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Awesome promo
Asad stopped Siddiqui hand to slap zoya. Zeenat noticed ASYA emotions. Zoya thought abt asad reasons & happy that he saved her. Nice confrontation between zeenat & asad. Waiting for an update soon. Thanks for pm


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Part 2(A)

In d evening, Asad, Anwar, Zeenat n Zoya were sitting in d office room of SM.

"In d morning, I went thru d names in dis file of d students of d colleges where Mr. Siddiqui went to interview d students," said Zoya pointing to d file which was reading after breakfast before Asad entered d room.

"Eventhough I myself kept dat file there after getn d information 4m those I did not see them. Did u saw sumthn in dat?" asked Asad.

"I went thru d lists n saw dat many boys scoring 60%-75% r shortlisted over d girls scoring over 80% to above 95%," replied Zoya.

Others r shocked at her reply.

"Dis is ridiculous. Dis man prefers such low scores of boys to girls who scores even so much," said Anwar.

"Its expected only wen dat man did not called any girls for interviews at all," said Asad.

It cannot be accepted cuz its unfair to d girls who studies n prepares so hard for these interviews," said Zeenat.

Next morning, Zeenat n Zoya got ready for their 1st day at SC. Zeenat wore a white shirt n blue jeans wid a yellow blazer while Zoya wore a formal blue shirt wid a black formal short skirt. ZeeYa went in Zoya's car wid Zoya driving it as Anwar decided to come an hour later than them so he tuk his car wid him while Asad went in his own car.

Asad was d 1st to reach SC. He waited for ZeeYa in d parking. They arrived after some minutes. Then they went inside d office 2gthr. They were shocked to see dat only men were d employees. D employees lukd at d trio confusingly. They then stared at Zeenat n Zoya. Some men started laughing.

"Luks like we r dreaming cuz there r 2 girls in our office," said employee no. 1.

"I think they forgot d way of market to buy fruits n vegetables," said employee no. 3.

"Look girls, whoever u both are. Just get lost 4m here cuz girls r not allowed here in dis office," said employee no. 3.

"U both will not get any jobs in dis office. After all, u girls sud only focus on cooking n lukn after d house," said employee no. 4.

D trio were getn angry due to d men's teasing. Asad lukd at ZeeYa who were getn so embarrassed n hurt to speak anything due to all d men in d office.

"Enough," roared Asad, "Who d hell do u all think u are?"

"Why u r getn angry?" asked employee no. 3, "We were talking abt these girls not u."

"Cuz I am wid these girls," replied Asad in a clear tone, "I am Asad Ahmed Khan who is d co-owner of dis company. They r Zeenat Zainab Farooqui n Zoya Zainab Farooqui who r also d co-owners of dis company. U all sud learn to respect women. U all have such cheap thinking dat girls only cook n look after d house. U all forgot dat d world has progressed a lot but u all still have such backward thinking. Is dis how u all think abt d girls at ur home or talk to them like dis? U all sud be ashamed of urselves. D company u all r working has been by a woman itself dat is Zainab Sikandar Farooqui who was d mother of these 2 girls. Now wat u all wil say? Will u all leave dis company cuz it was started by a woman?These kind of behaviours 4m u all will not be tolerated. U all better be in ur limits n don't repeat ur mistakes again. Otherwise, it will be not good for all of u."

D employees kept quiet as they did not had anything to say. They can't believe dat 2 women wil be their bosses. They just nodded their heads meekly. Asad said Zainab's maiden name to hide Zeenat n Zoya's real identities. ZeeYa luks softly at Asad.

"Thanks a lot, Asad," said ZeeYa 2gthr.

"No need to say thanks, guys. We r supposed to work 2gthr," said Asad wid a smile, "Lets go to our cabins."

Asad went to a cabin which was for him to be shared wid Anwar while ZeeYa shared another cabin for themselves.

ZeeYa were talking abt Asad in their cabin.

"Asad has defended n supported us wen those men were teasing us," said Zeenat.

"Asad is really a great guy. He has earlier also supported me 4m these type of men," said Zoya recalling d incident during d tender meeting at Scindia Corporations.

"Yaa, he is a great guy," said Zeenat.

Zeenat noticed Zoya's face which has emotional expressions cuz of d way she just now spoke abt how Asad is a great guy who had earlier also supported her in an incident. Zoya again thinks abt dat incident where he stood for her wen those 2 men were ridiculing her as she was a woman. She smiles thinking dat again while Zeenat wonders why she is smiling. Does she still loves Asad? Why she still thinks abt him if she has fears of him not hvng those feelings for her anymore after getn to know abt their father?

"Zoya, our work pressure will increase now," said Zeenat.

"Jeeju n Asad's work pressure too will increase now," said Zoya.

"Yaa," said Zeenat.

After an hour, Anwar arrived in his cabin which he has to share wid Asad.

"Hi jeeju," said Asad.

"Hi," said Anwar n asked, "Wat happened on our 1st day?"

"Jeeju, some employees were teasing di n Zoya for being girls," replied Asad teln him wat happened wen they entered d office.

"How dare they ridiculed them?" asked Anwar furiously, "They need to learn manners on how to talk to girls."

"Relax jeeju, we will make sure dis does not happens again," replied Asad calmly.

"Glad dat u shut their mouth," said Anwar wid a smile.

"Its my duty to do dat wen needed," said Asad wid a smile.

Next afternoon, Zoya walks in d hall where others r also there. She was wearing a short black dress. She sits between Zeenat n Ayaan on d couch. She sees Razia lovingly feeding kheer to Humeira.

"I love a lot wen u feed me wid ur hands, ammi," said Humeira wid a smile.

"I love feeding my lovely daughter," said Razia wid a smile.

Zoya's eyes turn dark seeing dat. She recalls one of d incidents of herself as 6 year old child after her mother's death.

-----Flashback-----

It was 2 days after Zainab's death. Zeenat, Zoya, Sikandar n Nazneen were sitting for breakfast. Zoya was not eating food.

"Zoya beta, start ur food," said Sikandar.

"I want ammi to feed me wid her own hands like she do many times. I will not eat food," said Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

Tears came in other's eyes too.

"Zoya beta, u know ur ammi can't come. I will feed u the food," said Nazneen.

Zoya who was d youngest n the most innocent in d family at dat time suddenly realized of d horrific incident she witnessed wid her di. Nani started feeding Zoya n Zoya ate widout saying anything.

"Abbu is so bad. He killed ammi n went away wid another woman wid their baby," said Zoya angrily thru her tears while others lukd at her worriedly thru her tears.

-----Flashback Ends-----

She gets sad as well as angry remembering dat.

"Humeira, I can't believe ur ammi still feeds u wid her hands. U r still a small child," said Zoya in a taunting voice.

All r shocked. Razia n Humeira gets angry.

"How can u ridicule a bonding of mother and a daughter?" asked Humeira angrily.

"Whatever," replied Zoya wid attitude.

Razia n Humeira became unhappy. Zoya smirks at their unhappy faces. AsYan n AnZee notices her smirk. Asad recalls a similar incident of him n his mother but there Zoya was so nice wid them unlike here.

------Flashback-----

Dilshad, Asad n Zoya were hvng gajar halwa in d hall. Dilshad was sitting between Asad n Zoya. Najma was at her college. Dilshad was lovingly feeding Asad wid her hands.

"Ammi, I am not a small child. I can eat on my own," said Asad.

"But u will always be a small child for me," said Dilshad.

"Mausi is right, Asad. U will always be a small child for her. Mausi will not feed u all d times. She only feeds u some of d times cuz she loves u so much," said Zoya.

"Titli, u also?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Till 5 years, I did not used to eat wid my hands but my ammi, di, nana n nani used to feed me. My ammi used to feed me most of d times. Even after 5 years, my ammi used to feed me some of d times n I wud love dat very much. After ammi's death, I missed eating 4m her hands. U sud be happy dat u r lucky to have ur ammi feeding u," said Zoya.

Asad n Dilshad felt bad hearing dat. Dilshad fed him 2 more spoons n turned to Zoya. She tuk her bowl n started feeding her while Asad was eating himself.

"Mausi, u feed me also some of d times since I came here," said Zoya.

"Cuz u and Zeenat r also like my daughters," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Asad smiled seeing Dilshad feeding Zoya.

"U r so nice, Mausi. U r just like my ammi," said Zoya wid a smile.

-----Flashback Ends-----

Asad again lukd at Zoya who was smiling wickedly as Humeira tuk d kheer bowl 4m Razia's hands n started eating herself.

"I will eat myself, ammi. Some people needs to learn dat I am not a small child," said Humeira furiously staring at Zoya.

Zoya then smirked at Razia who felt sad at wat Humeira said.

Asad was puzzled at Zoya's different behaviour on different times. He understood dat she was troubling Razia as she hates her. Zoya left d hall n walked in d corridor. Zeenat went after her. AsYaan too got up n decided to hear wat they talk by hiding.

"Zoya, kuch jyaada nahi hua?" asked Zeenat, "Vo humaari behen hai."

"Vo humaari behen nahi hai. Vo humaare ammi ki pati ki beti hai," replied Zoya coldly.

Zeenat n AsYaan were shocked. Then Zeenat laughed at her for copying Alia Bhat's dialogue 4m SOTY.

"U r copying Alia Bhat's dialogue 4m Students Of The Year," said Zeenat wid a laugh.

"No, I suggested dis dialogue to Alia Bhat," joked Zoya.

Zeenat laughed again.

"She is our sister, Zoya. Only Gaffur, Razia n Shirin r our enemies. We r not supposed to hate Humeira so much," said Zeenat.

"Yaa, she is our sister. Di, we don't hate Humeira but we can't even get close to her. She is very close to her parents. Her parents can easily instigate her to know our plans. We can't let dat happen. We can't trust anyone other than Ayaan n Asad," said Zoya.

"U r right, Zoya," said Zeenat.

AsYaan were shocked wid their talks but they were happy dat they trust them.

"Di, u know na wat they all did to us. Dats why, I had hurt them in d hall. After wat all they did to us, I can't see these 3 people Gaffur, Razia n Shirin happily enjoying their lives after destroying our lives. I don't hate Humeira n Nuzhat but they r many times cumn in d way of our plans. Dat day, they even told Asad to join dat man n throw us out," said Zoya.

"But Asad did not do dat na. U know na he will never do sumthn dat is wrong," said Zeenat.

"But still, we cannot trust Humeira n Nuzhat. These 2 girls r so selfish. They know dat Asad hates dat man. Still, they told him to join dat man to defeat us," said Zoya.

"Yaa chhoti, these 2 girls r so selfish. They only thought abt themselves n their parents. They did not thought abt Asad. They saw them insulting Asad n his family many times. Still, they had d audacity to tell him to merge his shares wid his shares," said Zeenat.

ZeeYa left d corridor. AsYaan were shocked to hear their convo.

Scene shifts to AsYaan in Asad's rooms.

"So, these all things goes in their minds," said Ayaan.

"Wats new in dat?" asks Asad.

"Only 3 people r their enemies but wat they said abt Humeira n Nuzhat r right. They sud not have told u to join mamu knowing very well dat u also hate him," replied Ayaan.

"I can't hate Humeira n Nuzhat but I have to be careful 4m them too. At dis time, we can only trust abbu, Badi Bi, jeeju, di n Zoya in dis house," said Zoya.

"Yaa," said Ayaan.

In d evening, Zeenat, Zoya n Ayaan r cutting vegetables for biryani.

"Zoya, tu kitna dheere dheere sabzi kaat rahi hai," said Zeenat.

"Hume dekhkar kuch seekho," said Ayaan.

"Main dheere dheere nahi tum dono jyaada jaldi jaldi kaat rahe ho," said Zoya.

Zeenat n Ayaan laughed at wat she said.

"I remember a saying- Naach na aave aangan tedha," said Ayaan wid a laughed.

Zeenat too laughed n did hi-five wid him. Zoya glared at them n they stopped laughing. While cutting carrots, Zoya starts eating one.

"These carrots r for to be cut not to be eaten," said Zeenat.

"I am hungry, babes," said Zoya takn one more carrot to eat, "Dats why, I am eating. Anyways, be grateful dat dis kitchen is still lukn better otherwise till a year ago weneva Zoya used to enter d kitchen then u know wat to expect."

"Yaa, how cud I forget wat to expect wen u used to enter d kitchen earlier," said Zeenat.

Latif entered d kitchen.

"Wat you 3 r going to make?" asked Latif.

"Biryani," replied Ayaan n asked, "Where were u wen we were calling u to help us?"

"I had applied face-pack na. So, I was waiting for it to dry," replied Latif.

D trio controlled their laughter.

"Okay, now help us," said Ayaan.

Next afternoon, Zoya was walking in d corridor. She was drinking water 4m a glass. She was wearing a black crop t-shirt n black jeans. She came at d hall's exit n saw Humeira running to her abbu who was sitting on d couch to give him a newspaper. In her running, she accidently made a vase which was kept on a side table fall on d ground n break into pieces.

"I am sorry, abbu. I broke ur expensive vase which u got 4m London," apologized Humeira.

Gaffur got n smiled at Humeira.

"No need to say sorry, Humeira beta. It was just a vase which can be brought again but my daughter is more precious than any vase," said Gaffur wid a vase.

Zoya's face turned red wid anger as she recalled a childhood incident. She was clutching her glass of water tightly in anger.

-----Flashback-----

One morning, Zeenat n Zoya were playing catch catch wid a ball in d hall. Zeenat was 10 n Zoya was 6. Gaffur was sitting on d couch n reading a newspaper. Zainab was not in d house. Zeenat n Zoya were playing while sitting on 2 other couches. They were playing happily. While playing, Zoya throws d ball a little fast n it hits a vase which was kept on a side table making it fall down n breaking it into pieces. Both were very shocked. Suddenly, Gaffur puts his newspaper angrily on d table n gets up. He went to Zoya n slapped her hard. Zoya started crying. Zeenat got up n sat near Zoya. She felt bad for her as their abbu slapped her.

"Abbu, I am very sorry. I did not do it deliberately. It happened accidentally," apologized Zoya while crying.

"Wid ur sorry will dis vase get back like before? Dis vase was very expensive which I got it 4m London and u broke it. U r such a careless girl," said Gaffur angrily.

"Abbu, she has apologized na. It was just an accident. Plz, stop being angry on her. She is very small," said Zeenat.

Gaffur turned to look at her angrily. He slapped her hard n Zoya started crying again wen he slapped her di.

"U r defending her now," said Gaffur angrily, "U both girls have made my life miserable. Can't u both play carefully? 4m next time, both of u don't play before me. And if Zoya or u break anything again then it will be worse for both of u. Now, u both go to ur room."

Zeenat tuk Zoya to their room.

-----Flashback Ends-----

Zoya came out of her thought n due to d pressure on d glass, it broke n hurt her right palm wid which she was holding d glass making it bleed. She then felt a hand 4m behind grabbing her left hand n takn her 4m there. She turned aside to find Asad who had grabbed her hand.

"Asad, wat r u doing?" asked Zoya.

"Dats wat I sud ask u, Zoya," replied Asad lukn at her bloody wound.

He took d broken glass 4m her hand n dumping it in a corridor dustbin. He was feeling pain seeing her in pain due to wound.

"Asad, leave my hand," said Zoya n was abt to pull her hand.

"Come quietly wid me," said Asad calmly.

Sumthn in her stopped her pulling out her hand n she quietly walked wid Asad as he led her inside his room. He left her hand n made her sit on d couch. He brought d first aid box 4m his cupboard n sat at d right side of her. He held her right wrist n started cleaning her wound wid Dettol. She started feeling more pain due to Dettol.

"Asad, its paining a lot. Plz stop," said Zoya n tried to pull her hand.

He gripped her hand tighter n said firmly, "Keep ur hand still, Zoya."

"Asad, plz be a little slow then," said Zoya in a painful voice as he cleaned her wound.

"U r feeling pain. Then why did u hurt urself in d 1st place? Didn't u felt pain then?" asked Asad, "Why u need to get jealous of dat man showering love on Humeira?"

Asad had seen everything in d hall. Zoya lukd shockingly at him.

"No need to be shocked," said Asad, "I saw dat u were getn angry wen dat man was showering his love on Humeira. I can't believe dat u expect such man to love u in d same way after wat all he did wid ur family. And u r hurting urself for him.

He slowed down d cleaning of her wound. He was careful not to hurt her much n blowing air on d wound in betweens to soothe it a bit. Zoya as feeling better at d way he was treating her wound wid care.

"I am not expecting him to love me, Asad. He never loved me, di n ammi. I was getn angry at d partiality he was showing to Humeira. Wen I was 6 n di was 10, we were playing catch catch in d hall while he was reading newspaper. While playing, I threw d ball accidentally a little fast n it hit d vase causing it to fall down n get broken into pieces. Can u imagine wat he did? He slapped me, Asad. He slapped me. Cuz I broken his expensive vase which he got 4m London wid my carelessness. Wen di came to my defense, he slapped her too. I was just 6 n di was just 10 then. And Humeira is now 20 but wen she did d same mistake accidentally, she got different reaction 4m him. Why? Cuz we were never his daughters. He had only one daughter dat is Humeira 4m his girlfriend Razia. We were both just mistakes in d name of daughters dat happened while dat man was fooling our ammi. We did not exist for him," said Zoya in a hatred filled voice teln him everything abt dat childhood incident n also d incident dat happened some minutes ago in d hall.

Asad felt sad as well as angry as he listened to everything Zoya. He finished cleaning her wounds. He applied ointment on her wounds n started dressing it wid bandage.

"Zoya, u and di r not mistakes," said Asad in a calm n soothing voice, "U both r such nice girls. Dat man don't deserve to have both of u as his daughters. U, di n dat man has only one thing in common dat is DNA n may be blood group. Other than dat, u both don't luk like dat man's daughter. U both r so different 4m him dat none can say dat u both r his daughters. Wen Ayaan 1st told me dat u both r his daughters, I cud not believe dat but it was truth. Zoya, I know u and di r very angry wid some people in dis house. U both came for revenge n take everything dat belongs to u and ur family. I can understand ur anger dat u always show on some people in dis house. But in anger, u can't hurt urself like dis. Dis is wrong. Hurting urself like dis will not erase dat childhood incident. But, in fact it will increase more pain. Never hurt urself again like dis however angry u are. I have done d dressing of ur wound. Take care of it. Now, u go to d doctor to treat ur wound."

Zoya lukd at him softly as he said dat.

"Thanks Asad," said Zoya wid a smile, "I will go to d doctor now. I felt very nice wid wat u all said. U r right, Asad. I sud not hurt myself like dis. Dis is wrong."

"Take care of ur wound," said Asad wid a smile.

She nodded her head. Zeenat who was watching everything 4m d doorway got shocked. She had seen Asad 4m far takn Zoya sumwhre 4m d corridor n followed them. She was even feeling emotional due to Zoya teln Asad abt dat incident n other things of how their father did not loves them. She saw d genuine care, affection n pain on Asad's face as he was tending to her wound n listening to wat all Zoya was saying. She went 4m there.

Zoya got up 4m d couch n went to her room. She saw Zeenat sitting on her bed. She went n sat next to her.

"Di, wen u came?" asked Zoya.

"Just now, chhoti. Lets take u to d doctor," replied Zeenat, "I saw n hear everything dat happened in Asad's room. Asad said right. U can't hurt urself like dis anger."

"I hate dat man, di," said Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

"I too hate dat man, chhoti," said Zeenat wiping her tears.

She tuk Zoya into a comforting hug. Zoya too hugged her back. They broke d hug after sometime. They then left d room to go to d doctor. Zeenat drove d car as Zoya's hand was hurt just some time ago.

Precap: #AsYaan visits DilNaj in KV. AsYaan tells them wat all things r happening in d house. They get worried on learning dat Zoya even hurt herself. DilNaj tells AsYaan to care of both d sisters.

#Razia's cousin sister Sadiya n her pregnant daughter Afreen came to meet her 4m Australia. Zeenat n Zoya came in d hall n revealed their identity by saying dat their ammi died n they were missing n years later, their abbu called them here after finding them.

#Zeenat confronts Asad abt his feelings for Zoya.

A/N: Zoya is becoming a goth due to her actions. She has problems due to her family and love life(with Akram and then Asad). She is showing herself to be tough from the outside fighting back with those who trouble her in any way. She even bullies people sometimes in anger due to past issues(Humeira in this part). Even though, she is very tough and strong but sometimes she is very weak, emotional and vulnerable from inside due to her family and love life. She even hurt herself in anger due to some past issues. Still, she is strong and intelligent.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Awesome update Juhi!
Update soon
Can't wait for d next part
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Gr8 part loved it
Asya and anzee were amazing
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Plz pm me for next part
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Heyy...Juhi..
Thanx for the P.M dear..,
A well written update...
Asad defending Zeenath and Zoya in the office...well written and right words also...about insulting and degrading woman...it should not be followed anywhere..
And the scene where Zoya hurted her hand...and Asad was bandaging her wound...Asad atleast cleared himself to her that , He doesn't held her responsible for being her father's daughter...
But that Zeenath and Asad confrontation part was for this update...i think.?
But nevertheless...a well written update...
Continue soon.
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this is simply nice
loved it
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