MG OS:Love You Forever Till Entity

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Love You Forever Till Entity

Note:This is story Maan is belong to middle class family. Geet belongs rich family.

Maan Singh Khuraan was sitting in cabin and thinking about his geet and their first meeting. It was one rainy day maan was coming from his office by walking and he saw geet who was fully wet by rain and dancing ,it was love at first time for maan and he get all details her .he began to go daily to see geet in her collage at his lunch break.

Geet was also love with him at first sight and she was also coming out of her class to see maan. She was sad that he did not came tell her that he love her.

Maan did not have confidence to tell geet that he love her. At last maan made mind to tell her that is love with her but, in geet house her mom and dad already making mind to marry her with friend son, hearing this geet became dull and sad. Geet told her mom that she is love with maan and also they approved it for her daughter happiness.

One day, Maan went to geet told that he was love with from many days and want make her life partner but, geet denied by saying she did not love him and their status and value did not match at any mean.

Maan told that he know it and he will work hard to keep her happy and fulfill all her need. but geet did not agreed at all and maan challenged geet that he will make himself capable to her status. it was the last time geet and maan met.

Maan flashback end by knock on door.

Maan : come in

Adi : sir it all ready 7.30 pm

Maan : ok , adi you go home and I am leaving in 10 minutes.

Adi : ok sir good night.

After, 10 minutes maan drawn car to is mansion , It was rainy day.

He saw a elder couple under umbrella walking and thoughts went back to geet and his first meet and do not to forget to remember them that they were geet's parents.

He slowly drove car beside them to tell them that now he had his own company, car, mansion but, stopped seeing them going inside graveyard and maan was shocked why there going and he followed them inside and he shocked to see that his love geet smiling photo there and name and date was written on that tomb and indicated that she died 5 months after their last meet and there was his painted picture beside her tomb drawn by geet.

Geet's parent saw him. He asked them what happened .they explained him that geet also loved him so much and that she has lied that their status do not match and all that because, did not him suffer due to her. so she as chosen him to leave , she do not want to become his obstacle. Because,

Someone does not love you the way you want them to, it does not means they do not love you. she wanted her parent's to keep his painting beside her tomb, if some day come when density bring him to her again.

Maan cried his heart out it difficult way to miss someone is to be sitting right beside her knowing you can not see her, talk to her,love her and be with her ever again.

END

When you loved, you always love that remain forever in your heart.

Maine jo socha wo kabhi paya nahi,

Chahkar bhi main usko bhul paya nahi,

Chahta to tha main usko apnana,

Per maine usko kabhi ye batya nahi...

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Edited by sunirani - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww ... its nyccc ... ending was very emmo
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congratz 4 d new OS dear its awesm simple yet wit lot of emotions 👏
hpe 2 read mre stories 4m u😃
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nice stry. .. ending is so emotional. .
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congrats on the OS! Emotional sad OS! Feeling 4 Maan! well written
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nice
but dint get why geet say no to maan
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice

but dint get why geet say no to maan

she did not him suffer due to her because geet had disease and going to die
Edited by sunirani - 10 years ago

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