#3 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (Moved to Thread 4) COMPLETED - Page 44

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Posted: 10 years ago
Due to some error in lappy I couldn't update today. If my lappy doesn't ditch me tomorrow as well I may update provided no one spams now!
Already many pages have gone. Avoid commenting.
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update plzz aaj to tuesday hain plzz update na..
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Hola Peeps.😃

Finally getting time to update! Been hell busy with culturals and planning of 31st celebration.😆

I wasn't even gonna update today but seeing so many requests for the update, finally decided to update.😛

No more of my bak-bak, which I doubt you read, get started with the update.

The song which is playing in background, PLEASE MUTE it until the time comes! You'll come to know when to play it😳




Part 34


Rey: Taani chalne ka koi irada hai ya poora din yahin baithe rehna hai?

Taani: But yahan se view kitna atcha hai. Mujhe aur thodi der rukna hai.

Rey: Atcha theek hai.

After about an hour

Taani: Train kahan hai?

Rey: Voh toh kabki chali gayi.

Taani: Chali gayi ka kya matlab?

Rey: Chali gayi matlab chali gayi.

Taani: Train ja rahi thi aur aapne bataya nahi?

Rey: Meine bataya tha, par tumhi ko yahan baithe rehna tha.

Taani: Aapne yeh kyu nahi kahan ki train nikal rahi hai? Abh next train kab hai?

Rey: Actually.. (He started taking a few steps away and moved backwards.)

Taani: Kya? (She demanded an answer.)

Rey: Abh kal ke pehle koi train nahi hai.

Taani: WHAT?

Rey started running sensing Taani would be attacking him any moment. She ran behind him with complete astonishment. Rey was dodging Taani but she finally caught hold of him and started hitting him.

Rey: Stop! Aare please stop. Taani please.

Taani: Abh hum kya karenge?

Rey: Tum maarna band karogi tabhi toh mein bataunga na.

Taani: Atcha batao.

Rey: We can simply walk down the track.

Taani looked at him with wide eyes.

Taani: You joking right?

Rey: No, I'm certainly not.

Taani: Aapka kehne ka matlab hai ki yeh poora raasta hum chalke jayenge?

Rey just nodded his head up and down indicating yes.

Taani: Fine chalo!

Taani started walking on the track when Rey stopped her and pulled her towards him. She came crashing on his chest. He caught her tight by her waist and loosened his hold on her hand. He arranged a few strands of hair from her forehead and traced his finger from her forehead to cheek and down to her chin. He pulled up her chin getting her lips lined up with his. Their noses were touching each other. His hot breath was fanning her lips creating havoc in her senses. Her legs were shaking and she couldn't hold on to herself. Rey tightened his hold on her waist supporting her to stand.

Taani: Rey.. (She said, her voice dripping with pure love and need.)

It got Rey back to his senses. He loosened his hold on her waist bringing her back to sense. She slightly pushed herself back with her hands which were on his chest. He didn't let her escape and quickly pecked her cheek.

Rey: Tum yahin ruko. I'll be back in a minute.

Taani gazed at his retreating back till he disappeared behind a tree at the corner. She then closed her eyes and wrapped her arms around herself replaying the moment they spent just few minutes back. A sweet smile lingered on her lips. She opened her eyes when she felt a strong pair of hands wrapped around her. She tilted her head behind and found Rey smiling down at her. She turned around, pecked his cheek and started walking.

Rey: Ruko!

Taani: Kya hua?

Rey: Hume chalke jaane ki jarurat nahi hai.

Taani: Matlab?

He moved aside and pointed at the platform with wheels and a long wooden stick placed behind him.

Taani: Yeh aapko kahan mila?

Rey: Jab hum ghum rahe the tabhi. Abhi chale?

Rey placed it on the track and sat on it. Taani sat in front of him with folded legs. He hugged her and placed his chin on her shoulder.

Rey: Yahan se nikalne ka mood hi nahi ho raha.

Taani: Mein dekh rahi hoon, yahan aane ke baad, app bohot hi..

Rey: Bohot hi kya? (He cooed.)

Taani: Aap chalo warna mein aapse baat nahi karungi.

Rey: Abh dhamki mat do. Chalte hai.

He pushed the trolley forward with the help of the stick. The sun was setting and it was getting cooler. Cool air was making Taani shiver. Both of them were wearing their jackets but still the dropping temperature was sending shivers to them. To add to it, it started drizzling lightly.

Taani: Baarish bhi abhi hi shuru honi thi!

Rey: Hum bas pahunchne wale hai. Just pray ki drizzling se heavy down pour mein na convert ho.

It wasn't much after Rey said, it started pouring. The two got completely drenched within a minute.

Rey: Great! Thank you! (He said looking up.)

Taani giggled seeing him.

Taani: Hum yahi ruk jaate hai uss jhaad ke neeche. Baarish kam hone par aage chale jayenge.

Rey: I don't think yeh kam hone wali hai. Waise bhi hum jyada durr nahi hai. Let's just walk.

Taani: Itni bearish mein?

Rey: Yahan rukna bhi toh safe nahi hai.

Taani: Hmn, chaliye.

Both walked hand-in-hand to the car parked outside the Darjeeling railway station. As soon as they got in, Rey put on the heater. Minutes later they stopped shivering. Rey got some hot tea for the two from the nearest vendor. After having tea they felt much better. Rey started driving when Taani stopped him.

Taani: Itni baarsh mein drive karna safe.. (She left her sentence incomplete.)

Rey: Don't worry. Mein slow hi chalane wala hoon.

Rey was driving through the twisted roads when suddenly the car halted with a jerk. He tried starting the engine. Once, twice, thrice.. but no luck. Both were stranded in the middle of a road with no other sign of any individual. The downpour had stopped but it was still drizzling lightly. Rey got of the car and kicked the front tire in frustration.

Rey: Abh yahi hona baaki reh gaya tha!

Taani slowly got out of the car and looked at Rey. Irritation was written all over his face. She was feeling a bit scared as they were stranded in the middle of nowhere. Still she composed herself and went near Rey.

Taani: Abh kya kare?

Rey: Pata nahi! I seriously have no clue. (He ran his fingers through his wet hair trying to think of something.)

Taani: Rey, hum hotel mein call karke unhe bata dete hai ki humari gaadi kharab hogayi hai aur voh dusri gaadi bheje hume pick karne.

Taani gave a suggestion to which Rey agreed and called the manager of the hotel. After a lot of tries he succeeded in connecting with him. He roughly told the route they took to get back to the hotel from the ropeway. The manager informed him that a car would be sent right away.

Letting out a deep breath he looked at Taani who was busy admiring the outskirts of the town from the edge of the road. He sneaked behind her hugging her from the back and placed his chin on her shoulder. She closed her eyes feeling him. On getting no reaction from Taani, Rey blew her hair which were near her ear and placed a kiss just below her earlobe lingering for a bit long than usual. Taani open her eyes with a jerk and looked at Rey from the corner of her eyes. A mischievous smirk was playing on his lips as he turned her to face him.

He pulled her closer from her waist. She kept both her hands on his shoulders. He moved her hair back with his free hand and cupped her face. Her breathing increased with his each move. He looked at her quivering lips as she closed her eyes, anticipating his move. He placed his lips at the corner of her lips and immediately her hold on his shoulders tightened. Taking it as a positive sign, he placed his lips on her subtle cold ones, tasting her slowly. She responded back molding her lips with his. He left her waist and cupped her face deepening the kiss. She too moved her hands up his hair, gripping them tightly as he bit her lower lip. Blushing deeply in the kiss she allowed him entry into her mouth. He had no control over his mind as he savoured her. She tasted way sweeter than he had imagined of. He didn't want to leave, but had to as he felt her gripping his hair tight.

They stood in the shining light of the moon with eyes closed and foreheads touching each other. They slowly open their eyes and found the person they love the most in front of them. He saw her swollen lips shinning in the moonlight and quickly pecked them. She blushed deep red and buried her face in his strong chest.

Soon after the car came and they were back to the hotel. Rey came inside their room and found Taani deeply engrossed in some thoughts. Her cheeks were a light shade of pink and her lips were curved up into a sweet smile. He knew by looking at her that she was thinking about the magical moments that they spent a while ago. Thinking about it got a wide smile on his face as well. He felt happy and proud of himself that he had not rushed and waited for the perfect moment. She biting her lips whenever she was nervous always brought an urge in him to feel the softness of her lips, to taste her luscious lips. But he always chose to respect her feelings and constrain himself. But today on seeing the love, the need and above all the happiness in her eyes, he couldn't stop himself from torturing her soft lips.

She felt his intense gaze on her and turned towards the door and found him gazing her with pure love. She reddened under his gaze and quickly turned composing herself.

Taani: Rey aap yahan? (She tried her best to avoid the shakiness in her voice but failed miserably.)

Rey smirked seeing his effect on her and went and sat next to her.

Rey: Kyun mein yahan nahi ho sakta?

Taani: Nahi mera matlab. (She stopped immediately as he leaned on her making her lie down.)

Rey was leaning on top of Taani with his weight supported on his hands which were on either side of her. He decreased the distance between them, eyeing her lips and making her nervous. Her stopped a centimeter away from her lips and spoke.

Rey: Daro nahi, mein bas bag le raha tha. (His lips brushed hers as he spoke.)

Rey got up picking his bag which was standing behind her against the bed. She got up and sat chewing her lower lip. She was expecting a kiss or maybe more than that from him. She felt embarrassed at her naughty thoughts and crushed her lower lip between her teeth trying to control her blush.

Rey: Taani tum apne hothon ko issi tarah chabati rahi toh mein aur control nahi kar paunga.

She turned and faced the opposite side. Weird sensations had begun to take place inside her from the time their lips met beneath the moonlight. The more she tried to compose herself, Rey or even his mere presence would make it difficult for her. He on the other hand was loving the feeling he felt when their lips met. He wanted to feel that feel on repeat and so was not leaving any chance to be near her. On sensing her nervousness he spoke.

Rey: Taani tum jaake fresh hojao. Geele kapdon mein rahogi toh thand lag jayegi.

Like an obedient child she followed what he said and went in for a hot shower. The hot shower did clam her nerves and made her feel relaxed. Changing into night clothes she came out and found Rey in only his jeans and a towel hanging around his neck. He was checking something on his phone and then switched it off and shoved it into his bag again. He turned around and found Taani gaping at him.

Rey: I know I'm irresistibly hot! (He commented pecking near her lips.)

Taani giggled at his comment and hit him lightly on his chest. She moved towards the dressing table to dry her hair when he threw his towel around her and pulled her back causing her to come crashing on his cold chest. The water droplets which fell from her hair on him sent tingles down his spine. She felt her goosebumps rise as her skin came in contact with his cold one. She turned around and spoke.

Taani: Rey aap fresh hoke aao aur kuch pehen lo warna sardi hojayegi.

Rey shook his head in a no blowing the wet strands of hair from her face.

Taani: Rey. Go! (She literally pushed him inside the bathroom.)

After sometime she heard him call her name loudly.

Rey: Taani?

Taani: Kya hua?

Rey: Mein apna towel shayad bahar hi bhool gaya. Please dedo.

She looked around and found it lying at the edge of the bed. She knocked on the door asking him to open the door.

Taani: Yeh lijiye.

Rey caught her hand instead of the towel. Her eyes popped up on seeing this act. She started hitting on his hand with her spare one.

Taani: Rey mera haath chodiya!

Rey: Chodne keliye thodi pakda hai!

She felt him smirk as he spoke.

Taani: Rey haath chodiye warna.

Rey: Warna kya Taani?

Taani: Warna mein andar aajaungi.

Rey: Toh aajao.

Her mouth hung up and he burst out laughing. Taani hit him hard this time and he finally let go of her hand and took the towel.

He came out wearing sweatpants that hung low from his waist and towel hung around his neck. His hair was wet making him look hot.

Taani: Someone's looking hot.

He raised his brows at her comment and moved her direction.

Rey: Koi problem?

Taani: Haan.

Rey: Kya?

Taani: Apni yeh body dikhana band kijiye aur koi shirt pehen lijiye.

Rey: You know by the way, bohot ladkiya marti hai ispe. (He said removing the towel off his neck and showing her his well-toned body.)

Taani: Really?

Rey: Really!

Taani: Really?

Rey: Really really! (He started tickling her.)

Taani: Rey.. (She giggled.)

Rey: Really! (He kept tickling.)

Taani: Re..ah!

She tripped on something and fell in his arms twisting her ankle. He made her sit on the bed and bent down to her ankle to untwist it. As he finished doing it, he kept gazing at her. She looked very innocent and beautiful with her hair flying in the light breeze. She saw the same love and need reflecting from his eyes. The need reflecting from his eyes was almost unbearable for her as it was creating turmoil inside her. She could no longer bare his gaze and got up moving ahead. He approached her slowly and she noticed his every move from the corner of her eyes. He turned her around and leaned forward to kiss her which she stopped by placing her hand on his lips. She was feeling too shy at the moment.

*Music*

Respecting her feelings he moved back. She felt relieved but also somewhere deep down regretted stopping herself from doing what she eagerly wanted. He smiled at her and as though he had read her mind came forward. She quickly pulled the scarf lying on a chair between them.

Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi

He pulled down the scarf and looked at her who had her head bent due to shyness. He went behind her and kissed in the crook of her neck. She blushed and ran away from him and hid behind the curtains.

Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi
Tera nashila badan
Baahon ne choda nahi

He followed her tracing her through the curtains not leaving their eye contact. He pulled the irritating medium from between them and as she started moving away her pulled her towards him.

Aankhen toh kholi magar
Sapna woh toda nahi
Haan wohi woh wohi
Saason pe rakha hua tere hothon ka
Sapna abhi hai wahi

He placed soft kisses on her jawline and her neck arousing her senses. He pulled her more towards himself and now they were pinned to each other. He leaned his head down to hers and placed his lips on hers when she broke the kiss and moved back.

Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi
Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi

She moved to one of the walls facing her back to him. As he approached to kiss her again she escaped from his grip teasing him. He smiled inwardly seeing this side of hers. He was falling more and more in love with her.

*Music*

He switched off the lights still smiling and feeling the love between them. He turned around and found her twirling and dancing with the curtains. She was smiling from ear to ear and he felt happy to be the reason of her smile.

Tere bina bhi kabhi
Tujhse machal leti hoon
Karvat badalti hoon toh
Sapna badal leti hoon

She started fidgeting with her scarf as she felt him approach her. She blushed seeing the intensity of love in his eyes. She was in love with the time they were spending. Never in her life had she felt this happy as she was now.

Tere bina bhi kabhi
Tujhse machal leti hoon
Karvat badalti hoon toh
Sapna badal leti hoon

She was moving away from her love shyly. He slowly approached her and sat down on the stool in front of the dressing table. He pulled her back making her sit next to him. He brought her closer to himself making her sit on his lap.

Tera khayal aaye toh
Balkhake pal jata hai
Paani ke chaadar tale
Dum mera jal jata hai

She cupped his face and kissed his forehead. She planted many kisses and finally stopped as she approached his masculine lips. She blushed and looked away. He dug his face into the crook of her neck kissing her moving down her neck.

Haan wohi woh wohi
Saason pe rakha hua tere hothon ka
Sapna abhi hai wahi

She freed herself from his hold and got up. He immediately caught her hand to stop her. But she somehow succeeded in getting out of his grip and ran to the other end of the room.

Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi
Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi

She looked at him in a mocking manner and smirked. He smiled inwardly and moved towards her to show her that she shouldn't have messed with him.

*Music*

He took steps towards her while she kept taking a step back. He smirked at her and she understood that he has found out a way to punish her for mocking at him. She blushed furiously reading his eyes and her back hit the wall. She moved to her right but he blocked her by placing his hand. She then moved the other way and did the same trapping her in between him and the wall. He buried his face in the crook of her neck and started kissing her wildly. She entangled her fingers in his hair and pulled him closer to herself. She was loving this punishment.

Tere gale milne ke
Mausam bade hote hai
Janmon ka vaada koi
Yeh gham bade chote hai

He moved up her jawline leaving a trail of kisses to her lips. He captured her lips sending sparks in both their bodies. He was literally nibbling on her lips making her go weak on her knees. She couldn't handle his sweet torture so pulled him back holding his hair.

Tere gale milne ke
Mausam bade hote hai
Janmon ka vaada koi
Yeh gham bade chote hai

She moved back still looking into his eyes. She tripped over the edge of the bed and falling on it. He got on the bed and crawled up to her. She tried to escape but he was quick this time and trapped her beneath him.

Lambi si ek raat ho
Lamba sa ek din mile
Bas itna sa jeena ho
Milan ki ghadi jab mile

He started kissing her wildly. The moans escaping from her mouth added fuel to his fire of love. He slipped his hands beneath her top pulling it up slowly and steadily caressing her skin. She dug her nails in his shoulders pulling him. The moment was ecstatic.

Haan wohi bas wohi
Saason pe rakha hua tere hothon ka
Sapna abhi hai wahi
Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi
Raat ka nasha abhi
Aankh se gaya nahi

He slowly and steadily pulled off the clothing one by one from their bodies and pulled over the sheets. He was kissing and nibbling her entire body arousing her with his each move. The moans and gasps escaping her mouth aroused him beyond limits.

*Music*

He finally stretched her legs and made her his own. He marked his ownership on her, his right on his, his love for her, his respect for her. She was beyond content to become his'!



So I don't think I need to ask but, how was it?😉

Tried to justify it well, I hope it turned out well.😳

"Happiness doesn't last for ever.."

Read this line somewhere, just thought of sharing it here.😉

I want full fledged comments!

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome upmate taarey ka momentes bet ween hotel was superb and track mein taarey ka talk was nice and next their hot romance was awsome
Edited by R.sailaja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww awsm update thank u so much update karne ka liya mindblowing taarey romances hot superb train ka track scene superb update or song bhi superb tha next update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update. Beautifully written. good job. Keep going. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super ossum update perfect song taareys romance was hot
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hate kitna romantic tha 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm awsm awsm
just purely loved it
very taareylicious
beautifully written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow sooo romantic update.
Sure dear you did justification.
You depicted the love in between them.
Taarey conversation funny.
Finally taani rey became taarey, he made her his.
Superb one :)
loved it <3

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