I'm always a fan of titles that are striking and elucidate the entire story in merely few words and the title of this OS was a really apt and bewitching one.
Randhir and Sanyukta's turmoil is awesomely penned down.
Sanyukta's dad really agreed? Now, that came as a real shock...
Ah! How I wish that Randhir's parents were considerate enough as you have depicted in this OS. Their concern for their son was really overwhelmingly heart warming.
Ah! That confession was so marvellous... Uff! That was so damn romantic.
I loved reading this One Shot...
It was fantastic and splendid.
You are really an amazing writer Sharbat... Keep writing more!
Regards
Keya