry..lekin tumhe darne ki zarurat nahi he muzse..mein tumhe kabhi nahi datuga..tumpe kaise gussa kar sakta hu mein...

Riya don't say anything n leave from there..

Here in conference room,at the same time:

(after leaving of arjun)

Shree:had he yaar..meine kya kiya..??sirf riya ko hug hi kar raha tha..??woh toh aise baras pade muzpe ke meine riya ko nahi balki unki roshni ko hi hug kiya ho..

Roshni:stop it shree..

All smile..

At the same time riya enter in conference room again..

Before they can talk..

Sam come n ask them to complete paper work as soon as possible..

After lunch..

They all are having some relaxing time as they had finished the paper work..so all are sitting in conference room n watching news channel..

They are showing the news how etf solve a very cricical case successfully..n praising etf..

After a minute the news reader starts praising arjun..for his observation skills..

Shree(mutter to chotu):lo..ye toh hamesha arjun sir ka hi gun gan karte rehate he..unhe kya pata..arjun sir sirf orders dete he..sara kaam toh ham bechare karte he..

Chotu to nodded in agreeing..

While arjun's gaze fell on riya..n his mind drifted in past..

Flashback(only arjun is remembering this):-

Arjun is taking breakfast silently..

The silence is killing bubbly n talkative girl like riya..so she finally decides to read newspaper while eating breakfast..

Riya(happily yell):arjunjiii..

Arjun look her shocked hearing tone of her voice..

Riya:arjun ji dekhiye na..iss akhbaar(newspaper)me aapke bare me likha he..kaise aapne khuni ko pakada.bahot tariff ki he aapki..aur tasveer bhi chapi he..

Arjun shook his head in disbelief on her innocence..

Arjun:riya..meine sirf apni duty ki he..jo kiya woh mera ferz tha..

He finish his breakfast n leave for office..

At night:-

He come back to home..riya come to him rushing happily..

Riya:arjun ji..ye aapke liye..

He give him a packet wrapped in gift paper..

Arjun:ye kya he..??

Riya(smile):ye aapke liye..

Arjun smiles n open the packet..

It is a photo frame in which riya had framed the news about arjun..

Riya:kaisa laga aapko..??

Arjun:bahot accha he riya..par isaki kya zarurat thi..?

Riya:aap sach me bahot acche he arjun ji..aapme zara sa bhi ghamand nahi he..sab itani aapki tariff kar rahe he..par aap kehte he ke aapne sirf apna ferz nibhaya he..par hamare liye ye badi aur abhot khushi ki baat he..issiliye hamne ye paper cutting aapko gift ki he..

Arjun smile..n shook his head in disbelief..

Flashback end..

Arjun come out of his thoughts..

Arjun(looking to riya,in mind):meine woh frame bahot sambhal ke rakhi he riya..bas ab yahi chahta hu ke mere life ki photo frame me tum hamesha hamesha ke liye shamil ho jao..

Precap:-

Etf is in disguse in a party for case..

Some more ariya flashback scenes..

Edited by ariyabestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
fb was nice
cont soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant Amazing Outstanding
FB were superb lovely n Sweet
eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls pls pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it di
Ariya moments were awesome
But what was the real reason
Behind their separation
Riya loves Arjun unconditionally
But now same Riya
Hates him so much
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsme update
ariya flash back were wonderful
riya is so innocent
arjun saw shree hugging riya
shree ki tooh ho gai good day ...lol...
arjun is very swt 2wards riya
love hi care fo riya
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
fb was lovely n cute
thnx for pm
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