Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 12

Originally posted by: zayalove

Haye zain newyork chala jaye ... q ..
Sab gullu ka kiya hua hai ..
Nyc update
Update soon
Thnks for da pm

Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU

Hey this was shocking...

Well, not just shocking, really really SHOCKING!!!!

pls update SOON...

I m really excited for the next part...

zain is lapata where is he ?well who was that lady ? amazing update

Originally posted by: CUTEZAYA

zain is lapata where is he ?well who was that lady ? amazing update

Bonjour!
Toh Tannu ne Last update dekar mujhe phasa diya..
But koi nahi.. This is OTT drama.. I just dragged the whole thing.. Plz dont throw chappals n eggs on me for giving such a lame update 😆


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Aaliya : chala gaya?? Aise kaise jaasakta hai??how dare you zain ?? How darw you?? Himmat kaise huwi mujhe dhoka dene ki.. Mujhe pehle hi samaj jaana chahiye tha... I'm so stupid.. Pyaar kiya bhi toh kisse?? Us pagal Zain se jise Pyaar ka Matlab bhi nahi pata... Uske upar he was... Cheating on me.. Aise kaise karsakta hai woh??*tears started rolling down her cheeks*
Woh aise chala gaya toh mujhe kuch farq nahi padhta... Jab khabhi wapaas aayega tab pata chalega usse... Mei zeeshan se..*starts crying bitterly*
Aisha : aalu aalu.. Stop crying.. I'm sure koi misunderstanding hai.. Woh aise..
Aaliya : enough di.. Pichli baar bhi aapki baat par yakeen kiya tha maine.. Kya huwa?? Aaj beech raaste mujhe aise akele chhod kar bhaag gaya.. Kaayar
Aisha : aalu.. Mei bata rahi hoon ki kuch huwa hai jo humei nahi pata.. Come on aalu.. I've known zain was yrs.. Uski aankhoun mei maine tumhare liye jo pyaar dekha shayad hi khabhi dekha ho..
Aaliya : enough di .. Bas bahut ho chuka.. Dad mera Nikaah Zeeshan Se Karaaana chahte hai nuh.. Toh yahi sahi.. Mei is Nikaah ke liye Tayyar hoon*wipes her tears*
Aisha : kya?? Pagal hai tu aalu?? Just bcoz zain ne aise kiya dosent mean ki tu kisi se bhi nikaah karlegi.. Aur woh bhi Zeeshan se?? R u out of ur mind?
Aaliya : toh mai aur kya karun di?? Kya karun*starts weeping..*
Aisha : aaliya*hugs her n rubs her back*
Sssh its okay.. Hum kuch karenge.. Par mei tera nikaah zeeshan se nahi hone dungi.. Vaada rahaan mera tujhse aur apne aap se bhi


Yasmeen's Classroom

Aisha : Yasmeen.. Mere saath chal nuh plz 5 min ke liye... Baat karni hai
Yasmeen : kya huwa aisha?? Aise achanak
Aisha : okay.. Yasmeen i know ki tu aur zain best friends hai aur usne tujhe zarur bataya hoga ki usne yeh sab kyun kiya.. I know usne tujhse yeh bhi kahaan hoga ki kisi ko mat batana.. But plz yasmeen.. Meri behn ki zindagi ka sawaal hai.. Taish mei aake woh zeeshan se nikaah karlegi aur apni poori zindagi barbad kardegi.. Plz mujhe batao ki actually huwa kya hai? Itna toh mei zain ko jaanti hoon ki woh aisa nahi karega.. Plz yasmeen plz
Yasmeen : mei nahi bata sakti aisha.. Plz samajhne ki koshish karo.. Maine vaada kiya hai zain se ki mei kisi ko kuch nahi bataungi.. Plz..i'm sorry
Aisha : yasmeen... Plz.. Meri behn ki Zindagi barbad hojaayegi plz
Yasmeen : i cant Aisha
Aisha : tujhe Mubashir ki Kasam.. Bata de
Yasmeen : aisha.. Mubashir ki kasam kyun di tumne?? Tum jaanti ho ki mei usse bahut pyaar karti hoon aur..
Aisha : isiliye mubashir ki kasam di...ab batao plz
Yasmeen : fine.. I'm sorry Zain ...


ZAIN's RESIDENCE


Rizwan : tu pagal hogaya hai zain?? Tu aise kaise bhabhi ko chhod kar chala jaayega?
Zain : woh teri bhabhi nahi hai.. Aur maine kuch nahi kiya.. Bas mera dil bhargaya tha uske saath*packs his bags*
Rizwan : kisko jhooth bol rahaa hai zain??mujhse se ya apne aap se?
Zain : mei jhooth nahi bol rahaan.. Yahin haqeeqat hai
Rizwan : agar yahi haqeeqat hai toh bhaag kyun rahaa hai?? Face her nuh!? Aur chehra dekha hai apna ?? Aankhe laaal ho chuki hai.. Ab plz kacha chala gaya mat bolna.. Tujhe tujhse zyaada jaanta hoon mei zain.. Tu nahi reh sakta bhabhi ke bina.. Kyun nahi samajra tu??aisa kya huwa hai tum dono ke beech jo tune yeh faisla liya?? Bhabhi ke baare mei socha tune mi unhe kaisa feel ho rahaa hoga?? Apne abu se tere liye ladhi woh.. Woh tu hi usse aise akela chhod kar jaa rahaa hai?? Zain kya hogaya hai tujhe?? Kyun kar raahan hai aisa?? Mat kar zain mat kar aisa..
Zain : toh kya karun mei?! Huh kya karun?? Usse hamare rishte ke liye sab se ladhtabhuwa dekho?? Hamare rishte ki bacchane uske saare rishte todh do?? Aur kya guarantee hai ki mei usse zindagi bhar khushiyaan deta rahunga?? *angry*
Rizwan : zain Tu hi usse Zindagi bhar khushiyaan desakta hai.. Maine Bhabhi ki aankhoun mei tere liye Beintehaa Mohabbat dekhi hai.. Woh mohabbat jiske liye log taraste hai zain.. Kyun aisi mohabbat ko chhod kar jaa rahaa hai tu?? Uske abu ne tumse kuch kahaan hai kya?
Zain : nahi..
Rizwan : zain.. Idhar dekh meri taraf.. Zain look at me*zain dosent luk at him*
I know.. Yeh sab ussi ke ghar waalo ka kiya dhara hai..


HAIDER RESIDENCE

Shabana : mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.. Agar aaliya ko sab pata chal gaya toh?? Agar us nikammme zain ne hamari aaliya ko sab bata diya ho toh?
Ghulam : aisa kuch nahi hoga begum.. Agar usne kuch bata bhi diya aaliya ko toh woh yakeen nahi karegi uska.. *evil smile*
Shabana : aur agar karliya toh?
Ghulam : mei Keh rahaa hoon nuh.. Nahi karegi.. Uska bharosa poori tarah toot chuka hai.. Ab woh zain par dobara aitbaar karne ki galti nahi karegi.. Aur ab usko zeeshan se nikaah karne ke liye raazi hona hi padega
Shabana : par aapne aisa kiya kyun Ghulam saab?? Aur kahaan kya aapne ki Zain Ne bhi Aapki Shart maan li?
Ghulam : maine kuch nahi kahaan.. Sirf ek baat kahi.. Ki us jaise insaan ke saath meri aaliya khabhi khush nahi reh sakti.. Uske ego ko hurt kiya.. Kaam nahi karta.. Kamaata nahi.. Mohabbat se pet bharega meri bacchi ka?? Ya meri beti se kaam karvaaega? Aur uske abu ko bataane ki dhamki di ki woh yahaan college mei kya kya karta hai.. Padhta nahi.. Bike racing karta hai.. Ladkiya ki irdh girdh mandraata rehta hai..
Shabana : aur usne aapki shart maan li?
Ghulam : nahi.. Itne mei kaise maan leta woh? Iske bawajud mohabbat ka junoon is tarah sawaar tha uske uppar.. . Uske baad maine usse kahaan ki agar woh apne aap meri aaliya ki zindagi se nahi chala jaata toh mei usko aaliya ki nazro mei itna giraa dunga itna giraa dunga.. Ki woh usse nafrat karne lagegi.. Phir b nahi maana.. Kehta hai.. Aaliya ko mujh par poora bharosa hai.. Woh mere baare mei aisa kuch nahi sochegi.. Aur tabhi Zain Ka phone Baja.. Aaliya ne call kiya tha.. Maine ek ladki ko bulvaaya.. Aur zain ke phne uthaane se pehle usne uthaaliya.. Aur aisa pretend kiya jaise woh zain ke saath thi.. Aur uske baad zain ka bhram toot gaya..samaj gaya woh ki ab bahut der ho chuki hai.. Maine usse turant Mumbai chodne ke liye keh diya.. Par phir b usne meri baat nahi maani.. Kehta hai ki mere pyaar mei bahut taaqat hai.. Woh usse yakeen dilaayega ki usne kuch nahi kiya hai.. Aur phir tum aayi.. Aur tumne sab theek kardiya Begum


FLASHBACK

Shabana : Ghulam Saab mei Zain se akele mei baat karna chahti hoon..*ghulam leaves*
Zain.. Ek maa aaj apni beti ki khushiyo ki bheeg maangti hai tumse.. Agar tum dono alag nahi huwe toh yeh aaliya ko zinda nahi chodenge.. Jeete jee maar daalenge yeh inhe.. Plz alag hojaao meri beti se..
Uski zindagi baqash do*begs*
Zain : nahi aunty ke aap..
Shabana : plz bete plz..
Zain : par aaliya se beintehaa Mohabbat karta hoon
Shabana : tumhari mohabbat uski jaan se badh kar hai?huh?? Bolo kya tumhari mohabbat uski jaan se badh kar hai??mei tumhare aage bheeg maangti hoon plz meri beti ko chodh do
Zain : nahi aunty yeh aap kya kar rahi hai.: theek hai... Mei usse kal hi chala jaata hoon
Shabana : allah tumhe zindagi bhar ki khushiyaa de bete..
Zain : meri khushiyaan toh aap logo ne cheen li mujhse*moves away*


ZAIN's RESIDENCE

Zain : mujhe Jaana hi padega.. Rizwan plz meri tickets confirm karde..
Rizwan : mei kuch nahi karne waala
Zain : rizwan dammit .. Theek hai.. Mei hi kar leta hoon
..*phne* damn... Phir new york ki next flight kab hai?? What 2 weeks tak ek bhi flight nahi hai?? Par kyun?? Kya weather kharab hai?? Par 2 weeks?? Ohh security issues bhi hai? F9 i'll wait.. Par agli jo bhi flight ko plz book karvaade
Rizwan : dekha.. Allah bhi chahte ki tum Bhabhi ko chhod kar mat jaao.. Ab 2 weeks aur hai tumhare paas.. Kuch socho aur yeh sab drama band kardo...


AISHA's CAR

Aisha : Mujhe Aalu ko sab sach batana hi hoga.. Ammi abu uske saath aisa kaise karsakte hai?? Sab se pehle mei unse baat karungi.. Woh samajhte kyun nahi ki aaliya ki khushiyaan zain ke saath hai?? Allah.. Plz mujhe himmat dena ki mei apni aaliya ko apne ammk abu ke saamne defend karsaku.. N i hope ki aaliya is baat par aitbaar kare ki is baar zain ne usse koi dhoka nahi diya.. Par mujhe pata hai.. Woh is baar itni aasaani se iss baat par aitbaar nahi maregi


HAIDER RESIDENCE

Aaliya : Ammi Abu..
ShaLam : arre aaliya tu.. Aa na andar..
Aaliya : ammi abu woh mei.. Woh mei Zeeshan se Nikaah karne ke liye Tayyar hoon..
Shabana : sach?? Meri bacchi.. Allah tujhse is duniya ki saari khushiyaa de.. -*kisses her forhead*
Ghulam : mei jaanta tha bete.. Mei jaanta tha ki tu haan ke degi.. Isiliye tumhari aur Zeeshan ki mangni kal hi hogi..
Aaliya : kal?? Engagement?*shocked*

awesome update.
hate gulam shabana hope aliya get to know about true soon.
thanks for pm.

resunreas

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Thanks a lot deary.

I am so glad u lyk it.

Well, he's a NY, maybe..!

And the lady? That's a secret.

Maybe he IS in NY.

Maybe he ISN'T.

Where is he? Wait till you read d update. ;)

Awesome update SUMI...