a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: main_tu_hamesha

This is so cuteee...not talking to each othr...still showing all the love... loved it...


tui last comment korechis... NTTY!!!!!!!!😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 16

It was almost night when sharon came out of the washroom to see the room of the hotel empty...

"ye swayam kaha chala gaya????" she scanned the entire room but he was not their... "kahi bhi ho...mujhe kya...????"

She kept the towel on the couch and wore her cardigan and decided to watch a movie... She sat on the bed with the remote control when she felt that she had sat over something... She quickly got up to find a paper folded there...

She unfolded it and immediately understood it was swayam's handwriting...

"nahi badlega ye...aise likhta hai jaise peper per ant chal raha ho..."

She started reading what swayam has wrote in the paper...

[1] I need to tell you aa secret , look at 5

[2] the answer is look at 11

[3] don't get mad cookie , look at 15

[4] calm down , gali mat de , look at 13..

[5] first look at 2

[6] don't give that angry look , look at 12

[7] I just wanted to say I love you

[8] what I wanted to say is , the answer is at 14

[9] be patient look at 4

[10]this is the last time I am going to do this look at 7

[11] I hope you are not mad , look at 6

[12] sorry look at 8

[13]don't get mad look at 10

[14]I don't know how to say this but look at 3

[15]I know you are mad , look at 9

Sharon didn't know what to say...she giggled ... She turned back with a huge smile on her face to see swayam kneeling on both his knees holding his ears with a puppy face...

"sorry..." He said like a baby...Sharon immediately stopped giggled and pretended to be angry...

"plss cookie... Kitne dino se hum baat nahi kar rahe hai...wo bhi ek stupid fight ki liye..." Sharon glared and he corrected

"mera matlab fight stupid nahi thi... but you know uss din mane tujh par isiliye chillaya kyunki kahina kahi I knew ki main hi galat hoon...hamesha se galat tha..."

He left his ears and stood up...

"you were right maine bohut sare dost bana liya par teri jagah kisi ko nahi diya..." he held her shoulder and made her face him...

"but yeah... I realized ki sach mein I had taken you for granted...pata hai kyun...tu kitna bhi mujhse larti thi jhagarti thi par at the end of the day mujhe hi aake hug karke apni happiness share karti thi... you were always with me... bachpan se...to mujhe humesha laga ki , thik hai na... wo to cookie hai... meri cookie...my best buddy...wo to hai mere sath chahe kuch bhi ho jaye..."

Sharon looked down...

"kayi baar maine dekha bhi tere ankhon mein mere liye kuch..par mai samajh hi nahi payi wo dosti nahi thi...wo kuch aur tha...and dhire dhire tu dost se meri adaat ban gayi..."

Sharon was shocked to hear these from swayam...

"plss baat kar na..." swayam made a face and shrugged Sharon... "plss yaar... I promise...mai tujhe dher sara ice cream dunga..." He couldn't think of anything else at that moment...

"mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki kuch garbar hai..." Sharon narrowed her eyes and looked at him...

Swayam immediately looked side ways and said... " kya kya??? Kya garbar????" he fumbled...

"swayam , sach bol... Kuch to hai... jo mujhe samajh nahi araha hai..."

"array aisa kuch nahi hai meri maa... Tu baas mujhse maat kar..." he shook her vigorously...

"nahi karungi...kya karlega?????" swayam was taken aback at her reply...

"matlab kya hai???? Karni paregi baat... mazak hai kya...kitni pareshani k baad ye sab ratta mara maine..." He immediately bit his tongue...

"rattaa mara matlab????" Sharon widened her eyes...

"array kuch nahi..." Swayam gave a sheepish smile... " tu chor na.. kal hum ghumne jayenge okay...mujhe waise hi shimla bohut pasand hai..." He immediately changed the topic...

"swayam...sach bol..kya ratta mara..." Sharon was not a girl who could be fooled so swayam sighed and said...

"okay...iske baad to pakka tu mujhe jhadu maregi... par job hi ho...maine wo... Muskaan ko bola ki kya hua...maine tere sath faltu mein jhagra kiya aur tu gussa ho gayi... tu usne mujhe help kiya tujhe sorry bolne... musky ne ..." before he could complete sharpn said...

"tere lie speech likha..." swayam immediately retorted...

"nahi nahi...koi speech nahi likha... maine bola ki mujhe tujhse kya baat karni hai...usne baas help kiya wo... kaise bolna hai isme..." He was embarrassed... " tujhe to pata hi hai...ye sari batein mai agar khud bolne jau to aur garbar ho jayega..."

Sharon didn't know whether to laugh or cry... her swayam was still a baby... he didn't even know how to say sorry properly...



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Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have never read such a awieee sweet update
That could make you cry and smile at the same time
I loved that note of his ^_^ how cute, the whole idea of saying I love u was so damn unique *_*

Poor Swayam having hard time managing his friend ooops wife no no no his cookie or may be his adaat would be better ❤️
He need help for even apolozinsing :3 sach me baby

Ani this is my fav update ^_^
You needed not to PM (which I guess you did) cox I was already refreshing to check update

Thanks for making my day
Love u :*

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Posted: 10 years ago
The cutest update ever :)
How cutely he said sry to her
Waiting fr the futher update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
this was mind blowing ani
its definitely s Christmas treat for m
gosh that look at game I swear I have d grin on my face right now to
awwwe my swayam baby he is such a kid
finally swayam confessed that to in a unique way
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazingg
Superb it was swayam cuteness n that letter too confusing then his lines jo ratta maar kr ki thi...
Loved it!!!!
Update soon n thnkzz for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
he tring 2 manofy her
bt poor he
she is sharon
itni asani se thodina manegi
i so love dat part
he tring 2 manofy her was cuet
bt it was written by musky
how could he
poor he
hope she spare him
n also hope she forgive him
n also dey start talking
update soon
n thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rattta mara?????omg...hilarious...bt so cute and swayaron is adorabl...awww...cuteness overloaded...😉😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
such a cute update..😊
loved note wala part..aww...it was really cute..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kinna sweetly sorry bola...hayyee 😳 write more..

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