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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pirate.hunter12

yow rajit 😃
awesome update😆
Thank you ramit
now who is this prabhakar? entry peh entry, entry peh entry lekin koi reason nahi bata tah keh yeh kaun hai??😆😆😆
🤣🤣🤣 baby wait karo, abhi aur bhi baaki entries aani hai..
oh cutie avi love to pull his cheeks, jinda mein ohnu dekh yah hunda yah😆😆😆
btw i already imagined how astha was crying when she hold the infant 🤣🤣🤣
mere dialogues, copycat!🤣🤣
haye shlok neh kitne sapne sajae teh bacho ki liye par ab sapno peh panee phir gaya 🤣🤣🤣 poor shlok beta you would be his babysitter 🤣🤣🤣 aastha would say shlok papa nappy lagao, doodh pilao, khana kihlao🤣🤣🤣
babysitter?🤣🤣🤣 bechara shlok😆
i loved the conversation between all of the mystery prabhakar children's it was beautifully written and the flashback of the astha😉

Thank you sis..there are many more mysterious of prabhakar and his childrens..😉😉
thanx for the PM sis😳
do update soon😆
Merry Christmas to you 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...
everyone want ashlok together...
i guess this NA is d one who has made all suffer... 🤢
loved it wen avi askd astha y is she feeding shlok he i'nt a baby...😆😆 poor boy was jealous as her mom was feeding sum stranger..😉
ankush purposely sent avi to shlok room so shlok wil know abt astha's son...
but shlok misunderstood astha...hope he knows d truth...
he was hurt & seeing him even astha was hurt..😭
d flash back scene of shlok trying to hold d baby was nice...😆
but wen he wil know his fathers truth i guess he wil b broken... but it is better to face truth then to live in illusion...
but liked aditi, prabhakar & ankush support to astha..
prabhakar adopted astha, ankush & aditi...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
merry christmas...🥳
Edited by coolhi1988 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
woww that's a good christmas gift for us,superb update dear👍🏼⭐️
poor shlok just shattered to see astha's baby😭😭and our astha loves him soo much and didn't saw him in tears😭😭😭
loved this ankush,a lovely bro just trying to make everything alright between ashlok❤️
but astha's past haunting me😕what happened to her😕
egerly waiting for next update...continue soon...
advance happy new year😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update 👏
There is so many secrets in your story... When are you going to reveal them?
And the biggest secret and question is; what NA did to Astha and her family???

Sorry for late response, I was working during Christmas time.

Please, continue soon and reveal some secrets to us 😊

Thanks for pm and Happy New Year!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice update...
Thank you dear😊
everyone want ashlok together...
yes, everyone want them together because it's astha's happiness😉
i guess this NA is d one who has made all suffer... 🤢
you guessed that right😆
loved it wen avi askd astha y is she feeding shlok he i'nt a baby...😆😆 poor boy was jealous as her mom was feeding sum stranger..😉
yes, avi was jealous that's why 😆😆😆
ankush purposely sent avi to shlok room so shlok wil know abt astha's son...
but shlok misunderstood astha...hope he knows d truth...
he was hurt & seeing him even astha was hurt..😭
d flash back scene of shlok trying to hold d baby was nice...😆
that showed men's fears when they hold a baby😆😆
but wen he wil know his fathers truth i guess he wil b broken... but it is better to face truth then to live in illusion...
of course, just like in show he will be devastated
but liked aditi, prabhakar & ankush support to astha..
prabhakar adopted astha, ankush & aditi...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
will update soon
merry christmas...🥳
same to you..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

woww that's a good christmas gift for us,superb update dear👍🏼⭐️

poor shlok just shattered to see astha's baby😭😭and our astha loves him soo much and didn't saw him in tears😭😭😭
loved this ankush,a lovely bro just trying to make everything alright between ashlok❤️
but astha's past haunting me😕what happened to her😕
egerly waiting for next update...continue soon...
advance happy new year😊


Thank you dear, i'm glad you love my christmas gift😊
yeah, both are suffering but soon they will have happiness,,
ankush is like a guardian of astha, just like prabhakar..
not only you astha's past is also haunting me😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉
will update soon..
happy new year😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Fimiramak

Great update 👏

There is so many secrets in your story... When are you going to reveal them?
And the biggest secret and question is; what NA did to Astha and her family???

Sorry for late response, I was working during Christmas time.

Please, continue soon and reveal some secrets to us 😊

Thanks for pm and Happy New Year!


Thank you dear
the mysterious had just started, it's too soon for revelation😉😆😉😆
yes that is the biggest secret what NA did and the answer to that question is so far ahead..😆😆😉😉😉

It's ok dear, I understand..
will updte soon but reveal some secrets? will think about that 😉😉😉

Same to you!


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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 6

Niranjan was pacing back and forth in his room, like an animal in cage, beads of perspiration formed on his forehead, nervousness completely reflected on his face, he can't believe it, he can't believe there will be anyone who can outsmart him. He haven't got any clue that could lead him to his enemy but his enemy knows everything about him, he knows his past, his present and probably his future, if he fail to capture him.

After he identified and confirmed Shlok's body, he felt as if he lost half part of his body and soul. He thought his enemy would gloat over his victory but two days had lapsed yet he didn't recieve any call. He concluded that his enemy got his revenge, he was satisfied by taking his son's life but he wasn't. He recieved his call and as usual he left him with another thing to worry.

"How are you Mr. Niranjan Agnihotri?"
"You bas***d! How will you think I will be after killing my son!"
He heard feeble, muffled laughter then his reply "You know I get relief seeing you like this. So desperate, so miserable, but that was just minor things, it was just beginning. What will happen if I take something very special and very important from you?"
"What are you talking about?"
"You will know in the right time. By the way condolence to your son."
"Wai---"
Beep beep beep.


What is very important to me that he will take, he did took his son, his only heir, what else does he need?
***

It was already mid-morning, when he awoke he found her on the bed, different weapons spread in front of her, she was inspecting and cleaning each weapon, perhaps getting everything ready for their plan. As usual, he didn't said a word nor she, he was given new set of clothes and fresh food for breakfast. After he took his shower, he ate his breakfast, still there was silence between them.
"I heard you own this island, how come you got so rich?" Shlok asked suddenly.
She smirked and replied "I thought you already concluded that yesterday."
Shlok blushed with embarrasment, recalling his comment, he did concluded that without any basis.
"It was given to me." She still answered.
"Given to you?"
"Yes. A token of gratitude to me by my father."
Shlok gave her a baffled look and replied "I thought Uncle Avdhoot was..I meant..you named your son after him so.."
"My real father is dead." She replied dryly.
"I'm sorry." He said
"Don't be. But I wasn't talking about him, I was talking about the man who adopted me and Ankush. You remember Aditi? Her real father."
He frowned and asked "What did you do that he got so generous that he gave an island to you and adopted you?"
Prabhakar Joshi went still, he can't believe his eyes, he might be dreaming, he thought he lost his only sixteen years old daughter Aditi two months ago but she is there, in front of his eyes, her cheeks streaked with dirt and tears, her rugged clothes covering dust.
"My baby!" He screeched in agony as he embraced her in a tight hug.
"Papa!" Aditi cried with uncontrollable tears in her eyes.
"Where were you? I looked for you everywhere, what happened? I thought you died baby, I'm so glad, oh! I can't believe it. Thank you Lord!"
"Papa, many things happened, I was so scared! They took me and locked me! I was so frightened! They said I will---oh! Papa! I would've done it if she hadn't saved me! Astha saved me, she never let them get near me! I thought that was end for me but she protected me, she fought for me. I'm so thankful to her! So thankful!"
"What are you doing? You don't need to do this!" An eighteen year old Astha said as she saw Prabhakar bowed down infront of her.
"I'm indebted to you, Astha. What you did for my daughter i will never be able to repay you. Anything I do won't be enough."
"Please don't, I never saved her so I will get repaid, I wanted no other woman to have the same fate as I have."
"Still, you did something a stranger wouldn't have done. I can't let you go away, can't let you live alone. You lost your family, I will give you a family, you will be known as my daughter, I will be proud to be called your father, I will give you everything to give justice to you and your family. No other family will get ruined by the hands of that bas***d, Niranjan Agnihotri."


"I saved Aditi."
"How?"
"That I wouldn't tell."
"Why..won't you tell me anything?" He asked softly and hesitantly.
She lowered her eyes and replied while clutching the rag in her hand. "Sometimes there are things that are better not asked, Shlok."
"And sometimes I forget that you are not my Astha." He replied annoyingly.
"Then don't ever forget." She replied back as she gave a small sweet smile.
"You're impossible, Astha!" He said angrily then looked away from her.
He glanced at her, she had gone back to the work she was doing.
"Do you know how to use those things or just showing off to me?"
Astha raised her brow and asked "Did you forgot the dirk that passed through your cheek by mere centimeters?"
He blushed again, how can he forget that incident, if he hadn't known that it was her behind the mask, he would've still feared the man.
"I'm impressed you've gotten brave and learned how to fight." He remarked.
"You have to thank your father for that." She replied without looking at him.
"So my father did a good thing for you?" He asked sarcastically.
She just smiled at him while he pursed his lips in annoyance.
"There's no fun riling you up!" Shlok grumbled.
"If that was your intention then my dear prisoner you fail in it."
"Damn hell I am!"
"Whose room is this?" He asked.
"What gotten into you? You're questioning a lot today."
"Of course, it's a new place for me and I'm bored."
"And whose fault is that?" She asked.
"I don't need your mercy." He replied.
"This room is mine."
"I never see you sleeping here."
"Until my son---" She paused and looked at him, she saw blank expression, doesn't it matter she had a son, he never once asked about him, she shaked herself mentally, isn't that what she wanted, so she continued "is here, I sleep with him."
Shlok hid his hurt expression, he can't let her see how affected he is even at the mention of her son.
"What about his father? Your husband?"
"I...I don't..have any husband. My son..don't have any father, he's an illegimate child" She replied uneasily.
He was stunned, she don't have a husband, she don't have anyone in her life, there is no other man in her heart, relief and joy washed through him, he felt as if his life came back to him. She had a relationship with no strings attached? He never expected that, he shaked himself mentally, he is judging her again without basis, there are many reasons, that bas***d must have promised her marraige as innocent as she is, she wouldn't have noticed and left her with the baby.
"So who he was?" He asked carefully.
She bit her quivered lip, can she tell him, no she can't, more questions will come, can she answer them, no she can't, she is ashamed of what she had done, will he look at her the same way, perhaps yes or no.
"I..wish I knew.." She mumbled so softly that only she heard.
"Astha?"
She looked at him and sharply replied "I told you anything that concerns me is none of your business!"
Shlok gave her a baffled look, she was fine a moment ago, what happened to her out of sudden that she got so angry, he will never understand her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 7

He was about to say something when the door opened and Arjun entered the room.
"Here you go, darlin'!" He said and threw a watch on her lap.
"Thanks Arjun." She replied with a smile and walked towards Shlok. She unlocked his cell and took his wrist then fasten the watch on his wrist.
"What is this?" Shlok asked while inspecting the watch.
"It is track watch, by this we can track you, hear you, almost like a stalker, this is specialized watch for prisoners, i hate to use this on you but can't help it. One more thing, this watch has network range and that is within this island."
"If I ever went out of the range you won't be able to track me?" He asked with a smirk.
"That is true because the prisoner himself won't be alive, the watch will explode ten minutes after he went out of the range."
Shlok widened his eyes in shock, he said worriedly "What if by chance I went out of the range without me knowing?"
"Don't worry the range goes few meters beyond the island, just keep yourself on land, don't go in the sea besides it will give alarms to let you know you're out of range."
"What if I remove it?"
"You can't it has a code. It's stuck to you like a part of the body."
"Damn genius work, I must say."
"You can thank Swati and Veer for that." She replied proudly.
"This bed will be yours for a while, until the new prisoner is gone from this cell." She said while pointing at the bed behind her.
"New prisoner?"
"Yes. It's someone you don't know. You'll be out this evening." She said and turned to leave.
"Why not now?"
"Because I want no trouble until I leave." She said and locked his cell.
"Arjun take these weapons to Abhay, tell him we have no use of these. Father and Avi will be leaving soon, so I'll be goin---."
"No need, we're here." Prabhakar said, interrupting her as he entered the room.
Shlok looked at the new entrant, so he is the man who adopted her, he might be in his mid fifties, he does have familiar features like Aditi, and he had an impressive personality.
"I was coming, Father."
"So what if I came." He replied.
"Where's Avi?"
"You asked him not to come here, he's waiting outside."
"I'll go to him." She said and went out.
"I'll come too, baby." Arjun said and followed her.
Prabhakar casted his eyes on Shlok and smiled while Shlok gave him a curious look.
"Why have you not once tried to escape?" Prabhakar asked.
Shlok frowned, he never expected that question, "Why are you asking?"
"Just curious."
He is her father albeit adoptive, he is her guardian, can he tell him the truth, the real reason why he won't escape, he can because she will listen to him, he may make her understand.
"Because I'm waiting."
"Waiting?"
"For Astha to explain everything. Even if I have complete faith in my father, I have belief in Astha that she won't harm anyone without any reason, even though she claim to do so. I won't get my answers if I escape from here, I want to know why is she doing this and why she thinks my father is bad, what is she doing here, I want to know everything about her and her family."
"And if you know everything, what will you do then?"
"I can't say anything, my decision will depend on what I've heard."
"I see."
"You know everything about her?"
"I do, she told me everything nine years ago but don't expect me to tell you because it's not my right to reveal something which is not mine. If she doesn't want, I can't help you, young man."
"Nine years ago? What about four more years?"
"That is the time she never want to reveal to you."
"How am I able learn anything if she won't tell me? Does she think I won't trust her? Why is she hiding everything from me?"
"For your own sake."
"For my sake? How?" He asked.
"Good bye, Shlok. Pleasure meeting you." He said and turned to leave "one more thing young man, if you truly love her and wish to be with her,then show her, she is worthy of your love because that is what keeping her from you." He added and left the room.
***
"Where's your boss?" The man gritted out. His hands were tied behind, the pain in his leg, where the dagger was thrown to incapacitate him was intolerable, his jeans was oozing with his own blood, his state was pitiful, he doesn't know why they held him. He was here for the drug deal, the deal was going splendid between him and his party, as soon as the exchange happened, they were ambushed by the Blackhawk gang. All of them were beaten and defeated, not one was able to escape they were tied by the Blackhawk gang, six people dressed in black clothes, their face covered with balaclava caps, only eyes were revealed to him. According to the rumours, their boss is the one with gold eyes like a hawk, sharp and cold, he is always dressed in black clothes with balaclava cap, which was why he was named as Blackhawk. This is the group who had gained notorious reputation in the underworld since last six years, the one whom every crime organization wants as his alley, there's not a work they failed to complete, even as dangerous as it is, they are able to complete them. No one knows who they are, where they came from, how they look, where they live or anything about them, they are like people living in shadows, they can reveal themselves to you without you knowing their identity.

"I'm right here." He heard someone say from his behind.
He looked back and found their boss leaning against the pillar, his arms crossed against his chest, his posture relaxed and cool.
"What is the meaning of this, Blackhawk?" He asked.
"You are in no position to question me, shut your mouth." Astha replied calmly.
"Don't get cocky, bas***d! I--Ahh!" He cut off when he felt sudden pressure on the wound of his leg.
"Who're you calling bas***d?" Arjun asked in a chilling voice.
"It hurts! Damn it!"
"Then don't open your bleeding mouth!" Abhay snarled while Arjun removed the pressure.
"Astha! The police is early! They are coming, you have to get out fast!" They heard Veer from their earphone. Each one of them are connected with their earphones, able to communicate with each other, even at the same time.
"You get out too, the work here is finish. We are taking the one we want. Make sure you have Jyoti---" Astha started.
"Freeze! It's police!" They heard another feeble voice from the earphone.
"Who got caught?" Ankush asked.
"I said don't move!" They heard again.
"I ain't moving asshole!" Jyoti grumbled but then whispered "I'm sorry, Master".
"Don't worry. I'm coming. You two take him with you, we'll come after you." Astha ordered as he pointed the finger at the man.
"Why me? Where are you taking me?" He asked in panic as both Arjun and Abhay lifted him from the floor and took him away from the group.
***
"That is called backstabbing, Inspector Karan." Astha said as she revealed herself from the shadows. She glanced at the police jeepney, there were only few police along with inspector, for about only six of them.
Karan showed a cocky grin and replied "Can't help myself, I knew you will come to take your men, Blackhawk."
"I surrender many criminals to you yet you show no mercy to me and my men."
"I have no interest in underlings when all I want is the masterminds and you never surrender the mastermind, I know you know the masterplayer yet you never lead the police to them. I will do my best and even give you protection, just be my witness."
"Protection? The police never protected me when I needed them, instead they betrayed me. Justice, Protection, Truth are all laughable things in the books of law, they are merely written in the books to show people that the law has outmost power but in reality money has the outmost power. Don't make me laugh, Inspector."
"I don't know what happened to you in the past but don't make fun of the law or the real police because they give up their life to protect the citizens from criminals. I'm ashamed too from the corrupted police and law but not all are corrupted."
"Astha, we located her, you may start now." Astha heard Veer from her earphone.
"Good bye, Inspector." Astha said as a bomb blasted and smoke started to engulf the area.
Karan coughed harder and tried to keep his blurry eyes open so we won't lose his sight on Blackhawk.
"Don't let them take the prisoner!" he shouted his order.
"Ahhh!! Damn it!" He heard one of his men cursing.
"They ran away!" He heard another in panic.
"Damn! I lost them again!" Karan mumbled to himself.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippee me first [:P]

lovely updates dear. Been waiting for ur update for long.(from christmas).. Lovely new year gift dear better than christmas gift..
The plot is moving at an awesome pace and take ur time to reveal the mystery behind astha dear i agree its a bit early
A very good ashlok ff dear...

And loads of thanks for back to back updates . [:D]
Edited by ss1609 - 10 years ago

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