Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/Chapter 13/ (Pg-133) - Page 51

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Chapter 9

The Abduction

The past which you carry in your purse ~ is a gift and a curse when you goin head first~

College: Bonfire Night One Week Later

Astha was laughing so hard that tears were streaming down her eyes. Angie had just cracked a joke. And a wave of laughter had crashed over their group. They were sitting near the fire, seeking heat from it and rubbing their hands together.

Astha was in a light mood, having completely forgotten, that stranger's kiss, and enjoying Angie's bathroom jokes.

"I told you, it's fun to be here, thank god you listened to me this time and decided to come", Angie said, vigorously attacking a chicken leg with her teeth, her jowls quivering. Her piled up plate of chicken was reducing speedily.

Looking at her round face, and heavy mass, it was to be expected, Astha sighed.

"Angie I think I should go, it's getting late, Dad is so going to be annoyed with me, my driver has arrived, I should be really going now", Astha said in an anxious voice, without taking pause.

"Odddaaay", Angie nodded her head in agreement, her voice was muffled due to her mouth being stuffed with chicken.

Astha shook her head in exasperation and rolled her eyes heavenward.

"Going to come Angie, I would drop you at your home", She asked from a still vigorously eating Angie.

"No you go, me dad is going to pick me up," Angie swallowed painfully.

"Okey, dokey, bye see you soon", Astha slapped her hand with Angie's in high five and turned towards her car...

It was time to send a very valuable gift to someone, Shlok thought vengefully.

He was sitting in the shadow waiting, his tab in his hand.

The tab's screen suddenly lit up which indicated a msg arriving. Shlok raised the tab to read the incoming msg and his lips curled with a victorious smile.

The package is ready, going to settle the other part of the plan, said the msg.

Which was sent by Ramlal...

Astha was waiting anxiously for Ramu Kaka to come back in the car.

"Ramu Kaka, how much time will it take for the car to start", Astha asked anxiously, sticking out her face from the window to look at Ramu Kaka, who was trying to fix the problem and was hidden behind the raised bonnet.

The car's engine had broken down mid-way and now Ramu Kaka was trying to find the problem.

"Choti Bibi I've found the source of problem. Just let me fix it. It will not take much time, just 10 minutes more", Ramu Kaka answered in a muffled voice from behind the bonnet.

But 10 minutes, grew into 15, then 20 so Astha decided to call her Dad, to ask him to bring another car and pick her from that place himself.

But she didn't knew where they were. So she again stuck out her neck from the window and shouted, "Ramu Kaka, at which place we are now!".

Silence. There was no answer from the other side.

Afraid she craned her neck more to look outside, half dangling from the window, to see behind the raised bonnet. But there was no one behind it.

Now she was really afraid. She looked at her wrist watch it was 11.15 p.m.

Looking outside again she spotted Ramu Kaka at a near distance from the car, speaking to someone on his cell. Obviously her dad!

"Dad gonna kill me", she groaned, closing her eyes and resting her head against the backseat.

Suddenly her cell started to vibrate, she opened her eyes and looked at the screen. Then astonished, back at Ramu Kaka, then again at the screen. Two words were blinking with the vibration. Dad calling...

Astha felt her hackles rising with the fear of the unknown...

Kirloskar Residence

"Call her, she should be home by now it's too late", Kalindi said to Avdhoot, twisting her fingers with worry.

"Kalindi", said Avdhoot admonishingly. These type of things happens in part. And she was feeling so let, down lately so let her enjoy", Avdhoot said in a calm voice.

"How could you say that, she is a grown up girl, if anything happened to her we would never be able forgive ourselves", Kalindi said, a mother's worry glimpsing from her voice.

"No dear, nothing will happen to her, she has her cell with her, she can always call us", Avdhoot tried to sooth her.

But Kalindi still paced the lounge, biting her lips with worry.

"Okay baba, I am going to call her, happy", Avdhoot said in a resigned voice.

He dialed her number from his cell phone. But after some time, no one picked the phone, and the call got disconnected. Now Avdhoot was beginning to worry too, a frown line forming on his forhead.

Kalindi had stopped pacing and now was standing beside him. She asked what happened, in sign language and tried to grab his cell from his hand.

Avdhoot again redialed her number, chewing his lips with worry and raised his hand to stop Kalindi from taking his cell.

After the third ring, someone said hello in a hoarse voice

He froze. It was a man's voice...

At the same instant someone gave a high pitched scream from behind that voice...

Avdhoot felt the sweat broke all over him. It was Astha's scream...

Astha was struggling trying to free herself from the clutches of two goons, who had appeared suddenly out of thin air, their faces covered with black mask, with holes in it for eyes and mouth, and had gotten in her car by force.

"Ramu Kaka", she screamed for her driver, but there was no sign of him. Maybe they have already killed him, she thought with horror.

One of them slapped his hand over her mouth to cut off her scream, and the other one of them, snatched her cell from her mobile and disconnected the call.

She tried to scream dad, but was unable to because of one of the men was covering her mouth with his pudgy had. She bit so hard on his hand, that she drew blood. The man gasped with pain and then slapped her so hard across the face that she fell down on the seat.

There was a ringing sound in her ears , it seemed her lip had split open, as was evident with the metallic taste of blood in her mouth.

"Bi***, F**** bi****, he swore, sucking at his hand.

Her phone was ringing again. The other man who had snatched her phone, showed the blinking words to the other man, whom she had bitten. The other man signaled to him to pick the phone.

He swiped to unlock and then said hello. Someone must have spoken from the other side which caused him to look questioningly at the other man.

Astha who was frozen uptill now, having fallen on the seat, tried to shout Dad.

But the man who was holding the phone clamped his palm across her mouth cutting her scream mid off.

The man whose hand she had bitten took the phone and said chillingly, "Your daughter is now the property of our boss and he is not going to return her to you, ever. You can say goodbye to her in your heart".

He paused for greater effect and then said "Your past has been finally caught up with you...

Astha was struggling trying to prise the hand from her mouth but that man put something wet and cold over her nose.

Her senses started to swim, her mind going blank. She flapped her arms like a drowning man .Her body was falling in a dark tunnel. She struggled, trying, not to fall in that tunnel but in vain.

She fell, echoing in her hazy mind was the voice of her dad coming out of the cell phone, shouting," Asthu Beta, Asthu, Asthuuu...

VERY Nice update..

creepy and dark as usual ..

Now the fellow kidnapped her ... what is gonna happen next..

worried Daddy will hire a detective or go thru his bloody past...

Did Daddy f .. Shloks sister or f.. Shloks mother.. or take away millions of fortune of Agnihotri industries..

And one night , Daddy became Richie rich.. some childhood trauma of Shlok..something mysterious..

make it pls very thick plot.. so the pillar doesn't break ..

so in the Den will Demon my black cat too suck her blood somewhere.. tasty .. ask the catty whether it was salty or sweet..

Shlok will stop with again k and OF.. or something more.. mY mind tickles for more dirty ..Pls... complete dark ..BITES IN THE BACK .. OF HIS ..NOT HER..SHE RULING THE B..

If psble..

thanks for this chap..

Where's vm..for the sake of it,i stopped bugging you for the update.

Otherwise I'll kidnap you the way shlokie abducted asthu and won't let you until you finish this story...and am very serious about this😈

I know it's avdhooth who messed with bad boy! U denied it then😉 not to kill the suspense but still completely clueless about what avdhooth did to deserve this retribution🤔

Absolutely loved this update...dearu you're gifted writer with golden pen...of course filled with black ink😈

No excuses...Update next part tomorrow...otherwise will spank you!!