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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar


Thank you so so much devu for your appreciation! 🤗 And you'll get another secret in tonight's update! I am updating tonight! 😉

aww another secret,waiting
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Edited by SahriShrAvi - 10 years ago
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Ashlok Dark FF My Ransacked Heart




In times of trouble and insanity
I carry masks to disguise
the pain I carry
secure behind my eyes

I can never let out again
the misery I hide
to hell with my dignity
to hell with my pride

from this day forward
and for ever more
I will mount this mask
that will be my lore

No reaching out when I am weak
no solace will I seek

when you look for answers
when you say your prayers
all you will see is masks
and no pain that I bare

Chapter 12

Crack In The Iceberg


Some people are afraid of what they might find ~if they try to analyze themselves too much~


A man screamed in pain, a woman pleaded to leave them alone but the monsters didn't showed them any mercy ...

They opened their huge mouth showing their jagged and blood stained teeth and dripping from their mouth was remains of a carcasss, it's smell so pungent that they could feel it seeping through their lungs and permeating their soul...

He tried to stop them from coming towards that man and woman, raising his hands in front of the monsters to save them, but one of them took hold of his arms and tore them of his body, leaving them as bloody stumps...

The other monsters grabbed the man and woman and started tearing their body parts...

He screamed, raising his bloody stumps to stop them , but his voice got stuck in his throat...

He was falling into a dark vortex , from where there was no exit...

Shlok woke up with a start, his whole body shaking with reaction to his nightmare, sweat pouring out from every pore of his body. The bedcovers around him were wet with his sweat too...

He poured himself a glass of water from the jug placed on a bedside table and raised it to his parched lips, drinking the whole contents in one go...

He was now slowly coming back to reality and with it he felt a trace of anger taking the place of his horror that he was feeling from his nightmare uptil now.

It was that Kirloskar girl that was making him feel those things again that he had long buried in his heart, he frowned rubbing the bridge of his nose.

He had thought that he had annihilated every trace of those memories from his mind, but it was like that kirloskar girl had jumped into his mind and heart with a searchlight and was trying to find some trace of those feelings and memories in order to drag them back to life...

He gave a rusted laugh...

He knew he was no weakling, he had survived the gang life so what was a slip of girl infront of him, he thought and clenched a fist...

And that too the girl of his bitterest enemy, he thought bitterly, clenching his fist so hard that his nails dug into his palms, putting half moon crescents on them...

He had taken the his pic with the girl when she was brought to him in an unconscious state, and then had mailed it to his enemy so that his enemy would know that what had come back to haunt him...

And now with his latest instruction given to Ramlal aka Ramu Kaka to not leave the kirloskar's house in any way, so as to not make the police suspicious about him or his whereabouts...

He gave a twisted smile, it was time to put his final plan into action...

He was going to take his final revenge for which he had waited for 24 years, with bated breath...

Kirloskar Residence

The message forgotten on the laptop, Avdhoot was trying to bring Kalindi to consciousness now.

He patted her cheek, and shouted that someone bring him some water. The police officers were rooted to their spot with the shock of seeing the pic on screen and then seeing Kalindi faint.

Avdhoot again shouted for water. One officer unfroze from his spot and hurried towards the dining table to bring the jug of water.

Avdhoot patted Kalindi's cheeks, saying her name over and over again. He took the jug from the officer and splashed some water on Kalindi's face making her body jerk and her eyes blink. She was starting to regain consciousness...

After blinking several times she groaned her hand going to touch the back of her head. Maybe she had hit it on the floor when she had fainted from the shock...", she thought and suddenly froze. Her memory of seeing the pic before her dead faint, coming slowly back to her now.

Avdhoot had composed himself till then. He lifted Kalindi from the floor , supporting her with an arm around her shoulders and helped her sit on the chair.

The laptop was facing towards her now, it's screen still showing the horrifying pic with the words remember anjali glowing on it.

Anjali was helplessly crying, her both hands covering her face. It seemed she had only seen the pic and not the words, as she hadn't asked any questions from Avdhoot regarding Anjali.

Avdhoot watched her weeping heedlessly fearful eyes and brought a hand forward to close the lid of the laptop...

He shut the lid of the laptop on the horrific pic with a resounding click...

Astha didn't knew how much time had passed from her last confrontation with that arrogant Mafioso. Her fear was fast receding and anger was taking it's place now.

Her body had gotten stiff from lying on the cold floor for too long. She hadn't slept a blink, wasn't able to with the clouds of constant fear roaming over her.

She was lying on the floor staring at the dark ceiling and thinking about the events that had turned her peaceful world upside down. She was trying to analyze her memories of that Mafioso starting from the coffee shop incident to his last kiss here in the dark room...

"What did he think of himself? Who was he to abduct her and put her and her parents into this misery?", she thought vehemently to herself.

She gave a muffled growl and began tearing at her ropes. But it seemed that the ropes were bound by an expert, because instead of loosening they tightened against her skin, digging into it more painfully.

"Arrogant a**h****, b******, she swore all the words in her heart that were present in her vocabularly of curses.

She wanted to murder him with her bare hands but she also wanted to cut all of his body parts and his special part too for putting her and her parents through such agony of heart and mind.

What will be going on at home? How ae and baba will be reacting? Probably by now they would have gotten the news of my abduction? Ae has Asthma? How will she take it? And how baba will bear that?

Her mind was a chaos of thoughts now, with every thought going towards her parents and her own future? What will happen to all of us?, She thought miserably, her heart laden with sorrow, and began taking heart wrenching sobs again...

She was too wallowed up in her own misery that she never noticed the open door and that Mafioso guy sitting near her...

The light coming from the open door revealed his face...

He was staring at her with an expression of unfathomable lust in his dark eyes...

Kirloskar Residence

Kalindi felt no relief, when the police officer told her that they were doing what they can to ease her worry. But It was morning now and still no sign of her daughter had been found out and no one had come forward with a ransom demand...

Her eyes were red and puffy from crying constantly, reflecting her grief and her body was shaking from the hiccups...

One officer pulled Avdhoot to the side to ask him about the hidden message.

He asked that if Avdhoot knows something about Anjali or if that masked man is familiar to him, then he should tell him, so that the police officers can investigate further...

But Avdhoot tried to feign ignorance...

He told the police officer that he hadn't seen that man in his whole life and that he knows nothing about who the hell is that Anjali and what relationship that masked man share with her...

The police officer told him somewhat stiffly that he shouldn't lie to the police, otherwise how they will be able to help him. It seemed he hadn't believed a single word told by Avdhoot...

The police officer again asked in a persistent voice that if he got any knowledge relating to that hidden message he should instantly give it to them.

Avdhoot again answered him while avoiding his eyes that he doesn't know a single thing about that message...

The officer pursed his lips in displeasure and put a hold on further discussion. He turned on his heels and walked towards his companions, his gait stiff and disapproval reflecting from every line of his body.

He never turned to saw that Avdhoot was watching him, walk away with a hint of fear lurking in his worried eyes...




P.S: Do Comment And Like Dearies! 😉

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
My choco chip ...🤗
Was kinda struck... With things... Hectic Sundays 😡 even Mondays 😆

Now coming to the update...
Avdhooth ruined shlokie's mamma Pappas life when he was small now he's taking revenge... Sounds lame na?🤣that's why I want you to reveal the reason in an interesting way...before my head because of over thinking😆

Love the way you giving hints abt past ...like shlok nightmares 👏

And next update ASAP..ASAP..ASAP!!!
Can't WAIT to read what he gonna do...
*biting my nails*
*PS already my fingers are bleeding with all the biting 😭 *
Pleash update soon my dark chocolate 😳
Edited by Priya_ShrAvi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
advanced thanks for sending pm😊Ausum update😛👏
So avdhoot is hiding something😕 and i think kalindi does not v any clu of ANJALI🥱
Astha is a spirited girl,i like her spirit😉u go girl😉
Avdhoot lied na to the officer?😲
Shlok had a nightmare😕so the memories are haunting him, i think the incident happened with him!😕
Ramu kaka is only Ramlall😲😛nice suprise,i didn't v any idea😲😉nice one
update soon😛😃Thanks for daily dose😳😉super sunday for me😃
BTW nice pics little creepy but liked it😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
So our PSYCHO is trying to get info from our FIGHTER, yes our brave astha is a fighter, i loved how she showed courage and not answered him, even spit on his face, Splendid job 👏 jerks should be treated like that!
So the PSYCHO thought to seduce, that didn't help boohoo! Plan fail! He didn't gave up, tried blackmailing that worked! Of course she love her family.
He started his operation on her lips again, trying to shape them into duck lips 🤣
Ohho! So this anjali is mystery behind the revenge, how? will wait for that!
Now what Avdhoot had done to anjali? Shlok's nightmare was horrible, no wonder he's a psycho..
Poor astha, i like her caring nature she is worried about her parents rather than about her..
Come on psycho is obsessed about his new toy, he don't leave her alone for long time, kept coming back..
I knew ramu kaka will be shlok's alley!
Buddy, i gave comment for two updates..
Oh! I forgot my sparkling disco lights skull! Loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res... Can't wait to read mahi ... 😕 I am outside .. That's why .. Want to read it aramse ...and enjoy ur update ... Wait for my comments buddy 😉

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Edited by potomac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the late unres.
Shlok has waited for a long time to take his revenge, i mean come on 24 years is a long time and how old is he now??? clarify on his age and also on Aastha's.

He is having dreams where his hands are chopped off, bloody stumps reaching out to him, blood curling I say...awakening some feeling buried deep within him.

Avdhoot n Kalindi are scared and A knows smthg what is it...will wait till u r ready to spill the beans.😆 the police suspect A but can't force him to reveal. Now who is this Anjali????


Edited by nim_var - 10 years ago
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Hate shlok. Trying his dirty tricks by seducing her. Astha is very bold and didnt bend. Long way to go gal!
Coming to avdhoot why he is nt saying abt anjali to anyone.
Does kalindi know abt anjali?
Update soon mahir to ans our qns
One more thing is ramu kaka aka ram lal is shlok's person...
Edited by charanyaaj - 10 years ago

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