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This story was absolutely mind blowing !! I throughly enjoyed it and that is an understatement. Loved the way you characterized khushi and Arnav -- khushi as the innocent jalebi bai and Arnav as the pda lover. Parts of the story I was laughing like crazy... 😆 Seriously you are an AMAZINGLY TALENTED BRILLIANT WRITER and it was a pleasure reading your writing. I just LOVED IT ALL !! ⭐️