ASYA FF - Battle of Memories *Complete* Notes on Pg 90 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow love the update
Passion overload
Their was no deny what they both wanted and they went right ahead
So one in every way
She is afraid she remembers herself but forget him
He say he wouldn't let tht happen
He,wonder if thtt is love tht he feels
So their hunger of food wa replaced by another hunger 😉😳
So she wakes up but he is not there
No trace of him plz z let it be he just gone to get breakfast
She loves him no regrets
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the update...
i just hope asad has gone to get something to eat...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update

Thank you for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

loved the update...
i just hope asad has gone to get something to eat...


same pinch😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

I will update this Saturday. Sorry for the delay!

A little busy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
*****

Part 9 - Page 16

Episode 10

"So you are telling me that the thief just ran away when he saw you and you just took it down to the lake-house because of the storm rather than going to the police station? How can I believe that? Tell me Asad. What are you hiding from me?", Ayaan insisted again.
Ayaan continued his chatter, "I hope the constable has got the car back to the minister's house safely. I should arrest you but I have no other go but to buy your stupid story. After all you are my friend and a police informer. By the way have you bought Tanveer a farewell present? The flight is at 11 tomorrow. We have to be at the airport by 8 and..."
Asad wasn't listening. Was it right to leave her like that? She would be sleeping. What if she woke up? If she finds out that he isn't there, she might think he left her and might even attempt to kill herself again.
"Oh my God! No!"
"What?" alarmed Ayaan stopped the police car. He turned to see Asad sweating profusely.
Confused Ayaan asked, "Asad! Are you alright?"
Asad, "Turn the car! We have to go to the lake-house and I have to tell you something."

*****

Zoya came out of the house. She noticed the car also gone. She felt a tear but she wiped it off with a determined look. She wasn't going to cry. He might have gone to get food, she consoled herself. She looked up to the sky as she sat on the last step of the lake-house stairs. It was twilight.


*****

"Zoya!", Asad got off the car and hurried towards her. Zoya smiled when she saw him and ran towards him, but stopped out-rightly when she saw a police officer get down from the car. Asad went next to her and held her hands and gave her a comforting pat, "Don't worry, Zoya! Ayaan is here to help us." Zoya looked at Asad confused and wasn't so happy to see a third person. Actually she didn't even bother to know her past now that she knew her future was with Asad. Ayaan, who was usually a cool guy, stood in his place stunned at the fair maiden in front of him. He slowly brought his hands to his cheek, remembering a tight slap from the same lady in a totally different attire. She looked so homely and pious now; but the girl in his memory was modern and powerful, "Miss Anwar?" Asad looked at him amazed, "You? You mean? You..You know her?", he turned to Zoya, "Did you hear him? Miss Anwar. I have never been more happy. He called you a 'miss'." Zoya gave him a sly look and he looked at her with more love, letting out a sign of relief. Ayaan, "Have you really lost your memory? How come? But what are you doing here? You should be in the US. Your visa has elapsed and you have to be deported. What are you still doing here? You are an American citizen!"

*****

"Here you go. 2 passports."
"They look so real. Thank you so much.", the man from the subway handed over a suitcase in exchange for the two passports.
"I don't need your thank you. The amount is correct; now don't waste time here. Go. You are not to disclose our place to the police, if at all you get caught, or you will regret it."

*****

Asad, "So Ayaan...explain all you know", as he drew the curtains. Zoya fearful at the stranger who claimed to know her, stood next to Asad, while Ayaan sat comfortably on the chair.
Ayaan, "Asad! Why didn't you tell this earlier? I think we are in a big problem right now."
Zoya held on to Asad's hands, which Ayaan couldn't help noticing.
Asad, "I don't understand...explain."
Just then Ayaan's phone rang, "Just a minute." and he got up and went out of the lake house to attend the call.
Zoya, "Asad, don't leave me alone. I'm scared."
Asad turned to look at her scared face, "Sorry, Zoya. I never meant to leave you. He came searching for me after he received a MMS of me with your car and he thought I stole it. I had to tell him that the thief ran away and I had to bring it to the lake-house because of the rain. He half believed the story and made the constable to take the car away and told me to accompany him as it didn't make sense for me to stay here alone. I didn't want to tell him about you. But I couldn't stay away for more than 10 minutes and I told him everything and we came back and..."
Zoya held his collar and brought her lips to his for a quick kiss, surprising an anguished Asad, "Zoya?"
She smiled, "I didn't know you can talk so much."
She rested her head on his shoulders, "I don't want your explanation. I knew you would come back. But now I'm scared. This man...will he separate us?"
Asad smiled as he made her look at him, "No one is going to separate us. No one. We are going to live a long, happy life." She started fiddling with his shirt's collar button as he brought her closer to him. She kiddishly asked, "Really?"


Asad, "Let me think. American citizen. Green cardholder. But did you know that once you marry a Indian you become a Indian citizen?"
Zoya smiled, "Really?"
Asad, "Yes. So all we need to do is find a handsome, smart Indian groom."
Zoya blushed more as she looked up to him, "Really?"
Asad, "Ya. Tomorrow I'll upload your details on the matrimonial sites.", teasingly.
She mocked anger, "Really?"
Asad laughed, "Really!", as he kissed her forehead, "I love you. Will you marry me?", looking into her eyes. A tear escaped her eyes as she nodded, "Yes. I will." and they hugged each-other when Ayaan came in surprised to see them in an embrace.
He cleared his throat and they let go and they stood embarrassed.
Ayaan, "Asad. I want you to see this." and he held out his phone.

(To be continued...)

Part 11

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Edited by Gisel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊nice work
beautiful ...
waiting 4 what Ayaan has to say..
Edited by ammusjyoti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Ayaan knows her...
Asya were so cute.. Love them
What did Ayaan showed asad on phone...
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres
Absolutely Awesome Update👍🏼
I love it❤️
and Gisel is Asad a cop or just Ayaan's informer?
looking forward to AsYa nikaah
Continue Soon
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG G wow updt it was
Asad came back & proposed her
Ayaan know Zoe they got some clue
How relieved Asad was knowing she's Miss not Mrs.
Loved reading superb job G👏
worth d wait😛

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